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Tony Stark writeup
« on: February 17, 2012, 10:21:00 AM »
NAME: Tony Stark
HIGH CONCEPT: Scientist in Power Armor
TROUBLE: Pride Goes Before Everything
ASPECTS:
Billionnaire Businessman;
Weapons Expert;
Too Smart For My Own Good;

SKILLS:
+6 Weapons, Technology*
+5 Contacts, Resources
+4 Presence, Craftmanship
+3 Endurance, Conviction,
+2 Driving, Athletics, Survival
+1 Discipline, Rapport, Empathy
*replaces Lore for supertech


STRESS: P: OOOO(OOOO) (armor 4)/  M: OOO S: OOOO
CONSEQUENCES: Mild, Moderate, Severe, Extreme

STUNTS:
Billionnaire: +2 to resources rolls if you take 1 time increment longer than normal for a transaction (to arrange/liquidate external assets)
POWERS:
Supertech Engineer: as per ritual crafting, use "technology" skill instead of Lore.
Supertech Refinement 7x
Iron-Man Armor [-3]
It is what it is: extremely heavy palladium alloy armor. Armor 4
One-time-Discount
Feeding Dependency: Radioactive Fuel
Inhuman Strength
Supernatural Toughness (catch: spiritual attacks)
Ion Thrusters: can fly as per flight, by taking -2 to dodge due to lowered maneuverability, it can keep up with aircraft.

LAB AND DEVICES:
Advanced tech workshop - +5 frequency, +5 power focus for crafting.
Supertech weaponry - power 11, frequency 6 attack gadgets (as per enchanted items) totaling 7 slots
Supertech shields - power 11, frequency 6 defense gadgets totaling 4 slots
Gadgeteer Inventions - power 11, frequency 6 onetime inventions (as per potions) totaling 5 slots


REFRESH/FATE POINTS: submerged+4 / 1
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Re: Tony Stark writeup
« Reply #1 on: February 17, 2012, 05:01:59 PM »
You have a Feeding dependency without a Hunger track...
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Re: Tony Stark writeup
« Reply #2 on: February 17, 2012, 05:12:01 PM »
You know, when I saw Feeding Dependency for Tony Stark, a part of me was expecting the dependency to be for booze.
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Re: Tony Stark writeup
« Reply #3 on: February 17, 2012, 05:49:20 PM »
It's for his armor - he always seems to run out of energy - and it should be based off the "technology" skill. I just forgot to write that down.

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Re: Tony Stark writeup
« Reply #4 on: February 17, 2012, 07:29:23 PM »
I like it, this is more or less the way I would have written Stark up.

Though the armour seems underpriced.

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Re: Tony Stark writeup
« Reply #5 on: February 17, 2012, 07:46:17 PM »
Its not underpriced, one Hexus, and he comes tumbling down.
WHAT CAN THE HARVEST HOPE FOR, IF NOT FOR THE CARE OF THE REAPER MAN?

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Re: Tony Stark writeup
« Reply #6 on: February 17, 2012, 07:53:11 PM »
Just wanted to say how much I like the "Too Smart For My Own Good" Aspect.  That's really well chosen.

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Re: Tony Stark writeup
« Reply #7 on: February 17, 2012, 07:53:45 PM »
Its not underpriced, one Hexus, and he comes tumbling down.

Where does it say that?

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Re: Tony Stark writeup
« Reply #8 on: February 17, 2012, 07:57:35 PM »
it doesnt state that, but i assume that would be a price due to magic's effect on modern tech.  Powered armour like iron man is considered modern tech.
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Re: Tony Stark writeup
« Reply #9 on: February 17, 2012, 08:08:06 PM »
Its not underpriced, one Hexus, and he comes tumbling down.
Should put that in as a Catch (+X) and add the value of the Catch to the price of the armor.

Keeps the same basic Refresh value, but fits the rules as written better.
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Re: Tony Stark writeup
« Reply #10 on: February 17, 2012, 08:26:30 PM »
The armor itself seems underpriced because it doesn't appear to include any of the weapons the armor has.
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Re: Tony Stark writeup
« Reply #11 on: February 17, 2012, 10:14:03 PM »
The armor is just that - the armor. Weapons, energy shields, gadgets; those are all additions via his supertech as enchanted items.

Hexing might work (though Iron Man's armor has never been shown to fail/malfunction naturally and seems able to even fix itself) but it might also be stopped by one of the energy shields before reaching any systems at all.

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Re: Tony Stark writeup
« Reply #12 on: February 17, 2012, 10:19:02 PM »
You know, when I saw Feeding Dependency for Tony Stark, a part of me was expecting the dependency to be for booze.

Booze and women. Preferably at the same time.

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Re: Tony Stark writeup
« Reply #13 on: February 17, 2012, 11:15:17 PM »
it doesnt state that, but i assume that would be a price due to magic's effect on modern tech.  Powered armour like iron man is considered modern tech.

Is it?

Because I don't think that modern technology can do one tenth of what iron man does.

If something is supposed to be vulnerable in some way, then that should be an aspect or a part of its mechanics.

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Re: Tony Stark writeup
« Reply #14 on: February 18, 2012, 01:16:36 AM »
His craftsmanship should be a lot higher.