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Offline Jason1587

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Constructive criticism for a piece
« on: May 24, 2012, 10:42:59 PM »
First off, I want to say thank you to Jim Butcher for writing the Dresden series....without it, I would spent a lot drill weekends bored to tears.

I've been working on a writing project of my own for about two years now, and I'm about half way through it.  But, I don't have any training in writing...just the gift of having watched to many episodes of South Park.  So I was hoping some of you fine folks on here wouldn't mind reading it and telling me what you think.  Its called Pig Tales....check it out: http://pigtalesadventures.blogspot.com/2010/11/chapter-one-just-swingin.html