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Okay new game: hooked or not hooked.....
Philliph:
Seconded. aside from my self-absorbtion...
Gritti, i thought it was pretty cool. also amusing "Thats another point for me, doc" i liked that.
A five by five foot cell? what country does this guy live in? thats a pretty vile thing to do to a guy. aside from that i thought it was cool. keep writing :D
Gritti:
Thanks so much for the comment, and the prisoner isn't in a country...he's not on Earth, but in a space station.
Philliph:
Awesome. Is this after the 2012 incident? because that would be the safest place to find haven if it does happen...
Or have we evolved to a level 1 civilization? Have we finally found out how to travel to jupiter in less than 2 days? i think it takes years right now, but i know it definitely takes four months to get to mars if you slingshot around venus, then venus again(second revolution around the sun), and then earth.
Science Channel don't fail me now...
Gritti:
Philliph,
I hadn't thought of the whole 2012 thing, but that definately opens up all kinds of new possibilities. And I'm afraid humans haven't achieved level 1 quite yet (In my imaginary world anyway). The prisoner is not human, but is in our galaxy. I started this story last year and lost steam on it I'm not really sure why. I planned a sort of alien goes to earth in a desperate attempt to escape from a hitman (also alien but different race). Oh yeah and the space station is orbiting Jupiter. It had lots of good pieces but I decided to put it on the back burner while I worked on an idea with a little more magic than tech, but I'll be sure to pull it off the shelf again and finish it. Thanks so much for the feedback.
Gritti:
Philliph,
I just read the three (if there was more I must have missed it) pieces you've posted and I have to say they are all very cool. Can't say I have anything to add to the critiques you got, but each one has parts that grab at me. I'd say you definately have the heart of a writer...keep it up.
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