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Title: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: SerScot on October 01, 2020, 12:13:23 PM
I’ve enjoyed the DF for going on 20 years.  PT/BG is the first time since Fool Moon that I’ve been disappointed.  The book is not “bad” it’s just so so.  In particular BG.  The most interesting parts were the preparation for the battle.  Then it is one “standard Dresden Files slugfest” after another. 

The division of the book into two is part of the problem but only part.  There weren’t any really good character defining moments for Harry and felt like stuff we’d seen before written “up too eleven”

In some ways it felt like a reversal of Changes.  Putting Harry back where he was before Changes with a slightly supped up version of the things he lost.  I thought the point of this book was that the magical world was going to be thrust in the face of the “real world” in a way that could not be ignored.  Mr. Butcher even tries to walk that back. 

Murphy’s death, while well written and impactful seems lost in the noise.  It didn’t have anything close to the emotional heft and weight of Susan’s death.  Thomas was criminally under used given the hook we saw for almost five years and the revelation about Justine was both “meh” and seems, to me, to clash with the tone set for the renewal of Justine and Thomas’ full relationship at the end of Ghost Story.

The entire thing seems somewhat... under developed given the length of time Mr. Butcher had on the story.  I sincerely hope Mirror Mirror will be more of a return to form.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 01, 2020, 02:01:14 PM


 The book or both books have a bit of a "kitchen sink" feel to them.  Stuff thrown in like Drackol and Mavra, to what purpose?  I'd have loved to have seen a scene where Murphy makes her choice to join the fight and maybe Mac trying to talk her out of it.  While the Senior Council voted Harry out, none of them in Chicago seemed to have a problem with him.  Then suddenly he is voted out when at least three Senior Members, I am counting Rashid in because he most likely is still at the Gates are missing.  Where was the Merlin in all of this, Harry should have at least been able to face his accusers.  Using the magical death of a couple of Turtlenecks as a violation of the First Law, then suspending the death sentence?  Carlos suddenly blaming Harry for everything from what happened to his fellow Wardens when Drackol showed up to the sixty thousand lives lost in Chicago?  Because Harry failed to talk to him?  Would it have mattered?  And there was stuff that Harry couldn't talk about... All smells of set up, perhaps for future books, I just hope we don't have to wait another six years...

Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: SerScot on October 01, 2020, 02:35:40 PM

 The book or both books have a bit of a "kitchen sink" feel to them.  Stuff thrown in like Drackol and Mavra, to what purpose?  I'd have loved to have seen a scene where Murphy makes her choice to join the fight and maybe Mac trying to talk her out of it.  While the Senior Council voted Harry out, none of them in Chicago seemed to have a problem with him.  Then suddenly he is voted out when at least three Senior Members, I am counting Rashid in because he most likely is still at the Gates are missing.  Where was the Merlin in all of this, Harry should have at least been able to face his accusers.  Using the magical death of a couple of Turtlenecks as a violation of the First Law, then suspending the death sentence?  Carlos suddenly blaming Harry for everything from what happened to his fellow Wardens when Drackol showed up to the sixty thousand lives lost in Chicago?  Because Harry failed to talk to him?  Would it have mattered?  And there was stuff that Harry couldn't talk about... All smells of set up, perhaps for future books, I just hope we don't have to wait another six years...

I agree.  It feels... disjointed.  The first person PoV made it near impossible to show Murphy’s decision to fight.  But I agree Harry should have been present for his “trial”.  I cannot believe Lucco didn’t speak out for Dresden and Ramerize’s flip to “enemy” is weird.

I still find the Butters “wish fulfillment” sceen in PT eye roll worthy, at best.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 01, 2020, 03:51:16 PM
I agree.  It feels... disjointed.  The first person PoV made it near impossible to show Murphy’s decision to fight.  But I agree Harry should have been present for his “trial”.  I cannot believe Lucco didn’t speak out for Dresden and Ramerize’s flip to “enemy” is weird.

I still find the Butters “wish fulfillment” sceen in PT eye roll worthy, at best.

Yeah, stuff like throwing Ferrofax in because fans asked for it, but then he does absolutely nothing with him on page that didn't happen in Grave Peril.  I feel he did the same with the Black Court, so Drakul is another star born?  One turned bad or is the the future for Harry?  He never established whether the Black Court is an ally of the Fomor and the Outsiders or just saw an opportunity to gain some wizard recruits?   

I think it would have been better if after everything was over Harry returned to Mac's place only to find Murphy not there and then Mac explaining what happened and that she was dead.  That is another thing, they all gathered at Mac's place after, but not a word about Mac being there or to Mac, and what of the Placard?  We know the Spear along with the Eye was returned to the island, but not a word about the Placard.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: SerScot on October 01, 2020, 04:05:37 PM
Yeah, Harry “saving the day” to return to Mac’s and discover Murphy had gone down swinging would have been an interesting choice.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: BrainFireBob on October 01, 2020, 04:06:43 PM
I agree.  It feels... disjointed.  The first person PoV made it near impossible to show Murphy’s decision to fight.  But I agree Harry should have been present for his “trial”.  I cannot believe Lucco didn’t speak out for Dresden and Ramerize’s flip to “enemy” is weird.

I still find the Butters “wish fulfillment” sceen in PT eye roll worthy, at best.

It's either a full Council vote, or a Senior Council vote.

If it's a Senior Council vote, these are the members:

Martha Liberty
Joseph Listens-to-Wind
Ebenezer McCoy
Grigori Christos
Arthur Langtry
Ancient Mai
Rashid "I am the Gatekeeper" Gatekeeper

Rashid would have been at the Outer Gates.
Ebenezer and LtW were in surgery.

4 members is a majority, so they probably had a quorum to hold votes.

If the votes are unchanged, this is:

Martha Liberty: Against
Christos, Mai, Langtry: For

And Harry's out.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 01, 2020, 04:13:18 PM


But can Cristos be against Harry after Chicago?  Weird don't you think?  And why were no members at the meeting of the Accords in the aftermath?  Would the Merlin be against Harry?  In Changes he seemed to have changed his tune... 
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: BrainFireBob on October 01, 2020, 04:14:48 PM
Cristos is still suspect as a black hat.

And the Merlin is a control freak, and Harry's a loose cannon who must have pocketed the Eye of Balor

I think ultimately it's a pressure play about the Eye; but politically it worked because three of Harry's four supporters weren't available.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 01, 2020, 04:17:51 PM
Cristos is still suspect as a black hat.

And the Merlin is a control freak, and Harry's a loose cannon who must have pocketed the Eye of Balor

I think ultimately it's a pressure play about the Eye; but politically it worked because three of Harry's four supporters weren't available.

In the end I think Mab is right, Harry is a wolf that the White Council needs.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Bad Alias on October 02, 2020, 06:42:09 PM
It's either a full Council vote, or a Senior Council vote.

If it's a Senior Council vote, these are the members:

Martha Liberty
Joseph Listens-to-Wind
Ebenezer McCoy
Grigori Christos
Arthur Langtry
Ancient Mai
Rashid "I am the Gatekeeper" Gatekeeper

Rashid would have been at the Outer Gates.
Ebenezer and LtW were in surgery.

4 members is a majority, so they probably had a quorum to hold votes.

If the votes are unchanged, this is:

Martha Liberty: Against
Christos, Mai, Langtry: For

And Harry's out.
The Merlin holds the proxies of those not there who haven't delegated them. If Eb's camp had delegated them, it would have been to the Gatekeeper because Eb's camp wasn't going to be there.

Would the Merlin be against Harry?  In Changes he seemed to have changed his tune...
Based on what Jim said about no one being what they seemed, I wouldn't be completely surprised if the Merlin shows up to Harry, acknowledges that he knows about the Grey Council and has from the beginning and gives him a speech about how the White Council can only be saved from the outside.

And why were no members at the meeting of the Accords in the aftermath?
Because they didn't want them there. The White Council no longer has a direct interest Chicago and it was about handling the fact that everyone left in Chicago was going to know about the supernatural. They were planning the next war. The one against mortals. As little as the White Council does for humanity, that would have been a step too far.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 02, 2020, 07:10:15 PM
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Based on what Jim said about no one being what they seemed, I wouldn't be completely surprised if the Merlin shows up to Harry, acknowledges that he knows about the Grey Council and has from the beginning and gives him a speech about how the White Council can only be saved from the outside.

Actually that makes a lot of sense, like when the Merlin took Harry to one side in Changes ordering him to lay off of Arianna, at the same time telling him that the Red Court must be annihilated.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: SerScot on October 04, 2020, 01:03:08 AM
I would like to see Harry and Langtree forced to wotk as a team.  I’m curious to see if Harry’s expulsion from the WC means he’s out of the GC too.

For the record I would love to have seen more of the WC infighting and less of the “crack/boom”.  Nothing but fight scene after fight scene is monotonous.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: B33bl3br0x on October 05, 2020, 03:37:14 AM
One of the things that really bothered me in the PT book was Harry and Eb both talking about how Etri was going to be super pissed at Harry if/when he found out that Harry took Thomas.

This bothers me a lot. We've been hearing and hearing about how responsibility for an action carried out by an entity's agent is basically deflected upwards in the supernatural community. That is, if you're acting as someone's agent, responsibility for the outcome of your actions belong to whomever you're working for. Harry was Lara's agent in the kidnapping of Thomas, and so she bears responsibility for it, not Harry.

Etri is, as we know, super old school, and is so in line with this proposition that he lets Listen and the other turtlenecks go after the events of Bombshells. The rest of the svartalves seem to be as well.

If everything works like it's supposed to, Harry should be in no danger of reprisals from Etri or any other member of Svartalfheim for taking Thomas. And so this entire point of story is just completely out of place.

The scene with the Svartalves trying to enter Molly's apartment from below to get Maggie also seems entirely out of character for them as well. Given that they granted the apartment to Molly and all the provisions of the transfer being as they are, attempting to force such an entry seems...less than honorable.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: sayyadina on October 06, 2020, 12:40:52 AM
I was fully invested at the start of the book. Then I got so disgusted I almost quit reading it. Then I made myself get back into it and found stuff that almost felt like Dresden Files. Then I got more and more numb, like I couldn't possibly be reading this since 99.9% of what I was reading felt just wrong and not Dresden Files. Didn't give a damn when it looked like Marcone died and didn't really care when the reveal happened. Which is the opposite to how I normally feel. Felt absolutely nothing with the whole Ethniu's vision thing since I knee it was fake. I was pretty beyond numb, exhausted & disgusted by that point. By the time the Lara thing happens at the end I was just done and over it all. Now I just feel so damn 2020 about it, at a place beyond all hopelessness, numbness & despair.

Jim burned every single bit of goodwill I had and I am so done. I'm grateful for the books & short stories & comics I have. Not a chance I'll buy anything new. This book pretty much killed the series for me and serves as an end.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Snark Knight on October 06, 2020, 02:06:44 AM
The entire thing seems somewhat... under developed given the length of time Mr. Butcher had on the story.  I sincerely hope Mirror Mirror will be more of a return to form.

To be fair, I've been thinking for years that PT was going to be the one he has to get out of the way before telling the interesting story in MM.

Although with how vaguely off the duology seemed, I hope that assessment isn't mistaken.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 06, 2020, 04:38:37 AM
To be fair, I've been thinking for years that PT was going to be the one he has to get out of the way before telling the interesting story in MM.

Although with how vaguely off the duology seemed, I hope that assessment isn't mistaken.

My fear is people are anticipating Mirror Mirror way too much.  There has been speculation about it's plot for the last ten years or more.  I fear it will only disappoint, because too many fans have already written in their expectations for it.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 06, 2020, 11:19:39 AM
I have lowered my expectations since Changes. I've been fine with GS and CD, loved SG and liked the duology, much more BG than PT. But clearly, the duology has serious problems, with too many plots, a rushed ending and other things. That said, I don't feel is so bad to even think in not buying more DF books. I always found things to criticize in the books. Also, things to love. And this time is no exception.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 06, 2020, 02:21:25 PM
I have lowered my expectations since Changes. I've been fine with GS and CD, loved SG and liked the duology, much more BG than PT. But clearly, the duology has serious problems, with too many plots, a rushed ending and other things. That said, I don't feel is so bad to even think in not buying more DF books. I always found things to criticize in the books. Also, things to love. And this time is no exception.

I just hope that Jim doesn't spread himself too thin and writes it with in the next year or two.  I think both Peace Talks and Battle Ground suffered because of the six year gap.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on October 06, 2020, 03:01:17 PM
I just hope that Jim doesn't spread himself too thin and writes it with in the next year or two.  I think both Peace Talks and Battle Ground suffered because of the six year gap.
I think if you stop doing something a few years your performance will drop until you catch up. He will get better again from writing whatever he writes.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Bad Alias on October 06, 2020, 04:27:22 PM
too many fans have already written in their expectations for it [while ignoring what Jim has said the story is going to be about].
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: ClintACK on October 06, 2020, 05:16:15 PM
My fear is people are anticipating Mirror Mirror way too much.  There has been speculation about it's plot for the last ten years or more.  I fear it will only disappoint, because too many fans have already written in their expectations for it.

I actually have the opposite of anticipation for Mirror Mirror. I expect it's going to feel a *lot* like Ghost Story did when it first came out. (Though Ghost Story is an *excellent* book on rereading, hopefully Mirror Mirror will be too.)

I expect to feel like we waited a year or more for another book -- and we still don't get to see the community Harry's built in the Castle or his new relationships or how mortal Chicago is changing (and not changing) in the wake of Battle Ground.

All of that will get shunted to the side for a trip into an alternate timeline, and that's going to be frustrating.

I'm trying to temper my anticipation, because barring a flurry of new short stories, it's going to be two or three years before we get to see the real aftermath of the Battle of the Bean.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 06, 2020, 05:59:28 PM
I actually have the opposite of anticipation for Mirror Mirror. I expect it's going to feel a *lot* like Ghost Story did when it first came out. (Though Ghost Story is an *excellent* book on rereading, hopefully Mirror Mirror will be too.)

I expect to feel like we waited a year or more for another book -- and we still don't get to see the community Harry's built in the Castle or his new relationships or how mortal Chicago is changing (and not changing) in the wake of Battle Ground.

All of that will get shunted to the side for a trip into an alternate timeline, and that's going to be frustrating.

I'm trying to temper my anticipation, because barring a flurry of new short stories, it's going to be two or three years before we get to see the real aftermath of the Battle of the Bean.

I am trying not to anticipate anything one way or the other..  I do think that somehow Ferrofax screwed up or was unable to completely keep reality and the alternate reality separate.  I think this is why Bob devoted two pages to it in Battle Ground.  Harry will have to fix it, I also think this why Chandler was thrown into where ever alive, and not killed to be turned like the two others. Harry will find and save him, he may speak for Harry later. 
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 06, 2020, 07:55:48 PM
It not be so little time, JB is writing The Olympic Affair, I believe.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: SerScot on October 07, 2020, 12:10:15 PM
In a series of this magnitude and depth there will be “off”
Books.  If MM is similarly “off” from the rest of the series as PT/BG is I’ll reconsider my views. 
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 07, 2020, 12:39:58 PM
In a series of this magnitude and depth there will be “off”
Books.  If MM is similarly “off” from the rest of the series as PT/BG is I’ll reconsider my views.

All I am saying is people here at least have been excited and trying to guess the plot of MM three or four books ago!  Without even knowing what was going to happen in the books in-between.  What I am saying is when that happens it usually disappoints because nothing can live up to that kind of anticipation.  I know the original Classic Trek story well, and while I liked it well enough, it was never one of my favorites.  So I never could get excited in anticipation that far out.. Anyway, if the premise was set up about reality being damaged by the attack with the eye, and the power Ferrofax had over it, it may be very interesting.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Bad Alias on October 07, 2020, 07:35:59 PM
I know the original Classic Trek story well, and while I liked it well enough, it was never one of my favorites.  So I never could get excited in anticipation that far out.
I think it's mostly going to bear a superficial resemblance to the Trek story. Eye patches and goatees. The way Jim described it, Evil Harry doesn't switch places with the Harrys he abducts, he adducts more than one Harry, and it's not an entirely different world. It's the exact same world except for a single different Choice Harry made toward the end of GP. It really sounds much more like an It's a Wonderful Life kind of story than a Mirror, Mirror story.

To your point about speculation ruining stories, I tend to agree. If people get overly invested in their own idea of where the story should go, they can end up greatly disappointed. Or if they just have better ideas than the author.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: spiritofair on October 07, 2020, 09:18:46 PM
I enjoyed both books, but I have to agree with the "too much" part of the battle descriptions. Thing is, I don't know how you don't write what Jim wrote. How does he not include something about each of the characters? He has so many characters involved, and he kind of HAD to write something about each of them. So, never ending battle.

The Battle of the Bean came off as a bit ridiculous, with too many characters to take a look at, and none of them getting enough focus. This is a limitation of the first person POV writing style. I don't know if it's possible to write about a battle involving so many amazing characters from a first person POV. By it's very nature, it ends up being disjointed and "vignetty".

I think Jim was in a trap of his own making. Too many beloved characters that he HAD to write something about, and not enough about any of them.

I wish we had seen more of the Archive. As far as I can tell, Harry never even talked to her.

Drakul and the Black Court were a distraction, but I suppose it is setting up stuff for the future. That is really the only explanation. Those pages would have been far better served focusing on further developing other characters or Harry's relationship with them.

Overall, I enjoyed it, but I really do think that this series cannot support this many characters in one book. I look forward to Mirror Mirror where the number of characters involved is necessarily cut way back.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 07, 2020, 09:23:32 PM
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I think Jim was in a trap of his own making. Too many beloved characters that he HAD to write something about, and not enough about any of them.

Yup, the kitchen sink feel to it, plus the added traps of the huge battles, they take up many pages and leave little room for anything else.

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Drakul and the Black Court were a distraction, but I suppose it is setting up stuff for the future. That is really the only explanation. Those pages would have been far better served focusing on further developing other characters or Harry's relationship with them.

I felt that way as well, and over all I am enjoying the books.  I liked Peace Talks much more on the second read.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: angus on October 08, 2020, 03:28:59 PM
I'm very disappointed, too. I've been a big fan of the books for many years and I got very little of what I love about the series from Peace Talks and Battleground. I liked the snarky PI stories. I don't like endless descriptions of a battle. I want character development and plot. One of the things I have enjoyed previously, is that JB has gone his own way and given me plot twists and characters that I didn't see coming. This time I feel he had a tick list of fan favourites to include and it took the novelty away (although I did enjoy one or two of the Marcone fan fic references).  I found some of the scenes repetitive, too. Not another fight in the harbour! I hope he explains in the next book why Marcone has taken up a coin, because I find that hard to accept given what's happened previously between Marcone and the Denarians.I didn't feel that these books were fun. I'd like to see both of them combined into one with the word count halved. I have read and re-read the Dresden Files so many times and I'm really not sure if I will every re-read these two.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 08, 2020, 08:48:48 PM
That happened to me with GS and CD, I did not reread them, which was bad because I did not remember some things that were important for these new books. Luckily I loves SG. I suspect next book will be quite different in tone, so don't lose hope  :).
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Bad Alias on October 08, 2020, 08:50:23 PM
I'm constitutionally incapable of skipping a book.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 08, 2020, 09:19:03 PM
I'm constitutionally incapable of skipping a book.

Why would you want to?  ???  Quit the series maybe, but skip a book? ::)  Naw... :o
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 08, 2020, 09:21:23 PM
I suspect he means "when rereading".
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on October 08, 2020, 09:35:39 PM
This type of book shouldn't have been written in the first person.  Or we should have seen much less of the action. Harry see's everyone and is in every frame.  The book might have been written as a series of desperate fights in isolation and no knowledge of overarching events until the very end when the pieces will come together for the climatic battle. And this is precisely how Changes is written. The action isn't tight and it's written to drive set pieces for fan service. Can you say dropping a bridge with a light saber? And to put a coda on it we are now going to go through the whole save the child from the clutches of the evil Outsiders book, sort of a proto Changes.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 08, 2020, 10:20:29 PM
I suspect he means "when rereading".

Even then, the thing is, even if it isn't one of your favorite Dresden books, it will contain bread crumbs, clues that on the first read weren't all that apparent.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Bad Alias on October 09, 2020, 12:33:12 AM
I suspect he means "when rereading".
Yep.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: KurtinStGeorge on October 09, 2020, 02:51:39 AM
Even though the parts of the books I liked best weren't the battle scenes, overall I liked what Jim did with these two books.  He finally swept the wreckage created by Changes off the board and set the series on a new course at full speed.  I'm expecting Mirror Mirror and the book that follows it to be smaller and more focused stories that have much more character development in them.

I didn't like Ghost Story very much, particularly the B story about the second rate sorcerer.  Some might say it was necessary to sort out some of Harry's issues; and there were parts of that book I really liked, but overall it felt like the series had gone from being in a high speed racing boat to dead in the water, at least until the ending promised to restart the motor.  Cold Days turned the series in a new direction, but to me; one, I thought that novel dragged a bit, but it also felt like a ship that was slowly regaining speed.  To put it another way, Harry was still dealing with the fallout of his attempted suicide and Chichen Itza and it just dragged the story down a notch for me.  Even though I really liked Skin Game, Harry was still dealing with Susan's death.  In a way that was realistic.  Grief doesn't get wrapped up in nice neat package that you put away forever, but it was still an indication that Harry was weighed down by the past.  I wanted to see the main story start to move at full speed again.

I think that is what Peace Talks and Battle Ground have done.  They've set the ship back to full speed and opened up new possibilities for Harry.  We can see the beginning outline of Harry taking an open stand against the White Council.  The Black Council is in ascendance.  Even though I wish we had seen more of Drakul and even Mavra, we have a sense of the threat the Creature; as Ebenezer once called him, possesses.  I really liked the way Mab manipulated Harry in both books and I like the forced marriage to Lara Raith.  I'm certainly not seeing it as a Love Connection, but I think it should be fun to watch.  Despite the flaws I think the series as a whole is now in a good place.     
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 09, 2020, 03:11:53 AM
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I think that is what Peace Talks and Battle Ground have done.  They've set the ship back to full speed and opened up new possibilities for Harry.  We can see the beginning outline of Harry taking an open stand against the White Council.  The Black Council is in ascendance.  Even though I wish we had seen more of Drakul and even Mavra, we have a sense of the threat the Creature; as Ebenezer once called him, possesses.  I really liked the way Mab manipulated Harry in both books and I like the forced marriage to Lara Raith.  I'm certainly not seeing it as a Love Connection, but I think it should be fun to watch.  Despite the flaws I think the series as a whole is now in a good place.     

Yeah, she may have manipulated him as far as Lara goes, but it didn't take any to get him to defend Chicago.  That was the significance of the volunteers following him under his banner, not Winter, no help from the mantle at all.  I think I enjoyed the interaction between Mab and Harry the most. Something one sees in soldiers fighting a seemingly hopeless cause, but still fighting.  They seemed to have reached an understanding and a level of respect for one another.  Yes, Harry will still fear Mab and think she is an evil monster at times, but he begins to understand her.  He begins to understand why and how she got to be the way she is.  I think it is an understanding that Rashid achieved a couple of centuries ago more or less.  Mab will still find Harry a tremendous pain in the ass at times, I suspect of her orders to marry Lara. However she respects her Knight, she isn't just playing lip service either, she sees Harry as a comrade in arms.  She hasn't regarded a Knight in this manner in a millennia.
 
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Bad Alias on October 09, 2020, 03:22:28 AM
I didn't like Ghost Story very much, particularly the B story about the second rate sorcerer.
I liked Fitz, but the whole side quest seemed kinda pointless. Honestly, the whole book seemed a bit pointless. Cold Days relitigated basically the whole thing.

I did really like the Mavra was giving lip to the other vampires.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: KurtinStGeorge on October 09, 2020, 04:38:38 AM
Yeah, she may have manipulated him as far as Lara goes, but it didn't take any to get him to defend Chicago.  That was the significance of the volunteers following him under his banner, not Winter, no help from the mantle at all.  I think I enjoyed the interaction between Mab and Harry the most. Something one sees in soldiers fighting a seemingly hopeless cause, but still fighting.  They seemed to have reached an understanding and a level of respect for one another.  Yes, Harry will still fear Mab and think she is an evil monster at times, but he begins to understand her.  He begins to understand why and how she got to be the way she is.  I think it is an understanding that Rashid achieved a couple of centuries ago more or less.  Mab will still find Harry a tremendous pain in the ass at times, I suspect of her orders to marry Lara. However she respects her Knight, she isn't just playing lip service either, she sees Harry as a comrade in arms.  She hasn't regarded a Knight in this manner in a millennia.

Oh, Mab manipulated Harry and it was masterful.  I'm going to start a new thread on that subject tomorrow.  Wait until you see the evidence before you judge.  Jim did a great job of hiding the manipulation in plain site.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: KurtinStGeorge on October 09, 2020, 04:53:44 AM
I liked Fitz, but the whole side quest seemed kinda pointless. Honestly, the whole book seemed a bit pointless. Cold Days relitigated basically the whole thing.

I did really like the Mavra was giving lip to the other vampires.

I agree.  That was one small bit that I really liked.  In the Dresdenverse even the un-dead can be as petty as a high school clique lording it over the other students.

One more thing that liked in BG.  John Marcone getting darker and more dangerous.  I have viscerally disliked fan ideas about Marcone becoming a KotC.  I'm not saying this character is irredeemable, but he's a cold blooded mass murderer.  Just because Marcone has a code of behavior that he follows and enforces doesn't make him a proto good guy who just needs a push in the right direction.  I think Marcone will have to suffer a great deal before redemption becomes possible for him.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 09, 2020, 05:32:26 AM
I agree.  That was one small bit that I really liked.  In the Dresdenverse even the un-dead can be as petty as a high school clique lording it over the other students.

One more thing that liked in BG.  John Marcone getting darker and more dangerous.  I have viscerally disliked fan ideas about Marcone becoming a KotC.  I'm not saying this character is irredeemable, but he's a cold blooded mass murderer.  Just because Marcone has a code of behavior that he follows and enforces doesn't make him a proto good guy who just needs a push in the right direction.  I think Marcone will have to suffer a great deal before redemption becomes possible for him.

Yeah, what is scary is when he let Harry have the eye, he said he is learning think for "the long term."  He has something in mind.

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Oh, Mab manipulated Harry and it was masterful.  I'm going to start a new thread on that subject tomorrow.  Wait until you see the evidence before you judge.  Jim did a great job of hiding the manipulation in plain site.

I'm not saying she didn't and I will be interested in what you write.  However Harry loves his city and those who live with in it, he didn't have to be manipulated to fight for it or them.  Yes, Mab manipulated him as any general will manipulate her officers.  But what I am saying is also true.  They reached an understanding, especially on the subject of how one loses one's soul.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Bad Alias on October 09, 2020, 05:40:12 AM
Yeah, what is scary is when he let Harry have the eye, he said he is learning think for "the long term."  He has something in mind.
I'm not saying the totality of the plan was revealed in BG, but I do think some of it was. Harry thinks that Marcone wanted the Council to have another reason to throw him out. Furthermore, the eye doesn't really give Harry any more power. It does put a target on him. Marcone's more worried about Harry than having an artifact he can't use that will put a target on his back.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 09, 2020, 05:53:06 AM
I'm not saying the totality of the plan was revealed in BG, but I do think some of it was. Harry thinks that Marcone wanted the Council to have another reason to throw him out. Furthermore, the eye doesn't really give Harry any more power. It does put a target on him. Marcone's more worried about Harry than having an artifact he can't use that will put a target on his back.

Oh I think it is longer term than that.  I think Namshiel thinks he can win Harry over to his side eventually.  If for no other reason than Marcone and Harry have been allies in the past when it suited both of them.  It may all come down to Beckett's daughter, who still is in a coma somewhere.  That is Marcone's weak spot.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Bad Alias on October 09, 2020, 05:56:22 AM
Oh I think it is longer term than that.  I think Namshiel thinks he can win Harry over to his side eventually.  If for no other reason than Marcone and Harry have been allies in the past when it suited both of them.  It may all come down to Beckett's daughter, who still is in a coma somewhere.  That is Marcone's weak spot.
I really hope it's something more than just what Harry's already figured out. That would be a little boring.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 09, 2020, 06:08:12 AM
Well, with the coin Marcone potentially can outlive Harry, so perhaps the plan is mostly doing the things slowly. Harry may kill himself in action soon and if he does not, even being a wizard he won't live for ever.
But I don't see it working because Harry has a talent for ruining the best plans, being the main character and all  :)
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 09, 2020, 06:10:44 AM
I really hope it's something more than just what Harry's already figured out. That would be a little boring.

Well, some of it is bound to be boring.  As I said, Harry got off way too easy, he thought that Marcone/Namshiel would take both the Eye and the Spear off of him and in his condition he couldn't do anything about it.  Harry knows that too.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 09, 2020, 06:34:00 AM
I disagree. Harry could have been out of juice but I doubt he would have allow Marcone to take both things, very few times Harry really can't do anything. He knows he would have fought, at least.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Bad Alias on October 09, 2020, 06:50:30 AM
He also might have remembered he had some guns on him.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 09, 2020, 10:56:26 AM
He also might have remembered he had some guns on him.

Or possibly the fact that with the Spear on him, he was unbeatable?
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: The_Sibelis on October 09, 2020, 11:01:12 AM
I actually kinda expected that part with the cover up. It's the 'peace' part. But it's a false peace and come the BAT the storm is going to break loose for real. It fits into the Antichrist timeline I theorized about PTs before. Going by the yearly in story book cycle. It's 3.5 years before the BAT, which biblically is when the false peace fails and literal hell breaks loose.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: StrayDog on October 10, 2020, 03:23:17 AM
Please include me in the Disappointed column. Not sure where to start so I'll just jump in. I love Butters as a character but hate the whole Jedi Knight of the Cross bit. JB has done an incredible job of world building as well as populating his world with robust interesting characters. I've been very happy with everything all the way up to the first fight in front of Michael's house in Skin Game. Here is where my disappointment starts. I don't know why JB decided that Michael and not Murphy had to help Harry in Hades vault. I disagree with the choice but this is his world NOT mine. He could have accomplished the exact same thing without breaking Fidelacchius and without permanently disabling Murphy. I know Murph was on her way out of the series but he should have done it better. More on this in a later rant. On to the Jedi. Butters is fine, the Jedi bit is trite, droll, more vulgar words than can be put here. Every time the Jedi appears in BG it takes me completely out of Dresdenverse. It's like I'm reading DF and suddenly appears Star Wars, not the original Lucas but the nerfed Disney garbage. We're treated to a C grade knock-off with badly dubbed talking when an extra from another set plays through. Coupled with JB's repetitive wordiness and I get the Queen's voice in my head saying, "More matter with less art." Then what was that with the OP Lightsaber ploy while hacking their way to the titan? "Here Butters, here's a pretty light thingy. Just wave it around in front of you, it's all good."
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 10, 2020, 03:35:58 AM
I have a question. Do you really like the original SW? I am asking because I've seen a lot of hate towards Butters Jedi knight on this forum and in the internet in general and I wonder if that comes for people who don't like SW, or who loves it too much and feels like Butters bastardize it, or if there is another reason.

I personally love Butters. I was angry at him by his lack of faith in Harry when he was back from the Dead, but after seen him believing in Harry again, being there for him, Butters is again one of my favorites. Sanya too. And I love the jedi saber since the beginning, I think is awesome. Obviously, this is just my preference, but I am trying to see if there is a pattern between the people who have no problems with Butters until he became a Jedi  :)

Also, I hope we see Ramirez do a similar journey to Butters. Now he suspects Harry, he will be back to loving him later *crosses fingers*
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: StrayDog on October 10, 2020, 04:06:08 AM
I have a question. Do you really like the original SW? I am asking because I've seen a lot of hate towards Butters Jedi knight on this forum and in the internet in general and I wonder if that comes for people who don't like SW, or who loves it too much and feels like Butters bastardize it, or if there is another reason.

I personally LOVE the original SW. It came out at the height of my most imaginative childhood years where the Apollo program was fresh in our minds, we all were astronauts. That actually doesn't have anything to do with why I dislike Jedi KotC. I believe JB is sincerely trying to pay homage to this same formative time in his life but it doesn't play like he thought/thinks is did/does. Using such an iconic image, for whatever reason, breaks the reader out your (JB's) literary world and plants them firmly back in reality. Brings up memories of their own, sends them wool gathering in their own real world thoughts and outside your book. It becomes the grain of sand stuck to your foot, inside your boot, one a day long hike, in July. NOT enjoying the most beautiful scenery you'll see this summer. That and it makes the Sword way too powerful.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 10, 2020, 04:06:31 AM
I have a question. Do you really like the original SW? I am asking because I've seen a lot of hate towards Butters Jedi knight on this forum and in the internet in general and I wonder if that comes for people who don't like SW, or who loves it too much and feels like Butters bastardize it, or if there is another reason.

I personally love Butters. I was angry at him by his lack of faith in Harry when he was back from the Dead, but after seen him believing in Harry again, being there for him, Butters is again one of my favorites. Sanya too. And I love the jedi saber since the beginning, I think is awesome. Obviously, this is just my preference, but I am trying to see if there is a pattern between the people who have no problems with Butters until he became a Jedi  :)

Also, I hope we see Ramirez do a similar journey to Butters. Now he suspects Harry, he will be back to loving him later *crosses fingers*

I agree with you Dina, I don't mind the Jedi thing, that seems to be a bit tongue in cheek, what I don't understand is why Jim has him sleeping with two women/werewolves at the same time. 
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: StrayDog on October 10, 2020, 04:12:29 AM
I personally love Butters. I was angry at him by his lack of faith in Harry when he was back from the Dead, but after seen him believing in Harry again, being there for him, Butters is again one of my favorites. Sanya too. And I love the jedi saber since the beginning, I think is awesome. Obviously, this is just my preference, but I am trying to see if there is a pattern between the people who have no problems with Butters until he became a Jedi  :)

Butters is also one of my favs and I have no problem with him being a KotC, being a SW nerd, etc. Butters as a character is fine.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 10, 2020, 04:22:04 AM
@Mira, I don't know, I frankly don't care too much for that. I think it was out of place, but not from a moral point of view but from a literary one. A little like conjuritis, but at least conjuritis gave us a moment of danger (spiders when trying to be sneaky), a moment of usefulness (anvil) and a moment of fun (Mab saying "Just when I was beginning to respect you" or something like that. It could have been better but at least I can understand the rationale of Jim writing it. But the part about Marci and Andi I thought it would be important during the fight, when Butters risking his life to save one of them, but not. We did not even see Butters worrying when Harry basically told the Alphas to risk taking a bullet for him. And the only call back to that were the two of them "guarding" him and Sanya at the end, when they were injured. So, the scene is his apartment was mostly a head-scratching moment.

@StrayDog, ok, thanks. That is not what happens to me. I simply love it. And I am reminded of my all memories too (and I am older than you, I remember the feeling the first time I saw a lightsaber on screen in the first movie) but not in a bad way. It does not take me away of the Dresdenverse any more like Wagner's Valkyrie ride, or Welcome to the Jungle.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: StrayDog on October 10, 2020, 04:31:29 AM
@StrayDog, ok, thanks. That is not what happens to me. I simply love it. And I am reminded of my all memories too (and I am older than you, I remember the feeling the first time I saw a lightsaber on screen in the first movie) but not in a bad way. It does not take me away of the Dresdenverse any more like Wagner's Valkyrie ride, or Welcome to the Jungle.

I'm envious that it doesn't take you out of the story, wish it wouldn't for me but oh well. The whole threesome bit showed up on the boat with Murph and the Valkyrie so I think it was JB providing a little foreshadowing. All of the side characters deserved better treatment from JB in BG. I feel it would have been better if he focused on just those with him and left the rest to the fog of battle.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: The_Sibelis on October 10, 2020, 08:14:48 AM
Mmm considering how much of the all hero mythology, every story is a retelling I see wrapped up in the DF, not only did I not mind the faithsaber, I absolutely loved it! I think the reason it exists has not yet come to pass the actually. Woj is when butters made it what it is it became more pure, more powerful, but also more vulnerable.(easier to abuse cit*) See... Where as when it's tied to the cross and judeo-christian ideals, jedi are a little more fluid. They don't stop being what they are when they fall. They change into something else.. I think we'll see that happen at some point. Jedi to Sith or whatever.
Now the whole two chicks thing... Idk. Butters doesn't wear it well imo. I can't think of a specific reasoning for it.. unless the threat to punch Dresden was an indication of butters slow fall from grace, with the wolf chicks being part of the lynch pin.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on October 10, 2020, 09:35:56 AM
Look back at Michael and Harry in the Train Station fighting off Hobs in the Myrk. Were the Swords of Faith not inspiring enough? As late as Skin Game he has Michael in the vault using the sword and his faith to save Harry in one of the scarier fights Jim has written.

Butters reached his peak in Dead Beat, when having nothing, he chose to stand and fight, knowing that he would probably die. I almost lost my mind I was so excited.

Then, in hero journey that ran at the speed of light, he becomes the magic skateboard rider who screws over his friends and gets a magic weapon. And by next books has abs of steel and two sex partners who are werewolves. And a sword so powerful Jim has to nerf it. It isn't so much that I hate Butter's as it is that he didn't earn what Jim gave him. /end rant

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Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 10, 2020, 11:55:09 AM
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Now the whole two chicks thing... Idk. Butters doesn't wear it well imo. I can't think of a specific reasoning for it.. unless the threat to punch Dresden was an indication of butters slow fall from grace, with the wolf chicks being part of the lynch pin.
I don't think that, Butters is one of my favorite characters, I called it and got credit for predicting he'd be a Knight of the Cross someday.  What bothers me about the two chick thing is it seems so out of character for him.  It is like Jim is trying too hard to make Butters cool, and it falls flat.  What makes Butters such a great character in my opinion is he is small and often scared for his body, but intellectually he is a hero.  He takes stands for the truth, and does his best.  The two chick thing is a distraction, maybe he has been hanging around Bob for too long?  Sigh.... Polka will never die!
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: StrayDog on October 10, 2020, 01:47:55 PM
What bothers me about the two chick thing is it seems so out of character for him.  It is like Jim is trying too hard to make Butters cool, and it falls flat. The two chick thing is a distraction, maybe he has been hanging around Bob for too long?  Sigh.... Polka will never die!

Wasn't it insinuated that the girls were already in a relationship from their first introduction? At the very least roommates or besties. Not sure if giving Butters two girls is making him cool or not, that's for JB to explain but it doesn't fall flat for me. I don't mind Butters being a KotC but think he would have been better as the resourceful "muggle" wizard making excellent use of Bob to fight baddies.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: StrayDog on October 10, 2020, 02:01:05 PM
Look back at Michael and Harry in the Train Station fighting off Hobs in the Myrk. Were the Swords of Faith not inspiring enough? As late as Skin Game he has Michael in the vault using the sword and his faith to save Harry in one of the scarier fights Jim has written.

Sorry for being pedantic here but JB has been very careful to list the swords as love, hope, and faith. This seems to be very significant given the ongoing theme that names have power. Humans throwing them around like hand grenades and all. Didn't Michael use his faith to call in God's intervention and end Tessa's attack? Esperacchius was in his hand, glowing and all, but it wasn't the swords work.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 10, 2020, 02:41:32 PM
Wasn't it insinuated that the girls were already in a relationship from their first introduction? At the very least roommates or besties. Not sure if giving Butters two girls is making him cool or not, that's for JB to explain but it doesn't fall flat for me. I don't mind Butters being a KotC but think he would have been better as the resourceful "muggle" wizard making excellent use of Bob to fight baddies.

But it is a distraction and Butters deserves better than that.  I think his Sword became a light saber because the source of his strength is his mind and the courage he has always had to stand up for the truth no matter the personal cost.  He has been at his best as I see it when he is giving Harry his straight analyses devoid of emotional investment because Harry is also his friend.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: StrayDog on October 10, 2020, 03:31:46 PM
But it is a distraction and Butters deserves better than that. 


I still disagree but different opinions are what makes life interesting.

I think his Sword became a light saber because the source of his strength is his mind and the courage he has always had to stand up for the truth no matter the personal cost.  He has been at his best as I see it when he is giving Harry his straight analyses devoid of emotional investment because Harry is also his friend.

All true and explainable but JB can accomplish all of his goals without making Fidelacchius a lightsaber
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 10, 2020, 04:34:48 PM
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All true and explainable but JB can accomplish all of his goals without making Fidelacchius a lightsaber

Actually, when you think about it, no, he couldn't.  Butters is neither a warrior, or an athlete, so picking up the skills needed in a short time to be a Holy Knight would be difficult without cheating a bit.  The light Saber is that bit of a cheat, in my opinion.  Now if Butters had become a Knight back in  book four or five, he would have had the years needed to developer skills as he went along.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on October 10, 2020, 04:52:01 PM
Sorry for being pedantic here but JB has been very careful to list the swords as love, hope, and faith. This seems to be very significant given the ongoing theme that names have power. Humans throwing them around like hand grenades and all. Didn't Michael use his faith to call in God's intervention and end Tessa's attack? Esperacchius was in his hand, glowing and all, but it wasn't the swords work.
I said the sword........and his faith. Names make them characters in the story.  Each has had a story line through their wielders. Jim changes the essential nature of the sword to make Butter's able to wield it.
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Once again, the swords clashed, only things were different now. Instead of Sanya dominating the fight, Butters had the edge. Esperacchius darted and whirled, liquid smooth, but as fast as Sanya was with his blade, the steel sword wasn’t weightless.

Butcher, Jim. Peace Talks (Dresden Files) (p. 173). Penguin Publishing Group. Kindle Edition.
Butters can cut up a bridge in Chicago but he can no longer have a sword fight. I've already commented on why Butters is part of a ménage à trois, and it has nothing to do with sex.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 10, 2020, 08:00:50 PM
Butters reached his peak in Dead Beat, when having nothing, he chose to stand and fight, knowing that he would probably die. I almost lost my mind I was so excited.

Then, in hero journey that ran at the speed of light, he becomes the magic skateboard rider who screws over his friends and gets a magic weapon. And by next books has abs of steel and two sex partners who are werewolves. And a sword so powerful Jim has to nerf it. It isn't so much that I hate Butter's as it is that he didn't earn what Jim gave him. /end rant

I highlighted those parts because I see a contradiction in what you say. He earned the Knighthood by being bold and taking the decision to fight against evil. (And I loved what you told us about SW)

Butters has trained a lot, so of course his physicality got much better, but even so, he was not as good a fighter as Sanya and he messed up in his last attack. I see nothing difficult to believe there.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on October 10, 2020, 08:19:13 PM
Yeah I loved Star Wars until one day I didn't.  They milked it to death.  Plus young people will never see the Star Wars that I(we) saw, since Lucas retconned it with CGI.  I had hopes for the last three, but...  On the brighter side we now have Baby Yoda. ;D

The leap from a frightened out of your mind dweeb to a guy that overcame his terror is a much greater then the leap  he made in Skin Game. In Skin Game it was about regaining faith in Harry.  But what we take away from the books is very much a product of our expectations I suppose. Maybe I want too much.  For the first time in the series I can't make myself listen to the audio book even though I bought it.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: StrayDog on October 10, 2020, 08:34:29 PM
Actually, when you think about it, no, he couldn't.  Butters is neither a warrior, or an athlete, so picking up the skills needed in a short time to be a Holy Knight would be difficult without cheating a bit.  The light Saber is that bit of a cheat, in my opinion.  Now if Butters had become a Knight back in  book four or five, he would have had the years needed to developer skills as he went along.

You've touched on my initial point. This is all assuming Butters needs to be a Knight by the end of SG. I would rather Murphy was the wieldier of the sword of Faith and Butters stayed the resourceful one fighting with his brains and raw nerve.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 10, 2020, 09:02:04 PM
You've touched on my initial point. This is all assuming Butters needs to be a Knight by the end of SG. I would rather Murphy was the wieldier of the sword of Faith and Butters stayed the resourceful one fighting with his brains and raw nerve.

Murphy's problem is she never could reconcile herself to the basic rules of the Swords.  A Knight's job isn't to judge or execute, but to give the coin holder a chance to give up the coin and seek redemption.  I think Butters is okay with that, he has always had an open mind.

No, he didn't gain his peak in Dead Beat, he only further proved what he did when he took a demotion and spent time in a mental hospital rather than take back what he witnessed on the table in the morgue.  As Michael said, it isn't about the blade, maybe even not about a great fighter, it is the mind and the heart behind it.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: TrueMonk on October 11, 2020, 12:43:55 AM
My main frustration is that everyone who jumped fast where described "like being pulled by wires". And the seven or so references to Butters really having improved due to his knight training.

Personally every single book Jim has written has been perfect for me except PT and BG. But at least for me, doing some work while going through personal problems that makes it take six times longer than normal does not improve the end result.

If some people cannot handle a single bad duology in a series of 25 books then my guess is 25 book long series are not your thing.

On a similar note, few people seem to agree on what should have been different except in very general terms. E.g. Someone suggested Murphy should have died off screen while I found that scene particular scene to be perfect and would have thought her dying off screen would be horrible.

I wish that there had been more time for editing and beta reading input implementation. But it is also my guess that not publishing for six years (or something) reduces your bargaining power significantly. Imagine of they had decided, ok one more rewrite and it would not have been published this year. I would also guess that at some point it has been rewritten so much that the author cannot do it anymore.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: TrueMonk on October 11, 2020, 01:00:11 AM
Also, I did not really think anything about Butters being with two girls before reading people's reactions here on the forum. Ok, so we have a good guy who is not in a normal relationship, but in a triangle. I mainly paid attention to that Harry managed to shut up and not make fun of him.

Borrowing a page from the person answering about people star wars background; is it because you are not used to anything but traditional couples?

The main complaint I read is that it is because they think Jim is trying to make Butters cooler. But he was already with what I guess is the hottest mortal in the series in a conventional cool guy sense(a very athletic redhead with big breasts). Does it really add that much that there is another girl?

If I had to say what it gives to the story I would say Jim is underlining that the knights do not have to be traditional Christians in yet another way. I approve of that because he has already shown the perfect Christian classic knight in Micheal.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on October 11, 2020, 01:18:06 AM
If some people cannot handle a single bad duology in a series of 25 books then my guess is 25 book long series are not your thing.
I'm sure Jim will continue to be successful with or without my approval. But just out of curiosity could you name a series with 25 books that has an over arching back story? I'm currently bored to tears.

On Butters.  You miss the intent of the threesome even though it is in your reply.

Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: TrueMonk on October 11, 2020, 01:36:41 AM
I know it is not really the same as 25 books, but wheel of time is at 4 million words and Dresden Files is at around 2 million currently. ( I only used one source for each so I could be wrong)

https://sites.google.com/site/batuhanswebsitecom/wheel-of-time
https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&source=web&rct=j&url=https://amp.reddit.com/r/dresdenfiles/comments/29lhkq/word_count_for_all_books/&ved=2ahUKEwizzNL1sKvsAhUE_CoKHYPPAg4QFjAAegQIEhAB&usg=AOvVaw3eyBi2eG9HYwCr5j2cWrdN

I am only one third through wheel of time, but from what I can read it is widely accepted that a couple of the middle ones are not so good. I think it is just very unlikely to write 25 good books in a row, regardless of whether they have an overarching story or not. So of one bad book is enough to stop you from read the rest of the series then my guess would be you would never get to no. 25.

But now I read it as being bored with more than just the single book, then I guess there is not much hope.

On Butters, I reread my post, but I cannot figure out what you mean.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 11, 2020, 01:47:56 AM
Not 25 books, but we are only in 16 (PT/BG would be one), and that is not much different than the whole Asimov arch iwith Foundation. It is different, though, because there is not a single main character.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on October 11, 2020, 03:00:20 AM
But now I read it as being bored with more than just the single book, then I guess there is not much hope.

On Butters, I reread my post, but I cannot figure out what you mean.
This by you.
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I mainly paid attention to that Harry managed to shut up and not make fun of him.
Butter's threatened him if he did, and that was the point. Butters is a tough guy.  Jim, for as much as he talks about it doesn't do sex.  People are jarred by it because it is out of character. And you can't go anywhere with Butters along that line unless Harry gets in bed with him,  the books are written in the first person.

I'm 67 and I've read a lot, I was hoping for something I haven't seen. Covid isn't helping.

@Dina
I read the Foundation Trilogy in my teens, I've peeked at the other books.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: SerScot on October 11, 2020, 04:02:24 AM
I don't think that, Butters is one of my favorite characters, I called it and got credit for predicting he'd be a Knight of the Cross someday.  What bothers me about the two chick thing is it seems so out of character for him.  It is like Jim is trying too hard to make Butters cool, and it falls flat.  What makes Butters such a great character in my opinion is he is small and often scared for his body, but intellectually he is a hero.  He takes stands for the truth, and does his best.  The two chick thing is a distraction, maybe he has been hanging around Bob for too long?  Sigh.... Polka will never die!

He’s turned Butters into the male hetero geek wish fulfillment character.  I liked Butters much better as the sincere, smart, caring, and terrified character he was introduced as.  I’d rather he stayed “vanilla” with Bob for help.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 11, 2020, 04:21:04 AM
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I'm sure Jim will continue to be successful with or without my approval. But just out of curiosity could you name a series with 25 books that has an over arching back story? I'm currently bored to tears.

The Wizard of Oz... ::)
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on October 11, 2020, 04:42:42 AM
The Wizard of Oz... ::)
Only 14 books were written by Baum.  Jim has upped the case count to 22 and stated that time travel won't happen till the last book before the BAT. That according to Reddit. Apparently from his video with Marsters.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: The_Sibelis on October 11, 2020, 04:51:44 AM
Only 14 books were written by Baum.  Jim has upped the case count to 22 and stated that time travel won't happen till the last book before the BAT. That according to Reddit. Apparently from his video with Marsters.
link it pls,
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 11, 2020, 05:00:01 AM

  21 books in the Brother Cadfael series, then there are the Perry Mason books.. 
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 11, 2020, 07:00:38 AM
link it pls,

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MPu4pfWTQu0&feature=youtu.be (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MPu4pfWTQu0&feature=youtu.be)
Watch out for news about a short story that interested me a lot and a surprise appearance of Fenris the cat almost at the end of the video.

Mira, oh yes, I did not realize there were many "procedural" books, like the Poirot ones, or the Mrs Marple, Father Brown, Spencer, Ellery Queen, etc. I have a read a couple of Perry Mason books myself. But this is different, I think, because it is a long story not "one shots".
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on October 11, 2020, 07:37:08 AM
  21 books in the Brother Cadfael series, then there are the Perry Mason books.. 
Still not 25.  However I'll stop if you will.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: The_Sibelis on October 11, 2020, 07:52:40 AM
@Dina. Thank you.


So... If book 20 is the TT book... I thought we already had confirmation previously book 20 was the Dragon book!? Also... Per the original 5 book cycle that should be the denarians book.. wth is going on in book twenty!? TT, Dragons and denarians oh my...
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 11, 2020, 08:30:51 AM
No. There will be 22 books + BAT. If TT is the last before BAT it will be book 22. Book 18 will be MM, book 19 probably wrestling, 20 - 21 will be dragon and revenge against drakul (I don't know if one book each or one book both of them). Character development will be one of those, only Jim knows which.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: The_Sibelis on October 11, 2020, 08:54:41 AM
No. There will be 22 books + BAT. If TT is the last before BAT it will be book 22. Book 18 will be MM, book 19 probably wrestling, 20 - 21 will be dragon and revenge against drakul (I don't know if one book each or one book both of them). Character development will be one of those, only Jim knows which.
I don't like compromising book 16 as two case files.. it's still considered 1 file in my head canon lol. We have three books left until the BAT I believe still yes? That'd be #20?
These extra two books didn't used to exist either.. so the last book should still be considered book twenty per the original cycle no? He's added files to the in-between I believe.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on October 11, 2020, 08:58:09 AM
And he might get a nice idea and add another one.

Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 11, 2020, 09:41:52 AM
I don't like compromising book 16 as two case files.. it's still considered 1 file in my head canon lol. We have three books left until the BAT I believe still yes? That'd be #20?
These extra two books didn't used to exist either.. so the last book should still be considered book twenty per the original cycle no? He's added files to the in-between I believe.
As you wish, but we are still 5 books away of the BAT. (at least, with his current plan. Of course, he can change his mind)
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: TrueMonk on October 11, 2020, 09:44:39 AM
This by you.Butter's threatened him if he did, and that was the point. Butters is a tough guy.

Come on, Butters can't threaten Harry with physical violence without his kotc status to back it up. Anything that Butters ever asks Harry to do Harry only does because he agrees or because he respects Butters wishes. The level 3 paladin/lvl 5 expert does not threaten the level 12 wizard/lvl 8 Barbarian.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 11, 2020, 09:48:50 AM
lvl 8 Barbarian?  :o
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on October 11, 2020, 10:02:03 AM
lvl 8 Barbarian?  :o
Came with the winter mantle I suppose.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: TrueMonk on October 11, 2020, 01:20:53 PM
I think Barbarian would be the best way to represent it without doing something super fancy. His rage is just more or less without a time limit. But if it is stopped by e.g. Iron when he is in the negatives he passed out-ish. He is quite a bit higher level barbarian than Butters is Paladin because Harry can beat him without the wizard stuff and without going into full rage
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on October 11, 2020, 02:53:55 PM
Come on, Butters can't threaten Harry with physical violence without his kotc status to back it up. Anything that Butters ever asks Harry to do Harry only does because he agrees or because he respects Butters wishes. The level 3 paladin/lvl 5 expert does not threaten the level 12 wizard/lvl 8 Barbarian.
Explain the reason for this text to me.
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The little guy took a deep breath. Then he said, in a calm and sincere tone, “Harry, tease me about this or screw it up for me and I’ll knock your teeth out.” And he said it right. I mean, there’s a way to convey your sincere willingness to commit violence. Most people seem to think it involves a lot of screaming and waving your arms. It doesn’t. Really dangerous people don’t feel a need to shout about it. Delivering that kind of warning, sincerely, takes mostly the sort of confidence that only comes from experience. Butters had only had the Sword since the end of winter. He’d only been doing full-speed Knight work for about a month. But I’d seen him square off against maybe the scariest and most dangerous bad guy I personally knew—and Butters won. And here he was, facing off with me like a grouchy badger. He told me to back off and made me want to do it. Damn. Little guy had gotten all grown up on me.

Butcher, Jim. Peace Talks (Dresden Files) (pp. 120-121). Penguin Publishing Group. Kindle Edition. 
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 11, 2020, 07:22:34 PM
I think Barbarian would be the best way to represent it without doing something super fancy. His rage is just more or less without a time limit. But if it is stopped by e.g. Iron when he is in the negatives he passed out-ish. He is quite a bit higher level barbarian than Butters is Paladin because Harry can beat him without the wizard stuff and without going into full rage

I had not thought that but you are right. It is a berserker thing.

Morris, I think Harry was thinking in Butters mind and courage, not in their specific skills and gadgets.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: TrueMonk on October 11, 2020, 07:47:33 PM
Harry is allmost incapable of backing off because someone dangereous tells him to do so and threatens with physical violence. Who has done something along those lines? Ferrovax at Biancas party sort of did it, but he was not really standing between Harry and anything Harry wanted, except maybe Harry's wish to make fun of others (as I remember it). Odin did something a bit like it when Harry wanted him to stay and he did not have time. Maybe the most apt comparison is when Harry starts badmouthing Hades family and Hades tells him to stop. As I remember the scene Harry stops because he recognises it is impolite, but also because he recognises that Hades is a really dangerous god. These are the sort of really dangerous "people" Harry respects/fears enough to not make fun of. But if Harry thought the right thing to do would be to stop what "they had going on" I think he would try. Some of the very dangerous "people" he does not stop making fun off includes Hugin and Mugin. Someone he does not shy away from screwing things up for when he thinks it is the right thing to do is the Blackstaff. Just to pick two examples from BG.

So to me, it is clear that Harry does not refrain from making a joke or from stopping what Butters has going on because of Butters "sincere willingness to commit violence" and ability to do that, because that would make Harry think Butters is more dangerous than pretty much every villain in the series untill now which would be ridiculous.

As a result I read it as Harry is impressed that Butters can make that sort of statement in that way and happy that his friend has grown. He respects him as a person and thinks they are all mature people who seems to have found some love, boink and let boink as he puts it in the park with Titania, so he has no reason for screw it up for him.

So of course Butters can sincerely threaten Harry with physical violence, it is just that it does not have any effect on what Harry does after that other than it has conveyed a sincere wish from a friend to not do something.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 11, 2020, 07:53:39 PM
I agree about all what you said, but morris was asking about the specific comment of Butters as a very dangerous people. I think Harry was surprised to realize Butters is actually dangerous. But he stopped teasing not because he was afraid, but because he respects and loves Butters. Sincerely, Harry had no reason to be afraid. Butters can be a good physical fighter but Harry even without the power of the mantle is a dangerous wizard. And Butters cannot use the sword against him for a joke or two.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on October 11, 2020, 09:00:03 PM
Everything that Jim writes serves a purpose in the story.  What do the two women and Butter's threat do?

It isn't about sex, other than to pull out a stereotype that Jim wants to use.  The stereotype is that manliness is directed related to how many women you have. And the point of the threat isn't to whip Harry in a fight.  It's meant to show that if push comes to shove Butters will fight even if he can't win.  It's what Harry does when he stands up to something bigger than him and mouths off. The idea of the whole passage is to increase Butters machismo.  To sell Butters as a Knight the reader has to see him as somebody who is  dangerous and capable of violence.  Later he will establish why the sword can be wielded by Butters. At least for me, Jim didn't make that sale.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: StrayDog on October 11, 2020, 09:14:30 PM
Butters and the two Alphas
Everyone brings their own life experiences to the table when they discuss this particular part of the books. It's interesting to see the different takes on what JB is attempting to portray. These type of relationships aren't knew in the DF series so why do people feel so strongly about Butters specifically?
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on October 11, 2020, 09:18:37 PM
Butters and the two Alphas
Everyone brings their own life experiences to the table when they discuss this particular part of the books. It's interesting to see the different takes on what JB is attempting to portray. These type of relationships aren't knew in the DF series so why do people feel so strongly about Butters specifically?
Because he is a knight of the cross? Jim is trying to break the knights free from roman catholicism here.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: TrueMonk on October 11, 2020, 09:27:55 PM
Because he is a knight of the cross? Jim is trying to break the knights free from roman catholicism here.

That was also how I read it.

But so we have two clearly different ways to read it;

-to break the knights free from roman catholicism in yet another way
-to show Butters is macho / nerd fantasy fulfillment fan service

Any others?
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: StrayDog on October 11, 2020, 09:28:59 PM
Because he is a knight of the cross? Jim is trying to break the knights free from roman catholicism here.

Isn't Sanya an Athiest? Seemed to me that Shiro was more Taoist. Only Michael was catholic.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 11, 2020, 09:29:22 PM
As I said, I was expecting it would pay later, with Butters protecting Andi and Marci in the Fight or something, so I was disappointed when it did not happen. Alternatively, I was relieved when they survived because a) I like all the Alphas, I still regret Kirby death b) I did not want to see a sad crying Butters c) I did not want it to look like Jim was punishing Butters or the concept of threesomes.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: StrayDog on October 11, 2020, 10:22:56 PM
As I said, I was expecting it would pay later, with Butters protecting Andi and Marci in the Fight or something, so I was disappointed when it did not happen. Alternatively, I was relieved when they survived because a) I like all the Alphas, I still regret Kirby death b) I did not want to see a sad crying Butters c) I did not want it to look like Jim was punishing Butters or the concept of threesomes.

I agree that JB seems to have a reason for this and it would be quite a foolish thing to do just to comment on threesomes. Most people feel that JB is providing a geek fantasy but there again, quite a foolish thing to do.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on October 11, 2020, 10:27:06 PM
When has Jim ever paid more than lip service to Catholicism?  Did I miss something?
Butters and the two Alphas
Everyone brings their own life experiences to the table when they discuss this particular part of the books. It's interesting to see the different takes on what JB is attempting to portray. These type of relationships aren't knew in the DF series so why do people feel so strongly about Butters specifically?
So I take it that you think this is about sex?

@Dina
Andi and Marci have been fighting longer  then Butters. They first took the field in Fool Moon.  They've seen  friends killed and injured.  Why would they need Butters to rescue them? Andi tried to eat Harry and damn near shot his head off.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: StrayDog on October 11, 2020, 10:39:08 PM
So I take it that you think this is about sex?

Not anything close to what I said or feel
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on October 11, 2020, 11:19:12 PM
OK.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 12, 2020, 06:03:11 AM
@morriswalters, I did not say that Marci and Andi would need protecting by Butters, and I did not mention any rescue. Just the chance that they could died and how glad I am that was not the case. That said, Harry has been fighting longer than them and he needed Butters' protections, so...battles are not ordered, neat and tidy things, were the one with more power and experience wins, or where fights are one on one (unless it's a battle royale  :D).
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on October 12, 2020, 01:00:36 PM
OK, my mistake. I seem to stuck in a causal loop about Butters.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Bad Alias on October 14, 2020, 03:30:51 AM
Or possibly the fact that with the Spear on him, he was unbeatable?
He didn't have the spear.

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I care. I've enjoyed everyone's remembrances of SW. Me and my siblings first saw the original trilogy when my uncle gave my brother vhs copies of the trilogy, that he pirated from the video rental place he worked at, for Christmas.

Wasn't it insinuated that the girls were already in a relationship from their first introduction?
Maybe, but it was explicitly stated at some point. Because of that, and Butters' statement that he didn't know how it happened, makes me think it's going to blow up in his face. If it doesn't, I'm in the nerd wish fulfillment camp.

Esperacchius was in his hand, glowing and all, but it wasn't the swords work.
Amoracchius.

Jim is trying to break the knights free from roman catholicism here.
The technical Baptist and atheist in the second book with KotC wasn't enough? What about when he added a Jewish Knight?
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 14, 2020, 04:31:25 AM
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He didn't have the spear.

Yes, he did..   After the Titan was gone, Harry was sitting down exhausted, when Marcone told him to take the Eye for safe keeping. page 346

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Maybe today.  Right here.  It was a good time for him.  I was exhausted after the binding, and he had to know it. If he acted, he could eliminate me and gain the Spear of Destiny and the Eye of Balor, all in one evening.

But Marcone didn't even try.. Why? 

Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on October 14, 2020, 04:41:59 AM
Yes, he did..   After the Titan was gone, Harry was sitting down exhausted, when Marcone told him to take the Eye for safe keeping. page 346

But Marcone didn't even try.. Why?
Mab most likely. She is not there to protect him from his own stupidity but an act like that would be something else. She wouldn’t be able to ignore it even if she wanted to.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: TheCuriousFan on October 14, 2020, 05:30:30 AM
Also he probably didn't have anything to deal with Harry's death curse at the time.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: TrueMonk on October 14, 2020, 07:14:08 AM
I would have to re-read it to be sure. But we know that Harry is utterly exhausted. But just how sure could Marcone be that he was? How exhausted was Marcone from being in (most likely) his first all out magical fight ever?

If he had done it, what would have happened? I cant imagine that Marcone could hold on to the eye and the spear and keep pretending to be a normal mortal, which is a very important defence for him. As long as no-one knows he has the coin anyone who takes a shot at him thinking he is a normal mortal is allmost guranteed to fail. Right now when his entire organisaiton has been beaten into pulp and he has to build it all up again is not the right time to hold a price everyone wants and declare himself as supernatural to the rest of the world.

Also, as someone said, Mab would make sure that one accorded nation who attacked another one so obviouly during the defence (most likely violating the accords) would not be in a nice place in the long run. Marcone saw first had what happened to Nic.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 14, 2020, 07:34:11 AM
Also he probably didn't have anything to deal with Harry's death curse at the time.
I know Harry says it, but ow do you think Marcone would manage to kill Harry? He is a Denarian, right, but just coming from a "death", having thrown magic around, running, I think he is exhausted too. And if he reach the Eye he cannot use it. He could perhaps make a try for the Spear, but as I said, if Harry had an ounce of willpower in him (and Harry is not to be underestimated in that sense) he could throw the Spear to him. We don't really know how a Spear attack against a Denarian would work, but I don't think they wanted to take the risk.
Also my unproven theory, I think Marcone himself did not want to risk to have the Eye. I believe that he thinks he is able to subdue the Fallen for ever, but he is no fool. I don't think he wants to risk a chance of the Eye being in power of a Fallen.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: magnuskn on October 14, 2020, 07:51:43 AM
Eh, I don't think Marcone will actually turn into a bad-bad guy, but rather stay a good-bad guy, as he has for the entire series. Yep, he has a Denarian coin now, but somehow, just by Thorned Namshiel calling Ethniu "Darling", I got the impression that either Marcone got the better of the Denarian somehow or that Thorned Namshiel is one of the more reasonable ones and that they both got an equitable deal. Just my instinctive impression, I could well be totally wrong here.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on October 14, 2020, 08:46:10 AM
Or maybe Namshiel was just not that interested in the eye. He wants Marcone dependent on him and not on something else. His goal is to corrupt Marcone and as many people as he can manage. Maybe to corrupt Harry, that is a price.

The brimstone smelled when Harry tried to kill Rudolph could have been Namshiel whipping up Harry emotionally even more from behind a veil.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: TheCuriousFan on October 14, 2020, 08:49:24 AM
Eh, I don't think Marcone will actually turn into a bad-bad guy, but rather stay a good-bad guy, as he has for the entire series. Yep, he has a Denarian coin now, but somehow, just by Thorned Namshiel calling Ethniu "Darling", I got the impression that either Marcone got the better of the Denarian somehow or that Thorned Namshiel is one of the more reasonable ones and that they both got an equitable deal. Just my instinctive impression, I could well be totally wrong here.
He'll probably get darker to keep on mirroring Harry but not go full villain unless Harry does too.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 14, 2020, 11:44:03 AM
I know Harry says it, but ow do you think Marcone would manage to kill Harry? He is a Denarian, right, but just coming from a "death", having thrown magic around, running, I think he is exhausted too. And if he reach the Eye he cannot use it. He could perhaps make a try for the Spear, but as I said, if Harry had an ounce of willpower in him (and Harry is not to be underestimated in that sense) he could throw the Spear to him. We don't really know how a Spear attack against a Denarian would work, but I don't think they wanted to take the risk.
Also my unproven theory, I think Marcone himself did not want to risk to have the Eye. I believe that he thinks he is able to subdue the Fallen for ever, but he is no fool. I don't think he wants to risk a chance of the Eye being in power of a Fallen.

Marcone might not, but Namsheil would understand everything about the Spear and the holder of the Spear, more than Harry does at this point.  If the mythology about the Spear is true, the Spear isn't something you can just make a grab for if someone is holding it.  Harry just proved he had the will necessary to wield it, Namsheil wasn't going to risk losing this host and end up in a vault once again by testing how vulnerable Harry was.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: whitelaughter on October 18, 2020, 10:29:25 PM
This book pretty much killed the series for me and serves as an end.
Yeah, this. mostly because of character action causing me to lose interest/respect in them.

- Murph dies, removing her form the series. Annoying, but - becoming a valkyrie undermines both her shown religious beliefs and her refusal to sign on to any of the powers to be healed.

- Dresden threatens One Eye 2nd hand if he mistreats Murph...after failing to avenge her while on the spot. Blow hard.
- Gard fails to call him out on this.
- twerp who murdered Murph justified it by calling her a terrorist, so no doubt will be promoted, not punished, given the mortal decision to call the trashing of Chicago a terrorist attack.
- sword that broke rather than let Murph try and save Harry, is happy to kill Harry rather than let him avenge Murph.
- sword wielders would rather 11 million innocents die that permit the punishment of 1 murderer.

That's *one* plot....

Marcone was interesting because he was the vanilla mortal who could stand equal with supernaturals. Now he's just another coppertop.

Thomas, the schemer, just buckles to blackmail. Not, for example, waltzing in and saying "hey, I'm being blackmailed to murder you, what say you pretend to be murdered and throw me in a cell" or something similar. Justine's now full villain - when the smart thing to do, given she would probably die from child birth, would have Alfred toss her into the same cell as Thomas so that the kid can't kill her. (So finding out about Nemesis *after* already locking Nemesis up).

Molly goes cackling witch.

Ramirez goes whinny teenager.

Ebenezer's response to "Oh, I didn't kill you in a fit of fury?" is indifference.

The most significant character I still care about is Mouse. My biggest question at the end of the book was "where's Mister?" (With the Carpenters, apparently. Who I stopped caring about due to the worthlessness of the entire order).
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 18, 2020, 11:00:16 PM
Wow, just wow.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: StrayDog on October 18, 2020, 11:15:45 PM
Yeah, this. mostly because of character action causing me to lose interest/respect in them.

Yes, one hundred times over, Yes!

- Murph dies, removing her form the series. Annoying, but - becoming a valkyrie undermines both her shown religious beliefs and her refusal to sign on to any of the powers to be healed.

Dresden then belittles her death, sub serving the narrative so it's all about him

- Dresden threatens One Eye 2nd hand if he mistreats Murph...after failing to avenge her while on the spot. Blow hard.

Standard sociopathic behavior, falls in line with "He said  .... " to set a narrative that favors the narcissus. Disagree about the avenge, would change to say failed to properly secure area due to self involvement. [Mira and Dina completely disagree with all]

- Gard fails to call him out on this.

She should have put a knife to his neck and gave him a choice of correcting his statement or whistle through a sad throat.

- twerp who murdered Murph justified it by calling her a terrorist, so no doubt will be promoted, not punished, given the mortal decision to call the trashing of Chicago a terrorist attack.

Not sure I would go this far

- sword that broke rather than let Murph try and save Harry, is happy to kill Harry rather than let him avenge Murph.

Hate to point out, "Vengeance is mine sayth the Lord". Author is using this as axiom. The lightsaber thing is crap though.

- sword wielders would rather 11 million innocents die that permit the punishment of 1 murderer.

Only valid if the one murderer is the same that will kill the 11 million

That's *one* plot....

Marcone was interesting because he was the vanilla mortal who could stand equal with supernaturals. Now he's just another coppertop.

Thomas, the schemer, just buckles to blackmail. Not, for example, waltzing in and saying "hey, I'm being blackmailed to murder you, what say you pretend to be murdered and throw me in a cell" or something similar. Justine's now full villain - when the smart thing to do, given she would probably die from child birth, would have Alfred toss her into the same cell as Thomas so that the kid can't kill her. (So finding out about Nemesis *after* already locking Nemesis up).

Molly goes cackling witch.

Ramirez goes whinny teenager.

Ebenezer's response to "Oh, I didn't kill you in a fit of fury?" is indifference.

The most significant character I still care about is Mouse. My biggest question at the end of the book was "where's Mister?" (With the Carpenters, apparently. Who I stopped caring about due to the worthlessness of the entire order).

Wanna feel more disgusted?  Listen to the audiobook and enjoy [severe sarcasm] Marsters interpretation. This is not their best work.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 18, 2020, 11:49:07 PM
Wanna feel more disgusted?  Listen to the audiobook and enjoy [severe sarcasm] Marsters interpretation. This is not their best work.

Really? I don't do audiobooks, but you are the first person I read criticizing Marsters work (except for some brief comments about nordic words and things like that)
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on October 19, 2020, 12:22:43 AM
Really? I don't do audiobooks, but you are the first person I read criticizing Marsters work (except for some brief comments about nordic words and things like that)
Peace Talks was not Marster's best work.  Sound quality is not good, the voices are off.  Maybe not enough rehearsal time, it's hard to tell from the outside looking in.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: StrayDog on October 19, 2020, 12:28:29 AM
Really? I don't do audiobooks, but you are the first person I read criticizing Marsters work (except for some brief comments about nordic words and things like that)

That's probably because up until this year, his readings of DF books have been outstanding. PT/BG not so much. Don't know if it was too rusty, maybe adding personal interpretation that wasn't actually written, or even reading it like JB intended it to be which would be adding information into the book that a reader's mind wouldn't put in there. I was very disappointed.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: SerScot on October 24, 2020, 02:07:42 AM
This is pretty clearly a “set up” book.  Setting things in place for later in the series.  Changes did the same thing but much more effectively by giving Harry a single narrow objective, save Maggie, while the the world tilted around him.

This time Harry’s involvement was much wider.  Wouldn’t this story have been better served if it had been a stand alone set in the Dresdenverse written in 3rd person with multiple POVs rater than just Harry?  It would have served the same purpose without making the events seem... small.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Snark Knight on October 24, 2020, 03:29:46 AM
Or maybe Namshiel was just not that interested in the eye. He wants Marcone dependent on him and not on something else. His goal is to corrupt Marcone and as many people as he can manage. Maybe to corrupt Harry, that is a price.

Corrupting the bearers certainly seems to be a goal, but I'm not sure the Church isn't failing to understand other goals when they think it's all a struggle for the Denarians' souls. As far as the immortals are concerned, it's five minutes to midnight on the major throw-down to culminate this cycle of the starborn conjunction calendar. I'm not sure further corrupting some souls is *that* big a deal for Namshiel, compared to making advantageous moves in the bigger landscape.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on October 24, 2020, 04:34:36 AM
Corrupting the bearers certainly seems to be a goal, but I'm not sure the Church isn't failing to understand other goals when they think it's all a struggle for the Denarians' souls. As far as the immortals are concerned, it's five minutes to midnight on the major throw-down to culminate this cycle of the starborn conjunction calendar. I'm not sure further corrupting some souls is *that* big a deal for Namshiel, compared to making advantageous moves in the bigger landscape.
Corrupting souls is their purpose. There’s is window dressing. Nicodemus grand plan is just something to keep him busy and distract him.from what is really happening.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 24, 2020, 05:45:08 AM
This is pretty clearly a “set up” book.  Setting things in place for later in the series.  Changes did the same thing but much more effectively by giving Harry a single narrow objective, save Maggie, while the the world tilted around him.

This time Harry’s involvment wad much wider.  Wouldn’t this story have been better served if it had been a stand alone set in the Dresdenverse written in 3rd person with multiple POVs rater than just Harry?  It would have served the same purpose without making the events seem... small.

Small??  :o

And I don't know. I mean, yes, the battle scenes would have read better in 3rd person but Harry is still the lead character in this story and we need to know his struggle, his thoughts. What he was thinking when he did some things, his emotions. So yes, if it is multiple POV with Harry as one of those voices I guess it could have worked better than this.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on October 24, 2020, 10:35:21 AM
I was coming to this thread to sort of whine about how those two books have terrible narrative structure, and are basically clusterfuck.
But thank you guys for now making me defending it - a little bit at least.

Yup.

So first things I agree from last few posts:

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Peace Talks was not Marster's best work.  Sound quality is not good, the voices are off.  Maybe not enough rehearsal time, it's hard to tell from the outside looking in.

Yeah I agree. And there are few moments where there is clear cut, and once I'm quite sure sentence read by someone else cause they forget about it with James. Shoddy. But then Battle Ground is way better, and why I'm angry for instance with killing off Murphy (not killing per se, but contrieved way to do it - Marsters made it excellent).

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Thomas, the schemer, just buckles to blackmail. Not, for example, waltzing in and saying "hey, I'm being blackmailed to murder you, what say you pretend to be murdered and throw me in a cell" or something similar. Justine's now full villain - when the smart thing to do, given she would probably die from child birth, would have Alfred toss her into the same cell as Thomas so that the kid can't kill her. (So finding out about Nemesis *after* already locking Nemesis up).

Totally agree. This whole Nemesis Thomas story is utter nonsense. Thomas acts like absolute idiot, and fact he is ready to tell Harry it's Justine afterwards is even worse. Srsly everyone acts like utter dumbass here, and Nemesis plan is also full of holes - and no her "act of faith" and "apocalypse is state of mind" speech does not justifies it.
It's fanfiction, teenage level storytelling level. No way especially after Cold Days that Thomas would react to such blackmail simply with going on with it.

Also why the child? Like really? For what? Justine itself would not be good enough to force Thomas to do something? And if Nemesis is not able to hurt Justine simply by being it, why we consider baby in danger?

Stupid. Stupid. Stupid. Bloody stupid.
For all contrievances of those books, and of all saga - this is the worst.

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This time Harry’s involvment wad much wider.  Wouldn’t this story have been better served if it had been a stand alone set in the Dresdenverse written in 3rd person with multiple POVs rater than just Harry?  It would have served the same purpose without making the events seem... small.

I had another idea. Rather than Endgame - make it Saving Private Ryan. Push Harry to wander as middle-weight through burning Chicago to proper place to attack Ethniu when most things happen beyond his sight. Torture him with sounds and smell. Put some fight within but small. Make him be accompanied by Knights, few Alphas and Murphy, and that's it. Maybe gather small army way later.
Do not put him everywhere. Kill at least three semi-important characters of screen - like wardens could totally die without Harry being there.

Just stop yourself from need to showing everything Jim. You write FPP books - accept their limitations.

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Corrupting the bearers certainly seems to be a goal, but I'm not sure the Church isn't failing to understand other goals when they think it's all a struggle for the Denarians' souls. As far as the immortals are concerned, it's five minutes to midnight on the major throw-down to culminate this cycle of the starborn conjunction calendar. I'm not sure further corrupting some souls is *that* big a deal for Namshiel, compared to making advantageous moves in the bigger landscape.

I agree. Denarians are clearly more about stopping Outsiders, maybe by producing own Apocalypse to take over reality, before puny mortals and demigos allow Outer Gates to fall, than about simply corrupting people.


OK, so now about things I really disagree with in terms of criticism.

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- Murph dies, removing her form the series. Annoying, but - becoming a valkyrie undermines both her shown religious beliefs and her refusal to sign on to any of the powers to be healed.

Primo, she becomes Einhernjarn not Valkyrie. Second, valkyries are mortals with benefits. If she made deal with Odin - service for power when alive she could become one. Third, really after two divorces, breaking freaking Sword of the Cross, rejecting KotC job because she's too strong and independent to serve Divine Providence, after all those things let's be honest - Catholic upbringing is just excuse to avoid unwanted flirting with Valkyries :P Quatro, more importantly - you know Odin has claim of fallen in battles at least those somehow sacrificed to them. It's possible he could take Murphy and she had little to say about it. Free will of mortals is not absolute power.

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- Dresden threatens One Eye 2nd hand if he mistreats Murph...after failing to avenge her while on the spot. Blow hard.
- Gard fails to call him out on this.

How are those two comparable? Now that I think about it Gard could call him for it - as norse paganism was hard for vengeance, but really those are two different things. If Odin is bad guy secretely torturing Einhernjars then Dresden has reason to fight him, to stop this.
There was no stoping anyway with Rudolph. It was manslaughter due to negligence. He didn't plan it - he was not planning to dunno help Fomor or Ethniu. Literally no reason to kill him - at least not from Christian perspective of Angel within Lightsaber :P
People are just for blood, to get satisfaction not because it really solves anything - and it's smart from Jim side to say his readers - No, you bunch of fucking sociopaths!

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Dresden then belittles her death, sub serving the narrative so it's all about him [...] Standard sociopathic behavior, falls in line with "He said  .... " to set a narrative that favors the narcissus.

A bit yes - though in a way - Dresden serves very nicely as readers proxy here. Really suitable.
Because I've seen ton of two things: primo, calling for Rudolph's blood and inventing terrible punishments for him; secundo, whining that Murphy's death was stupid, worthless, undignified, that she should go like a badass, dunno with dead Jotun falling over her than anything. And both times Dresden as our proxy is smacked. And I must say I find his reaction somehow justified - primo, it's not like he is recruit for Valhalla hiring standards, second, for him like for many readers this death must seems like really... bad, like freak accident, stupid Rudolph in middle of everything. As for many readers it's not proper hero exit for him, and Gard is there to sort of call him back to senses.

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- twerp who murdered Murph justified it by calling her a terrorist, so no doubt will be promoted, not punished, given the mortal decision to call the trashing of Chicago a terrorist attack.
- sword that broke rather than let Murph try and save Harry, is happy to kill Harry rather than let him avenge Murph.
- sword wielders would rather 11 million innocents die that permit the punishment of 1 murderer.

Look, dude. You can sort of dislike White God perspective on justice, but it is what it is. What have you expected after all those years with Knights of the Cross? That they would condone personal vengeance? Blood for blood? Not gonna happen. Wanna vengeance go with Winter or Odin. You have plenty teams around with different take on morality.

There are rules, and rules will be obeyed. Harry made Amorachius breakable because he used it to trick faerie in book 3. Sure murder is out of the question.

Not to mention. Rudolph is not a murderer. Not by any sane justice system.
What he did was manslaughter due to negligence. He didn't want, or plan to kill Murphy - damn Harry can clearly feel his self-loathing later.
He's just coward in denial. Pityful. Somehow this pityfullness makes people more angry, funny enough.
Shit I think if Drakul or Redcap would shank Murphy for political gain - people would be less for their blood (or whatever Drakul has) because at least they are cool, not pathetic.

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Marcone was interesting because he was the vanilla mortal who could stand equal with supernaturals. Now he's just another coppertop.

Absolutely disagree. Whole point is - you cannot. United States as a whole nation maybe could - but single vanilla mortal is not for long game. Neither Murphy, nor Marcone. Arm up or die. There will be no mortal-empowering message here - and I am happy for that, it's overall realistic if disheartning a bit. And let's remember Marcone last time just after becoming Baron - was kidnapped and almost murdered or converted by force by Denarians, and his status did him nothing - if not for Dresden's and Knight's help he'd be toast. So of course he seek power. He is freaking crime lord - not some defender of humanity.

Another good thing is Marcone has definitely much too following as "honorable godfather" so I'm really happy to see something that may sour his image in eyes of readers.

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Molly goes cackling witch.

I think Molly quite finely shifts between herself and Winter Lady. Which is to be expected until some mayor shift in this field.

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Ramirez goes whinny teenager.

To some extent. But both he and Dresden are guilty of this miscommunication. If anything Dresden more.
He lies to Ramirez since book 9 (there is literally scene in "White Night" when Ramirez points out to him that he keeps secrets, important ones, just as Ramirez is taking his call to help him take down Malvora and Madrigal - and it doesn't changes a bit.).

And of course Ramirez is in even worse shape and more prejudiced against Winter Faerie, after Molly almost ripped him to shreds. So that should also be taken into account.

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Ebenezer's response to "Oh, I didn't kill you in a fit of fury?" is indifference.

Is it? He's first sorrowful, then furious for Harry deceit. Then we don't see him till Battle Ground - when we do not get much resolution because McCoy is keeping cold head - Dresden says it himself, he can feel Ebenezer is still angry, but he focus on battle, and tries to convince Dresden to not fall into Mab's clutch - though their discussion is very vague as they are not alone, so - PT events are not directly mentioned.
I think we gonna get some discussion between Dresden and McCoy in "Twelve Months".


Extra thing: what makes me angry about Karrin's death is not well that she dies as vanilla mortals, and bit in accident than in fight itself.
It's extreme contrieved, and extremely telegraphed.
Her scenes with Dresden are just reeking with "love interest will be killed" vibe all those books.
Rudolph trigger finger is over-foreshadows to nausea.

So what I'd change - just cut Rudolph from it. He is not needed, aside to apparently give readers and Dresden more hate than it's healthy, and fact they are constantly meeting is just too coincidental. (And it being reason of supernatural manipulation would make it even worse).
Then - place this book year later. Let relationship of Dresden and Murphy go from this semi-honeymoon-but-she's-crippled to some more interesting moment when they plan how to arrange this common life all things consider. Like for instance Karrin being sort of step-mother, and those things.
Most optimally book between SG and PT, where Karrin have to really struggle and get to peace with her condition - only to of course go into heat of battle anyway when her city is in danger.




Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 24, 2020, 12:12:07 PM
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Extra thing: what makes me angry about Karrin's death is not well that she dies as vanilla mortals, and bit in accident than in fight itself.
It's extreme contrieved, and extremely telegraphed.
Her scenes with Dresden are just reeking with "love interest will be killed" vibe all those books.
Rudolph trigger finger is over-foreshadows to nausea.

Agreed, it was telegraphed when Christmas Eve first came out last Christmas.  No, she isn't mentioned but to anyone who has faced a first holiday minus a loved one that close, knows. The
contrived bit is Rudolph showing up early in Peace Talks, then making his paranoid presence known early in Battle Ground.  Murphy can barely move all during Peace Talks, but then takes down a Valkyrie?  Instant fight, her good side, surprise, didn't last over thirty seconds, okay, believable sort of.  But suddenly her pain is taken away and her still injured tendons and ligaments [she was needing more surgery remember, then only to get to fifty percent] muscles weakened from months in a cast, and she is riding a motorcycle and shouldering a bazooka like nothing had happened to her?  Really?
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So what I'd change - just cut Rudolph from it. He is not needed, aside to apparently give readers and Dresden more hate than it's healthy, and fact they are constantly meeting is just too coincidental. (And it being reason of supernatural manipulation would make it even worse).
Then - place this book year later. Let relationship of Dresden and Murphy go from this semi-honeymoon-but-she's-crippled to some more interesting moment when they plan how to arrange this common life all things consider. Like for instance Karrin being sort of step-mother, and those things.
Most optimally book between SG and PT, where Karrin have to really struggle and get to peace with her condition - only to of course go into heat of battle anyway when her city is in danger.

I agree, I also think if Murphy remained with a fifty percent disability, it wouldn't last between her and Harry.  Namely because she would have struggled with her condition and I doubt she'd ever be at peace with it.  She wouldn't want anyone around her, she may have even gone back to drinking. Hints of that after Grave Peril, she didn't want any help with that then, I doubt that she'd have changed that much.  Then go off and die in the heat of battle injured or not, because that is who she was. 
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on October 24, 2020, 01:27:56 PM
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Agreed, it was telegraphed when Christmas Eve first came out last Christmas.  No, she isn't mentioned but to anyone who has faced a first holiday minus a loved on that close, knows

I suspected that strongly.
But as soon as they get to their sex scene and Dresden went limp - I was like - OF COURSE SHE'S DEAD.

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The contrived bit is Rudolph showing up early in Peace Talks, then making his paranoid presence known early in Battle Ground.

His presence in Peace Talks is only one not really contrieved - this at first sounded like some serious fallout from Skin Game, but was soon thrown away to make Rudolph a killer. Which is way less interested than Dresden arrested for murder tbh.

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But suddenly her pain is taken away and her still injured tendons and ligaments [she was needing more surgery remember, then only to get to fifty percent] muscles weakened from months in a cast, and she is riding a motorcycle and shouldering a bazooka like nothing had happened to her?  Really?

Yeah, I agree. There's Dresden mantle hiding away the pain, and there is destroyed ligament. Even if Mab can use Winter power to hide the pain, it won't heal tendons.

Really and from character perspective we really should get a book where Murphy has to cope she's out of action.
And then in Battle of Chicago - damn she can take Odin's proposition to become Valkyrie, that should heal her just fine, and she can be still killed as valkyrie - ironically even, doing power up after opposing it for a long long years and still dying.

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I agree, I also think if Murphy remained with a fifty percent disability, it wouldn't last between her and Harry.  Namely because she would have struggled with her condition and I doubt she'd ever be at peace with it.  She wouldn't want anyone around her, she may have even gone back to drinking. Hints of that after Grave Peril, she didn't want any help with that then, I doubt that she'd have changed that much.  Then go off and die in the heat of battle injured or not, because that is who she was.

You know what and that's why I totally think we needed just one book between to let her cope with it, and finally resolve at least some issues.
Because seriously after Battle Ground it's sort of shown her unresolved issues are like pure virtue and valor and I believe it's way way more complicated. And I'm not really that much into stuborness as virtue, so unraveling it a bit could be fine.

Now of course due to Dresden Files formula there are generally problems with character development in a long run.
10 years passed and development we get is worthy maybe of 2 years in some TV show, and it's sort of with most characters though Dresden and Murphy are most visible because they are almost in every book. (And to some degree it's also matter of both Jim liking to write characters like that, and readers being used to them like that - and any serious change can get serious reactions. I really hope this new "Twelve Months" novel will finally delve more in this field - even if it's bit too late - at least to late to Murphy.

But hey maybe we'll meet her in burning Valhalla and she'll have some resolution in this regard.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: SerScot on October 24, 2020, 01:31:23 PM
Small??  :o

And I don't know. I mean, yes, the battle scenes would have read better in 3rd person but Harry is still the lead character in this story and we need to know his struggle, his thoughts. What he was thinking when he did some things, his emotions. So yes, if it is multiple POV with Harry as one of those voices I guess it could have worked better than this.

Yes, small.  This was like attempting to write a novel about Waterloo with the main character observing what was happening through a keyhole.  It inevitably limits the view of the reader to that which is before the 1st person observer. 

Having Murphy as a POV would have broadened the scope tremendously.  Then add Ramierez (we’d have better insight into his anger and bitterness with Harry and Molly he would seem less petulant.  Even Gard would have been interesting).
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on October 24, 2020, 01:48:46 PM
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Yes, small.  This was like attempting to write a novel about Waterloo with the main character observing what was happening through a keyhole.

Which is not bad idea. If you know your limitations and your character is not suddenly in ALL important moments of battle.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 24, 2020, 03:02:23 PM
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Having Murphy as a POV would have broadened the scope tremendously.  Then add Ramierez (we’d have better insight into his anger and bitterness with Harry and Molly he would seem less petulant.  Even Gard would have been interesting).

I just had a thought about Carlos, I wonder if part of his bitterness stems not just from the fact that he really didn't, understand how it works with Winter Ladies, but doesn't know that neither did Molly.  Worse yet, does he think because Harry is Winter Knight he may have access where he doesn't?

I don't know if writing it from someone else's point of view would have made that much difference over all.  I've read Aftermath, Bombshells, and Backup, all three supposedly from another point of view, but they all sound the same.  It is like Jim can write Murphy from Harry's point of view, but cannot get inside her head for it to sound like her, to me it still sounds like Harry with Murphy's voice.  If that makes any sense?

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His presence in Peace Talks is only one not really contrieved - this at first sounded like some serious fallout from Skin Game, but was soon thrown away to make Rudolph a killer. Which is way less interested than Dresden arrested for murder tbh.

For a number of reasons it sounded contrived.  The first thing, why in the hell was it a I.A. investigation?  Both Harry and Murphy were civilians, no longer connected with the police force, and they were also both civilians when the supposed crimes were committed.  Bradley didn't understand why they were there.  If they were homicide, it would be different, Rudolph also sounded off from the get go.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on October 24, 2020, 03:53:15 PM
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For a number of reasons it sounded contrived.  The first thing, why in the hell was it a I.A. investigation?  Both Harry and Murphy were civilians, no longer connected with the police force, and they were also both civilians when the supposed crimes were committed.  Bradley didn't understand why they were there.  If they were homicide, it would be different, Rudolph also sounded off from the get go.

OK, that's... plausible. There is some unknown hand in play, who want it to be I.A., as it wants Rudolph in. I can agree with that.
But that's like another thread - this is prove of someone trying to hound Harry and Murphy, without better evidence it's hard to connect it to Harry bumping on Rudolph during battle. Unless it's all planned on some really impressive level - and then I want really good explanation because this is level of mastermind Mab would be shamed by.

So it's like bit different thing - someone using IA to hound Dresden for Skin Game is like fair contrievance - I mean someone is there. Not what happened in Battle Ground.

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I just had a thought about Carlos, I wonder if part of his bitterness stems not just from the fact that he really didn't, understand how it works with Winter Ladies, but doesn't know that neither did Molly.  Worse yet, does he think because Harry is Winter Knight he may have access where he doesn't?

I mean really - how is Winter Lady perpetual virginity even held out as a secret.
Somehow it is - I mean Maeve was reccuring character for a long time, and I would never thought she's somehow limited in this area.

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I don't know if writing it from someone else's point of view would have made that much difference over all.  I've read Aftermath, Bombshells, and Backup, all three supposedly from another point of view, but they all sound the same.  It is like Jim can write Murphy from Harry's point of view, but cannot get inside her head for it to sound like her, to me it still sounds like Harry with Murphy's voice.  If that makes any sense?

Yeah I agree. It's probably because it's Jim inner monologue really :P

Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 24, 2020, 05:32:16 PM
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So it's like bit different thing - someone using IA to hound Dresden for Skin Game is like fair contrievance - I mean someone is there. Not what happened in Battle Ground.

That is why after Peace Talks came out I wrote that I really thought the chapter with Rudy and Bradley showing up at Murphy's house was a real WTF moment.  Given that almost everyone and his uncle seemed to be on Harry's case at once, giving Peace Talks a real scatter shot feel, I felt the whole freeing Thomas thing was a waste of time.  I would have rathered that actual peace talks took place, lots of heavy negotiations and concessions, and just when they think things are coming together, then the Titan shows up.

I also think the check point scene in Battle Field did two things.  It established that Rudy was paranoid and had some agenda in his back pocket against Harry and Murphy.  It also established that he had terrible trigger discipline, setting the stage for the shot heard around the world.

 The soul gaze with Bradley was also interesting, it set things up for future books.  It established that Bradley was a strong steady kind of man, very much in the mold of Michael, perhaps a Holy Sword is in his future.  It also established him as a sane, repeatable witness to Rudy's madness when and if the shooting of Murphy is brought up and prosecuted at a later date.  He can also establish that Harry isn't a terrorist, and perhaps character witness if somehow charges for what went down in Skin Game is prosecuted.  I see one way or the other courtroom drama ahead.

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I mean really - how is Winter Lady perpetual virginity even held out as a secret.
Somehow it is - I mean Maeve was reccuring character for a long time, and I would never thought she's somehow limited in this area.

Yeah, Maeve's behavior suggested otherwise, but then again she could have been just expressing her sexual frustration.  I do have a theory that Mab had kept that important little bit of information from Molly for a reason.  She knows that Molly has feelings for Harry.  She also knows that Harry's feelings for her are complicated, part big a brother, and she's the daughter of my best friend. But he is also part sexually attracted because she is built like a brick outhouse in an apple orchid. Both Harry and the Winter Knight's mantle have noticed.  So what better way to demo to Molly that she must remain a virgin without risking her Winter Knight?
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on October 24, 2020, 06:21:42 PM
Yeah, Maeve's behavior suggested otherwise, but then again she could have been just expressing her sexual frustration. 
Or it was her way to kill people she did not like. Oops the mantle, nothing I can do about it, not my fault.

And we know from Sarissa in Cold Days that Maeve's boyfriends did not survive most of the time.
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I do have a theory that Mab had kept that important little bit of information from Molly for a reason.  She knows that Molly has feelings for Harry.  She also knows that Harry's feelings for her are complicated, part big a brother, and she's the daughter of my best friend. But he is also part sexually attracted because she is built like a brick outhouse in an apple orchid. Both Harry and the Winter Knight's mantle have noticed.  So what better way to demo to Molly that she must remain a virgin without risking her Winter Knight?
Probably just because she knew from studying Molly and others that telling her something was not enough. She needs to experience it.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 24, 2020, 08:19:38 PM
I have to say that the main point I agree with the OP is the Thomas thing. It is indeed very weird. But the part about the child in danger? There are three reasons for that. One is that he is nemfected. Second, what is told in the first chapter of PT, it is difficult to give birth to a whampire (but it seems that would be more a danger for Justine than for the baby). And the third, Nem-Justine could decide that the baby overcome his/her utility and get rid of him/her (before or after the birth).

The rest, as I said, I loved the battle scenes. I am about to reread them and looking forward to it.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Telynn on October 24, 2020, 10:35:30 PM
Probably just because she knew from studying Molly and others that telling her something was not enough. She needs to experience it.

Didn’t Mab say as much to Molly? Something like I tried to tell you but you didn’t listen?
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on October 25, 2020, 03:25:16 AM
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That is why after Peace Talks came out I wrote that I really thought the chapter with Rudy and Bradley showing up at Murphy's house was a real WTF moment.  Given that almost everyone and his uncle seemed to be on Harry's case at once, giving Peace Talks a real scatter shot feel, I felt the whole freeing Thomas thing was a waste of time.  I would have rathered that actual peace talks took place, lots of heavy negotiations and concessions, and just when they think things are coming together, then the Titan shows up.

I agree. If Butcher wanted to get rid of both Thomas and Murphy in one book, really he could just well smash Thomas in early stage of battle so hard, it would end the same.

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I also think the check point scene in Battle Field did two things.  It established that Rudy was paranoid and had some agenda in his back pocket against Harry and Murphy.  It also established that he had terrible trigger discipline, setting the stage for the shot heard around the world.

Well yes. And that's why I have problem with it - it has too much estabilishing. Very very obvious Checkhov's gun.

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The soul gaze with Bradley was also interesting, it set things up for future books.  It established that Bradley was a strong steady kind of man, very much in the mold of Michael, perhaps a Holy Sword is in his future.  It also established him as a sane, repeatable witness to Rudy's madness when and if the shooting of Murphy is brought up and prosecuted at a later date.  He can also establish that Harry isn't a terrorist, and perhaps character witness if somehow charges for what went down in Skin Game is prosecuted.  I see one way or the other courtroom drama ahead.

To some extent but I doubt we'll ever have court drama over Murphy I must say. Rather I see Bradley as making Rudolph's life in police problematic by non-overt methods if anything.

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I have to say that the main point I agree with the OP is the Thomas thing. It is indeed very weird. But the part about the child in danger? There are three reasons for that. One is that he is nemfected. Second, what is told in the first chapter of PT, it is difficult to give birth to a whampire (but it seems that would be more a danger for Justine than for the baby). And the third, Nem-Justine could decide that the baby overcome his/her utility and get rid of him/her (before or after the birth).

Nah, my point was different.
Why even child. NemJustine could easily just blackmail Thomas with her own life, because apparently he was absolute dumbass in this regard.
And I mean if Thomas could stop Nemesis from hurting Justine, he could do the same with pregnant Justine overall.

Also I still think at these moment, after all this bullshit Thomas just going with it is dumbest thing possible. He saw what Outsiders are doing. He should sheme with Dresden into tricking Nemesis and somehow getting rid of it, not just allowing it to get great opening.

Now that would be great thing - Thomas and Dresden trying to double cross He Who Walks Beside, and then Ethniu just crushing entire thing in a middle. Really Butcher - fact than in almost each novel especially later Harry has strong personal hook inside that keep him pushing around is not that endearing anymore. Let him take war on their turf, or at least try.

Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 25, 2020, 03:49:39 AM
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Nah, my point was different.
Why even child. NemJustine could easily just blackmail Thomas with her own life, because apparently he was absolute dumbass in this regard.
And I mean if Thomas could stop Nemesis from hurting Justine, he could do the same with pregnant Justine overall.

I don't think the child was ever in danger, only Justine because apparently the Hunger Demon fetus has to feed as well as the human one, so usually the mother doesn't survive the birth.  My question is did Thomas even know it was Nemesis?  Or HWWBs for that matter?  And just what was he promised?  Second obvious point, why was he beaten to the point to where finding out who was behind the plot was impossible?  Two important clues right off, something off about Justine's when Harry told her about Thomas, and it took a mortal to call up the corner hounds.. Then that all got buried in a sea of upset grandpas and the White Council going to toss him out on his ear yet again, and orders to do Lara's bidding because of favors owed the Winter Court.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on October 25, 2020, 04:11:11 AM
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I don't think the child was ever in danger, only Justine because apparently the Hunger Demon fetus has to feed as well as the human one, so usually the mother doesn't survive the birth.

Well yes but that would happen even without Nemesis around.

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My question is did Thomas even know it was Nemesis?  Or HWWBs for that matter?  And just what was he promised?

Yeah if it was simple threat - really it's beyond stupidity to not try a trick.

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Second obvious point, why was he beaten to the point to where finding out who was behind the plot was impossible?

Yeah. Really if it was all that straightforward as written in PT/BG without any extra hook to discover later I'm gonna be extra angry. And somehow I strongly suspect it is.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 25, 2020, 04:54:29 AM
Even when I think not telling Harry is beyond dumn from Thomas part, let's ask something. When was Thomas blackmailed? I mean, did he know what he was going to do when he was running with Harry? When he was showing teeth to grandpa? If he was forced to act immediately and he was afraid somone had him under surveillance. he may have gone to the Embassy hoping to find Harry there. But Harry was not there (in part delayed by his own sister), so he tried to pretend he was attacking Etri but really he intended to fail. Only Austri throw himself over to protect his king and he couldn't prevent his death. Then he was horrified, shocked and we know what happened.

But if he knew all tjat from the beginning of PT, I would be disappointed and frustrated.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on October 25, 2020, 05:17:27 AM
All it could be, but really, like really, this is beyond dumb at this level of game.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: The_Sibelis on October 25, 2020, 06:09:35 AM
I've been thinking about why Etri... And I came to the conclusion his death was just one possible positive outcome. The point was to get Etri out of the way, or lead. Because, I think his sister Nfected. Mostly because she DID lie. I don't think she was supposed to, I think considering what we know of svartalfs that was an oddity. So now Etri has taken the sideline to watch for more assassination attempts and she's taken point.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on October 25, 2020, 06:47:24 AM
I think Svartalves, while honest and honorable, are not Faerie, and even among Faerie IIRC only Sidhe rulling species is banned from lying overall.

But I mean if there was any more complicated and realistic shtick beyond it than Thomas being idiot, and Nemesis making extremely contrieved plots to maybe somehow get ticket to Demonreach - then yes give me to it, because now I'm just angry for this plot, despite thrill ride and usual good Dresden prose.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: The_Sibelis on October 25, 2020, 06:52:02 AM
It's not beyond them sure, but it's /unlike/ them.
Another thing I've noticed is a particular brand of female seems to be Nemesis' particular favorite host.. usually unstable magic users.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Telynn on October 25, 2020, 07:03:36 AM
The only way that what Thomas did makes any sense was, as someone else said, if Nemesis hit him really fast and gave him no time to think his way out.  No time to contact Harry.

I just can't imagine what Nemesis said to him to set that up.  Hopefully at some point that will be explained in more detail.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 25, 2020, 07:29:51 AM
I think it lying was so out of character for svartalves it would have red flagged Harry and also Mab and Molly who, I guess, know the details of what happened.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on October 25, 2020, 07:35:35 AM
I think it lying was so out of character for svartalves it would have red flagged Harry and also Mab and Molly who, I guess, know the details of what happened.
Mab has excellent relations with the svartalves. They might just have followed her lead.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on October 25, 2020, 07:39:56 AM
The only way that what Thomas did makes any sense was, as someone else said, if Nemesis hit him really fast and gave him no time to think his way out.  No time to contact Harry.

I just can't imagine what Nemesis said to him to set that up.  Hopefully at some point that will be explained in more detail.
Thomas might not have known it was Nemesis. If it was just a normal demon Thomas might have thought it could negotiate with it.

By offering energy to the the mother a demon could actually save both mother and child. I think Thomas alluded to that in the first chapter. He was working on it.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 25, 2020, 07:44:47 AM
Mab has excellent relations with the svartalves. They might just have followed her lead.


Precisely, if lying for political reasons was fine, all is fine. But if it was so out of character for a supernatural being that only something like Nemesis could cause it, those knowing the truth would have realized something was wrong.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on October 25, 2020, 07:47:57 AM
Also, how exactly Etri's sister lied? I cannot remember now.

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The only way that what Thomas did makes any sense was, as someone else said, if Nemesis hit him really fast and gave him no time to think his way out.  No time to contact Harry.
I just can't imagine what Nemesis said to him to set that up.  Hopefully at some point that will be explained in more detail.

Yeah, better there be good explanation. Nemesis does not seems to have some ultra power stuff, so it would be hard to control Thomas.

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Thomas might not have known it was Nemesis. If it was just a normal demon Thomas might have thought it could negotiate with it.

By offering energy to the the mother a demon could actually save both mother and child. I think Thomas alluded to that in the first chapter. He was working on it.

Dear Lord, that would make it even more stupid.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: The_Sibelis on October 25, 2020, 07:50:58 AM
I think it lying was so out of character for svartalves it would have red flagged Harry and also Mab and Molly who, I guess, know the details of what happened.
the only one of those who would know if the apartment was damaged would be Molly actually. I think it was damaged... But not so much so that it's actually unlivable.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 25, 2020, 08:01:22 AM
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I pointed at Evanna.
Everyone looked at her
"There was...damage to that apartment during that attack" she politely lied. "No replacement apartment is available at this time. As such, he may no longer be our guest."

Note that Harry is the one saying that she is lying. And I am pretty sure if Harry knows, Mab knows.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: The_Sibelis on October 25, 2020, 08:23:49 AM
The actual quote is this:
Note that Harry is the one saying that she is lying. And I am pretty sure if Harry knows, Mab knows.
Harry's the one prompting the lie. Man's not dumb, but she doesn't just KNOW what Harry's knows.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on October 25, 2020, 08:27:51 AM
The actual quote is this:
Note that Harry is the one saying that she is lying. And I am pretty sure if Harry knows, Mab knows.
It is a lie according to my definition of lying, knowingly trying to communicate a falsehood. It was not a lie in Mab’s definition of the word.

She does not say the apartment was damaged because of the attack or even during the attack. She never said when exactly the apartment was damaged or how damaged it was. A broken doorknob a week before peace talks would have been enough if it was not yet repaired.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 25, 2020, 08:36:30 AM
She exactly said "during that attack". And it is Harry who called it a lie, not me. Besides, she talks about "no replacement",implying that it is too damaged.
Also, The_Sibelis yes, that is my point. Harry know is a lie. If he thought Evanna couldn't lie he wouldn't have said it so easily. Imagine the same scene, Harry points a Mab, Mab says something and the inner dialogue says "Mab politely lie". Wouldn't all of us scream?. As that is not what happened here, it is clear than Evanna lying was nothing that shakes the core of the galaxy.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on October 25, 2020, 09:11:22 AM
She exactly said "during that attack". And it is Harry who called it a lie, not me. Besides, she talks about "no replacement",implying that it is too damaged.
Also, The_Sibelis yes, that is my point. Harry know is a lie. If he thought Evanna couldn't lie he wouldn't have said it so easily. Imagine the same scene, Harry points a Mab, Mab says something and the inner dialogue says "Mab politely lie". Wouldn't all of us scream?. As that is not what happened here, it is clear than Evanna lying was nothing that shakes the core of the galaxy.
Indeed the apartment was in a damaged state when the attack happened.

Her sentence is not a prepared one. She was looking for words while it happened. It is quite possible she can lie, she is not a Sidhe after all, but she might not want to lie in the Sidhe interpretation of the word because of all the people there, just for the same reason Harry kept to the literal truth.

Her sentence can be interpreted in more than one way.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: The_Sibelis on October 25, 2020, 10:54:43 AM
Indeed the apartment was in a damaged state when the attack happened.

Her sentence is not a prepared one. She was looking for words while it happened. It is quite possible she can lie, she is not a Sidhe after all, but she might not want to lie in the Sidhe interpretation of the word because of all the people there, just for the same reason Harry kept to the literal truth.

Her sentence can be interpreted in more than one way.
yes, that. Well said.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 25, 2020, 11:21:32 AM
She exactly said "during that attack". And it is Harry who called it a lie, not me. Besides, she talks about "no replacement",implying that it is too damaged.
Also, The_Sibelis yes, that is my point. Harry know is a lie. If he thought Evanna couldn't lie he wouldn't have said it so easily. Imagine the same scene, Harry points a Mab, Mab says something and the inner dialogue says "Mab politely lie". Wouldn't all of us scream?. As that is not what happened here, it is clear than Evanna lying was nothing that shakes the core of the galaxy.

However what she was saying was also technically the truth, Harry could no longer stay there, she just didn't elaborate on as to why.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wondering Wanderer on October 26, 2020, 08:30:29 AM
I'm with StrayDog about the whole feel of the last 2 books.  The Star Wars idea breaks me out of the DF mode every time.  I used to like Butters but not so much any more.  Does he still have a job at the morgue?  And it really rankles that when Harry can't manage to say 2 complete words about Murph during the Graceland coffin scene, Butters steps in to handle it for him.  We don't even hear the words, just Harry thinking about how much Butters is seen as a hero.  Why not Michael or one of the alphas or someone from the Paranet?  No, it's another opportunity to put the newest Knight front and center, the one so new his Sword came with "training wheels" so he can't hurt the wrong person/thing/monster accidently because he didn't have the skills yet to identify friend from foe in the heat of battle. . .
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 26, 2020, 08:55:45 AM
Michael does not know Murphy too much. And even when the Alphas o paranetters do, Butters have been working alongside Murphy all the time that Harry was dead. He was her friend too, and a very good one. And he was there, in the last minute, trying to save her life.  And saving the soul of the man she loved. So I can't see no one (but Harry) who deserved it more than him. And Harry, who wouldn't have been there without Butters, was unable to speak.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 26, 2020, 11:23:21 AM
Michael does not know Murphy too much. And even when the Alphas o paranetters do, Butters have been working alongside Murphy all the time that Harry was dead. He was her friend too, and a very good one. And he was there, in the last minute, trying to save her life.  And saving the soul of the man she loved. So I can't see no one (but Harry) who deserved it more than him. And Harry, who wouldn't have been there without Butters, was unable to speak.

Exactly.  Also I think Harry tried to say something, but the words wouldn't come.  When you are suffering that kind of grief, they don't usually.  Butters is also a caring doctor, and most likely knew Murphy before Harry did, as part of his work for the county.  Butters may have gotten more in physical shape these days, but he has always been brave and heroic, back when he wouldn't lie about some of the bodies he examined in the morgue.  He also has a cause he believes in and a weapon he has faith in, that is what it is about, faith.  And yeah, the added asset of being a nerd, doesn't hurt to be able to think your way out of things either.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on October 26, 2020, 12:12:51 PM
I agree that Butters probably is more suitable to speak about Murphy than Michael, overall.
In terms of his Lightsaber - I really liked it in Skin Game as a revelation (though me personally would keep like two books of a gap between destruction of Sword and it's being remade - but I'm a cruel man) - but I do not like how Butcher went to be competent fighter with a blade that should be really unwieldy (Butcher seems to suggest it's easier to use weightless blade - which is bullshit - weight as long as it's well balanced it's great indicator of position for muscular memory - using something that is physically not there is not easy thing - just as using real lightsabers would be hard for human), and without good sources to learn how to use it.

Which brings me to my overall position - there should be extra book between Skin Game and Peace Talks - possibly dealing with Fomor and giving prelude to Peace Talks, but also allowing Butters to train really really hard, or for Murphy to get to cope with her disability seriously - rather than rushing into battle despite them and get killed right away.

It would be even better without Star Wars quotes at all :P
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 26, 2020, 02:00:19 PM
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Which brings me to my overall position - there should be extra book between Skin Game and Peace Talks - possibly dealing with Fomor and giving prelude to Peace Talks, but also allowing Butters to train really really hard, or for Murphy to get to cope with her disability seriously - rather than rushing into battle despite them and get killed right away.
Yes, and six years was way too long a time lapse between books, especially when Peace Talks takes place with in months of Skin Game, intangibles get lost.  I totally agree about Murphy trying to deal with her physical disabilities, but her serious screw up was with a Holy Sword, that screw up got it broken in the first place.  It doesn't matter that it turned out okay in the end, the Blade was remade, a new Knight was named.  The Sword broke because Murphy who claimed to know better than Harry about the Swords, who self proclaimed herself custodian, who was an absolute hypocrite when it came to the use of the Sword of Faith, that is why it got broken.  Remember what Michael says, it isn't about the Sword, it is about the hand that wields it.  That is what Nic read and played off of to get it broken.  Trying to save Harry's life is a nice excuse, except Harry's life really was never in danger.  Deep down after the fact in her hospital bed, Murphy had to have realized that as well.  Yet in Peace Talks and Battle Ground, except for a little physical discomfort, Murphy talks like and acts like nothing had happened to her mentally/emotionally.  And it had, in spades, Nic damaged a hell of a lot more than her body.  Yet we see nothing about that.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: SerScot on October 26, 2020, 04:57:07 PM
Yes, and six years was way too long a time lapse between books, especially when Peace Talks takes place with in months of Skin Game, intangibles get lost.  I totally agree about Murphy trying to deal with her physical disabilities, but her serious screw up was with a Holy Sword, that screw up got it broken in the first place.  It doesn't matter that it turned out okay in the end, the Blade was remade, a new Knight was named.  The Sword broke because Murphy who claimed to know better than Harry about the Swords, who self proclaimed herself custodian, who was an absolute hypocrite when it came to the use of the Sword of Faith, that is why it got broken.  Remember what Michael says, it isn't about the Sword, it is about the hand that wields it.  That is what Nic read and played off of to get it broken.  Trying to save Harry's life is a nice excuse, except Harry's life really was never in danger.  Deep down after the fact in her hospital bed, Murphy had to have realized that as well.  Yet in Peace Talks and Battle Ground, except for a little physical discomfort, Murphy talks like and acts like nothing had happened to her mentally/emotionally.  And it had, in spades, Nic damaged a hell of a lot more than her body.  Yet we see nothing about that.

That is an excellent point.  Murphy’s death takes Murphy’s psychological recovery off the table.  I also don’t understand the purpose of introducing Murphy’s dad as a speaking character... after he died... and then taking Murphy off the table.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: The_Sibelis on October 26, 2020, 05:46:22 PM
That is an excellent point.  Murphy’s death takes Murphy’s psychological recovery off the table.  I also don’t understand the purpose of introducing Murphy’s dad as a speaking character... after he died... and then taking Murphy off the table.
cause with Murphy sticking around in limbo(a form of it anyway) she has time to go visit her dad in limbo and find out the truth of his death?
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: SerScot on October 26, 2020, 06:23:19 PM
cause with Murphy sticking around in limbo(a form of it anyway) she has time to go visit her dad in limbo and find out the truth of his death?

How do... we... get to see or know about that?
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 26, 2020, 06:30:38 PM
Probably that, The_Sibelis, or something that will become relevant in MM.

And yes, WWW, every time that the weight of the sword is mentioned I was intrigued. I have 0 experience with swords but it seems that fighting with essentially a handle in your hand, no weight for the blade, would be a difficult task. Yet, once you get used to it, it is be very convenient, as you don't need to pass a strength check to wield it, you don't get tired, and can be very fast. All very useful for the not so strong adventurer. But still, I wouldn't think that the skills needed to fight with such a weapon should take more than a month. As I said before, I am willing to cut JB some slack as the sword itself could be helping.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 26, 2020, 07:28:59 PM
Probably that, The_Sibelis, or something that will become relevant in MM.

And yes, WWW, every time that the weight of the sword is mentioned I was intrigued. I have 0 experience with swords but it seems that fighting with essentially a handle in your hand, no weight for the blade, would be a difficult task. Yet, once you get used to it, it is be very convenient, as you don't need to pass a strength check to wield it, you don't get tired, and can be very fast. All very useful for the not so strong adventurer. But still, I wouldn't think that the skills needed to fight with such a weapon should take more than a month. As I said before, I am willing to cut JB some slack as the sword itself could be helping.

The Sword has training wheels though, Dina.  You know the little side wheels we put on the bikes of young kids so they can learn to ride without falling over.  In this case, the light saber cannot hurt the innocent, thus Butters can only damage those who need damaging when it comes to fighting.  The rest of the time he knows the rules governing the Swords and is willing to live by them.  Harry is a good example, the Sword could have easily have burnt off his hand at the wrist, it didn't.  It gave him a good burn to wake him up and as a warning.. No skill needed, but as time goes on look for Butters to get better, I bet that Sanya and Michael weren't the best at sword play either starting out.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: The_Sibelis on October 26, 2020, 07:48:28 PM
How do... we... get to see or know about that?
well... Heck if I know? Maybe a short story if we're lucky. Just because she's dead doesn't mean she's gone thanks to the GS perspective. Though I do think Dresden will get to see her at least once before the story finishes... I'm still hoping for a resurrection of some sort, but that seems less likely with Odin laying claim to her.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 26, 2020, 08:53:14 PM
The Sword has training wheels though, Dina.  You know the little side wheels we put on the bikes of young kids so they can learn to ride without falling over.  In this case, the light saber cannot hurt the innocent, thus Butters can only damage those who need damaging when it comes to fighting.  The rest of the time he knows the rules governing the Swords and is willing to live by them.  Harry is a good example, the Sword could have easily have burnt off his hand at the wrist, it didn't.  It gave him a good burn to wake him up and as a warning.. No skill needed, but as time goes on look for Butters to get better, I bet that Sanya and Michael weren't the best at sword play either starting out.

Yes, I understand all that, what I don't understand it's why there is a problem with that. Also, it fits Butters gamer profile, there are games where you cannot harm your allies and they can't harm you. So I found it fun. And obviously this property of the Sword will become super useful to kill things, perhaps Nemesis, perhaps the Hunger, I don't know but the sword will be super important in the BAT and perhaps even before that.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Telynn on October 26, 2020, 09:53:30 PM
Yes, I understand all that, what I don't understand it's why there is a problem with that. Also, it fits Butters gamer profile, there are games where you cannot harm your allies and they can't harm you. So I found it fun. And obviously this property of the Sword will become super useful to kill things, perhaps Nemesis, perhaps the Hunger, I don't know but the sword will be super important in the BAT and perhaps even before that.

The sword did more then just protect the innocent from being accidentally hurt.  It actually helped them in the battle.  The sword would pass through them and clean the mud from their eyes, give them a boost of some sort.  I'm thinking this feature is less training wheels and more just the way it is supposed to work.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 26, 2020, 10:07:53 PM
Yes, you are right, Telynn.

well... Heck if I know? Maybe a short story if we're lucky. Just because she's dead doesn't mean she's gone thanks to the GS perspective. Though I do think Dresden will get to see her at least once before the story finishes... I'm still hoping for a resurrection of some sort, but that seems less likely with Odin laying claim to her.

Perhaps we don't need to see it but someone can tell us, from Morty to Uriel. Or, as you said, a short story from her POV. But, as I said, it could be important for MM Murphy too.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Bad Alias on October 27, 2020, 04:51:35 PM
I've been thinking about why Etri... I think his sister Nfected.

The only way that what Thomas did makes any sense was, as someone else said, if Nemesis hit him really fast and gave him no time to think his way out.  No time to contact Harry.

I just can't imagine what Nemesis said to him to set that up.  Hopefully at some point that will be explained in more detail.
What Sibelis said. That Nemesis was also possessing one of the Svartalves. That it would know if Thomas didn't try his utmost.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on October 27, 2020, 05:20:53 PM
What Sibelis said. That Nemesis was also possessing one of the Svartalves. That it would know if Thomas didn't try his utmost.
Or Thomas himself is infected. Justine had enough to arrange that if it is subtle enough only a few behaviours are influenced.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 27, 2020, 05:26:32 PM
Or Thomas himself is infected. Justine had enough to arrange that if it is subtle enough only a few behaviours are influenced.

He could be,  he hinted that there was a way to keep Justine safe, more mumbled to himself. Harry didn't pick up on it, he also blew it by thinking Thomas was more worried about being a father than the fact that Justine could die.  Maybe he would have gotten to that point if Carlos hadn't come on scene. 
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: whitelaughter on October 28, 2020, 11:00:11 AM
Wanna feel more disgusted?  Listen to the audiobook and enjoy [severe sarcasm] Marsters interpretation. This is not their best work.
Thanks for the warning, will avoid.
Maybe Spike hated the book as much as we did, and it affected his work? He's normally good value.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: happyelf on October 28, 2020, 03:10:29 PM
Overall I enjoyed the two books but with a few big caveats

Butters WTF? It’s like Jim owes his own creation money I love butters as a character but making him a mix of Casanova and Luke Skywalker it’s a bit much.

Peace talks especially was a little bit too horny maybe? Added in to the very predictable way that murphy’s story ended and it left a bit of a sour taste.

I am not loving how Dresden is becoming more and more egocentric the lack of trust his complete unwillingness to share info and his absolute conviction he knows best is really beginning to grate, it makes scenes where he gets kicked off the WC Instead of seeming unreasonable more like well what else were they going to do? Plus the Dresden files has one of if not the best supporting cast in the uf genre and I don’t think they were utilised that well in these two books.

But the bit I didn’t like the most was that scene with  Sigrun and Harry where Jim , in my hopefully wrong opinion, kind of berated readers who wouldn’t be happy with murphy’s fate it reminded me a bit too much of LKH for comfort.


Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 28, 2020, 05:37:22 PM
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I am not loving how Dresden is becoming more and more egocentric the lack of trust his complete unwillingness to share info and his absolute conviction he knows best is really beginning to grate, it makes scenes where he gets kicked off the WC Instead of seeming unreasonable more like well what else were they going to do? Plus the Dresden files has one of if not the best supporting cast in the uf genre and I don’t think they were utilised that well in these two books.

I won't argue with most of your points.  However as far as Harry being egocentric?  Well, the series is written in the first person with the exception of a handful of short stories.  And yes, as a star born and a thing to combat Outsiders, that would put him front and center.  As the Warden of Demonreach, that would give him the best way to put the Titan away, but notice he wasn't confident of that, he asked Alfred first.  Also when the deed was done, he said he was merely batting clean up, others softened her up before him.  Oh Harry does trust, but the circle of whom he can trust is getting quite small.   For a guy who thinks he knows best, he seems very unsure, that is why he depends on the advice of so many people.  Also it is hard to trust when so many are prejudging and ready to go after you.  Trust is a two way street.  I don't think he totally disregards the feelings of others either, but Peace Talks and Battleground weren't exactly the kind of stories that called for the hero to be sensitive.  ::)
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: happyelf on October 28, 2020, 06:11:50 PM
Sorry I don’t think I explained that bit well specifically what I meant that in these particular two books Dresden who was always a bit single minded is now coming off as a bit self absorbed to a kind of worrying degree specific examples Ivy when it’s obvious when he sees her from his inner monologue that he hasn’t been in contact despite there history and despite the fact he has contacted her for help and the fact he hasn’t made any effort to find out why Carlos ended up in a wheel chair that’s just two examples compare that with butters and the alphas coming together to help him with his hand. The self awareness he had on the more recent books about how his behaviour can look to outsiders seems to be gone look we know Dresden is the good guy but outside looking in there is a lot of reason to be suspicious and Dresden was at least self aware enough to realise that at times anyway, just again personal opinion that seemed to be missing in the last two books. Look this was still the Dresden files and more to the point I enjoyed them I just I don’t know thought in certain things they were a bit more clunky?  Like nothing was radically different just certain things were turned up to 11 and not all good.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 28, 2020, 07:51:43 PM


1] Ivy;  He did try to catch her eye, he didn't seem upset about that.  Self absorbed?  Maybe, but he was in the middle of trying to pull something off that could get him, Murphy, and Lara killed or worse. They were at the Peace Talks, Ivy, a.k.a the Archive is a neutral party, she must not show even the appearance of favoritism.  Just her talking to Harry or acknowledging him could have sparked an incident.  Harry understands that too, if he were self absorbed I think he would have taken it personally, he didn't.
2]  We don't know one way or the other, but he might have, off page.  The only information given was Carlos was injured on his last mission.  Given how his injuries came about, do you think Carlos would want that advertised?  What happened to him was blow to his ego as well as his body.
3]  As far as Harry being aware of how Outsiders see him.  It isn't like it was a voluntary thing, they attack mentally, Harry gives as good as he gets and in the process sees what they see.  Now if because he is a bad ass he thinks this is how they see him, that is a different matter.

I agree though it is pretty clunky.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: happyelf on October 29, 2020, 10:38:58 AM
1. With ivy my main meaning wasn’t that he hadn’t tried to get hold of her at the party but that he hadn’t been in contact with her in general since perhaps her last in person book appearance other then his call for help I am basing that on A) his surprise at her changed appearance and wondering where Kincaid was who we know has been gone since the end of changes ( due to that short story sorry I can’t remember the name of ) and being about her only friend and knowing what molly went through you think he would have dropped the occasional phone call .b) with Carlos , yes it could have happened off page but again his comments about taking Carlos out for a drink to figure what’s wrong with him implies to me he hasn’t at least in any serious way. C) and if you wanted to be contrary you could even throw in butters threesome as a example since the implication to me , simply on the basis that the usual cheap jokes were lacking was that it was meant to represent a actual poly situation which I know is just developing but it’s implied the boys spend a good bit of time together so you would think that Dresden would suspect something, not necessarily that by any means , was up. But that I admit is a pretty poor example.

Sorry outsider was a poor choice of words on my part I didn’t mean the demon outsiders but people such as white council, Carlos ext people who aren’t able to share Dresden’s POV like we do and can only judge him from what they can see hangs out with vampires , winter knight ext willing to sabatage his friends such as Carlos then refuses to share info.

Again I liked the two books especially battle ground and I am loving the files being back it’s just elements that have always been there I just found that bit more overt and maybe abrasive then in previous books so Dresden has always been single minded but he always been involved with his friends and that wasn’t the impression here came off as cold as above, the tropes elements especially in regards to murphy were so by the book you could see it coming from space that entire scene was like it was a riff on the one from The 100 the one involving lexa and Clarke if any one watches that, the sexism especially in peace talks was way more obvious then it has been previously and seriously how is female bisexuality such a thing but male bisexuality is non existent on the page.

I know this sounds like an awful lot of moaning but I really enjoyed the books but those things for me, the negative bits, really stood out maybe just because it’s been so long since a installment but I did think they were worse then previously.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 29, 2020, 01:43:30 PM
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1. With ivy my main meaning wasn’t that he hadn’t tried to get hold of her at the party but that he hadn’t been in contact with her in general since perhaps her last in person book appearance other then his call for help I am basing that on A) his surprise at her changed appearance and wondering where Kincaid was who we know has been gone since the end of changes ( due to that short story sorry I can’t remember the name of ) and being about her only friend and knowing what molly went through you think he would have dropped the occasional phone call

I think it is a general misconception that because Harry showed empathy for the little girl, who he named Ivy, would be saddled with such a thing as the Archive, that they corresponded often. There is no evidence that they did in the books.  They didn't exchange cards at Christmas or anything like that.  Communication is a two way street, no one asks why Ivy didn't get in touch with Harry? "Hey glad you were only mostly dead and now are alive.. By the way I talked Kincaid out of the head shot, and since my feet can now reach the pedals, I canned him.  Both of you really pissed me off by what you pulled, it hurt."  But she didn't..  That is the problem when there is a six year hiatus between books, stuff falls through the cracks.  Of course Jim wanted the Archive to be at the Peace Talks, but what to do with Ivy and her relationship with Harry and Kincaid.. Micro short.. That explains everything, not even close.

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with Carlos , yes it could have happened off page but again his comments about taking Carlos out for a drink to figure what’s wrong with him implies to me he hasn’t at least in any serious way. C) and if you wanted to be contrary you could even throw in butters threesome as a example since the implication to me , simply on the basis that the usual cheap jokes were lacking was that it was meant to represent a actual poly situation which I know is just developing but it’s implied the boys spend a good bit of time together so you would think that Dresden would suspect something, not necessarily that by any means , was up. But that I admit is a pretty poor example.

Were they that close?  Yes, on one level Harry and Carlos were friends, but no evidence they were close.  One never hears Harry mention that he and Carlos got together to share a pint of ale at Mac's place. Some hint maybe of camping trips with him and the other Wardens, but did that continue after Carlos was injured?  And is it something Carlos would be comfortable bringing up in front of the other Wardens? Harry's friendship with Butters is more on that level, it is through Harry tagging along for "game nights" with the Alphas that Butters met his ladies in the first place. 

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Sorry outsider was a poor choice of words on my part I didn’t mean the demon outsiders but people such as white council, Carlos ext people who aren’t able to share Dresden’s POV like we do and can only judge him from what they can see hangs out with vampires , winter knight ext willing to sabatage his friends such as Carlos then refuses to share info.

At the same time, Carlos knows or has an idea of what Thomas means to Harry.  He may not know that he is his brother, but he knows that he has pulled Harry's bacon, in fact all of their bacon out of the fire on occasion.  So he shouldn't be shocked that Harry would pull what he did to save Thomas. Yes, Harry didn't talk, but at the same time Carlos merely said, "talk to me.."  What does that mean exactly?  On the general subject of having a vampire as a brother and a mantle that savors rape and mayhem that constantly has to be battled? That would take a whole new book.  Carlos never asked specific questions of a concerned friend.  Trust is a two way street, yes, Harry did keep stuff from Carlos, however it was Carlos who put that tracker ink spot on Harry on the beach before anything went down.  That ink spot says, "you're suspect, we want to know all of your movements.."  Is that an incentive to bare your soul to someone who claims to be your friend, yet does that? I think that is one of the tactics used by police when they want a confession, "talk to me, we are all friends

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Again I liked the two books especially battle ground and I am loving the files being back it’s just elements that have always been there I just found that bit more overt and maybe abrasive then in previous books so Dresden has always been single minded but he always been involved with his friends and that wasn’t the impression here came off as cold as above, the tropes elements especially in regards to murphy were so by the book you could see it coming from space that entire scene was like it was a riff on the one from The 100 the one involving lexa and Clarke if any one watches that, the sexism especially in peace talks was way more obvious then it has been previously and seriously how is female bisexuality such a thing but male bisexuality is non existent on the page.


I think that is the problem a lot of us had with the books, I call it the kitchen sink approach. Like a blockbuster movie that sports a star studded cast, but there is only so much dialogue and action to divide between 20 or 30 stars in a three hour movie..  Lots of action, little satisfaction, and a lot of WTF moments..
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I know this sounds like an awful lot of moaning but I really enjoyed the books but those things for me, the negative bits, really stood out maybe just because it’s been so long since a installment but I did think they were worse then previously.

No, it isn't a lot of moaning, and I think you will notice, a lot of us did moan for the same reasons you are.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 29, 2020, 06:15:03 PM
Just to show my support to the idea that Harry is a lousy friend. As I said many times, it's not difficult for Harry to write a few notes to Ivy from time to time. For her, contact must be more difficult, but for him is easy. And the fact that he did not do that makes him selfish. On the same vein, he seems to take the Alphas for granted, so I hope in the next book we will see more interaction with him and something that shows his truly appreciation for them.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 29, 2020, 06:27:01 PM
Just to show my support to the idea that Harry is a lousy friend. As I said many times, it's not difficult for Harry to write a few notes to Ivy from time to time. For her, contact must be more difficult, but for him is easy. And the fact that he did not do that makes him selfish. On the same vein, he seems to take the Alphas for granted, so I hope in the next book we will see more interaction with him and something that shows his truly appreciation for them.

But we do not know if he did or not, do we?  We know back in Small Favor because he knew if he wrote anything down she'd get his message of support.  He did that.  He was in a semi coma for six months following Changes and during Ghost Story, so he couldn't write at that time.  Then in Cold Days he had to save the eastern half of the US from blowing up and prevent Outsiders from springing everyone from his little jail, and on top of that he was dealing with a Neminfected Winter Lady, oh and at the beginning he had a couple of months of rehab... Then in the time between Cold Days and Skin Game he was held incommunicado on the island with a thing in his head that could kill him. Then in the few months after Skin Game, dealing with a romance and trying to get to know his daughter and become a father.  He had very little interaction with her since Small Favor, so it isn't shocking that he didn't send a note to her.  But then again, he might have, in the role of Archive, Ivy may not have chosen to respond to him.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 29, 2020, 06:42:39 PM
Yes Mira, I know what you feel about this and you know I think he could still take 5 minutes every couple of weeks to write her a message. Of course, not while he was in a coma, but all the rest of the time. And precisely my problem is that he had little contact with her since SF. I've been complaining about this since for ever. And no, Harry does not explicitly say that he never wrote, but the general tone of his inner monologue hints at that.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 29, 2020, 06:57:00 PM
Yes Mira, I know what you feel about this and you know I think he could still take 5 minutes every couple of weeks to write her a message. Of course, not while he was in a coma, but all the rest of the time. And precisely my problem is that he had little contact with her since SF. I've been complaining about this since for ever. And no, Harry does not explicitly say that he never wrote, but the general tone of his inner monologue hints at that.
Actually he wrote her in Changes asked for help with little Maggie.  She couldn't help him, against the rules but hinted who he might ask for help.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 29, 2020, 07:03:25 PM
You are right, I forgot about that. Still, not a social message.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 29, 2020, 08:56:01 PM
You are right, I forgot about that. Still, not a social message.

I don't think he ever sent her a social message except that one of support when the Denarians had her back in Small Favor.  Then you will remember Luccio told him to back off because he wasn't doing Ivy's sanity any favors.. That might have something to do with it.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 29, 2020, 09:04:16 PM
Yes, because Harry is known for following reasonable advices   :P. And I agree there were no more social messages, that is my point.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Bad Alias on October 29, 2020, 09:14:54 PM
Mira is correct that we don't know Harry hasn't written her a note or letter. I'd think Jim would have brought it up in PT if Harry had, but it might not have been immediately relevant to PT/BG, so Jim didn't put it in.

Based on PT/BG, Harry doesn't have any reason to think that Ivy is upset with him. Odin avoided interacting with him too. Appearances are important. That would be reason enough.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 29, 2020, 09:18:56 PM
Yes, I said I agree in that with Mira but I feel that his inner monologue indicates that he didn't write her. And I also agree, he has not idea Ivy is upset with him (or what happened with Kinkaid). So yes, appearances are important.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: happyelf on October 30, 2020, 12:00:27 PM
Yeah I still think people are counting Dresden contacting people for help as social interaction when its obviously not and while stuff can have happened off page I still think Dresden inner monologues really strongly implies otherwise I would also agree that the problem proably lies with the kitchen sink approach taken.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 30, 2020, 01:53:55 PM
Yes, I said I agree in that with Mira but I feel that his inner monologue indicates that he didn't write her. And I also agree, he has not idea Ivy is upset with him (or what happened with Kinkaid). So yes, appearances are important.

Yes, they are important, and the Archive was who was at the talks, and giving the briefings afterwards, not Ivy. 
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: StrayDog on October 30, 2020, 04:37:22 PM
After hours of conversation about PT/BG, my friend asked me to summarize my feelings about Harry in two or three non-vulgar descriptors. My response:

Narcissistic Puke
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on October 30, 2020, 05:00:07 PM
After hours of conversation about PT/BG, my friend asked me to summarize my feelings about Harry in two or three non-vulgar descriptors. My response:

Narcissistic Puke



Really??

Signs and symptoms of narcissistic personality disorder

    Grandiose sense of self-importance. ...
    Lives in a fantasy world that supports their delusions of grandeur. ...
    Needs constant praise and admiration. ...
    Sense of entitlement. ...
    Exploits others without guilt or shame. ...
    Frequently demeans, intimidates, bullies, or belittles others.

Maybe a couple of things in there, but for the most part those traits don't fit Harry. 
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on October 30, 2020, 07:40:51 PM
After hours of conversation about PT/BG, my friend asked me to summarize my feelings about Harry in two or three non-vulgar descriptors. My response:

Narcissistic Puke

Really? Wow, just wow.
I think arrogant or selfish fit him better than narcissistic but my definition would be very different. Something like annoying hero or silly hero, something like that. Even when sometimes I want to shake him by the shoulders, in general I like him. I wouldn't be reading the series if that were not the case.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: The_Sibelis on October 30, 2020, 08:40:00 PM
Heroic monster, or monsterous hero.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Bad Alias on October 30, 2020, 09:53:15 PM
Byronic wizard. Depending on where we are in the series I might add whiny.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: StrayDog on November 01, 2020, 01:11:47 AM


Really??

Signs and symptoms of narcissistic personality disorder

    Grandiose sense of self-importance. ...
    Lives in a fantasy world that supports their delusions of grandeur. ...
    Needs constant praise and admiration. ...
    Sense of entitlement. ...
    Exploits others without guilt or shame. ...
    Frequently demeans, intimidates, bullies, or belittles others.

Maybe a couple of things in there, but for the most part those traits don't fit Harry.

Harry has checked off each and every one of those indicators on several occasions, some in every book. Not sure why you are so surprised by my opinion. I couldn't disagree more with your opinion that those traits don't fit.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: StrayDog on November 01, 2020, 01:21:53 AM
Really? Wow, just wow.
I think arrogant or selfish fit him better than narcissistic but my definition would be very different. Something like annoying hero or silly hero, something like that. Even when sometimes I want to shake him by the shoulders, in general I like him. I wouldn't be reading the series if that were not the case.

Not sure why you also are so surprised by my opinion. I don't remember if I ever considered him a hero. At best I would say his actions at that time were heroic. For 15 books I liked him as well, some books more than others but generally liked him. Each time I hoped that he would learn, improve, be better or even try to overcome some issues. I wouldn't be wasting money on the series if I didn't enjoy reading it. BG in particular was so poorly written that I am becoming bored with having to think up excuses for Harry's behavior just to keep reading.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on November 01, 2020, 01:46:01 AM
Well, it surprised me that someone who read so many books didn't like Harry. And if you generally liked him for 15 books I don't think him so different now. Yes, there are things I did not like about him but well, I suppose the things I like are more than the things I don't.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: StrayDog on November 01, 2020, 02:49:49 AM
Well, it surprised me that someone who read so many books didn't like Harry. And if you generally liked him for 15 books I don't think him so different now. Yes, there are things I did not like about him but well, I suppose the things I like are more than the things I don't.

It is entirely possible that a significant portion of why I currently don't like Harry is that he isn't different now, after all that he has been through, ie no growth. The author has resorted back to the default traits of his primary character. Mind you, I'm attempting to cook down several hours of in depth conversation into a small paragraph.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on November 01, 2020, 08:04:39 AM
I understand, don't worry.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on November 01, 2020, 10:13:29 PM


  Let's see, first of all the Files are written in the first person.  They are written from Harry's point of view, he is also the focus of a lot of it.  Is this narcissism? Or the fact that he is at the center of a lot of it.  Memoirs are like that, Harry does play a major role, not just that he sees himself in the major role.
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  Grandiose sense of self-importance. ...

I don't think Harry sees himself grand or self-important.. Others might, in his memoirs Harry reports that.  Now it could all be a lie.
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    Lives in a fantasy world that supports their delusions of grandeur. ...

Harry knows he is a powerful wizard, but he is constantly saying this wizard or that is more powerful, or a better person.  It isn't a delusion that he is a star born, that he is the Winter Knight or that he is Warden of Demonreach.  Those are facts.
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  Needs constant praise and admiration. ...

We all need a little praise and admiration from time to time, Harry is no different.  However he doesn't beg for it nor does he need to be admired by others.  He notes when he is praised, but if it actually happened it is just a note in the files..
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Sense of entitlement. ...

We all think we deserve or are entitled from time to time, Harry doesn't seem to have a sense of false entitlement beyond what is his due as a wizard. 
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  Exploits others without guilt or shame. ...
If you don't get that Harry feels guilt and shame sometimes out of proportion to what is he due, then I am not sure what books you are reading.  I don't think he goes out of his way to exploit others either.  If someone saves his bacon, he admits.
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    Frequently demeans, intimidates, bullies, or belittles others.

That doesn't fit Harry.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on November 02, 2020, 12:47:33 AM
I doubt narcissistic personality disorder. But like most people he has a fairly large blind spot for understanding what living around him means.  As an example, he lived in a basement apartment and ended up getting two of his neighbors burned out  He knew his presence had made it a combat zone. And yet his little apartment was a greater imperative then his neighbors safety.  As if shoveling the snow made up for that. 
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on November 02, 2020, 12:49:40 AM
His back was broken saving one neighbour of the fire, so I say he cares for them.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: TheCuriousFan on November 02, 2020, 01:44:43 AM
The general thrust of the comment is that he didn't make a point of moving out even after enemies (e.g. Grevane) showed that other people are at risk just living in the same building as him, he might care for them but he still consciously put them at risk.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: StrayDog on November 02, 2020, 02:40:03 AM
@Mira
Thank you for providing generalized bullet points but I'm significantly versed on Abnormal Psychologies that I don't need the refresher. Concerning your reply: The first person narrative [Harry's point of view] had no impact on my opinion about Harry's personality so further explanation of narrative styles aren't applicable. The bulk of your replies to your bullet points talk of titles, occupations, or minimalizes his feelings because we all have them. This side steps at the best or justifies his actions. Your second to last point is a subtle ad hominem about which books I've been reading while ignoring the number of times other characters have told Harry precisely how they have been treated. You fail to address the final point when there are instances in every single book where he demeans, intimidates, bullies, and/or belittles others.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: The_Sibelis on November 02, 2020, 04:56:14 AM
Perhaps Mira was a bit overzealous, but I don't particularly see any flaws in logic in her bullet points here..
Instead of claiming he has done each of those several times in each book how about you right your own bullet points as evidence? Because
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instances in every single book where he demeans, intimidates, bullies, and/or belittles others.
that in particular I don't find go be true. Standing up to monsters doesn't count, Nor truly the rest of the claim for Narcissistic personality disorder.. so, explain and give evidence? Uncondense the conversation and tell it to us properly because multiple people just don't see it. With some book citations please.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on November 02, 2020, 05:35:55 AM
Well, I think he has always being somewhat of a bully, because he has intimidated several vanilla people. Cops, Marcone people (Varsity), I am sure there are other examples I am too sleepy to remember now. But he has also resisted bullies and protected the helpless. So it's not so easy or black & white.
In the rest of the points, I agree with Mira
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on November 02, 2020, 05:48:17 AM
I doubt narcissistic personality disorder. But like most people he has a fairly large blind spot for understanding what living around him means.  As an example, he lived in a basement apartment and ended up getting two of his neighbors burned out  He knew his presence had made it a combat zone. And yet his little apartment was a greater imperative then his neighbors safety.  As if shoveling the snow made up for that.

Which might be part of what makes a wizard, a wizard, most live solitary lives for a reason.  A bit of arrogance goes with the territory if you can wield that kind of power.  An old actor named Walter Brennan played a character in a television western, one of his repeated lines was, "it ain't bragging if it is fact."  That kind of how it is with wizards.

Getting back to why most wizards live solitary lives, it is dangerous to be around them.  At least in the world Harry lives in, and yes you could say he didn't perhaps appreciate the danger him living in he beloved basement apartment put others in.  However he had to live somewhere, and until the caper in Hades where he acquired a sock full of diamonds, as the saying goes, Harry was mostly "so poor he didn't have a pot to piss in let alone a window to throw it out of."  He lived in a place he could afford, most likely not giving any thought to the safety of those who lived around him.  But then again, back in Dead Beat when a troupe of zombies danced though his place, or the the frog demon back in Storm Front, or the numerous times he had been shot at or beat up on his door step, no one in the building lobbied for him to be evicted either.  Intimidated? Maybe.. Or was Harry a decent neighbor and it was a tough neighborhood?

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Well, I think he has always being somewhat of a bully, because he has intimidated several vanilla people. Cops, Marcone people (Varsity), I am sure there are other examples I am too sleepy to remember now. But he has also resisted bullies and protected the helpless. So it's not so easy or black & white.

I disagree about Marcone, he isn't the kind of guy that can be bullied, nor those who work for him, he does the bullying if anything or his people do.  Harry did play tough against him, but that is what Marcone respects.  I also think he was mostly respectful to cops if they are respectful to him.  I totally agree that it is more grey than black and white.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: The_Sibelis on November 02, 2020, 06:08:03 AM
Well, I think he has always being somewhat of a bully, because he has intimidated several vanilla people. Cops, Marcone people (Varsity),
you can't bully a bully though. He didn't target the people in the varsity, he targeted Marcone, who had already tried to put Harry under his thumb, same with Marcones people. Being intimidating isn't bullying per se. He stands up when people come on strong to him, not so subtle difference. Bullying is putting others down for the purpose of feeling better about yourself and your own inadequacy.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on November 02, 2020, 06:24:49 AM
The general thrust of the comment is that he didn't make a point of moving out even after enemies (e.g. Grevane) showed that other people are at risk just living in the same building as him, he might care for them but he still consciously put them at risk.
Hé has huge blind spots but that does not make him a narcissist. His good heart is mentioned several times and he takes risks for other people.

His suicide in Changes for example was wrong in all kinds of ways but it does not fit a narcissistic personality. He genuinely cares for other people even if he lacks basic social skills in maintaining friendships.

We might end up with some sort of diagnosis but narcissism is simply the wrong one.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on November 02, 2020, 11:30:02 AM
His back was broken saving one neighbour of the fire, so I say he cares for them.
Had he not lived so close to neighbors that they could burn if someone thought he should burn, then he wouldn't have gotten his back broken trying to rescue them. 

They don't put fireworks manufacturing facilities in residential neighborhoods for a good reason.  On occasion they've been known to blow up. It's was fun to watch how Jim has handled it.  It was a perfect vehicle for humor. But it is what it is.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on November 02, 2020, 12:20:27 PM
Had he not lived so close to neighbors that they could burn if someone thought he should burn, then he wouldn't have gotten his back broken trying to rescue them. 

They don't put fireworks manufacturing facilities in residential neighborhoods for a good reason.  On occasion they've been known to blow up. It's was fun to watch how Jim has handled it.  It was a perfect vehicle for humor. But it is what it is.

Though there are guys, actually a nice man, who lived in a next door boarding house had an arsenal in his room and one of the guns did go off and hit the house across the street.  That happened to us when we first moved to Seattle years ago, and it was a nice middle class neighborhood for the most part.  And before that my husband's uncle, a WWI vet who though a very gentle man, never thought things through, used to keep a couple of pounds of gun powder under his bed, he lived in a room in an old hotel in Chicago.. So it happens..
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on November 02, 2020, 01:08:22 PM
Though there are guys, actually a nice man, who lived in a next door boarding house had an arsenal in his room and one of the guns did go off and hit the house across the street.  That happened to us when we first moved to Seattle years ago, and it was a nice middle class neighborhood for the most part.  And before that my husband's uncle, a WWI vet who though a very gentle man, never thought things through, used to keep a couple of pounds of gun powder under his bed, he lived in a room in an old hotel in Chicago.. So it happens..
I forgot which book it was but there was a discussion between Harry and Ebenezar about what was worse, stupid or evil.
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Post by: Dina on November 02, 2020, 01:26:48 PM
Well, as Mira says, he has to live somewhere and he has no money for a nice white fence home in the suburbia. He did the best he could, a basement and very well protected so the bad guy thought twice before attacking.
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Post by: Mira on November 02, 2020, 02:36:33 PM
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I forgot which book it was but there was a discussion between Harry and Ebenezar about what was worse, stupid or evil.

Well, one you have an excuse for, you cannot cure stupid..  And evil, is just evil..  In the case of the guy who lived in the boarding house next door to us, he was just stupid, and maybe a little paranoid. In the case of my husband's uncle, surviving the trenches did something to his head, some things he just didn't give damn about.
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Post by: Arjan on November 02, 2020, 04:12:10 PM
Well, as Mira says, he has to live somewhere and he has no money for a nice white fence home in the suburbia. He did the best he could, a basement and very well protected so the bad guy thought twice before attacking.
But there are ways for a wizard to get money. He should have given that more attention.
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Post by: Mira on November 02, 2020, 04:48:24 PM
But there are ways for a wizard to get money. He should have given that more attention.

He was a P.I. and a good one, that took up his time.  He never was interested in money, as
long as he was comfortable, he was content. 
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Post by: morriswalters on November 02, 2020, 04:52:44 PM
Though there are guys, actually a nice man, who lived in a next door boarding house had an arsenal in his room and one of the guns did go off and hit the house across the street.  That happened to us when we first moved to Seattle years ago, and it was a nice middle class neighborhood for the most part.  And before that my husband's uncle, a WWI vet who though a very gentle man, never thought things through, used to keep a couple of pounds of gun powder under his bed, he lived in a room in an old hotel in Chicago.. So it happens..
I have a friend who loads his own ammo, and we all have hazards in our homes of some type. But if you care about the people you live near you don't bring your problems to their doors. You don't cook meth, you don't build bombs and you don't have zombie parties. It'll get you talked about and sued or you'll get a stretch in Joliet State Prison. :o
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Post by: Arjan on November 02, 2020, 04:55:50 PM
He was a P.I. and a good one, that took up his time.  He never was interested in money, as
long as he was comfortable, he was content.
But the danger he brought to his neighbors made it necessary for him to get more money to create a proper wizard lair.
 
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Post by: Mira on November 02, 2020, 05:03:21 PM
But the danger he brought to his neighbors made it necessary for him to get more money to create a proper wizard liar.

Housing is horribly expensive in Chicago, and you don't get much for your money. Given Harry's education and training, not many high paying jobs for him. My son had to move out to the burbs because as much as he and his family would love to live in Chicago, they couldn't afford it, and he and his wife make excellent money.   Maybe doing more wizard stuff would help, but that was never his area of expertise.  As I said, considering the events in the early books, his neighbors knew how dangerous it was to live in the same building, they chose to anyway... Also if they felt him a danger, they could have petitioned to have him evicted on that basis, they never did.. They have to take some responsibility too.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on November 02, 2020, 05:23:34 PM
Housing is horribly expensive in Chicago, and you don't get much for your money. Given Harry's education and training, not many high paying jobs for him. My son had to move out to the burbs because as much as he and his family would love to live in Chicago, they couldn't afford it, and he and his wife make excellent money.   Maybe doing more wizard stuff would help, but that was never his area of expertise.  As I said, considering the events in the early books, his neighbors knew how dangerous it was to live in the same building, they chose to anyway... Also if they felt him a danger, they could have petitioned to have him evicted on that basis, they never did.. They have to take some responsibility too.
We had to move to the suburbs as well. We needed more space when we got a child.

He either should have used his talents to collect money for a proper wizard liar Or he should have left the city centre.

Without proper funds he can not live in the city centre anyway.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Bad Alias on November 02, 2020, 07:48:35 PM
Hé has huge blind spots but that does not make him a narcissist. His good heart is mentioned several times and he takes risks for other people.

His suicide in Changes for example was wrong in all kinds of ways but it does not fit a narcissistic personality. He genuinely cares for other people even if he lacks basic social skills in maintaining friendships.

We might end up with some sort of diagnosis but narcissism is simply the wrong one.
Pretty much this. I don't see how anyone can see Harry as a narcissist. Harry's problem with empathy might be the opposite of a lacking.

Harry really should have made enough money to live a good distance from anyone else or moved somewhere where that wouldn't be too expensive.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on November 02, 2020, 09:43:36 PM
Pretty much this. I don't see how anyone can see Harry as a narcissist. Harry's problem with empathy might be the opposite of a lacking.

Harry really should have made enough money to live a good distance from anyone else or moved somewhere where that wouldn't be too expensive.

As I said, the price of rent and property in and around Chicago is terrible.  Even in the burbs then the commute is really really bad.. 
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Post by: TheCuriousFan on November 02, 2020, 11:09:34 PM
He was a P.I. and a good one, that took up his time.  He never was interested in money, as
long as he was comfortable, he was content.
Ah he noted in the early stories, he has a lot of downtime between his regular cases (he'd have to, to stay poor on $50 an hour) of tracking down rings and the like.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on November 03, 2020, 04:30:13 AM
Ah he noted in the early stories, he has a lot of downtime between his regular cases (he'd have to, to stay poor on $50 an hour) of tracking down rings and the like.

Then he gets to tinker in his beloved lab during his down time, he is a typical wizard.  If you will notice Eb doesn't live a lavish lifestyle either, when he isn't running around doing his "Blackstaff" thing, he is a small farmer. I don't remember hearing what if anything his farm produces, and he drives around in an old pick up in overalls. 
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Post by: Arjan on November 03, 2020, 06:32:01 AM
Then he gets to tinker in his beloved lab during his down time, he is a typical wizard.  If you will notice Eb doesn't live a lavish lifestyle either, when he isn't running around doing his "Blackstaff" thing, he is a small farmer. I don't remember hearing what if anything his farm produces, and he drives around in an old pick up in overalls.
It is not about living lavishly, that only draws attention. Being a small farmer is a good cover, gives isolation and space to work all kind of stuff without being noticed and playing the part is good practice. It only helps if he likes his role.
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Post by: Dina on November 03, 2020, 06:56:47 AM
Harry had his office for PI things. And he worked in the basement so he wouldn't blow the wall of a neigborh. He was not a big thing in the supernatural world at first (that he knew, at least) so he did not know how dangerous he will be. When he did, he did what he could to protect everyone.

Also, Harry is a bad liar, what you mean is wizard lair.  ;D
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Post by: Arjan on November 03, 2020, 07:32:41 AM
Harry had his office for PI things. And he worked in the basement so he wouldn't blow the wall of a neigborh. He was not a big thing in the supernatural world at first (that he knew, at least) so he did not know how dangerous he will be. When he did, he did what he could to protect everyone.
Except for moving out of the city centre. 
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Also, Harry is a bad liar, what you mean is wizard lair.  ;D
Yes.
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Post by: Bad Alias on November 03, 2020, 04:49:14 PM
As I said, the price of rent and property in and around Chicago is terrible.  Even in the burbs then the commute is really really bad..
So he should live somewhere else or do something to make enough money to live where he wants without placing others in danger.

He was not a big thing in the supernatural world at first (that he knew, at least) so he did not know how dangerous he will be. When he did, he did what he could to protect everyone.
His apartment is attacked in SF, between GP and SK, BR, and then again in DB. He learns in BR that the White Court has a tactical assessment of his home's defenses and the White King recognizes him on sight. He really should have done something about his living situation sooner than after his house burned down in Changes.
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Post by: Mira on November 03, 2020, 06:31:19 PM
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So he should live somewhere else or do something to make enough money to live where he wants without placing others in danger.


Not always an easy thing to do.  Yeah, Harry is a professional wizard, even there he admits to huge gaps in his education, a lot because he was lazy as a kid  But anyway, his muggle education consists of a GED, he isn't trained for any trades, is a bit old for an apprentice, so getting enough money together to get a place that fits his needs, not easy. 

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is apartment is attacked in SF, between GP and SK, BR, and then again in DB. He learns in BR that the White Court has a tactical assessment of his home's defenses and the White King recognizes him on sight. He really should have done something about his living situation sooner than after his house burned down in Changes.

As I said, the other people had to have been aware, no one tried to force him out.  Who knows they might even have told him they didn't mind.  We really don't know how rough a neighborhood he lived in, it might be bad enough that even living with a wizard in the building isn't seen as all that dangerous.
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Post by: Bad Alias on November 03, 2020, 07:37:46 PM
Not always an easy thing to do.  Yeah, Harry is a professional wizard, even there he admits to huge gaps in his education, a lot because he was lazy as a kid  But anyway, his muggle education consists of a GED, he isn't trained for any trades, is a bit old for an apprentice, so getting enough money together to get a place that fits his needs, not easy.
There's evidence from the text, WoJ, and our musings here as to how Harry could have made a lot of money. Until I see something convincing me that all that evidence is wrong, I'm going to go with he chose not to make a lot of money, which is also directly supported by the text.

As I said, the other people had to have been aware, no one tried to force him out.
Didn't Mrs. Spunkelcrief think that the zombie attack was a wild party and raised his rent for it? I don't think his neighbors were aware or believed in the supernatural.
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Post by: Mira on November 03, 2020, 09:58:52 PM
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here's evidence from the text, WoJ, and our musings here as to how Harry could have made a lot of money. Until I see something convincing me that all that evidence is wrong, I'm going to go with he chose not to make a lot of money, which is also directly supported by the text.

What I remember from the text is Harry saying there are wizards that use their power to make money.  He supposed he could do that as well, but thought it was corrupting.   

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Didn't Mrs. Spunkelcrief think that the zombie attack was a wild party and raised his rent for it? I don't think his neighbors were aware or believed in the supernatural.

Maybe not, but if I remember correctly the zombies totally trashed the place, people get evicted for that.
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Post by: Bad Alias on November 05, 2020, 09:03:39 PM
What I remember from the text is Harry saying there are wizards that use their power to make money.  He supposed he could do that as well, but thought it was corrupting.   

Maybe not, but if I remember correctly the zombies totally trashed the place, people get evicted for that.
There's also Ulshavaras's question that presumes he could. Jim implied using Bob for financial advise would be very useful.

Yes. They do. But not as quickly as they do when they endanger the landlord's life.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on November 06, 2020, 05:08:22 AM
There's also Ulshavaras's question that presumes he could. Jim implied using Bob for financial advise would be very useful.

Yes. They do. But not as quickly as they do when they endanger the landlord's life.

Um, I call the zombie invasion an endangerment of the landlord's life..  If she is the landlord, the actual landlord might be absentee..
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 07, 2020, 02:58:49 AM
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Yes, and six years was way too long a time lapse between books, especially when Peace Talks takes place with in months of Skin Game, intangibles get lost. 

Indeed. But then well that's not part of a story, and we can expect of Jim to keep tabs on what happened when even when he needs to take bigger skip.

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The Sword broke because Murphy who claimed to know better than Harry about the Swords, who self proclaimed herself custodian, who was an absolute hypocrite when it came to the use of the Sword of Faith, that is why it got broken.  Remember what Michael says, it isn't about the Sword, it is about the hand that wields it.  That is what Nic read and played off of to get it broken.  Trying to save Harry's life is a nice excuse, except Harry's life really was never in danger.  Deep down after the fact in her hospital bed, Murphy had to have realized that as well.  Yet in Peace Talks and Battle Ground, except for a little physical discomfort, Murphy talks like and acts like nothing had happened to her mentally/emotionally.  And it had, in spades, Nic damaged a hell of a lot more than her body.  Yet we see nothing about that.

Oh, yes I agree. Another field that should be delved more deeply. Especially considering Murphy's Catholicism (even if it seems mostly a pretext to avoid unwanted advances from valkyries).

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That is an excellent point.  Murphy’s death takes Murphy’s psychological recovery off the table.  I also don’t understand the purpose of introducing Murphy’s dad as a speaking character... after he died... and then taking Murphy off the table.

And we have WOJ claiming Collin was murdered.

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cause with Murphy sticking around in limbo(a form of it anyway) she has time to go visit her dad in limbo and find out the truth of his death?

Murphy's spirit/soul cannot leave Valhalla for next few centuries.

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And yes, WWW, every time that the weight of the sword is mentioned I was intrigued. I have 0 experience with swords but it seems that fighting with essentially a handle in your hand, no weight for the blade, would be a difficult task. Yet, once you get used to it, it is be very convenient, as you don't need to pass a strength check to wield it, you don't get tired, and can be very fast. All very useful for the not so strong adventurer. But still, I wouldn't think that the skills needed to fight with such a weapon should take more than a month. As I said before, I am willing to cut JB some slack as the sword itself could be helping.

And we're too believe utter sword-noob Butters never even accidentally cut himself while making wild waving around with the Sword?
Come on. Yes I agree for someone very well trained with it - it could work - but not after so short times, swords as we see in Battle Ground help a bit with probability but fencing is in knights hands.

Also RIP to all 9 of 10 of little Jedi padawans who cut their heads of in early stages of training

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But the bit I didn’t like the most was that scene with  Sigrun and Harry where Jim , in my hopefully wrong opinion, kind of berated readers who wouldn’t be happy with murphy’s fate it reminded me a bit too much of LKH for comfort.

What's LKH?
Yeah this scene was bit in your face, to the point when I begun to doubt whether Murphy as Einherjaren was not just Butcher's saying "look how cool she was".

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With ivy my main meaning wasn’t that he hadn’t tried to get hold of her at the party but that he hadn’t been in contact with her in general since perhaps her last in person book appearance other then his call for help I am basing that on

Now let's remember Butcher did a lot for last few books to keeping Dresden in contact - first he is dead for about half a year, then he is training in Arctis Tor, then Mab locks his for 16 months on Demonreach (and I'm kinda still angry after all this shit he allows it, and let's himself be tricked - but it was convinient for Butcher as Harry locked up - means his relationships are frozen, and God forbids any relationship stuff happens between books).

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Some hint maybe of camping trips with him and the other Wardens, but did that continue after Carlos was injured?

Carlos was injured after Cold Days, so there was like no chance. Dresden was stuck on Demonreach.
Really he was back in mortal world for 4 months, probably he have not return to Warden duties.

I mean Council should call for him just as he re-emerged after Skin Game - to interrogate him after you know missing for 3 years, not performing Warden duties, letting his warlock apprentice run around alone, and hey remember Doom of Damocles Dresden. Really there should be some action between WC and Dresden before PT.

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Heroic monster, or monsterous hero.

There's nothing monstrous about Dresden and I'm tired pretending him becoming a monster is any serious risk.

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It is entirely possible that a significant portion of why I currently don't like Harry is that he isn't different now, after all that he has been through, ie no growth. The author has resorted back to the default traits of his primary character. Mind you, I'm attempting to cook down several hours of in depth conversation into a small paragraph.

Well generally I disagree about this narcissism claim. Dresden is arrogant, but he is also full of self-doubt, self-fear maybe even loathing, he feels guilty about things are not even his guilt, and is willing to really risk his head for others. Whole point of narcissism is that you lack guilt, you lack empathy, you lack any serious self-introspection. Normal human being will have show narcisstic traits from time to time, but point of narcisstic disorder is - you're like that all the time, and that's all you are. Which Dresden clearly isn't - even if in many aspects he is terribly immature.

That saying I agree about lack of serious growth of character. I'll say even more - other characters have this problem as well.
This is curse of formula - books in DF are like tightly written episodes of TV-series. But there is lot of time between them  - that episodes of TV series lacks.

So for story that spans like 20 seasons, we ultimately gets character development worthy of maybe a season.

Now of course it seems Butcher also reaches out conlusion that's why he decided to write slow psychological Dresden Files (dammit if he'd mature just one book earlier we could get Murphy's aftermatch before killing her, dammit).

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Pretty much this. I don't see how anyone can see Harry as a narcissist. Harry's problem with empathy might be the opposite of a lacking.

Harry really should have made enough money to live a good distance from anyone else or moved somewhere where that wouldn't be too expensive.

But that would not be urban fantasy if Dresden was living 60 miles from city in some old farm.
Even though it would be more suitable for his position.
Then until certain moment - his presence was not beacon for problems on his own.


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As I said, the other people had to have been aware, no one tried to force him out.  Who knows they might even have told him they didn't mind.  We really don't know how rough a neighborhood he lived in, it might be bad enough that even living with a wizard in the building isn't seen as all that dangerous.

but that's not the point - point is what Harry should do - and I mean he should do something other than wait for another attack.
but he is sort of creature of habit as Murphy noticed.
and he won't tolerate bullies

so his stubborness is yes greater than his love for his neighbour
not a narcissism for me, but certainly some flaw


Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Phygers on November 07, 2020, 04:14:46 AM
Murphy's spirit/soul cannot leave Valhalla for next few centuries.

What's LKH?

That saying I agree about lack of serious growth of character. I'll say even more - other characters have this problem as well.
This is curse of formula - books in DF are like tightly written episodes of TV-series. But there is lot of time between them  - that episodes of TV series lacks.

So for story that spans like 20 seasons, we ultimately gets character development worthy of maybe a season.
Murphy can leave Valhalla when the memory of her has faded from mortal memory and using faded vs forgotten means something different than no memory. Her memory only has to be weakened or diminished it's just a matter of how faded to use Webster's definition. So there are ways she could return sooner than that or BAT

LKH is Laurell Kaye Hamilton author of the Anita Blake series that she ran/turned a great to start to series into a porn/orgy fest while writing the main as a hero even though she is firmly on the side of the antagonist and drove a good chunk of fans away. Dosen't help fans that are wondering if continue to read DF is a good idea after BG , PT and Murphy being removed to find out that Jim is friends with her and thinks that a crossover would be cool.

The problem that most have with Murph's death is how it was done and handle afterward. We had what 17 books and side stories of H and K interaction and foundation building in the series only for her to used as a something to gut punch Harry and then no real show any kind of fallout to her death after Butters and Sanya snapped him out of turning Rudolph into a bloody smear. Then at the end we have Jim forcing Harry and Lara together it feels like he did it just to get Karrin out of the way for Lara 
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on November 07, 2020, 05:35:19 AM
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The problem that most have with Murph's death is how it was done and handle afterward. We had what 17 books and side stories of H and K interaction and foundation building in the series only for her to used as a something to gut punch Harry and then no real show any kind of fallout to her death after Butters and Sanya snapped him out turning Rudolph into a bloody smear. Then at the end we have Jim forcing Harry and Lara together it feels like he did it just to get Karrin out of the way for Lara 

Which is a real disappointment, a bitch showdown between the two might have been kind of interesting... ::)
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Post by: Dina on November 07, 2020, 05:40:31 AM
Oh, I insist with some of my first reactions of BG. Harry and Murphy finally have sex only because JB needed Harry engaged with Lara but not vulnerable. The whole point was to give Harry True Love protection. If not for that, Murphy and Harry would have been still in the "will they, won't they" stage, and I would feel better. Because it's awful that any romantic partner Harry had has been killed or enthralled.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 07, 2020, 10:58:09 AM
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Murphy can leave Valhalla when the memory of her has faded from mortal memory and using faded vs forgotten means something different than no memory. Her memory only has to be weakened or diminished it's just a matter of how faded to use Webster's definition. So there are ways she could return sooner than that or BAT

Gard was using language of imprecise nature, but somehow I doubt it means - oh, it's only 50% weaker so you can be back.

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LKH is Laurell Kaye Hamilton author of the Anita Blake series that she ran/turned a great to start to series into a porn/orgy fest while writing the main as a hero even though she is firmly on the side of the antagonist and drove a good chunk of fans away.

Ah, ok. I considered reading Anita Blake stories until I read about how main arc changes. That's quite irksome, yes.

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Dosen't help fans that are wondering if continue to read DF is a good idea after BG , PT and Murphy being removed to find out that Jim is friends with her and thinks that a crossover would be cool.

I must say Butcher teasing multiverse is the WORST.
I can accept few splited timeline, but when according to WOJ each choice split reality it cheapens free will imensely. I mean literally that makes free will some bizzare mechanism to produce more alternative universes, not a real power of choice :P
That's what being comics nerd is gonna do to you :(

Nevertheless I somehow doubt we gonna see a real crossover, maybe some tribute, and while I get PT/BG has it's problem, I don't think it's anywhere shift so drastic as what Hamilton did with Blake.

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The problem that most have with Murph's death is how it was done and handle afterward. We had what 17 books and side stories of H and K interaction and foundation building in the series only for her to used as a something to gut punch Harry and then no real show any kind of fallout to her death after Butters and Sanya snapped him out of turning Rudolph into a bloody smear. Then at the end we have Jim forcing Harry and Lara together it feels like he did it just to get Karrin out of the way for Lara

Well here we are bit in a traps of formula aspect. Fast paced, time constrained events overall limits character development much (and usually it happens only in stories despite them covering like 1% of time) - exception was "Ghost Story" which sort of used "while-you-were-gone" scenarios - but even then it was used to torture Harry a bit. I mean let's face it - those stories are very Harry-centric. Maybe bit too much. So basically what happend to others from story perspective is by blood demiurge Butcher considered in large as way to punch Harry in some hard way.
Like look - he witness like every death of character known to him in the Battle. (ok with Wild Bill and Yoshimo sort of ONLY direct aftermatch).

I think Murphy was planned to die - and I think also her Valhalla ascencion was planned since at least "Changes" (and mind is WOJ is that Karrin was meant to die even earlier - but she was too cool) - but method of killing was done in quite Harry-centric way - first she saved his life from the giant, then she was killed in such sudden, random way by minor villain - to push Harry to a dark side a bit (and even this was stopped by Knights - because for all teasing Butcher is not comfortable with those morality blurs for serious).

Also I kinda think - wedding with Lara will be sort of make for laughs, and there will be no real romance.
I mean in first draft of series - there was no 12 months - just mirror mirror.
I think most crucial thing was killing Murphy before Mirror, Mirror - to torture Dresden even more in MM. I mean it's usually to torture Dresden.

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Which is a real disappointment, a bitch showdown between the two might have been kind of interesting... ::)

Molly/Lara bitch showdown will be more than enough XD

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Oh, I insist with some of my first reactions of BG. Harry and Murphy finally have sex only because JB needed Harry engaged with Lara but not vulnerable. The whole point was to give Harry True Love protection. If not for that, Murphy and Harry would have been still in the "will they, won't they" stage, and I would feel better. Because it's awful that any romantic partner Harry had has been killed or enthralled.

But by WOJ you don't have to have sex to estabilish True Love protection though intimacy helps.
(Now other thing I really dislike this True Love schtick for whampires, and I think it does not fit at all with how you repell fear and despair whampires according to WOJ - which is by courage and hope - so my take is romantic love True or not is not anathema, opposition of lust. Usually it's tamer of it - but not direct opposition. In other cases we have more like emotional state that is in direct opposition of what whampire try to do to you.

Also I think not... overall. Murphy was goner, she had to die before Mirror, Mirror so alt-Murphy would be greater torture for Harry.
But that also sort means Murphy had to went into loved one stage to hit those nails even harder. So I think even without Lara they would get together before her demise to put things in most devastating position before we seen Darth Dresden World.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on November 07, 2020, 01:40:47 PM
Do read Anita Blake. They were the first urban fantasy books I read. I am interested at what book you decide to stop.  ;D

Obsidian butterfly was the last one I really read. I could not get through the later ones and stopped buying them.
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 07, 2020, 01:58:53 PM
Maybe I give it a shot.
The first truly Urban/Paranormal Fantasy books I've read was probably Neil Gaiman - Neverwhere and American Gods, and in terms of series Felix Castor books.
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Post by: Arjan on November 07, 2020, 02:18:45 PM
Maybe I give it a shot.
The first truly Urban/Paranormal Fantasy books I've read was probably Neil Gaiman - Neverwhere and American Gods, and in terms of series Felix Castor books.
I read Lovecraft earlier in my teens but that is more horror I suppose.
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 07, 2020, 02:29:25 PM
I think UF/PF should have tropes of either crime, thriller, romance story mixed with fantasy stuff in real world. Otherwise it's horror.
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Post by: Arjan on November 07, 2020, 05:31:45 PM
I think UF/PF should have tropes of either crime, thriller, romance story mixed with fantasy stuff in real world. Otherwise it's horror.
I think the difference is that horror is primarily meant to scare you, all other themes are secondary.   
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 07, 2020, 06:26:07 PM
If so then why comedies like Friday the 13 or Elm Street are listed as horrors :P
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Post by: Dina on November 07, 2020, 06:57:32 PM
But by WOJ you don't have to have sex to estabilish True Love protection though intimacy helps.
(Now other thing I really dislike this True Love schtick for whampires, and I think it does not fit at all with how you repell fear and despair whampires according to WOJ - which is by courage and hope - so my take is romantic love True or not is not anathema, opposition of lust. Usually it's tamer of it - but not direct opposition. In other cases we have more like emotional state that is in direct opposition of what whampire try to do to you.

Also I think not... overall. Murphy was goner, she had to die before Mirror, Mirror so alt-Murphy would be greater torture for Harry.
But that also sort means Murphy had to went into loved one stage to hit those nails even harder. So I think even without Lara they would get together before her demise to put things in most devastating position before we seen Darth Dresden World.

What? I remember WoJ saying that sex and the possibility of a conception were a requirement for a True Love protection. I remember it well because there was a lot of discussion here about Jim Butcher being an homophobic.

And I know Murphy had to die, but the sex thing was, IMHO, only for the Protection.
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 07, 2020, 08:15:33 PM
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What? I remember WoJ saying that sex and the possibility of a conception were a requirement for a True Love protection. I remember it well because there was a lot of discussion here about Jim Butcher being an homophobic.

Maybe he changed mind. Last I've read intimacy is useful and make protection stronger - but is not necessary, and I'm quite sure he said gays are not excluded. (And I mean wasn't it strongly implied that it was like sex without possibility of conception because Dresden would not risk hurting her)?

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And I know Murphy had to die, but the sex thing was, IMHO, only for the Protection.

Here I have quote from: "Q:  What protections are there against the White Court? 
A:  True love – real true love, not just romantic love – protects only against WC vamps feeding through lust/intimacy.
2010 Lee’s Summit signing
Q:  Do you have to have sex in order to have protection from the White Court?
A:  No, you don’t have to.  It is helpful, though."

I must say - I don't like this True Love bullshit, I do not really believe in such things, so I'm like meh about it - and it's not consistent with how fear and despair whampires are repelled. You do not need mutual courage of two people to burn Malvora really.
But if anything I'm glad at least Jim does not makes it ritual sex magic but leave it on emotional status.
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Post by: Dina on November 07, 2020, 08:23:36 PM
Ah, I like that better. So, if he really changed his mind, I am glad. Still, intimacy works for my idea. Dresden and Murph have not been so intimate until PT.
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Post by: Arjan on November 07, 2020, 08:27:24 PM
According to Bob it has to do with exchanging pieces of your soul.
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 07, 2020, 08:45:26 PM
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Ah, I like that better. So, if he really changed his mind, I am glad. Still, intimacy works for my idea. Dresden and Murph have not been so intimate until PT.

I mean depends how widely you treat intimacy.
Now I'd generally prefer it repelance for psychic vampires were simply countering their emotional frequencies - fear with courage, despair with hope, lust with restraint - but I guess restraint against lust would make it virtually impossible for Dresden to ever be protected and he would be eaten by Inari.

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According to Dob it has to do with exchanging pieces of your soul.

But then hope against Skavis works.. how?
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Post by: Dina on November 07, 2020, 08:51:46 PM
On the other hand, he would be invulnerable to fear vampires  :)
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 07, 2020, 08:55:13 PM
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On the other hand, he would be invulnerable to fear vampires

I'd say it's like 50:50.
He had a lot of inner fear they could use against him - depends how smart in psychomanipulation they would be.
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Post by: Mira on November 07, 2020, 09:06:55 PM


Well, we do know that one can have true love more than once with different people.  Harry had true love with Susan, she died, he remain protected until Luccio, they liked one another but because her brain had been tampered with by Peabody's ink, it never became true love.  Also because they had sex, it killed Harry's protection from Susan.. Harry and Murphy had true, love, Harry is protected, she is dead, but if Harry refrains from sex for the rest of his life, he should remain protected.
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 07, 2020, 09:18:45 PM
Dunno. Maybe Murphy's death breaks it.
Weren't he and Lara been able to shake hands?
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Post by: Dina on November 07, 2020, 09:51:45 PM
That is because Lara did not want to feed from him at the moment. The same happened with Susan. Dresden is not Harry Potter, is not his skin that burns. It's when the whampire tries to feed from him that he/she is burned.
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 07, 2020, 10:51:30 PM
Right, but she was burned accidentally in Peace Talks.
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Post by: Dina on November 07, 2020, 11:39:01 PM
Yes, but that is probably because she was distracted, and as such, her hunger was ready to feed. Lara needs to control herself not to feed, I think.
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Post by: Mira on November 08, 2020, 11:15:12 AM
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Dunno. Maybe Murphy's death breaks it.
Weren't he and Lara been able to shake hands?

Susan's death didn't break Harry's protection until he took up with Luccio.
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Post by: TheCuriousFan on November 08, 2020, 11:21:00 AM
Susan's death didn't break Harry's protection until he took up with Luccio.
Susan was very much alive when Harry hooked up with Luccio.
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Post by: Arjan on November 08, 2020, 05:09:15 PM
I don’t think it matters. The protection is there.
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Post by: Dina on November 08, 2020, 06:53:05 PM
Susan was very much alive when Harry hooked up with Luccio.
Yes. Half-Turned, but very alive.
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 08, 2020, 08:12:51 PM
Hard to say.
As I said I'm not a fan of this True Love thing - I'd much prefer it to be sort of mental duel with such vampire than some almost excuse random category. With Skavis and Malvora you have to prove your virtue to burn those bastards.
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Post by: Mira on November 09, 2020, 04:38:39 PM
Hard to say.
As I said I'm not a fan of this True Love thing - I'd much prefer it to be sort of mental duel with such vampire than some almost excuse random category. With Skavis and Malvora you have to prove your virtue to burn those bastards.

Yeah, I've always had trouble with it as well.  It never was clear and it has been debated a bunch over the years.  What constitutes true love?  Supposedly just touching a wedding ring of a someone who has true love protection can burn, or a flower touched and given in true love.  Yet getting raped can destroy the protection? Yes, we've gone around and around on that one.  It makes no sense.  Does it come down to being unfaithful?  You can get drunk and have a one night stand, still truly love someone else, but your protection is gone.   Did Justine have sex with the woman she brought home because she loved her?  Or so the protection would be erased and she an Thomas could have sex?  Or more to the point, was she motivated by her true love for Thomas to do it so they could consummate their relationship, which you'd think would seal not destroy the whole protection thing. Or was Justine infested with Nemesis as of Ghost Story and wanted to destroy her protection so she could eventually get pregnant to set up other events?
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Post by: Telynn on November 09, 2020, 05:12:24 PM
Maybe Justine was infected at that point, and therefore not in love, so didn't have the protection.  But bringing in the other person was her cover to Thomas.  See? You can touch me because I brought this other person in to have sex with us!  No other way to get pregnant unless Thomas was convinced that was the other person causing him to be able to touch Justine, instead of possessed Justine didn't love Thomas.
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Post by: Mira on November 09, 2020, 05:56:07 PM
Maybe Justine was infected at that point, and therefore not in love, so didn't have the protection.  But bringing in the other person was her cover to Thomas.  See? You can touch me because I brought this other person in to have sex with us!  No other way to get pregnant unless Thomas was convinced that was the other person causing him to be able to touch Justine, instead of possessed Justine didn't love Thomas.

Yup, that is what I am trying to say.
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 09, 2020, 07:28:25 PM
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Yeah, I've always had trouble with it as well.  It never was clear and it has been debated a bunch over the years.  What constitutes true love?  Supposedly just touching a wedding ring of a someone who has true love protection can burn, or a flower touched and given in true love.  Yet getting raped can destroy the protection? Yes, we've gone around and around on that one.  It makes no sense.  Does it come down to being unfaithful?  You can get drunk and have a one night stand, still truly love someone else, but your protection is gone.   Did Justine have sex with the woman she brought home because she loved her?  Or so the protection would be erased and she an Thomas could have sex?  Or more to the point, was she motivated by her true love for Thomas to do it so they could consummate their relationship, which you'd think would seal not destroy the whole protection thing. Or was Justine infested with Nemesis as of Ghost Story and wanted to destroy her protection so she could eventually get pregnant to set up other events?

I mean even if Justine's having sex with this lass would destroy protection, shouldn't it return like in 5 minutes after she moved to Thomas, assuming they were still in True Love. Now this conundrum thankfully was sort of explained as Nemesis trick, which makes it more digestible for me.
Because really as only scene with Thomas in "Ghost Story" it was lame.
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Post by: Mira on November 10, 2020, 02:30:15 PM
I mean even if Justine's having sex with this lass would destroy protection, shouldn't it return like in 5 minutes after she moved to Thomas, assuming they were still in True Love. Now this conundrum thankfully was sort of explained as Nemesis trick, which makes it more digestible for me.
Because really as only scene with Thomas in "Ghost Story" it was lame.

No, that has been one of the biggest mysteries about the whole true love protection gig.  It makes no sense and we've gone down that rabbit hole for some time now.  True love is an emotion, a powerful emotion that one feels for another, supposedly true love is a ghost pepper to the mouth of the Hunger Demon.  Yet, one misstep of unfaithfulness, or even rape can wipe it out.. True love just isn't ended that easily, yet in the Dresdenworld it is.
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Post by: vincentric on November 10, 2020, 04:32:22 PM
It makes perfect sense to me.

True love is the magical mechanism that establishes the protection, just like casting a ward. And like a ward it remains until broken or taken down.

Sex, voluntary or involuntary, with someone other than your True Love breaks the ward. Voluntary is you taking it down, involuntary is an attack that breaches it.

Having sex with your True Love at a later time rebuilds the ward. I imagine Thomas and Justine had to refrain from body contact very shorty after completing the act as the ward came back up.
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Post by: Dina on November 10, 2020, 04:38:25 PM
That is how I understand it too.
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 10, 2020, 06:57:07 PM
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True love is the magical mechanism that establishes the protection, just like casting a ward. And like a ward it remains until broken or taken down.

But then why it's enough to be really brave to burn Malvora out :P

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Having sex with your True Love at a later time rebuilds the ward. I imagine Thomas and Justine had to refrain from body contact very shorty after completing the act as the ward came back up.

Problem with this is - WOJ states sex is not necessary to estabilish ward.
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Post by: Dina on November 10, 2020, 07:06:18 PM
Until I see it on the books, I won't believe it.
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Post by: Mira on November 11, 2020, 05:54:40 AM
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Having sex with your True Love at a later time rebuilds the ward. I imagine Thomas and Justine had to refrain from body contact very shorty after completing the act as the ward came back up.

One huge problem with that theory, Justine got pregnant at some point just before Peace talks.  Which implies no true love protection because they continued to have sex.  Or possible Justine continued her bisexual relationship so there was no true love protection build up, she and Thomas could continue to have sex ending in pregnancy which was the goal of Nemesis. Also possible, Thomas isn't even the father, he did say that vampires of the White Court are all but sterile, plus they used birth control.  So poor Thomas was simply duped all the way around because I doubt he'd believe that anyone else could be the child's father but himself.   
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Post by: Arjan on November 11, 2020, 07:34:10 AM
One huge problem with that theory, Justine got pregnant at some point just before Peace talks.  Which implies no true love protection because they continued to have sex.  Or possible Justine continued her bisexual relationship so there was no true love protection build up, she and Thomas could continue to have sex ending in pregnancy which was the goal of Nemesis. Also possible, Thomas isn't even the father, he did say that vampires of the White Court are all but sterile, plus they used birth control.  So poor Thomas was simply duped all the way around because I doubt he'd believe that anyone else could be the child's father but himself.
If she was the one doing the birth control then it was easily sabotaged. The all but sterile must be magical in origin and has something to do with the demon and might not even be a factor if the demon thinks Justine is the right mother.
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Post by: vincentric on November 11, 2020, 09:26:15 AM
One huge problem with that theory, Justine got pregnant at some point just before Peace talks.  Which implies no true love protection because they continued to have sex.  Or possible Justine continued her bisexual relationship so there was no true love protection build up, she and Thomas could continue to have sex ending in pregnancy which was the goal of Nemesis. Also possible, Thomas isn't even the father, he did say that vampires of the White Court are all but sterile, plus they used birth control.  So poor Thomas was simply duped all the way around because I doubt he'd believe that anyone else could be the child's father but himself.


The True Love protection is mechanical and they were gaming the system.

They do their threesome thing, presumably with both having sex with the flavor of the week first, and that knocks the protection down. Then she and Thomas can have "safe" sex which will rebuild the True Love ward as a result.

It's a very gamer exploit of the system.
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Post by: morriswalters on November 11, 2020, 10:13:59 AM
It's a pretty convenient ward, if a ward it is.  Thomas banged his way through Dead Beat. That should have killed it. Yet by White Knight despite the fact that Thomas has been doing every "she" he comes in contact with, it means not one wit. 

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Post by: Mira on November 11, 2020, 11:57:39 AM
It's a pretty convenient ward, if a ward it is.  Thomas banged his way through Dead Beat. That should have killed it. Yet by White Knight despite the fact that Thomas has been doing every "she" he comes in contact with, it means not one wit.

Yup, and still banging away as of Peace Talks with Evanna.  Justine was protected, but not Thomas, he is the vamp feeding, not her.  True love protected her from him..  When she had sex with someone else, she lost the protection.  If it had built up again, then he would have been burned any time he touched Justine. 
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Post by: morriswalters on November 11, 2020, 01:39:32 PM
I believe you are right in terms of how Jim has structured it, but having been married for 40 plus years I can reliably state that sex has very little to do with true love.
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Post by: Arjan on November 11, 2020, 01:47:23 PM
I believe you are right in terms of how Jim has structured it, but having been married for 40 plus years I can reliably state that sex has very little to do with true love.
Jim Butler was only 33 when Blood Rites came out.
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Post by: Mira on November 11, 2020, 02:22:57 PM
Jim Butler was only 33 when Blood Rites came out.

I don't think Jim's age had much to do with how he structured the true love rules, I think he just didn't think it through.   You can be young and know what true love is, and you can be old and be clueless as to what it really is.  As I said, if the old posts still exist from the time Blood Rites came out, we went round and round on the subject.

I too was married for over 43 years until my husband died, and know that true love has nothing to do with sex.  Sex is fun, true love enhances it, but sex isn't the main component.  I think Jim came up with the idea, it fit perfectly into the story he was writing at the time and went with it.  Ignoring that one can have sex without love, one can be raped, one can truly love without sex, one can even be unfaithful for a lot of complicated reasons and still truly love one person, which as the series has gone on variations of these scenarios create problems for the story line.   And yes, it is possible that Harry still truly loves both Susan and Murphy though both are dead, and always will... So is he still protected? 
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Post by: Arjan on November 11, 2020, 03:19:54 PM
I don't think Jim's age had much to do with how he structured the true love rules, I think he just didn't think it through.   You can be young and know what true love is, and you can be old and be clueless as to what it really is.  As I said, if the old posts still exist from the time Blood Rites came out, we went round and round on the subject.

I too was married for over 43 years until my husband died, and know that true love has nothing to do with sex.  Sex is fun, true love enhances it, but sex isn't the main component.  I think Jim came up with the idea, it fit perfectly into the story he was writing at the time and went with it.  Ignoring that one can have sex without love, one can be raped, one can truly love without sex, one can even be unfaithful for a lot of complicated reasons and still truly love one person, which as the series has gone on variations of these scenarios create problems for the story line.   And yes, it is possible that Harry still truly loves both Susan and Murphy though both are dead, and always will... So is he still protected?
I think true love is not enough, it is magic after all. It has to be confirmed with words or ceremony.

And while one can be stupid or wise at 33 I have learned some things in the 23 years after that. 
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Post by: Dina on November 11, 2020, 04:02:12 PM
I think we are overthinking it. It's a convenient thing for literature, it has not need to be related with real life. And since book 1 JB established that in his world, sexual relationships are super powerful and magic related. So, perhaps we can accept the mechanics of True Love as he wants them to be?

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Post by: Arjan on November 11, 2020, 04:26:39 PM
I think we are overthinking it. It's a convenient thing for literature, it has not need to be related with real life. And since book 1 JB established that in his world, sexual relationships are super powerful and magic related. So, perhaps we can accept the mechanics of True Love as he wants them to be?
There is also the ritual use of sex as with Mab and Harry.
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Post by: Dina on November 11, 2020, 04:48:13 PM
Yes. I mean "since SF" but not "exclusively" from it. :)
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Post by: Mira on November 11, 2020, 05:14:08 PM
There is also the ritual use of sex as with Mab and Harry.

It isn't that simple though, Harry had a sexual relationship with Luccio.. However it apparently was just sex, they liked one another, true.. Harry's feelings may have been real, but he admitted later not all that deep, her feelings were manipulated by Peabody, so no true love protection.. Though Harry did lose his protection.  So sex alone isn't enough to create true love protection, but sex alone with another is enough to break it..
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Post by: Dina on November 11, 2020, 06:05:10 PM
Yes, we were talking about the power of the sexual act in the DF, not specifically about True Love (right now).
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Post by: Mira on November 11, 2020, 07:39:56 PM
Yes, we were talking about the power of the sexual act in the DF, not specifically about True Love (right now).

But they are tied together.  As far as Harry and Mab doing their thing on the Faenetwork, the Winter Knight I believe is considered her consort, and the public sex act is the consummation of that bond.  This goes back to the custom in some cultures of displaying the blood stained sheets after the wedding night.  Proof that the marriage was consummated and now  was valid.  One of the excuses for a annulment verses a divorce, was the marriage was never consummated, so in other words, sex seals the deal, no sex, no real marriage..  It can be annulled, as in like it never happened.
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 11, 2020, 08:45:52 PM
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Until I see it on the books, I won't believe it.

Distrust of WOJ. I like it.

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It's a pretty convenient ward, if a ward it is.  Thomas banged his way through Dead Beat. That should have killed it. Yet by White Knight despite the fact that Thomas has been doing every "she" he comes in contact with, it means not one wit.

Thomas can fuck off his own ward, but it's not like ward of Justine is like ultimately dependent of his own. So Justine can stay faithful and keep True Love ward around. An anyway - if they go intimate it can be rebuilt for them both who knows how fast. After all Thomas was not burned by own True Love, but by Justine's - otherwise his own True Love would kill her.

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Jim Butler was only 33 when Blood Rites came out.

Maybe that's why he changed his mind. (Or maybe because he decided it's kinda stupid considering anti-Skavis and anti-Malvora defenses are way way different.)

But then...

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I think Jim came up with the idea, it fit perfectly into the story he was writing at the time and went with it.  Ignoring that one can have sex without love, one can be raped, one can truly love without sex, one can even be unfaithful for a lot of complicated reasons and still truly love one person, which as the series has gone on variations of these scenarios create problems for the story line.   And yes, it is possible that Harry still truly loves both Susan and Murphy though both are dead, and always will... So is he still protected?

With all those exceptions and stuff - somehow this original in many ways mechanical variant of protection were less baffling than going with true love in like philosophy area. But yeah I think ultimately reason for it was to estabilish way out for Inari, and way to torture Thomas a bit.
(Although I think sex without love as not-working was estabilished anyway).

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I think true love is not enough, it is magic after all. It has to be confirmed with words or ceremony.

Ritualism. But then would Murphy/Dresden work on Lara?

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I think we are overthinking it. It's a convenient thing for literature, it has not need to be related with real life. And since book 1 JB established that in his world, sexual relationships are super powerful and magic related. So, perhaps we can accept the mechanics of True Love as he wants them to be?

I generally agree. My problem in a long run is not connected that much to True Love being problematic concept - but rather than overall it makes mechanics of white vampires bit wonky. Fear-feeders are repelled by true courage, despair-feeders are repelled by true hope - but here we have convoluted wards of intimacy lasting for 7 years which seems to work quite differently. It irks my OCD and love of patterns in a bad way.
If there was no Skavis or Malvora - or if they all were sex-vampires I would care bit less.




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Post by: Mira on November 11, 2020, 09:02:37 PM
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Thomas can fuck off his own ward, but it's not like ward of Justine is like ultimately dependent of his own. So Justine can stay faithful and keep True Love ward around. An anyway - if they go intimate it can be rebuilt for them both who knows how fast. After all Thomas was not burned by own True Love, but by Justine's - otherwise his own True Love would kill her.

That's the problem though, Justine wasn't faithful.  She had sex with her girlfriend, true love protection went poof, then she could have sex with Thomas.  Rebuild it again? Then Thomas gets burnt all over again, and obviously for her to get pregnant they continued to have sex.  Just no true love scorching Thomas each time.. Justine isn't feeding off of Thomas, so his true love wouldn't burn her.  You'd think it would burn out the Hunger Demon, which supposedly if true love happens before the first kill, it can as was said about Inari.
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Post by: morriswalters on November 11, 2020, 09:31:59 PM
Thomas can bang whoever but Justine is unfaithful. Right.
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 11, 2020, 10:34:58 PM
I mean - Thomas banging whoever would not dismantle Justine protection if we go with ritualistic sex explanation.
Intimacy between True Lovers estabilish Ward, but then  Ward is hold separately by both - so Justine has to break it on her own.
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Post by: Mira on November 11, 2020, 10:40:15 PM
Thomas can bang whoever but Justine is unfaithful. Right.

I guess in the case of Thomas, he is feeding himself.  If he got as much nourishment as he needs to stay healthy, he could kill Justine or weaken her.  So he has to bang away, Justine, I think understands that.  Thomas isn't the one needing the true love's protection, since he is the one doing the feeding.. Here is more thing that proves he doesn't have it.  The Hunger Demon is feeding on his weakened body, right?  If he was truly protected by true love, wouldn't the Hunger Demon just burn itself out?
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Post by: The_Sibelis on November 11, 2020, 11:16:57 PM
So Justine has had Nemesis for awhile, did nobody notice the true love thing stopped happening or has Nemesis actually managed to pervert the cosmic forces of love against reality?
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 12, 2020, 12:23:33 AM
Both options are probable.

In case of Thomas feeding - I mean he does not need to fuck his dinner. You just need maintain skin-skin contact to empower lust within victim and suck life-energy concentrated like that from them.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on November 12, 2020, 12:59:21 AM
My comment was about how Jim has written Thomas. And more generally how he has written women.
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 12, 2020, 01:37:18 AM
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Thomas can bang whoever but Justine is unfaithful. Right.
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My comment was about how Jim has written Thomas. And more generally how he has written women.

While fact that too many women around Harry are hawt and he is way to aware of it all the time - is annoying quite a bit, i honestly cannot say I see those books going into attitude where man fucking around is chad, and women sleeping a lot s-word or something.

I mean he can write Thomas as "sexy vampire" for laughs, but ultimately Thomas powers and overall whampires powers are shown as creepy and unraveling humanity of their hosts. So I cannot really see much double-standards here... Too much thirsty geek fantasies maybe.


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Post by: Dina on November 12, 2020, 02:51:18 AM
I agree, WWW. I don't have much problems with JB writing women, except for the fact that those sleeping with Harry are pretty much doomed (or mind-controlled).
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Post by: Arjan on November 12, 2020, 04:24:37 AM
So Justine has had Nemesis for awhile, did nobody notice the true love thing stopped happening or has Nemesis actually managed to pervert the cosmic forces of love against reality?
Or an infection is just not enough to stop the true love thing if Nemesis only influenced her a bit. The real taking over was probably much later than the infection.
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 12, 2020, 10:43:39 AM
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I agree, WWW. I don't have much problems with JB writing women, except for the fact that those sleeping with Harry are pretty much doomed (or mind-controlled).

Dresden's male gaze can be annoying, but that's I think more part of wider problem of Jim making constant repetitions of descriptions and so on.
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Post by: morriswalters on November 12, 2020, 12:09:23 PM
The male gaze bothers me not in the least. It exists and if any man tells you he doesn't look at women, he's a liar, given that he is heterosexual. And I assume that women have something similar going on with men. But it's almost never vocalized, even  internally. The whole fashion industry is built on the idea. He just does it to the point of exhaustion.

My point falls back on the only women who was written in the books outside that concept.  Murphy. As poorly as Jim treated her over the course of the books, she deserved a better end then what she got. A talented writer should be able to pull that off and get the emotional punch that he wanted.
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Post by: Mira on November 12, 2020, 12:34:16 PM
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The male gaze bothers me not in the least. It exists and if any man tells you he doesn't look at women, he's a liar, given that he is heterosexual. And I assume that women have something similar going on with men. But it's almost never vocalized, even  internally. The whole fashion industry is built on the idea. He just does it to the point of exhaustion.

Of course we do, and men know it too, it isn't just grooming and keeping in shape with them, they do it so we women notice...
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My point falls back on the only women who was written in the books outside that concept.  Murphy. As poorly as Jim treated her over the course of the books, she deserved a better end then what she got. A talented writer should be able to pull that off and get the emotional punch that he wanted.

I agree, she did deserve better.  But perhaps that was the point?  Jim wrote that completely avoidable ending for her to piss us off.
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 12, 2020, 03:02:43 PM
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The male gaze bothers me not in the least. It exists and if any man tells you he doesn't look at women, he's a liar, given that he is heterosexual. And I assume that women have something similar going on with men. But it's almost never vocalized, even  internally. The whole fashion industry is built on the idea. He just does it to the point of exhaustion.

I agree. Problem is with overall formula of repeating everything. I have no problem with supernatural predators using sex-appeal as weapon - I think it's quite legit strategy. But Dresden is just repeating everything. I mean constant reminding to us how Butters is a short guy was no less infuriating than reminding how sexy Lara is.

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My point falls back on the only women who was written in the books outside that concept.  Murphy. As poorly as Jim treated her over the course of the books, she deserved a better end then what she got. A talented writer should be able to pull that off and get the emotional punch that he wanted.

I agree and disagree. I would like more random death in Battle Ground - in the end only named characters that fallen were Wardens taken in mid-boss fight, Murphy taken in another sort of mid-boss fight, and Hendricks. Way to scripted for my taste for this level of unholly mess.
As much as Murphy demise go - I think her failure as knight, connection to Odin and death were planned at least since Changes. And as such it's not a bad way - it gives option for Murphy powered up and back right for Apocalypse, while she would be not able to neither follow up, nor accept she cannot follow, and I think both her and Marcone's fates shows that time for mere mortals is over. Which is dark, but for me sort of expected resolution - compared to many stories when mundane man shall stand up to gods and monsters and prevail.

The problem is that now I think main reason Jim went for Dresden/Murphy romance was to push Dresden darker in this book. It's not her death was fridging - it's her relationship with Harry was fridging in my vision - put there just before her planned further death. Which is why Rudolph was used rather than any supernatural monster. Murphy was meant to die, but her death was staged too much. I do not think it's that bad overall - I'm always for random before poetic, but it sours her and Harry relationship.

As I said there should be extra book between SG and PT to let their relationship breathe, to let her deal and accept his new condition (and then of course run in battle anyway because BG is just too big to stay at home), and be something more than advancing things forward for bigger gut punch.

But with this "deserved better end" I honestly disagree. Death... death should not be cool. Even death of cooler characters.
And TBH it seems for most part deaths in Dresden Files rarely are COOL. Neither for villains nor for heroes.
Now I think Hendricks probably was only one so far who get classic like movie death.

I'd also notice that there is character that IMHO was fridged way worse than Murphy and with whom Butcher clearly has even more problem to do anything interesting - it's Thomas. Even his thread and whole Nemesis Xanatos Gambit in Peace Talks sounds more like afterthought, and literally nothing interesting happened with him since Turn Coat. And now he's in literal fridge. (And I won't talk he deserves better - but seriously Jim if you don't have idea what to do with Thomas maybe just kill him or smth).

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I agree, she did deserve better.  But perhaps that was the point?  Jim wrote that completely avoidable ending for her to piss us off.

I honestly think main reason was for another fake Dresden Going Dark tease.
I believe that's why he hooked them together right before Peace Talks after all this back and forth dance.
If it was some monster or even very dangerous mortal like Listen - the Dresden could have honest revenge without much of remorse afterwards. If it was random mortal with trigger finger who shot too fast (my preferable option - Murphy killed by honest to Earth people she meant to defend, just by accident and battle panic) he probably would stop himself. Rudolph was perfect as minor petty villain, as Draco-Joffrey of this series, to just make Harry really really ANGRY.

(My second favourite alternative solution - would be Murphy killed by debris, which would leave Dresden without any place to steam off).

But I think Jim predicted people would be angry - hence Harry and Sigurn talk in last chapter.
Where (my qualms about overall moral standards of Odin, Einherjar and Valhalla asie) Sigurn was of course quite right and it was sort of challenging many viewers perspective on unworthy death.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on November 12, 2020, 03:36:45 PM
I am not going to engage about Murphy here but I agree Dresden repetitions are annoying. It's not the male gaze what bothers me, after all, Dresden is quite good describing males too. Michael, Sanya, Butters, Marcone. But he repeats too much and not only about people, I am really tired of him explaining us how soulgazes work. We got it the first time you told us, 20 years ago, and in PT/BG you explained so many times that it even lessened the effect of the Empty House Tragic Moment.

Also, I agree about Thomas fridging. I need him back ASAP.
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Post by: Arjan on November 12, 2020, 04:10:18 PM
I am not going to engage about Murphy here but I agree Dresden repetitions are annoying. It's not the male gaze what bothers me, after all, Dresden is quite good describing males too. Michael, Sanya, Butters, Marcone. But he repeats too much and not only about people, I am really tired of him explaining us how soulgazes work. We got it the first time you told us, 20 years ago, and in PT/BG you explained so many times that it even lessened the effect of the Empty House Tragic Moment.

Also, I agree about Thomas fridging. I need him back ASAP.
That is a problem with long running series. I read on Ilona Andrews blog that one reason she ended her Kate Daniels series is that it became more and more difficult to write original and new descriptions of the same recurring things.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 12, 2020, 04:27:03 PM
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Also, I agree about Thomas fridging. I need him back ASAP.

Dunno. I somehow have a feeling he can stay fridged till BAT, because really I think Butcher had little idea what to do with Thomas overall.

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I am not going to engage about Murphy here but I agree Dresden repetitions are annoying. It's not the male gaze what bothers me, after all, Dresden is quite good describing males too. Michael, Sanya, Butters, Marcone. But he repeats too much and not only about people, I am really tired of him explaining us how soulgazes work. We got it the first time you told us, 20 years ago, and in PT/BG you explained so many times that it even lessened the effect of the Empty House Tragic Moment.

Yes. For instance we could get longer introductions and epilogues to series giving us better vision of what Dresden was doing between books - that's about as much place we needed. (And no Jim no sane reader would pick tome 16 of your series, and just run with it mindlessly. If he does he will notice something is wrong - like you can put list of all the books at the beginning or something).

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That is a problem with long running series. I read on Ilona Andrews blog that one reason she ended her Kate Daniels series is that it became more and more difficult to write original and new descriptions of the same recurring things.

DO NOT DESCRIBE THEM. Like really. Describe new things. Introduce new things.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on November 12, 2020, 04:35:43 PM
I think it was particularly bad in PT/BG, and I have the hope it is because JB thought that so many time had passed that we needed to be reminded of things. So I cross my fingers 12M will be better in that sense.

You may be right about Thomas but I don't think it will make much sense. Lara and Harry are simply too interested. And I don't think any of us want to see Harry playing house, with Lara as a wife and "mother" of Maggie and Thomas baby (they will rescue him/her). Also, I don't know what will happen with Bonea and Bob.
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 12, 2020, 04:39:26 PM
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You may be right about Thomas but I don't think it will make much sense. Lara and Harry are simply too interested. And I don't think any of us want to see Harry playing house, with Lara as a wife and "mother" of Maggie and Thomas baby (they will rescue him/her). Also, I don't know what will happen with Bonea and Bob.

I somehow doubt Lara will become his wife.
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Post by: Dina on November 12, 2020, 04:45:31 PM
I hope you are right.
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Post by: Mira on November 12, 2020, 04:57:05 PM
I somehow doubt Lara will become his wife.

Yeah, I don't think so either, and even if she does, it will be strictly political.  It might be what Jim is shooting for, after Murphy, no more romantic entanglements for Harry, at least none that would result in him committing bigotry.   
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Post by: Arjan on November 12, 2020, 05:21:59 PM
I somehow doubt Lara will become his wife.
No doubt she will. The question is what will that mean.
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Post by: vincentric on November 12, 2020, 05:37:51 PM
I hope you are right.

I really hope she does.

I want to see how Eb reacts and I definitely want to read the conversation with Thomasif he's woken up.
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Post by: Dina on November 12, 2020, 05:53:18 PM
I want to see the reactions as the intended wedding but I don't want it actually happening.
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Post by: Mira on November 12, 2020, 06:33:22 PM
I want to see the reactions as the intended wedding but I don't want it actually happening.

I don't either, short term stir, but then what?  Lara becomes the new Thomas, filling in for the times when Harry needs superhuman, speed, strength, and just kick ass?
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 12, 2020, 07:01:45 PM
Really like with Marcone I really like Lara, and White Court as whole to get some serious Chichen Itza finally...
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Post by: morriswalters on November 12, 2020, 07:43:16 PM
But he repeats too much and not only about people, I am really tired of him explaining us how soulgazes work. We got it the first time you told us, 20 years ago, and in PT/BG you explained so many times that it even lessened the effect of the Empty House Tragic Moment.

Also, I agree about Thomas fridging. I need him back ASAP.
Soul gazing a octopus pretty much did me in with the idea. Maybe a squirrel next?  Thomas is where he is for a reason.  He can't stay a vampire.  Vampires don't have happy endings.

I had some hopes that the story line would mature when Harry accepted what he had bought by becoming Mab's Knight and the difficulty of being a father. Instead it has moved to the sublime.  Here comes the apocalypse, but wait while I take the child to the babysitter and dump my idiot brother in stir. 

You have Eb arguing that he's too close to the White's by having Thomas in the house. And now Harry is courting Lara. That can't end well. Harry better keep those murder dolls in stock.  There are plenty of near Earth asteroids for Eb to call down.  With the way everybody was acting I could believe that Harry was already in Mirror Mirror world.
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Post by: Mira on November 12, 2020, 08:24:33 PM
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Soul gazing a octopus pretty much did me in with the idea. Maybe a squirrel next?  Thomas is where he is for a reason.  He can't stay a vampire.  Vampires don't have happy endings.

The only way that could have been possible is if the kracken was human at one time and still had some soul left.  From the vision which kind of looked like ancient Greece, it may have been.  If I remember correctly he had something about not being able to soul gaze Terra West because she wasn't human.

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I had some hopes that the story line would mature when Harry accepted what he had bought by becoming Mab's Knight and the difficulty of being a father. Instead it has moved to the sublime.  Here comes the apocalypse, but wait while I take the child to the babysitter and dump my idiot brother in stir. 

I think there was some of it, Harry's fears about becoming a monster but at the same time beginning to understand Mab better.  But I agree it did get weird after that. 
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You have Eb arguing that he's too close to the White's by having Thomas in the house. And now Harry is courting Lara. That can't end well. Harry better keep those murder dolls in stock.  There are plenty of near Earth asteroids for Eb to call down.  With the way everybody was acting I could believe that Harry was already in Mirror Mirror world.

No, it can't, I guess I am one of the few who isn't looking forward to Mirror Mirror..  Maybe I am just sick of hearing about it? :-\
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 12, 2020, 08:34:44 PM
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Soul gazing a octopus pretty much did me in with the idea. Maybe a squirrel next?

I think idea was - that you know kraken was a human being turned by Fomor - maybe brain implaneted in octopus - they are after all fleshcrafters.

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Thomas is where he is for a reason.  He can't stay a vampire.  Vampires don't have happy endings.

Dunno really. I'm not wanna go neither too pesimistic nor too optimistic about him.
For all I care he could stay whampire, and live past BAT as such - if Butcher have anything interesting to do with him rather than be sexy vampire brother.

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I had some hopes that the story line would mature when Harry accepted what he had bought by becoming Mab's Knight and the difficulty of being a father. Instead it has moved to the sublime.  Here comes the apocalypse, but wait while I take the child to the babysitter and dump my idiot brother in stir.

Yeah, I mean 12 Months seems to be a book to go more deep into mature stuff.
But unfortunately overall Dresden Files are prisoners of own formula, most of readers love this formula - me included really, and Jim perfected it.
Plus for all dark shit Jim can do - he is not that dark of a storywriter. I mean I have no doubts Maggie is safe - so putting her in danger do nothing to me.

There is certain problem than in almost every book Dresden is motivated by putting someone close to him in direct danger - that's like main reason or second main reason he do any shit. He is too reactive in the end.

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You have Eb arguing that he's too close to the White's by having Thomas in the house. And now Harry is courting Lara. That can't end well. Harry better keep those murder dolls in stock.  There are plenty of near Earth asteroids for Eb to call down.  With the way everybody was acting I could believe that Harry was already in Mirror Mirror world.

what do you mean by last one?

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I think there was some of it, Harry's fears about becoming a monster but at the same time beginning to understand Mab better.  But I agree it did get weird after that.

Harry Mab relationship is best part of last 3 books. His human relationship in comparison are like prolonged soap-opera really.

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No, it can't, I guess I am one of the few who isn't looking forward to Mirror Mirror..  Maybe I am just sick of hearing about it? :-\

You are the only one.
I look forward Mirror Mirror because I hope it will be source of lot's and lot's of knowledge.
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Post by: Dina on November 12, 2020, 08:57:33 PM
No Mira, you are not the only one. Specially because I don't think one decision, whatever it is, changes Harry so much to make him such a dark person that he even consider to summon another Harry to be safer himself.
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 12, 2020, 09:15:12 PM
I mean it won't be one decision - there will be many many more - it will be just first step.
And even after that step there would be countless AU Dresden's that repented, were remorseful and abandoned whatever naughtyness was involved.
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Post by: Mira on November 12, 2020, 09:45:31 PM
No Mira, you are not the only one. Specially because I don't think one decision, whatever it is, changes Harry so much to make him such a dark person that he even consider to summon another Harry to be safer himself.

I agree, plus I think so many people have expectations of what it is going to be that most will end up disappointed.  That is why I felt the way I did after Peace Talks, totally let down.
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Post by: Dina on November 12, 2020, 09:54:38 PM
I mean it won't be one decision - there will be many many more - it will be just first step.
And even after that step there would be countless AU Dresden's that repented, were remorseful and abandoned whatever naughtyness was involved.
I don't know, I don't have it so clear.
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Post by: morriswalters on November 12, 2020, 11:20:46 PM
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I think idea was - that you know kraken was a human being turned by Fomor - maybe brain implaneted in octopus - they are after all fleshcrafters.
I know what the idea was.
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what do you mean by last one?
Everybody is way out of character.  Harry, Eb and Thomas all acting like emo little boys. When we last heard of the Council they were in civil war mode and Carlos and the younger wardens were in lock down. Luccio was locked up.  Fast forward to Peace Talks, now the Council is back to work as if nothing had happened.
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 12, 2020, 11:26:32 PM
I agree with Harry, and definitely with Ebenezer. Thomas - dunno he was always bit sketchy in terms of characterisation.

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When we last heard of the Council they were in civil war mode and Carlos and the younger wardens were in lock down. Luccio was locked up.  Fast forward to Peace Talks, now the Council is back to work as if nothing had happened.

Yes. Just another situation when long-time consequences were conviniently brushed aside. I mean MAYBE in this case we shall get better explanation of what WC was doing last three years but still... I get why Dresden has not checked on Council as Ghost, but as Mab took him to Arctis Tor, he should consider informing WC about his status and checking on it - and I think he could safely demand such thing from Mab.

But as usual Dresden can never be pro-active because it would took stones from Jim's hand to pummel him in later books.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on November 12, 2020, 11:31:15 PM
I completely agree about them acting OOC.
I really hope characters become more mature in 12M.
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 13, 2020, 12:02:11 AM
Also now I wonder maybe some of you remember:

in Changes when Ebenezer explains to Harry how Mrs. Ortega knew about their kinship, he says she discovered it during some dinner where Ebenezer and her were guest of White King, and he talks to Dresden like they've already talked about LeFay involvement with Raith, yet somehow now Ebenezer is all that shocked about Thomas despite knowing his daughter boinked Raith for who knows how long.

Was there some scene  I forgotten where Dresden discussed this element to Ebe directly while purposefuly ommitting Thomas existence?
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Post by: Dina on November 13, 2020, 12:08:56 AM
Yeah, I wondered what was happening with Eb shock. He knew that Margaret was seeing Raith. What did he think she was doing with him? (Ah, but Harry is obviously having sex with Thomas. Or Lara. Or Thomas and Lara)
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Post by: vincentric on November 13, 2020, 02:29:52 AM
A man's daughter is his little angel and he has to have his nose rubbed in it to think poorly of her.

Whereas a man's son has to constantly be reined in lest he repeat his father's mistake or make worst ones.

Reverse that for moms.
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Post by: Mira on November 13, 2020, 12:29:14 PM
A man's daughter is his little angel and he has to have his nose rubbed in it to think poorly of her.

Whereas a man's son has to constantly be reined in lest he repeat his father's mistake or make worst ones.

Reverse that for moms.

This^ and a lot of guilt on top of that as well, because he may be blaming himself for why she was tangled up with Raith in the first place. 
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Post by: Bad Alias on November 17, 2020, 08:47:43 PM
But that would not be urban fantasy if Dresden was living 60 miles from city in some old farm.
Depends on both your definition of urban fantasy and/or where the action of the books takes place. From Wikipedia: Urban fantasy is a genre of fiction, a subgenre of fantasy in which the narrative uses supernatural elements in a 19th-century to 21st-century (or equivalent) urban society. It usually takes place in the present day (or the equivalent of the "present day")." Some define urban fantasy in a way that something like contemporary fantasy would be a better name. Few would describe something like The King Killer Chronicles as urban fantasy even though the majority of it takes place in urban settings that have an Early Modern Era, maybe Renaissance, feel to them.

Also, Harry could live somewhere isolated and work in the city. He'd just have to have a quick/reliable way of traveling to the city.

I can accept few splited timeline, but when according to WOJ each choice split reality it cheapens free will imensely. I mean literally that makes free will some bizzare mechanism to produce more alternative universes, not a real power of choice :P
I totally agree, so I came up with a head canon mechanism that fixes that problem. Every alternate universe creating choice creates multiple universes because in the moment of decision, the person makes multiple choices that are all against that person's nature. So Harry's "natural" decision in GP was to do X. But the Harry we've followed did Y. The Harry(s) we haven't followed did not X and not Y.

Dresden's male gaze can be annoying, but that's I think more part of wider problem of Jim making constant repetitions of descriptions and so on.
Jim's big on physical descriptions. I remember someone going over descriptions of Michael, Sanya, and Bradley. It was kind of similar to how Jim describes all the super attractive women. Thomas's shirtless descriptions are a lot like that too. And as Dina said, it's not just people. Mac's place, Harry's apartment, and the Beetle. At least Harry's apartment and the Beetle change frequently enough.

My point falls back on the only women who was written in the books outside that concept.  Murphy. As poorly as Jim treated her over the course of the books, she deserved a better end then what she got. A talented writer should be able to pull that off and get the emotional punch that he wanted.
Can anyone tell me anything about Murphy's boobs? I don't think they're ever described at all. The closest I can think of is the description of her as having a gymnast's build, and I know what gymnasts typically look like. He doesn't talk about anything specific about Murphy's appearance below her neck until BR, I think.

DO NOT DESCRIBE THEM. Like really. Describe new things. Introduce new things.
Or put them in an index or something if you think it's really necessary for new readers.

I'm fine with Harry marrying Lara. I'm not ok with it being an ideal or happy marriage. It should, at the absolute best, be a content working relationship.
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 18, 2020, 02:30:27 AM
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Also, Harry could live somewhere isolated and work in the city. He'd just have to have a quick/reliable way of traveling to the city.

I totally agree. I watched a map and really he could totally find place somewhere in Illinois/Wisconsin province and have access to whole Chicago-Milwaukee metropolitan areas for job.

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I totally agree, so I came up with a head canon mechanism that fixes that problem. Every alternate universe creating choice creates multiple universes because in the moment of decision, the person makes multiple choices that are all against that person's nature. So Harry's "natural" decision in GP was to do X. But the Harry we've followed did Y. The Harry(s) we haven't followed did not X and not Y.

But why we assume Mirror!Harry is natural Harry, and our Harry splited history by acting against himself?
Or should we assume each decision creates sort of fake universes that are copies of original one - with fake starting decisions or something?

Or do you mean all decisions were against nature - and all Dresdens are fake or smth? But then why not NATURAL decision?

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Jim's big on physical descriptions. I remember someone going over descriptions of Michael, Sanya, and Bradley. It was kind of similar to how Jim describes all the super attractive women. Thomas's shirtless descriptions are a lot like that too. And as Dina said, it's not just people. Mac's place, Harry's apartment, and the Beetle. At least Harry's apartment and the Beetle change frequently enough.

Yeah, how many times can one listen to Dresden mentions about Butters height dammit.

Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on November 18, 2020, 05:47:09 AM
From what we know of Dresden multiverse you can split of a new universe by making an important free willed choice. There will be universes were you made a different choice.

The mirror universe is about Harry kaping a bad choice at the end of grave peril and ending up evil.
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 18, 2020, 10:49:38 AM
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From what we know of Dresden multiverse you can split of a new universe by making an important free willed choice. There will be universes were you made a different choice.

The mirror universe is about Harry kaping a bad choice at the end of grave peril and ending up evil.

Yes. That's exactly my problem - it's cheapening the free will.
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Post by: Arjan on November 18, 2020, 12:01:22 PM
Yes. That's exactly my problem - it's cheapening the free will.
Or it is making it more important if your purpose is to create as many universes as you can. Promoting free will becomes suspicious. Uriel!
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Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 19, 2020, 01:15:38 AM
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Or it is making it more important if your purpose is to create as many universes as you can. Promoting free will becomes suspicious. Uriel!

It makes free will important for Creator and protection of Multiverse against OUTSIDE - so Creation grows even when external forces chews on it - but it cheapens importance of choice - because always all choices are made and then consequences separated in separated universes.
Of course subjective passenger Dresden is feels only one - and it matter to him and us in his head, but from external non-subjective point of view - all possible Dresdens exists.

Now the question is whether in finale our Harry will have to gather team of Vampire Harry, Hexenwulf Harry, Denarian Harry and Knight of the Cross Harry to fight against Outsiders multiverse invasion - or maybe he will have to kill all other Harry's like Jet Li to become supreme Harry Dresden - sum of all possible Dresdens - with certain knowledge of all possible outcomes of being Dresden.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on November 19, 2020, 05:01:44 AM
“Destiny is a stone cold bitch”

It shows real creativity if you can bend the river and make a new reality. Both Mab and Gard warned that caution was advised because it always bites back. The discussion in BG refers back to the one in DB and also to the one with Uriel in the Warrior short story.

Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on November 19, 2020, 12:21:28 PM
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Now the question is whether in finale our Harry will have to gather team of Vampire Harry, Hexenwulf Harry, Denarian Harry and Knight of the Cross Harry to fight against Outsiders multiverse invasion - or maybe he will have to kill all other Harry's like Jet Li to become supreme Harry Dresden - sum of all possible Dresdens - with certain knowledge of all possible outcomes of being Dresden.

Since Jim has sighted in the past the episode of Star Trek called, Mirror Mirror as his inspiration.  I will give you another that might apply better.   It is another transporter accident, Kirk is split into to men, one, his good gentle side, the other aggressive, cruel, angry...  Turns out that one side cannot survive without the other side and he is in real danger of dying if they don't get both halves together again.  The moral of the episode was it took both sides of Kirk to make him the man he is.  So while cool that "Darthdresden" might pop out, Harry might come to the realization that that aspect of him is as vital as Dresden of the Good Heart..  If he is going to be an effective leader in the BAT, he needs both sides of himself.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on November 19, 2020, 04:45:40 PM
I like that.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on November 19, 2020, 07:19:48 PM
Since Jim has sighted in the past the episode of Star Trek called, Mirror Mirror as his inspiration.  I will give you another that might apply better.   It is another transporter accident, Kirk is split into to men, one, his good gentle side, the other aggressive, cruel, angry...  Turns out that one side cannot survive without the other side and he is in real danger of dying if they don't get both halves together again.  The moral of the episode was it took both sides of Kirk to make him the man he is.  So while cool that "Darthdresden" might pop out, Harry might come to the realization that that aspect of him is as vital as Dresden of the Good Heart..  If he is going to be an effective leader in the BAT, he needs both sides of himself.
Mirror Mirror was never about free will and choice.  It was a fun look at an evil Trek universe. The episode you offer is about decision making. And very subtly is taking issue with how Spock was constructed as a character.  The only episode that dealt with choice and free will was The City On The Edge Of Forever. It looked at how changing one event with the best of intentions creates great evil over time.  I like the idea of an evil Harry.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 19, 2020, 10:39:22 PM
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The only episode that dealt with choice and free will was The City On The Edge Of Forever. It looked at how changing one event with the best of intentions creates great evil over time.

But this is more Butterfly Effect one, I think Mirror Mirror will delve more into moral side of things with Jim trying to show how believably Dresden could be corrupted.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on November 19, 2020, 10:53:23 PM
Which is precisely what I don't like. So far, nothing in the books gave me the impression that he is so easily corrupted as he fears.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 20, 2020, 12:48:43 AM
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Which is precisely what I don't like. So far, nothing in the books gave me the impression that he is so easily corrupted as he fears.

That's why Butcher puts tipping point 15 years earlier, so there's time to slowly, slowly push him - not making it look too easy or cheap.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on November 20, 2020, 05:18:44 AM
Mirror Mirror was never about free will and choice.  It was a fun look at an evil Trek universe. The episode you offer is about decision making. And very subtly is taking issue with how Spock was constructed as a character.  The only episode that dealt with choice and free will was The City On The Edge Of Forever. It looked at how changing one event with the best of intentions creates great evil over time.  I like the idea of an evil Harry.

How do you get an evil Harry out of that?  Yes, "The City on the Edge of Forever" is about changing one event, even with the best of intentions can have evil consequences.  However none of the characters in the story were evil.  McCoy, Kirk, Spock, or Edith Keeler were evil, on the contrary, Edith was rather saintly and ahead of her time in many of her ideas.  That was the problem, when McCoy saved her life she was able to convince those in power to carry through with her ideas.  That in of itself wasn't evil, but it made it impossible to fight effectively the great evil brewing at the time, Hitler, thus Hitler wins the war which destroys the future for everyone.  Or if Earth still survive, it could never evolve into becoming a member of the Federation of Planets.  The moral of that episode could be "the road to hell is often paved with the best of intentions.."

I also have a problem with the idea of an evil Harry as tempting at it is to so many.  First of all, is it Harry observing an evil version of himself?  If it is, I think that violates some basic laws of time travel.  Now it could be that it does happen sending serious ripples of time out everywhere really screwing things up.  If it is Harry himself that goes all dark, is he aware of it?  And if he is dark, why would he want to change, or go back to where he belongs for that matter? 
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on November 20, 2020, 06:30:26 AM
How do you get an evil Harry out of that?  Yes, "The City on the Edge of Forever" is about changing one event, even with the best of intentions can have evil consequences.  However none of the characters in the story were evil.  McCoy, Kirk, Spock, or Edith Keeler were evil, on the contrary, Edith was rather saintly and ahead of her time in many of her ideas.  That was the problem, when McCoy saved her life she was able to convince those in power to carry through with her ideas.  That in of itself wasn't evil, but it made it impossible to fight effectively the great evil brewing at the time, Hitler, thus Hitler wins the war which destroys the future for everyone.  Or if Earth still survive, it could never evolve into becoming a member of the Federation of Planets.  The moral of that episode could be "the road to hell is often paved with the best of intentions.."

I also have a problem with the idea of an evil Harry as tempting at it is to so many.  First of all, is it Harry observing an evil version of himself?  If it is, I think that violates some basic laws of time travel.  Now it could be that it does happen sending serious ripples of time out everywhere really screwing things up.  If it is Harry himself that goes all dark, is he aware of it?  And if he is dark, why would he want to change, or go back to where he belongs for that matter?
The mirror thing has nothing to do with time travel. The river has split up but you don’t move upstream, you move sidewards.

And the whole thing is about Harry making different choices.

Compare with how A wizard can have become a warlock which in the dresdenverse can be the result of only one bad choice. A choice that opens up new pathways and closes others. A choice that can look tempting at times.

A free willed choice of that magnitude, the mirror world creating magnitude, especially with magic involved changes who you are and is difficult to reverse.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on November 20, 2020, 12:23:03 PM
The mirror thing has nothing to do with time travel. The river has split up but you don’t move upstream, you move sidewards.

And the whole thing is about Harry making different choices.

Compare with how A wizard can have become a warlock which in the dresdenverse can be the result of only one bad choice. A choice that opens up new pathways and closes others. A choice that can look tempting at times.

A free willed choice of that magnitude, the mirror world creating magnitude, especially with magic involved changes who you are and is difficult to reverse.

But in that world, not the one you belong in..  Also you are assuming that Harry would make a different choice in the mirror world, Harry remains who he is, in both worlds.  The effects on others might be different, but at the core, Harry is who he is.  In Mirror Mirror, while the Kirk in the other world was evil, Kirk remained who he was in both worlds.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on November 20, 2020, 05:00:23 PM
But in that world, not the one you belong in..  Also you are assuming that Harry would make a different choice in the mirror world, Harry remains who he is, in both worlds.  The effects on others might be different, but at the core, Harry is who he is.  In Mirror Mirror, while the Kirk in the other world was evil, Kirk remained who he was in both worlds.
If Mirror Harry made a important free willed choice different from our Harry then he will be a different Harry. That kind of choices are the choices that shape your soul. That is why the butters tried to stop Harry when he tried to kill Rudolph, that choice would have resulted in a different Harry.

That is why a wizard who breaks the law is not the same wizard anymore. Sure he has free will and he sometimes can come back but he will be marked by that decision.

So the mirror Harry became evil. Our Harry made different choices so he is a different Harry whatever world he is.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on November 20, 2020, 08:10:14 PM
How do you get an evil Harry out of that?  Yes, "The City on the Edge of Forever" is about changing one event, even with the best of intentions can have evil consequences.  However none of the characters in the story were evil.  McCoy, Kirk, Spock, or Edith Keeler were evil, on the contrary, Edith was rather saintly and ahead of her time in many of her ideas.  That was the problem, when McCoy saved her life she was able to convince those in power to carry through with her ideas.  That in of itself wasn't evil, but it made it impossible to fight effectively the great evil brewing at the time, Hitler, thus Hitler wins the war which destroys the future for everyone.  Or if Earth still survive, it could never evolve into becoming a member of the Federation of Planets.  The moral of that episode could be "the road to hell is often paved with the best of intentions.."

I also have a problem with the idea of an evil Harry as tempting at it is to so many.  First of all, is it Harry observing an evil version of himself?  If it is, I think that violates some basic laws of time travel.  Now it could be that it does happen sending serious ripples of time out everywhere really screwing things up.  If it is Harry himself that goes all dark, is he aware of it?  And if he is dark, why would he want to change, or go back to where he belongs for that matter?
I get Evil Harry because it's cool and I like it.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on November 20, 2020, 08:47:39 PM
If Mirror Harry made a important free willed choice different from our Harry then he will be a different Harry. That kind of choices are the choices that shape your soul. That is why the butters tried to stop Harry when he tried to kill Rudolph, that choice would have resulted in a different Harry.

That is why a wizard who breaks the law is not the same wizard anymore. Sure he has free will and he sometimes can come back but he will be marked by that decision.

So the mirror Harry became evil. Our Harry made different choices so he is a different Harry whatever world he is.

I agree every choice changes the person. I don't think that our Harry can change to be someone as evil as MM seems to be just because one decision. Or two. It has to be really slippery. So, again I hope it is that his choice did not made him evil but more vulnerable to external corruption and that is what make him evil (probably a Denarian??)
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on November 20, 2020, 08:57:01 PM
I agree every choice changes the person. I don't think that our Harry can change to be someone as evil as MM seems to be just because one decision. Or two. It has to be really slippery. So, again I hope it is that his choice did not made him evil but more vulnerable to external corruption and that is what make him evil (probably a Denarian??)
It is more like every choice in a certain direction makes the next choice in that direction easier and the opposite choice more difficult, especially if magic is involved.

Also we have seen Harry's condition after Grave Peril and that was when he saved Susan from an even worse fate, she could escape and handle her condition. If he had made the choice the white council had liked him to make and sacrificed Susan for "Peace" his condition would have been much worse.

And Harry is capable of making very bad decisions in such a condition.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on November 20, 2020, 09:18:10 PM
That is true
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 20, 2020, 10:41:12 PM
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But in that world, not the one you belong in..  Also you are assuming that Harry would make a different choice in the mirror world, Harry remains who he is, in both worlds.  The effects on others might be different, but at the core, Harry is who he is.  In Mirror Mirror, while the Kirk in the other world was evil, Kirk remained who he was in both worlds.

If people are WHO they are in strict sense, there would be no free will whatsoever - just nature playing itself just like Mab or Uriel does.
Free Will, Choice means - the character is able to take both choices, that he has in himself ability to choose.

And Harry definitely have some dark, dark potential - people would not faint at his Soulgaze otherwise.

The point for Butcher is to find possible choice earlier which chosen otherwise would gave us first step for Harry into deeper Dresden. Not a choice to turn him into mustacho twirling villain from the get go.

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If Mirror Harry made a important free willed choice different from our Harry then he will be a different Harry. That kind of choices are the choices that shape your soul. That is why the butters tried to stop Harry when he tried to kill Rudolph, that choice would have resulted in a different Harry.

TBH one could agree Harry already made a choice to kill Rudolph. Butters changed consequences not choice itself.
But also in terms of souls - WOJ says otherwise - choices rarely changes soul - because soul already have potential of multiple choices in it's essence. And if you look into a soul - you see them - not just those active and realised - like with Molly's Soul - multiple fates, multiple possibilities, roads not yet taken, shadows of things...

It would change though - Sight. Sight is more about what's now around person. Soul is about immovable essence.
Or at least that's how I understand soul theory from WOJ.

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So, again I hope it is that his choice did not made him evil but more vulnerable to external corruption and that is what make him evil (probably a Denarian??)

I think Darth Dresden will likely be necromancer.

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Also we have seen Harry's condition after Grave Peril and that was when he saved Susan from an even worse fate, she could escape and handle her condition. If he had made the choice the white council had liked him to make and sacrificed Susan for "Peace" his condition would have been much worse.

And Harry is capable of making very bad decisions in such a condition.

Problem with this for me - is considering Harry state in "Grave Peril" I cannot see him at all submitting to peace offer.
It's... this thought does not even cross his mind really. I'd like to see something more subtle, smaller that leads to some catastrophe - possibly Michael's dead and Amoracchius destroyed or smth. I can more likely see Dresden fucking up more severly while trying to save Susan than leaving her for Reds.

Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on November 20, 2020, 11:44:48 PM
Here's the dilemma. If you can't read the future, what good is the exercise of free will? At best you're guessing.  What you can do is to be true to yourself. So Harry is the type of man that couldn't walk away. And if he does then he has abandoned what it is to be him.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on November 21, 2020, 12:08:46 AM
Here's the dilemma. If you can't read the future, what good is the exercise of free will? At best you're guessing.  What you can do is to be true to yourself. So Harry is the type of man that couldn't walk away. And if he does then he has abandoned what it is to be him.
The idea is that you make the decision in line with the person you want to be and then you become that person.

"Shame, child, is for those who fail to live up to the ideal of what they believe they should be."
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: KurtinStGeorge on November 21, 2020, 01:01:50 AM
I think the thing that might start to radically change Harry would be if whatever decision he made differently in Grave Peril led to a decision to become the Winter Knight after the events of Summer Knight.  Even if the White Council didn't try to turn Harry over to the Red Court, that doesn't mean that Mab couldn't find a way to get Harry to act as her emissary.  If Harry decided to put Lloyd Slate out of his misery he could have become the Winter Knight before he was ready to handle everything that comes with the job.   
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on November 21, 2020, 01:44:15 AM
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And Harry definitely have some dark, dark potential - people would not faint at his Soulgaze otherwise.


That is an assumption, or they might see an avenging angel, which would also make them faint.

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TBH one could agree Harry already made a choice to kill Rudolph. Butters changed consequences not choice itself.
But Harry didn't kill Rudolph, in the emotion of the moment, yes, he wanted to and tried.  However the Sword of Faith by giving him a good burn sobered him up from his emotion.  In that moment he then chose not to do it, and felt shame that he had tried to do it. 
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I agree every choice changes the person. I don't think that our Harry can change to be someone as evil as MM seems to be just because one decision. Or two. It has to be really slippery. So, again I hope it is that his choice did not made him evil but more vulnerable to external corruption and that is what make him evil (probably a Denarian??)

While I agree that choices can change a person, I don't think it is all that simple.  For starters is there a WOJ saying that MM is going to be about evil Harry?  We've already been down that Denarian road with Lasciel, he didn't become evil as a result, he did have good people around him that made him realize what was happening, Butters and Murphy.. But if Harry had really gone postal what they told him wouldn't have done any good.  That's why the emphasis on his father and that Harry had inherited Malcolm's good heart.  Harry will never go totally dark because of that.
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I think the thing that might start to radically change Harry would be if whatever decision he made differently in Grave Peril led to a decision to become the Winter Knight after the events of Summer Knight.  Even if the White Council didn't try to turn Harry over to the Red Court, that doesn't mean that Mab couldn't find a way to get Harry to act as her emissary.  If Harry decided to put Lloyd Slate out of his misery he could have become the Winter Knight before he was ready to handle everything that comes with the job.   
Yes, and you also have to look at motive for the choice in the first place.  Harry didn't want the job as Winter Knight, he was forced to make the best of several very bad choices.  It is also strange how the White Council is so quick to condemn Harry, when as a rule Harry thinks very highly of the White Council, in spite of everything.
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The idea is that you make the decision in line with the person you want to be and then you become that person.
Except Harry has never wanted to be the "Evil Wizard of the West."   
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"Shame, child, is for those who fail to live up to the ideal of what they believe they should be."
Spoken by someone who is no longer human.  We know that in that aspect Harry is very human and feels lots of shame when he doesn't live up to what he feels he should be.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on November 21, 2020, 04:36:42 AM

That is an assumption, or they might see an avenging angel, which would also make them faint.
Or they are evil themselves.
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But Harry didn't kill Rudolph, in the emotion of the moment, yes, he wanted to and tried.  However the Sword of Faith by giving him a good burn sobered him up from his emotion.  In that moment he then chose not to do it, and felt shame that he had tried to do it. 
At the end he did not do it even if he needed some help. The choice is important in combination with the consequences and in the dresdenverse the consequences are all important.
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While I agree that choices can change a person, I don't think it is all that simple.  For starters is there a WOJ saying that MM is going to be about evil Harry?
I think so. It is the kind of Harry that kills other Harries to get an alibi. That is pretty evil.
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  We've already been down that Denarian road with Lasciel, he didn't become evil as a result, he did have good people around him that made him realize what was happening, Butters and Murphy.. But if Harry had really gone postal what they told him wouldn't have done any good.  That's why the emphasis on his father and that Harry had inherited Malcolm's good heart.  Harry will never go totally dark because of that.
The story wouldn’t be interesting if there was no danger and mirror Harry has no plot armor. Harry could have gone bad.
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Yes, and you also have to look at motive for the choice in the first place.  Harry didn't want the job as Winter Knight, he was forced to make the best of several very bad choices.  It is also strange how the White Council is so quick to condemn Harry,
We are sitting inside Harry’s head, they are not. Harry tries to do his duty as a knight but for Eb that duty is just a trap. Their whole world view is build to suspect someone like Harry is now.
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when as a rule Harry thinks very highly of the White Council, in spite of everything.Except Harry has never wanted to be the "Evil Wizard of the West."   
So he is not. He is going to use his position to help people and he is going to make a difference.
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Spoken by someone who is no longer human. 
That does not mean she is wrong. The kind of person Harry wants to be is just different from Lea.
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We know that in that aspect Harry is very human and feels lots of shame when he doesn't live up to what he feels he should be.
Which should drive him to make better choices.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on November 21, 2020, 07:13:01 AM
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That does not mean she is wrong. The kind of person Harry wants to be is just different from Lea.
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Which is why Harry will never fully go down that road, because he doesn't want to.. There you have it, free will, a choice.
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Or they are evil themselves.

In the case of Denton, yes, he was evil and when he saw Harry in the soul gaze he begged for mercy.  In the case of Susan, it is hard to say, maybe just the whole idea of a soul gaze freaked her out.  Mrs Beckett was freaked out, neither was Vincent's wife freaked, in fact she was reassured by it.   
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At the end he did not do it even if he needed some help. The choice is important in combination with the consequences and in the dresdenverse the consequences are all important.
Yes, they are, it wasn't without consequences, Harry kept mentioning the burn.  The burn was a reminder of what he almost did and what it would do to him.  He came out a better man for it, not a worse one.
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I think so. It is the kind of Harry that kills other Harries to get an alibi. That is pretty evil.

An alibi for what?  The other Harry isn't going to be evil just because.  If you will remember in the Trek story, the other Kirk wasn't considered evil, he was a product of his world.
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The story wouldn’t be interesting if there was no danger and mirror Harry has no plot armor. Harry could have gone bad.
Or way too predictable, every poster with few exceptions goes on and on about how fun to see a dark Harry.. So if we all know how the story is going to go how interesting is that?  As far as going bad goes, Harry has been on a knife's edge from Storm Front on, it's Star Wars and the Force all over again..
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Which should drive him to make better choices.

And like all of us, Harry does the best he can depending on the circumstances.  Can he make better ones? Yes.  Does he make mistakes sometimes?  Of course he does.. As do we all, the difficult part is learning the right lesson from our choices.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on November 21, 2020, 08:59:01 AM
From what I remember the other Harry kidnapped Harry because he needed a body that was unmistakably Harry to make the people trying to get him think Harry was dead. That is evil. These two Harries had the same origins before grave peril so both Harries had the potential for good and evil.

Harry going evil is not that interesting for a main character but the danger of it can add tension to the story
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on November 21, 2020, 09:13:58 AM
That is my point, MM Harry is just too evil. It is difficult (for me) to imagine that our Harry could end being that unless he has external influences, but of course, we will see what JB has in mind.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: TheCuriousFan on November 21, 2020, 09:56:45 AM
Making a deal with Bianca was probably the start, Mavra might not have been a good influence either. From there desperation probably did a wonderful job of wearing down whatever morals were left.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on November 21, 2020, 10:02:15 AM
That is my point, MM Harry is just too evil. It is difficult (for me) to imagine that our Harry could end being that unless he has external influences, but of course, we will see what JB has in mind.
Under normal circumstances yes but in the Dresden verse those mechanisms are there. Decisions involving magic are so much more significant. They can create what the council is afraid for, secret warlock Harry. So afraid that they overreact which only hastens the process.

Harry is not immune for the process that creates warlocks.


And Lasciel is still a possibility. Tempting and even more dangerous if his friends desert him. Relying on necromancy is probably also not good for you.

Maybe Marcone will show how dangerous Lasciel could have been.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on November 21, 2020, 12:13:22 PM
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And Lasciel is still a possibility. Tempting and even more dangerous if his friends desert him. Relying on necromancy is probably also not good for you.

This Harry's connection with the coin is gone, if anything is left of the shadow, it is Lash.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on November 21, 2020, 01:40:38 PM
This Harry's connection with the coin is gone, if anything is left of the shadow, it is Lash.
But is mirror Harry’s connection to the coin gone?
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on November 21, 2020, 02:12:52 PM
But is mirror Harry’s connection to the coin gone?
Maybe not, but that is the alternate Harry, isn't it?
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on November 21, 2020, 02:23:27 PM
Maybe not, but that is the alternate Harry, isn't it?
Exactly. The discussion was how mirror Harry could have become so evil and if the seeds for that are still in our Harry.

One of the reason mirror Harry is so evil can be Lasciel.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 21, 2020, 02:39:32 PM
But my overall theory about why MM Harry is evil is TBH necromancy.
It's a long time since we've got proper Necro thread, whole kill your doppelganger is implied to by our world Kemmler way to avoid White Council, Mavra is meant to be Darth Harry ally (or ally of Prime Harry against Darth Dresden - there is grammatical possibility), Dracul was teased as part of Stars and Stones.

So my bet in this regard is - that of three apocalypses - Empty Night being Outsider driven, Hell Bells denarian driven, last one is gonna be necro / dark wizards one. And they are the ones that god least attention hiding well in shadows.

I think Mirror!Dresden is Black Council - and we're gonna get big infodump about them thanks to Mirror Mirror that will help Dresden fighting them in next books


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Here's the dilemma. If you can't read the future, what good is the exercise of free will? At best you're guessing.  What you can do is to be true to yourself. So Harry is the type of man that couldn't walk away. And if he does then he has abandoned what it is to be him.

Becasue free will is not only about foresight of consequences. It's about choosing what's wrong and what's right. Picking one of options.
I believe that any choice is true to yourself - by which I mean human beings are complicated not simple like angels, and they have various drives. So I do not really believe in this true to myself - what myself - my Shia Islam Sufi superego or my id of predator hedonist? Both are part of me like my hands and arms... If something is not from myself - I'd not be able to choose it really. I could not just take a knife and stab someone randomly, as it's just no there. But multiple other goods and evils are.

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That is an assumption, or they might see an avenging angel, which would also make them faint.

but would Bradley then act as he acted?

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But Harry didn't kill Rudolph, in the emotion of the moment, yes, he wanted to and tried.  However the Sword of Faith by giving him a good burn sobered him up from his emotion.  In that moment he then chose not to do it, and felt shame that he had tried to do it.

He would feel such shame after killing Rudolph anyway TBH if there was no Butters to stop him.

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That is my point, MM Harry is just too evil. It is difficult (for me) to imagine that our Harry could end being that unless he has external influences, but of course, we will see what JB has in mind.

Turn every book in another story - another corrupting influence after another. Another justification for greater good after another.
It was 14 years since Grave Peril. Lot of time to go dark.

Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on November 21, 2020, 03:28:42 PM
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but would Bradley then act as he acted?
It happened without warning, he had no clue that such a think as a soul gaze was even possible, plus the atmosphere was tense in the extreme.   So good or evil, what Bradly saw would scared the hell out of him, or at least startled.  If he saw what the cornerhounds saw according to Harry, that is scary.
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He would feel such shame after killing Rudolph anyway TBH if there was no Butters to stop him.

Agreed, but if he had killed him that bell cannot be unrung..  Butters and the Sword brought him back to his senses, then he felt shame for losing it like he did.  Just as Eb was upset and ashamed that he lost control when he went after Harry, Harry likewise was upset and ashamed of himself for losing control. 
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Bad Alias on November 22, 2020, 12:01:13 AM
But why we assume Mirror!Harry is natural Harry, and our Harry splited history by acting against himself?
Or should we assume each decision creates sort of fake universes that are copies of original one - with fake starting decisions or something?

Or do you mean all decisions were against nature - and all Dresdens are fake or smth? But then why not NATURAL decision?
Any decision that isn't against one's nature doesn't create an alternate reality according to Jim. So the "natural" decision would be a decision that isn't against one's nature and wouldn't be an exercise of free will.

So my explanation is that whenever one exercises free will, there are multiple timelines branching off that point. Each timeline is one in which the actor has exercised free will to act against his nature. No timeline exists in which free will was not exercised.

Without exercising choice Harry would have done X in GP.  But he exercised free will in that book and did Y. In MM, Harry exercised free will and did Z. Y was a good path. Z was a good path. There is no universe in which Harry did X. There may be universes in which Harry did something other than X, Y, and Z, but we don't know because we don't have any indication of a third universe.

None of the Harry's are the natural/choiceless Harry, and all are equally real.

all possible Dresdens exists.
In my theory, a limited number of Dresdens exist. As few as two, but maybe a lot. Definitely less than all imaginable Dresdens.

On the male gaze thing, I think that one has to ignore a great many character descriptions to reach a lot of the "male gaze" descriptions of characters that appear in the books. For example, in DB several female characters appear. The only one that gets the male gaze treatment is the one trying to seduce Harry. (And maybe the naked jogger, I don't really remember).

That is my point, MM Harry is just too evil. It is difficult (for me) to imagine that our Harry could end being that unless he has external influences, but of course, we will see what JB has in mind.
Everybody has external influences.

But my overall theory about why MM Harry is evil is TBH necromancy.
IMO, NecroHarry would probably be the coolest evil Harry.

According to the timeline, it's currently 13 years after GP, so it's at least 14 years after GP, but it might also be more depending on time between 12 Months and MM.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 22, 2020, 02:14:47 AM
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Any decision that isn't against one's nature doesn't create an alternate reality according to Jim. So the "natural" decision would be a decision that isn't against one's nature and wouldn't be an exercise of free will.

Is there a WOJ to that? That would be weird to me, considering free will sort of is part of our nature, it's what defines mortals in Dresdenverse.
Using free will as against of own nature in this regard is weird.

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Without exercising choice Harry would have done X in GP.  But he exercised free will in that book and did Y. In MM, Harry exercised free will and did Z. Y was a good path. Z was a good path. There is no universe in which Harry did X. There may be universes in which Harry did something other than X, Y, and Z, but we don't know because we don't have any indication of a third universe.

But why do we assume there is not like basic universe where Harry did X?
Also - overall it seems to me Dresden had not done anything against his very character in GP. He was faithful to it - till end. Burn the world to save one soul - that's very much natural Dresden as we know him. I mean if option of acting against oneself has power to split the universes - that still should include - option 0 being preserved.

But then you seems to consider that you "exercise" free will only when you act against yourself - not every time you stand against real choice, which is quite weird definition of "exercise" for me. It's like you using exercise like physical exercise, when one has to struggle to get gains.
I see it more as exercising your power over something - each time you do it, you're using your power even if it's easy for you.

So option that only unnatural Dresden's exist is bit weird to me.
If you have quote I'd like to see it, if not - well I think we should hunt for another AMA or Q&A and ask him long and convoluted questions about nature of free will and multiverse.

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On the male gaze thing, I think that one has to ignore a great many character descriptions to reach a lot of the "male gaze" descriptions of characters that appear in the books. For example, in DB several female characters appear. The only one that gets the male gaze treatment is the one trying to seduce Harry. (And maybe the naked jogger, I don't really remember).

Agree. And it was pointed to me, that many characters get too much descriptions over and over, so maybe sexy babes stood bit more - but it's the same with guys and other beings. Descriptive guy Dresden it.

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In my theory, a limited number of Dresdens exist. As few as two, but maybe a lot. Definitely less than all imaginable Dresdens.

That I agree. Still this will be massive number - because it's not just his descisions spliting reality but all 7 bln mortals around.
Some of those splits can be identical from Dresden Files perspective as butterfly effect shall never caught to him, but there are probably worlds when Dresden is different not because of own choice split - but because someone put him in situation when entirely different set of choices and actions was possible.

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Agreed, but if he had killed him that bell cannot be unrung.. 

Consequences could not. But from perspective of Dresden soul and character however paradoxically it can seem it could be better. It could push him to stronger spiritual jihad for instance, and stronger grasp of control, and overall better morality.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on November 22, 2020, 12:50:57 PM
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Consequences could not. But from perspective of Dresden soul and character however paradoxically it can seem it could be better. It could push him to stronger spiritual jihad for instance, and stronger grasp of control, and overall better morality.

Yes, it does appear that the implications of what he almost did, has pushed him to a better grasp of control and overall morality.  That is why he feels shame, that is why he keeps referring to the burn on his wrist, what it reminds him of.  That is why he faced up to the members of the Accords like he did to make amends to the people of Chicago.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Bad Alias on November 22, 2020, 10:49:41 PM
Is there a WOJ to that? That would be weird to me, considering free will sort of is part of our nature, it's what defines mortals in Dresdenverse.
Using free will as against of own nature in this regard is weird.
It's basically what Uriel says in The Warrior short story. Harry comments that Uriel's statement sounds a lot like predestination. Uriel responds that free will is very seldomly used. There's certainly WoJ on what free will is, but I don't have any specific one in mind.

The ability to exercise free will is what defines mortals in the Dresdenverse. The use of that ability is different than possession of that ability. Uriel says the use is rare.

But why do we assume there is not like basic universe where Harry did X?
Because if there was, then free will is greatly cheapened, and the whole point of my theory/head canon is to avoid that.

Also - overall it seems to me Dresden had not done anything against his very character in GP.
I agree, but we'd have to know what decision was made in the mirrorverse to start making good guesses as to what the different options were.

It might be that every time Harry should be down and out for the count and he gets back up to win the day, that's him exercising his free will. And Harry does that at least once a book. Often times more. Maybe we're watching a Harry who makes Choices left and right, so it seems that his defiance of the odds and grim determination is him acting in accordance with his nature, but it's him exercising free will.

But then you seems to consider that you "exercise" free will only when you act against yourself.
Not against yourself, but against your nature. Acting against your nature isn't the same thing as acting against yourself. Acting in accordance with your nature is often detrimental. An addict acting against his nature is a very good thing.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 24, 2020, 08:59:06 AM
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Because if there was, then free will is greatly cheapened, and the whole point of my theory/head canon is to avoid that.

Is it? I mean if any time free will can be used - all possible itterations creates new universe then it seems logical one of those itterations is - ABSTAIN from using it - and going with the flow. Not doing something when you can is ALSO a choice in itself.

You can choice to swim against the flow... or with it.
TBH very well choice Dresden did in Grave Peril was exactly NATURAL choice - in accord of what we know of his inner mechanisms, but he could... well betray himself.

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The ability to exercise free will is what defines mortals in the Dresdenverse. The use of that ability is different than possession of that ability. Uriel says the use is rare.

Indeed, but he also point to several uses of it by Dresden alone in "Warrior".
So "seldom" used by him does not seems to be "rare" - just well - way less often that people thinks.

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Not against yourself, but against your nature. Acting against your nature isn't the same thing as acting against yourself. Acting in accordance with your nature is often detrimental. An addict acting against his nature is a very good thing.

That's quite odd definition of nature, I have to say.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on November 24, 2020, 10:55:22 AM
That's quite odd definition of nature, I have to say.
I would say acting against your nature is acting against your emotional makeup, against your instincts. It is based on the idea that animals (and supernatural beings) have only instincts and never act against their nature while humans are unique in having a soul, free will (and maybe superior intelligence) and can act against their animal base instinct because of higher motivations and because they want to be more than their animal self.

Basically human exceptionalism. And then the white council decides who is human. Kincaid takes offense.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on November 24, 2020, 01:22:36 PM
Harry has chosen how he would live.  Making choices which damage that perception of self would change him for the worse.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on November 24, 2020, 02:03:06 PM
Harry has chosen how he would live.  Making choices which damage that perception of self would change him for the worse.

I agree with that, it is that perception of himself which makes up the strength of his will. 
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on November 24, 2020, 02:35:30 PM
Harry has chosen how he would live.  Making choices which damage that perception of self would change him for the worse.
That gets us back to Lea definition of shame from changes.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 24, 2020, 03:15:34 PM
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I would say acting against your nature is acting against your emotional makeup, against your instincts. It is based on the idea that animals (and supernatural beings) have only instincts and never act against their nature while humans are unique in having a soul, free will (and maybe superior intelligence) and can act against their animal base instinct because of higher motivations and because they want to be more than their animal self.

Indeed it seems to work that way - still if choice is possible - that is when our intellect shows us possibility of choice - as there are many actions done on instinct when such choice is just not presented to self, then following your emotional instincts is still a choice - choice of not enforcing own will over own feelings. If there is real posibility to make different choices - then following your guts is always one of them - there is no CHOICELESS option as Bad Alias seems to suggest.

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Harry has chosen how he would live.  Making choices which damage that perception of self would change him for the worse.

Indeed. Considering how much of fake guilt he bears, real one that would be hard.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on November 24, 2020, 05:29:25 PM
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ndeed it seems to work that way - still if choice is possible - that is when our intellect shows us possibility of choice - as there are many actions done on instinct when such choice is just not presented to self, then following your emotional instincts is still a choice - choice of not enforcing own will over own feelings. If there is real posibility to make different choices - then following your guts is always one of them - there is no CHOICELESS option as Bad Alias seems to suggest.

But that is the tricky part, isn't it?   We can go with our gut, which usually is an emotional choice.  Or we can think it through, then make a choice which is more intellectual.  Choice can enforce one's will over one's feelings, rightly or wrongly.   While yes, there is always a choice, but sometimes it really makes no difference.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 24, 2020, 05:45:23 PM
Well indeed. I'm just pointing that following "gut" is just as choice-y as overcoming it, and if choice is possible, like really possible it should count as splitting decision.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Bad Alias on November 24, 2020, 07:38:11 PM
Is it[free will cheapened]? I mean if any time free will can be used - all possible itterations creates new universe then it seems logical one of those itterations is - ABSTAIN from using it - and going with the flow. Not doing something when you can is ALSO a choice in itself.
You said so.
I must say Butcher teasing multiverse is the WORST.
I can accept few splited timeline, but when according to WOJ each choice split reality it cheapens free will imensely. I mean literally that makes free will some bizzare mechanism to produce more alternative universes, not a real power of choice :P
Emphasis added.

Indeed, but he also point to several uses of it by Dresden alone in "Warrior".
So "seldom" used by him does not seems to be "rare" - just well - way less often that people thinks.
Who said Harry seldom uses his free will? Humans seldomly use free will.

That's quite odd definition of nature, I have to say.
I'd say your's is an odd definition of against. It's often in one's best interest to act against one's nature.

I would say acting against your nature is acting against your emotional makeup, against your instincts. It is based on the idea that animals (and supernatural beings) have only instincts and never act against their nature while humans are unique in having a soul, free will (and maybe superior intelligence) and can act against their animal base instinct because of higher motivations and because they want to be more than their animal self.
I disagree with the intellect over emotion/instinct definition of free will. I'd more say free will is the ability to actually make a choice as opposed to a deterministic and mechanical view of reality in which we just respond to cause with effect, whether emotionally or intellectually.

there is no CHOICELESS option as Bad Alias seems to suggest.
I'm suggesting that in Harry's world as laid out by Jim Butcher, people can not exercise their free will because that's what Uriel seems to say in The Warrior.

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"That smells an awful lot like predestination to me. What if those people choose something different?

"It's a complex issue," Jake admitted. "But think of the course of the future as, oh, flowing water. If you know the lay of the land, you can make a good guess where it's going. Now, someone can always come along and dig a ditch and change that flow of water-but honestly, you'd be shocked how seldom people truly choose to exercise their will within their lives."

Now, one can argue what Uriel means by "truly" exercising free will is that acting in accord with one's nature, while an exercise of free will, isn't any different than if one didn't have free will in the first place.

WoJ on Free Will Creating Parallel Universes:
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If everything is a choice and every choice results in a reality where the consequences of that choice plays out, does free will even exist? Every choice must be made, so no choice is volitional. If it's not volitional, it's not a choice. Thus if everything is a choice and:

each choice split reality[,] it cheapens free will imensely. I mean literally that makes free will some bizzare mechanism to produce more alternative universes, not a real power of choice
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on November 24, 2020, 07:42:44 PM
Well indeed. I'm just pointing that following "gut" is just as choice-y as overcoming it, and if choice is possible, like really possible it should count as splitting decision.

Yes, and that is the paradox, often "choice," is a split decision between what our gut tells us and what our head tells us.  It gets more complicated because both have a rippling effect of consequences for yourself and for others.. You can also make a horrible choice either with your gut or your head and feel good about it, even if the choice was a very wrong one.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Arjan on November 24, 2020, 09:20:52 PM
I disagree with the intellect over emotion/instinct definition of free will. I'd more say free will is the ability to actually make a choice as opposed to a deterministic and mechanical view of reality in which we just respond to cause with effect, whether emotionally or intellectually.
It seems inevitable because emotions are the expression of your nature which is linked with your spiritual power which is linked to your magic. Magic is strongly linked with emotions.
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I'm suggesting that in Harry's world as laid out by Jim Butcher, people can not exercise their free will because that's what Uriel seems to say in The Warrior.

Now, one can argue what Uriel means by "truly" exercising free will is that acting in accord with one's nature, while an exercise of free will, isn't any different than if one didn't have free will in the first place.
All humans can but they don't often do so. That is what he said.
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WoJ on Free Will Creating Parallel Universes:
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If everything is a choice and every choice results in a reality where the consequences of that choice plays out, does free will even exist? Every choice must be made, so no choice is volitional. If it's not volitional, it's not a choice. Thus if everything is a choice and:
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 24, 2020, 10:15:16 PM
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Emphasis added.

Yes, but it helps... nothing from my perspective. If Dresden using free will means all possible uses are enforced and split universe in two or more, then  leaving natural choice out of equation, changes nothing because still choice is more like shtick to make more universes than REAL choice. Because ALWAYS all choices will happen and person will split in all AU versions of himself.
It helps in no way really - because still it's not one unique Dresden making one unique choice that cannot be changed and shall change fate of the universe - it's all possible Dresdens doing all possible choices. Which matters from perspective of specific split!Dresdens but not from multiverse perspective - not from Creation perspective which holds all possible Dresdens.

So if choice is not really unique I see no reason to exclude natural choices - it's just make things unecessary convoluted and do not solve problem of uniqueness of Harry Dresden at all. Oh, look it's just one AU Dresden from 15 less. Great, now I feel our Dresden is so much more unique, dammit.

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I'd say your's is an odd definition of against. It's often in one's best interest to act against one's nature.

That depends how you define nature. If just as pure biological emotions then sure - but human between free will and animalistic instincts there is like shit-ton of psychology in work.

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I disagree with the intellect over emotion/instinct definition of free will. I'd more say free will is the ability to actually make a choice as opposed to a deterministic and mechanical view of reality in which we just respond to cause with effect, whether emotionally or intellectually.

But still it's limited by once intellect.
My view is - for human being able to exercise free will - his mind, his reason has to show him at least two believable alternatives. Two choices his brain can consider possible. Free will need to be based on lower perception - or there is no choice to talk about. Sometimes brain gives us really just one choice - and we just go with it. Sometimes it shows us two or more, then the game begins.
But if your brain shows your self two possible choices - then neither of those choices is like just emotional reaction determined by situation, otherwise alternative would be not presented by reason. So if there is a possible choice - then choice have to be taken, because our perception, our intellect puts us before two possible door at least. If our reason won't show us alternatives - choice is impossible, as there's only one mechanical mode of working. If it shows us alternatives then neither is like NATURAL and DETERMINED because choice was given, and neither is certain till choice is made.

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If everything is a choice and every choice results in a reality where the consequences of that choice plays out, does free will even exist? Every choice must be made, so no choice is volitional. If it's not volitional, it's not a choice. Thus if everything is a choice and:

I understand it Alias. Just for me your solution does not make free will more expensive really.
Primo if you make choice against nature in your equation - but there is no alternative that is ALSO against nature, then only this one Choice is made, and universe won't split because natural choice is just dropped from equation. But if you have two choices against nature - all shall happen each time you use even one of them. And that's still cheapens what Dresden is doing - because for every choice there are other choices. Skipping natural won't help, it's still cheapened from cosmic perspective. There still will be hunderds or thousands of Dresden playing all those choices out.

So it's more like - Universe is almost determined but you can sometimes split it into multiple branches which destroys primeval line of determinism, not just make new branches, and so on, and so on, and so on. I somehow doubt it because we know even if people use free will seldom it's still enough to make helluva splits, and Mab warned that it's not a wise choice to split destiny.

In your equation - basic determined outcome is doomed, because free will shall destroy it.

I think in this moment we need to get in peace with simple answer: free will matters as a way to multiply Creation and therefore create choices in which well Reality is not eaten by Outsiders for instance. Which can be one of million branches for all we know. Nevertheless all shall be played and billions shall perish beyond Outer Gates.
And it matters from personal perspective of our Harry which is maybe one of possible Harrys and in the end all Harry's had to happen each time choice was given, but still he's unique because he's our hero, and go to hell Darth Dresden.

I can live with that, even if I'd prefer if Jim read less Marvel/DC :P

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It seems inevitable because emotions are the expression of your nature which is linked with your spiritual power which is linked to your magic. Magic is strongly linked with emotions.

Intelect is too. Just Harry won't use it much in his spellcraft, so he cannot precisely disintegrate enemies for instance.

Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Bad Alias on November 25, 2020, 02:38:24 AM
If Dresden using free will means all possible uses are enforced ...
I've repeatedly said some number of universes are created that are less than all possible choices. To oversimplify my head canon, there are two universes created by every act of free will. One where the actor chooses to act one way and another where they choose to act in a different way. Each choice is a choice to act beyond and in opposition to what an otherwise accurate deterministic model of the Dresdenverse would have predicted.

If it shows us alternatives then neither is like NATURAL and DETERMINED because choice was given, and neither is certain till choice is made.
Determinists would say that the appearance of choice is an illusion and all biology, reason, thinking, etc. just boils down to physics.

But if you have two choices against nature - all shall happen each time you use even one of them. And that's still cheapens what Dresden is doing - because for every choice there are other choices.
What if there are thousands of possible choices and two universes result?
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on November 25, 2020, 04:04:26 AM
The problem with Free Will as Jim uses it, is that it is contrived and not subject to analysis. Thousands of choices got Harry to whatever point he gets to. By the time you get to whatever the event is, there really aren't any choices left to make, assuming that Dresden is who he is. You've already made them prior to that instant. Which is what Uriel is saying.

Carry on.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Mira on November 25, 2020, 12:03:41 PM
The problem with Free Will as Jim uses it, is that it is contrived and not subject to analysis. Thousands of choices got Harry to whatever point he gets to. By the time you get to whatever the event is, there really aren't any choices left to make, assuming that Dresden is who he is. You've already made them prior to that instant. Which is what Uriel is saying.

Carry on.

Yup, "the moving finger writes..."  Or if you put your foot in a river you will never put it in the same water again..
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 25, 2020, 02:24:36 PM
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I've repeatedly said some number of universes are created that are less than all possible choices. To oversimplify my head canon, there are two universes created by every act of free will. One where the actor chooses to act one way and another where they choose to act in a different way. Each choice is a choice to act beyond and in opposition to what an otherwise accurate deterministic model of the Dresdenverse would have predicted.

I get it, Alias. I just disagree - for me such model solves nothing.
Free will against deterministic model - as a split branch - that I can get it. But free will annuling deterministic branch - nope, not really. It's just pointless. Especially since Mab pointed out that destiny is important and branching new timeline from it - is very dangerous.
Which to me suggest original deterministic model of each branch - survives each time, when choice made another one.

Also it assumes each time there is possibility to choice there are two options - both of which are unnatural. So not one choice against own nature, but also for some reason it's dark twin.

Don't buy it. And I see no reason, not even good clue to believe it works that way in DF.
If anything I see clues Universe Prime shall always exists on track, but if you made choice against destiny you shall land into new branch - new dangerous and unpredictable branch.

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Determinists would say that the appearance of choice is an illusion and all biology, reason, thinking, etc. just boils down to physics.

Now if each choice in Dresden Files results in all possible choices then indeed it's kinda deterministic.
But removing option 0 as you propose only limits scale of determinism - still if desting says A and you will say B, then A stops to exist, but for some reason C, D, and E are created that can be even further from A and B, and even less plausible... for some reason.

It's like - natural choice is to run, but you stay and fight - you create option B. OK, but why other options are created? What option C when you join your enemies which is even less plausible? Why would it happen at all.

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What if there are thousands of possible choices and two universes result?

But we know there are much more universes due to WOJ.
For me choice POSSIBLE is choice that your Reason, your mind, your intellect put on a scales before your Will to act.
Unless such is not presented - you just ran on determined way as you cannot do another thing.

I can imagine stabbing my entire family to death with a knife, but I'd not say I made time-splitting choice by not doing it, as it was mere figment of imagination not something I considered as viable choice.

If not damn - my dopplegangers must be some Jim the Ripper of Multiverse by now. Dammit

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The problem with Free Will as Jim uses it, is that it is contrived and not subject to analysis. Thousands of choices got Harry to whatever point he gets to. By the time you get to whatever the event is, there really aren't any choices left to make, assuming that Dresden is who he is. You've already made them prior to that instant. Which is what Uriel is saying.

But we now discuss Dresden Prime perspective but how free will works for multiverse and how mechanism of timeline split works.
Sure previous choices in any timeline are PAST.



Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: morriswalters on November 25, 2020, 03:07:52 PM
Mirror Mirror is supposed to be about evil Harry killing other Harry's.  Or am I mistaken? That would imply many splits.

Jim has implied a statistical theory of branching.  When Harry learns the name of Nemesis Mother Summer says that it creates many new possibilities.
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Calculation and thought flickered through those green eyes, faster than I could follow. “Ah, yes. I see,” Mother Summer said. “So many new futures unwinding.” “Too many bright ones,” Mother Winter said sullenly. “Even you must think better that than empty night.”

Butcher, Jim. Cold Days (The Dresden Files, Book 14) (p. 329). Penguin Publishing Group. Kindle Edition.
Vadderung describes another form of branching, that of the paradox..
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I grunted. “So if I go back in time and kill my grandfather, what happens?” “He beats you senseless, I suspect,” Vadderung said, his gaze direct. Oh, man. Vadderung knew about Ebenezar. Which meant that either he was higher in the old man’s circle of trust than I was, or he had access to an astoundingly scary pool of information. “You know what I mean,” I said. “Paradox? Universe goes poof?” “If it works like that, I’ve never seen it, as evidenced by the fact that . . .” He spread his hands. “Here it is. I suspect a different form of apocalypse happens.” I frowned. “Like what?” “A twinned universe,” Vadderung said. “A new parallel reality, identical except for that event. One in which you never existed, and one in which you failed to kill your grandfather.” I pursed my lips. “That . . . doesn’t really end well for me in either case.”

Butcher, Jim. Cold Days (The Dresden Files, Book 14) (p. 215). Penguin Publishing Group. Kindle Edition.
So between what Mother Summer showed Harry and what Vadderung theorizes that there could be thousands of branches with Harry in them.  My internal canon would be that to get to those other branches that they would have to be close to Harry Prime to be able to get there.  So for instance, there might be a universe where Harry never manifested his magic, but is unreachable since it's a low probability event and is too far from this timeline. There might be a universe where Susan never became aware of the events at the party, she never becomes infected, and the whole event never triggers the Vampire war.

I cribbed this from the Long Earth, among other sources. Otherwise Free Will and Determinism are just something for philosophers to argue about and for best selling authors to build fictional frame works with.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Bad Alias on November 25, 2020, 04:54:11 PM
Also it assumes each time there is possibility to choice there are two options - both of which are unnatural. So not one choice against own nature, but also for some reason it's dark twin.
Why only two  choices and why is one a "dark twin." I guess one is almost always going to result in an at least marginally better world than the other because it's hard to imagine to choices with different but equal results.

It's like - natural choice is to run, but you stay and fight - you create option B. OK, but why other options are created? What option C when you join your enemies which is even less plausible? Why would it happen at all.
Let's say it's one's nature to freeze. If one were to choose to act instead, they can choose to run, fight, or talk one's way out of the situation. If one chooses to run, they can choose to run in any of 360 degrees in all sorts of different manners.

But we know there are much more universes due to WOJ.
But we don't know how many universes result from a choice.

Mirror Mirror is supposed to be about evil Harry killing other Harry's.  Or am I mistaken? That would imply many splits.
Correct. Jim has also explicitly stated that there are a bunch of realities.

I just had a thought about everything Harry does in GP being in character or in line with his nature. There's one thing he did that I think wasn't. Telling Susan that he loved her. I don't see how not telling her results in Harry surviving, but I really think if anything was out of character for Harry, it was that. Recall that Michael had to drag it out of Harry at the very beginning of the book. He didn't want to say that he loved Susan to Michael, who he told about Elaine.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on November 25, 2020, 04:54:48 PM
No, I don't think MM is The One. I understood that MM Harry would summon a Harry (which will be ours) to act as a decoy. Only one, as far as I understood.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: BrainFireBob on November 25, 2020, 06:54:50 PM
Hard to say.
As I said I'm not a fan of this True Love thing - I'd much prefer it to be sort of mental duel with such vampire than some almost excuse random category. With Skavis and Malvora you have to prove your virtue to burn those bastards.

Don't look at it as competition.

All Whamps are supernatural hot.

Only Raith feeds on lust. Raith feeds super easily- other Whamps need to do work to feed- but are most vulnerable, since true love would be most common.

Burning could just be failure to latch. Less technically protection, more "that access port is already in use"
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: BrainFireBob on November 25, 2020, 07:03:41 PM
Dunno. I somehow have a feeling he can stay fridged till BAT, because really I think Butcher had little idea what to do with Thomas overall.

Yes. For instance we could get longer introductions and epilogues to series giving us better vision of what Dresden was doing between books - that's about as much place we needed. (And no Jim no sane reader would pick tome 16 of your series, and just run with it mindlessly. If he does he will notice something is wrong - like you can put list of all the books at the beginning or something).

DO NOT DESCRIBE THEM. Like really. Describe new things. Introduce new things.

Alienates new readers. In theory, each book should be sufficiently self-contained to be picked up and read by someone off the street.

Your being an early fan is your problem, not anyone else's
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Wicked Woodpecker of West on November 26, 2020, 02:14:45 AM
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Mirror Mirror is supposed to be about evil Harry killing other Harry's.  Or am I mistaken? That would imply many splits.

Overall yes of course. We can safely assume lot of alternative Dresden's.
Especially since it's not Harry's choices splitting universes. I'm quite sure there are many alt-Dresdens put on different path by someone's elses choices around.

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Jim has implied a statistical theory of branching.  When Harry learns the name of Nemesis Mother Summer says that it creates many new possibilities.

But I think it's more about his decision what to do about it. I mean he learned name from Titania - if anything choice to call Titania which is risky business for him, is split maker - Titania did her duty afterwards, it seems.

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So between what Mother Summer showed Harry and what Vadderung theorizes that there could be thousands of branches with Harry in them.  My internal canon would be that to get to those other branches that they would have to be close to Harry Prime to be able to get there.  So for instance, there might be a universe where Harry never manifested his magic, but is unreachable since it's a low probability event and is too far from this timeline. There might be a universe where Susan never became aware of the events at the party, she never becomes infected, and the whole event never triggers the Vampire war.

That's quite possible. But if it's choices splitting reality - then choice have to be made.
I mean Darth Dresden is from Grave Peril - so he is quite far away. 15 years of different history for both him and supernatural community. Quite far to reach. But then it's possible that's because - if he reaches to close timelines - oh more dangerous necromantic Darth Dresden's there. Better to seek further and find some good Dresden's too kill.

And about Vadderung paradox. Dunno how good this prediction is compared to WOJ.
In my calculation - first there is a choice to do such stupid stunt - that leads us to split - we have world when Dresden thought better, and we have world where Dresden went back in time. We know that if he go back to his timeline nothing will change (if he survives) because it's stil original timeline. But fight itself when started is not much of a choice it seems. It's not like both chances have a 50:50 winning ticket.

Such attacks split reality - as it changes events, but event itself should not be necessarily splittable.

Assuming only one choice - to go back in time and kill McCoy is given - that would imply 3 branches.

1. line when Dresden made choice to not do it
2. line when Dresden decided to do it - depending on whether he survived and returned it may be just line where Dresden just disappeared.
3. split line by timetravel where Dresden tried to murder McCoy - whatever result of such fight - new line is created.

So basically two splits from one choice. That's dangerous inflation. Maybe that's why it's forbidden as you use not enough mana and get too much energy ;)

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Why only two  choices and why is one a "dark twin." I guess one is almost always going to result in an at least marginally better world than the other because it's hard to imagine to choices with different but equal results.

That's simplification of course - sure it can be more.
But there is assumption that choice always mean two options - problem is - in your model choice can mean one option vs natural option and still be a choice.

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Let's say it's one's nature to freeze. If one were to choose to act instead, they can choose to run, fight, or talk one's way out of the situation. If one chooses to run, they can choose to run in any of 360 degrees in all sorts of different manners.

That's quite problemtic. Panic freeze is not even on a same level as any voluntary action.
It's like assuming you can have free will to walk when someone cut off your legs for me.

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But we don't know how many universes result from a choice.

So it's one choice but you get like dozen identical universes (for a moment) with the same choice made?

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I just had a thought about everything Harry does in GP being in character or in line with his nature. There's one thing he did that I think wasn't. Telling Susan that he loved her. I don't see how not telling her results in Harry surviving, but I really think if anything was out of character for Harry, it was that. Recall that Michael had to drag it out of Harry at the very beginning of the book. He didn't want to say that he loved Susan to Michael, who he told about Elaine.

But would that mean that admitting to Michael also was a split. I'd assume in one's nature is also certain borders when to fall - naturally. Add enough emotion and even someone keeping cards close can spill the beans.
And situation in "Grave Peril" seems like situation that would make him to do it. His emotional state in this moment is IMHO aligned with this decision.

Only really weird choice - but not for our Harry but Darth Dresden would be to let go of Susan. But it's SO MUCH against Dresden nature I cannot see it as viable choice.
If there's dark choice I can see Harry making in a GP - it's allowing Sword to be destroyed to save Susan. But I'm not sure if there was a proper moment really.

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No, I don't think MM is The One. I understood that MM Harry would summon a Harry (which will be ours) to act as a decoy. Only one, as far as I understood.

There's theory it was not a first time, and Darth Dresden is playing a Kemmler.

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Don't look at it as competition.

All Whamps are supernatural hot.

Only Raith feeds on lust. Raith feeds super easily- other Whamps need to do work to feed- but are most vulnerable, since true love would be most common.

Burning could just be failure to latch. Less technically protection, more "that access port is already in use"


True love more common than courage or hope that repells fear-eaters and despair-drinkers. I have doubts about this statistics.

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Alienates new readers. In theory, each book should be sufficiently self-contained to be picked up and read by someone off the street.

Your being an early fan is your problem, not anyone else's

I get it (although considering how things are repeated WITHIN one book cannot be defended by this claim).
But I consider it overall foolish theory. Especially for Dresden Files - book with apocalyptic metaplot planned since 2000, tighter and tighter every book. Any sane reader after noticing he reads book 17, would well change a book. It's like starting Lord of the Rings from Return of the King.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Bad Alias on November 26, 2020, 03:02:02 AM
But there is assumption that choice always mean two options.
Why? Or perhaps by whom? I don't assume there's only two options.

That's quite problemtic. Panic freeze is not even on a same level as any voluntary action.
It's like assuming you can have free will to walk when someone cut off your legs for me.
I'm not going to argue over that. It illustrates the point that there's almost never really a choice between just two things. Even most "binary" choices are more of a spectrum.

So it's one choice but you get like dozen identical universes (for a moment) with the same choice made?
No.

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You: But if you have two choices against nature - all shall happen each time you use even one of them. And that's still cheapens what Dresden is doing - because for every choice there are other choices.
Me: What if there are thousands of possible choices and two universes result?
You: But we know there are much more universes due to WOJ.
Me: But we don't know how many universes result from a choice.

I had two points. One was that we don't know how many universes result from a choice. It could be two. It could be dozens. The other was that a choice isn't necessarily from just two options. It's usually almost infinitely variable. So you get a dozen universes that may seem really similar until the butterfly effect starts to make things drastically different, or the things just snowball w/o a butterfly effect. Maybe you just get slightly different realities. You could end up with six drastically different realities and six that are barely different.

But would that mean that admitting to Michael also was a split.
Why? Dresden could easily be willing to admit it to Michael that he loves Susan after Michael pressuring him to while not be willing to say it to Susan.

If there's dark choice I can see Harry making in a GP ...
I wouldn't be surprised if it wasn't a dark choice.

WoJ:
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How will the world be different if Harry had made one choice differently.
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It’s going to be a different character because it’s going to be Dresden as he would have been if he made one choice differently, and the fallout from that effect on his life.
I get the impression what separates MirrorHarry from our Harry is just one choice and the consequences of that choice. I also get the impression that it won't be a choice that Harry would have thought was that monumental. Kind of how Morris keeps saying MM will be more like TOS: The City on the Edge of Forever instead of TOS: Mirror, Mirror.

We'll find out what choice in a few years if Jim gets back to his pre-PT speed.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Dina on November 26, 2020, 04:06:36 AM
There's theory it was not a first time, and Darth Dresden is playing a Kemmler.
Ah, ok. Well, we will have to wait and see


I get it (although considering how things are repeated WITHIN one book cannot be defended by this claim).
But I consider it overall foolish theory. Especially for Dresden Files - book with apocalyptic metaplot planned since 2000, tighter and tighter every book. Any sane reader after noticing he reads book 17, would well change a book. It's like starting Lord of the Rings from Return of the King.

I agree. Or worse, like reading Foundation & Earth before reading any other Asimov book.
Title: Re: Anyone else... disappointed? [PT/BG spoilers]
Post by: Kindler on December 14, 2020, 04:59:13 PM
When Peace Talks finally broke, I read it and was immediately disappointed. Battle Ground came out, and I loved it.
My problem with these two books is that neither one felt complete. BG felt rushed, PT felt slow. Neither felt right.
Jim said he wound up writing "four-thirds of one book" on his first draft of PT, and wrote the last third of PT and BG to produce two. It didn't feel like that to me. Scenes like Murphy's death, which were emotional for me, just didn't have the kind of impact I felt like they should have.
To me, it felt like Jim wrote one book, then added some things and cut it somewhere in the middle to turn it into two.
I liked the story, I liked the individual scenes, and BG was one hell of a ride, but there's a disjointed sensation to the whole situation that just felt off.