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Grammar Challenge... Are you up to the task?
black_hawk_sam:
He saw himself as a man manager and was a public voice in the drive to reform Scotland's penal system; brighter, better-equipped halls; a strong emphasis on vocational training, education and counseling; no more overcrowding, no more brutality...
Is this better?
I was trying to make a different meaning than what was already posted... didn't realize that we were trying to capture the original. Guess I forgot that part of the directions...
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meg_evonne:
yes, I caught it. *smiling*
Mickey Finn:
Here's mine:
"Fish."
Sorry, I'll go back to work now....
meg_evonne:
Bluegills? *smiling*
Mickey Finn:
Well, it IS the penal system....
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