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DF Spoilers / Re: Ivy/The Archive and digital information
« on: September 07, 2017, 10:32:34 PM »
I think that the internet could be what starts the disaster of the three book trilogy.....remember when something gets on the internet it is impossible  to get rid of. imagine one of the books about worship of an elder good were put on the internet.  according to how the oblivion war works the more people who know about the elder god the more powerful it is and the easier time it has showing up on are plane of existence. now imagine IVY  trying to fight an elder god that has been connected to an internet meme.

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DF Spoilers / Re: Brief Cases
« on: August 21, 2017, 07:37:31 PM »
some have speculated that Jim butchers dry spell on writing the Dresden files has more to do with divorce settlements on the profits from the series. if that's the case we might be seeing a lot of his material start coming out fairly soon.

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DF Spoilers / Re: Faith's importance spoilers
« on: August 19, 2017, 05:06:35 PM »
restoration of faith takes place 1 year after Dresden leaves his grandpa' s  farm and moves to Chicago. at that tine Dresden is  only 23 years old. Storm front takes place about 5 years later so Dresden is 28 years old at the start of the series. each book has been a snap shot of about 1 year in time so I am guessing faith to be in her mid 30s  and Dresden to be in his mid 40s when the series ends and Jim butcher writes  his three book trilogy to end the Dresden files.

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DF Spoilers / Re: Bob's Personality, and Justin
« on: August 14, 2017, 07:27:36 AM »
I wonder how it will bowed for Bonnie's personality.  will ownership of her wooden skull and expectation of harriy dictate the personality. will the fact that his daughter interacts with the wooden skull help set up the personality.

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DF Spoilers / Re: Maggie's School Friends at SMAGT
« on: August 13, 2017, 06:37:26 AM »
 I like the idea of  a 12 year old knight of the cross....remember most of the knights are temporary and only pick up the sword for  a short time for a specific purpose.

 if I remember correctly harry hid the swords in plane site when he was the one keeping the swords. at one point in the books the sword was kept right by the front door along with his umbrella.

I don't know who currently is watching the one sword that does not have knight.  it would be fun if one of Maggie's  friends was visiting  and borrowed temporarily one of the swords for a task not quiet understanding what it was for.

Perhaps one of Maggie's  friends accidently touched a denerien coin and is facing the temptation of the fallen. while not having the coin it self because it is currently with a denarian the child still has the imprint of a fallen in there head helping the child to make bad decisions. and the sword is used to give back free will to the child .

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DF Spoilers / Re: Maggie's School Friends at SMAGT
« on: August 13, 2017, 06:35:26 AM »
 I like the idea of  a 12 year old knight of the cross....remember most of the knights are temporary and only pick up the sword for  a short time for a specific purpose.

 if I remember correctly harry hid the swords in plane site when he was the one keeping the swords. at one point in the books the sword was kept right by the front door along with his umbrella.

I don't know who currently is watching the one sword that does not have knight.  it would be fun if one of Maggie's  friends was visiting  and borrowed temporarily one of the swords for a task not quiet understanding what it was for.

Perhaps one of Maggie's  friends accidently touched a denerien coin and is facing the temptation of the fallen. while not having the coin it self because it is currently with a denarian the child still has the imprint of a fallen in there head helping the child to make bad decisions. and the sword is used to give back free will to the child .

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DF Spoilers / Re: Maggie's School Friends at SMAGT
« on: August 09, 2017, 11:44:19 PM »
I think will and Georgia Bordon's child  would be an interesting character to introduce . I would love to see a short story about Maggie baby sitting  a three or four year old Bordon child who has just found out that mom and dad are were-wolves  and having  Bonny advising her .


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Community Cork Board / Re: help wanted
« on: May 26, 2017, 06:35:18 AM »
its been a few years since I first advertised for fairy housekeepers . I am still looking.  I just figured out some of those fairy's  don't like pizza so for the health conscience fairy I can provide celery sticks, green tea and other boring non pizza and candy food stuffs ...the big thing is I hate house work and I need a staff that works for food.

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Author Craft / Re: political correctness in the writting comunity
« on: December 15, 2015, 11:04:54 PM »
the problem I have with the notion of political correctness is that it takes away judgment calls on things.....in life we are all going to have things we think are wrong that goes against others personnel belief in what is right and wrong.....I believe it is an authors job to use his story's to challenge the reader into making a value judgment getting the reader to say this wrong or this is wright. hopefully you as the writer are making good moral decisions but a lot of times we may not know that what we are presenting is a bigoted view because we are human and flawed.... when political correctness leaks into the writing process it does not allow us to explore because its wrong to even bring up the counter view on something like racism, homosexuality, religion , rape , politics. 

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Author Craft / political correctness in the writting community
« on: December 12, 2015, 09:26:25 AM »
I have a really good group I meet with once a week. our group has six members and we our all working on a book. last week the subject of political correctness came up and how it effects writing. I was surprised when one in my group started to talk about how it ruins writing when it creeps into a book. this surprised me coming from her because she could not see how it was all over her criticism of other people writings and had crept into her own writing.. She is constantly telling us that character is sexist or an idea should not be presented because you will lose audience if you voice the idea. I was wondering how many here our feafull that some books our not being written because authors are afraid of a negative reaction from the publisher or if it is published by society.

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Author Craft / Re: looking for coments on story change
« on: July 26, 2015, 12:49:36 PM »
I removed my posts because I just realized I wasb breaking the rule of not posting your story sorry everyone......I am just excited about my project

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Author Craft / Re: Fictional Econimics
« on: July 25, 2015, 10:44:02 PM »
the thing to remember that value is based on rarity and perceived value. the4 reason that diamonds are valuable are thar rhey are precieed as rar band hard to get the same is true with gold.

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Author Craft / looking for coments on story change
« on: July 25, 2015, 05:00:57 PM »
I removed this all because it was breaking the boards' policy about no posting storyideas....sory every on

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Author Craft / the use of proper gramer to tell a story
« on: June 28, 2015, 08:21:44 AM »
got a question to put out in the either,   today I went to a writer meetup where we read and commented on others works. My grammar is not the best and needs work and I value the criticism I get, I feel that I am strong in the area of story telling knowing how much description to put in and how to mix action with thought with description. one of the writers  was putting one word  in italics at the end of the sentence. I had figured out that the words were thoughts but I felt that for the average reader it was confusing and that the author needed a stronger  indicator to the reader that that the one word was mental thought .or to even remove it all together. All three writers at the table told me that it was oK.   because the word was italicized and according to rules on grammar everything was all right. I feel that a true story teller uses proper grammar but try's to go beyond having proper grammar to tell the story. am I right to feel that just because  it is technically correct does not mean that it should be used.

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I hope you have a pig garbage disposal system.

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