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Re: The I'm Writing Thread.... Celebrate your pages written etc Part II.
« Reply #630 on: December 31, 2013, 09:37:36 AM »
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« Reply #631 on: December 31, 2013, 04:36:59 PM »
revision, revision, revision.... and more revisions...
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Re: The I'm Writing Thread.... Celebrate your pages written etc Part II.
« Reply #632 on: January 03, 2014, 12:06:08 AM »
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« Reply #633 on: January 03, 2014, 06:22:06 AM »
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« Reply #634 on: January 04, 2014, 12:11:01 PM »
2 hr revision work lost when I accidentally closed it without saving. Last night I redid most of it. So this morning, I'm where I was yesterday. Good news? It'll be back in editor's hands by Sunday night. Then I can release release the muse again.
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Re: The I'm Writing Thread.... Celebrate your pages written etc Part II.
« Reply #635 on: January 05, 2014, 03:18:37 AM »
Ten more chapters of #1 revised, the new intro tweaked again, and a little more poking at the start of #3. At this rate I will be done with #1 in one more night's work yay.
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Re: The I'm Writing Thread.... Celebrate your pages written etc Part II.
« Reply #636 on: January 05, 2014, 05:06:36 AM »
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Re: The I'm Writing Thread.... Celebrate your pages written etc Part II.
« Reply #637 on: January 05, 2014, 05:10:07 PM »
Battlecorps.com just e-published my twentieth short story for Battletech, "Operation Red Lion". A good way to start out the New Year...... ;D

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Re: The I'm Writing Thread.... Celebrate your pages written etc Part II.
« Reply #638 on: January 05, 2014, 05:34:04 PM »
Battlecorps.com just e-published my twentieth short story for Battletech, "Operation Red Lion". A good way to start out the New Year...... ;D

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Hey that's great Craig Turboturtle.  Sounds like you're getting locked in as a battle-tech stable house author.

Keep up the hard work.



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Re: The I'm Writing Thread.... Celebrate your pages written etc Part II.
« Reply #639 on: January 06, 2014, 05:46:51 AM »
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« Reply #640 on: January 07, 2014, 07:38:57 AM »
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The End: and that's a wrap for first draft of Admiral's Lady: Ashes for Ashes, Blood for Blood.  Which came in at 73,510 words.


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Re: The I'm Writing Thread.... Celebrate your pages written etc Part II.
« Reply #641 on: January 11, 2014, 04:35:52 AM »
Through pass on eight more chapters, and at this point I am making an executive decision to do the remaining four tomorrow rather than stay up any later and risk messing things up because I am falling asleep from a particularly exhausting week.
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« Reply #642 on: January 12, 2014, 12:50:51 AM »
And I stayed up. Do I get a gold star? No, because I didn't get back to writing until 8AM, when I usually start at 6.

Completed all but one of my final revision checks. Then I send it back. Or maybe one more hard copy and one more read through, but it won't have to be read out loud this time.

Bottom line? The pages with fixes the editor requested bloated manuscript to 78000, but tightened back down to 73,993. I sent it with 71101. Most YA's are shorter, but this amount is well within the imprints guidelines.

What did I learn with this? Michael A Stackpole in a workshop told us that editors may point out symptoms and not realize it. The writer has to find the disease and cure it. Not surprisingly, he's 100% right.
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« Reply #643 on: January 15, 2014, 08:27:14 AM »
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Re: The I'm Writing Thread.... Celebrate your pages written etc Part II.
« Reply #644 on: January 16, 2014, 04:56:12 AM »
and volume 1 revisions are done, it is now a svelte 95,620 words, and we are on to #2 almost certainly Friday.
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