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Kincaid microfiction "Goodbye"

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Dina:
IF Harry let her know that he is alive, all is well. I have no problems with that happening off screen.

Mira:

--- Quote from: Dina on March 12, 2020, 07:18:21 PM ---I don't think Uriel is allowed to interfere like that, but you don't need it. Mab is the Queen of the Air, so she could have done the wind thing you propose  :)

And yes, in CD Harry was busy but still, writing a small note only takes a minute. And then, you have free time until SG.

--- End quote ---

  However who made sure he fell in the water?  Realistically a small note wouldn't do it, it isn't like Harry came back unexpectedly from Egypt or something.   EVERYONE thought he had died, he was given a funeral, he was mourned, it takes more than a small note to explain that and he just didn't have the time.

g33k:

--- Quote from: Mira on March 12, 2020, 09:23:30 PM --- However who made sure he fell in the water? ...
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I find it persuasive that one of Mab's titles is "Queen of Air and Darkness."  I think deflecting a bullet is well within her capabilities.

But the angle at which he fell... yeah, that's a tough one.  Not gonna put it past Mab, however.  Couple of dozen of the Wee Folk, lurking on nearby boats... a Nereid (or maybe one of Jennie Greenteeth's kin) in the water below... it could be accomplished.


--- Quote from: Mira on March 12, 2020, 09:23:30 PM ---... Realistically a small note wouldn't do it, it isn't like Harry came back unexpectedly from Egypt or something.   EVERYONE thought he had died, he was given a funeral, he was mourned, it takes more than a small note to explain that and he just didn't have the time.
--- End quote ---

"Hi, Ivy, it's Harry.  I just got out of a very twisted rehab, back in Arctis Tor.  First day back in Chicago.  Turns out, she and Mr. Sunshine were running a deep-cover op, and my preemptive self-retirement didn't take.  If I worried you, I apologize.  This is my first chance to let you know that things have turned out OK... ish... depending, I guess, on the next day or two.  As usual."

Takes... what... a few minutes' thought (pre-considered during the downtime of rehab).  And maybe half a minute to write, when he was alone in the Munstermobile, or etc...

"Oh, yeah -- stars and stones, but I've always wanted to say this! -- this message will self-destruct in ... five - four - three - two - one - "  FUEGO!

Dina:
Even "Hi Ivy! I'm Harry and I am alive. I was in a sort of coma for months but now I am back and I wanted to tell you". It's shorter.

morriswalters:
Hi Ivy. 
I know I claimed to be your friend, but I needed your bodyguard to do a solid for me.  I'm sorry if it causes grief, but shit happens. 
Harry.

The problem with the setup is the causes grief part.  He takes a child who is fragile and removes a measure of her support.  However this is the pre Ghost Story Harry before Uriel rubs his nose into what a selfish dick he is.

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