Some ideas:

Handle Animal stunt with a specialization in horses.
Gun stunts, maybe a specialization in revolvers.
Stunt or enchanted item that lets you grapple someone with a lasso.
Magic bullets for potions.

I think the Senior Council members could use a few mortal stunts along with their supernatural powers. Most of them are pretty impressive people even without their powers. Some suggestions:

Listens to Wind:
The books mention that he's a pretty fantastic doctor. I think that he goes back to medical school every ten years in order to keep current. If you ask me, that means a high scholarship skill and several doctor stunts.

Gatekeeper:
He's got a contact on every plane and he's as mysterious as all hell. You can translate that into game terms (beyond simple aspects) with one stunt letting him use lore as a defense against empathy and another giving him +2 to his contacts in the Nevernever.

Merlin:
He's an excellent politician, especially when dealing with other wizards of the white council. He could use a stunt offering a bonus to maneuvers with presence or maybe just a blanket social bonus when dealing with other wizards of the white council.

Ancient Mai:
She's a scary lady. Some intimidate stunts would be appropriate, in my humble opinion.

Well, I just downloaded this and I have to say it looks awesome. I've been looking for something like this.

That's not to say it's perfect, though. Here are a few things that could be improved:

• Superb and higher skills should grant additional mild consequences.
• You should be able to take certain powers, like refinement and lawbreaker, multiple times.
• It would be nice to be able to input custom powers, elements, thaumaturgical fields, and templates.
• Crafting specializations should be devided into power and frequency.
• It would be nice to be able to select power levels other than the ones suggested in the core book, especially when making NPCs.
• Major milestones should increase your base refresh total.

There are also a number of things which I was unable to do, possibly due to my inexperience with the program. Here's the list:

• Input descriptions of custom stunts.
• Link custom stunts to skills.
• Select specializations for evocation or for thaumaturgy beyond +1.
• Select foci.

Could you fine fellows please explain:

The trouble aspect of Crimson Overcoat's character?

The trouble aspect of Lanir's character?

Everything about Lanodantheon's most recent character?



Sir Oswell (Mortal w/Items of Power)
Inspired by Hammerfall

High Concept: Knights Of The 21st Cenutry
Trouble Aspect: On The Edge Of Honour
Other Aspects:  Stronger Than All, Hammer of Justice, Legacy of Kings, Any Means Necessary, A Legend Reborn

Explanation: Sir Oswell, king and champion of a great land, died almost a thousand years ago. His spirit endures through his weapons and armour. Recently, he was able to acquire a body after his great-something grandson was born without a soul. He moved into the baby’s body and began his quest to prove himself a mighty and honourable knight once again. The mighty part is going great, but he’s having some trouble with the honourable part. The 21st century has no place for someone like him, and he has been forced into a number of unpleasant compromises.



I really want to make a character based off of MC Hawking's music, but I can't find a good high concept.

Archibald "Archie" Walls (True Believer)
Inspired by Drowning Pool

High Concept: The Man Without Fear
Trouble Aspect: Sinner
Other Aspects: Love and War, Children of the Gun, Enemy, Reborn, 37 Stitches

Explanation: He was once a sergeant in the US military. Fought in the first invasion of Iraq, doing some rather terrible things at the order of a Denarian officer. Eventually, the chaplain of his unit led a mutiny against the Denarian. The chaplain died, but the rest of the soldiers were able to escape. They ended up at the Vatican, becoming foot soldiers in the war against the Denarians. Archie distinguished himself through his incredible courage and desire for redemption. Unfortunately, the Denarian officer has tracked down his former subordinates and is murdering them systematically.



Albia Tullius (Emissary of Power)
Inspired by Nightcore

High Concept: Forever Gamer
Trouble Aspect: Crazy Baby
Other Aspects: 21 Century Digital Girl, Forever Young, Temple of Dreams, Pretty Rave Girl, All or Nothing

Explanation: Born the year after the death of Christ, Albia grew up as a noble in ancient Rome. Her abiding passion was (and is) games of all kinds, especially those where money could be lost and won. She was so successful at gambling that she attracted the attention of Sors, ancient roman god of luck. He challenged her to bet upon the flip of a coin. If she won, she would be granted eternal youth and the patronage of Sors. If she lost, her body and soul would be torn apart. She gambled and won. And so she lived, blissfully free of maturity and responsibility, for two millennia. Until about a year ago. She got pregnant, gave birth, and suddenly had a lot more responsibility than she ever wanted. Albia currently lives with her baby in a luxurious suite in the Temple of Dreams hotel/casino.



If you would like me to explain the meaning of a specific aspect, just ask.

Stunts look fine, HobbitGuy1420. Performance isn't going to break the game anytime soon. In fact, you could probably make them more powerful without any real problems.

Endurance:

Spell Resistance: Your body rejects the effects of magic more effectively than most. You have a natural armour score of 1 against magic which stacks with everything.

Lore:

Favoured Enemy: You've studied how to kill certain magical creatures. Choose a type of supernatural being. All of your physical attacks inflict 2 additional stress to that type of being.

Survival:

Urban Survivalist: You prefer the concrete jungle to the leafy one. You may use all trappings of the survival skill with a +1 bonus while in an urban environment.

I was thinking of writing up the Einherjar myself, but since you seem to have nailed it. The rules do say that you need a catch, but I personally don't feel it's necessary for anything less than Physical Immunity.

If you want to give the Einherjar a catch, there are a few possibilities. First, you could stipulate that their powers only work in Valhalla. Second, you could say that they only heal at sundown. Third, you could give Loki and his servants (like Jotun) the ability to ignore the toughness of the Eiherjar. The Eiherjar were portrayed as recovering from all wounds every night while training at Valhalla but dying in Ragnorok. These catches are intended to simulate that.

The Whelp of Fenrir looks good. Can't see any rules problems with it.

Would you consider statting up the real Fenrir? He might be at plot device level physically, but he should be interesting in social combat. Remember, the Aesir tricked him into getting chained up.

Also: the Chimera still needs another box of social stress capacity.