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DF Spoilers / Re: Twelve Months Discussion Thread
« on: January 23, 2026, 04:09:36 PM »
-   Where were the Men in Black teased at the end of Battle Ground?  I was expecting them to show up in some fashion in this book.

Good question. For Feds we only got the HBGB inspectors who weren't the Men in Black.

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DF Spoilers / Re: True Love's Protection
« on: January 21, 2026, 07:43:18 PM »
That really doesn't work either, Harry still burned Lara's lips in White Night five years after his split with Susan.  True, she was still alive, but he had had no contact with her at all in all those years.  To my mind, the love you feel lingers more after one loses a loved one to death than a split up, because you are still loving the memory and there is no distraction from it. 

Personally, I agree with you about the love lingering more after a loved one dies, especially if one is summoning the shade and playing boardgames with it every night. But narrative necessity triumphs over all.

They might not have had contact, but Harry still felt love for Susan after 5 years and hadn't been with someone else. Susan still felt love for Harry after 5 years and hadn't been with anyone else. Ergo, lack of contact alone doesn't break the protection.

The problem Jim created was that Harry burned Lara while Murphy was alive, but not 4 months later. He needed  Lara to rock Harry's world with a superkiss on Halloween which should have burned her lips off if the protection held. His excuse of "I just fed" from the first date won't hold if she is indeed feeding on him.

Second alternative, Jim could have said it was Odin's scooping her up that broke the connection.

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DF Spoilers / True Love's Protection
« on: January 21, 2026, 04:10:28 PM »
I thought the explanation for why Harry's protection disappeared was disappointing, sort of 'the narrative necessitates Lara be able to touch him and I don't want to bother with Harry having sex with someone else so there it is.'

A better explanation than Mab's would have been: "The protection is a feedback loop between the lover and the beloved. When one of them dies it fades quicker than if mere distance separates them." That gets Jim out of the corner he painted himself into without making it seem that ones later loves don't matter as much, which is an odd position to espouse when writing about characters with multi-century lifespans.

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DF Spoilers / Re: Continuity drift - Lara and soul gazes
« on: January 19, 2026, 03:42:11 PM »

This is about the only thing I dislike about the Dresden files books.  After the first 6 books explained the "Blue Beetle" to us over and over and over I was like "Yeah Jim, I already freakin know this....."   If someone starts reading a book series at the end they deserve to be lost and not clued into the small details..

It's funny. In the first book of a series the author is enjoined not to make a lot of digressions to explain characters and situations as distracting from the action and anyway the mystery builds engagement and suspense. In later books you get the main character asked a question on page 2 which causes him/her to consider the appearance and previous interactions with multiple people for four pages (to inform new readers what longtime readers already know) and then a reply of "no" when the reader has forgotten what the question was.

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DF Spoilers / Re: Thomas and the Svartelves
« on: January 18, 2026, 07:38:08 PM »
Will the discovery that Nemesis was behind the attack on Etri, will that remove the charges and enmity against Thomas?

There's a passage in "Bombshells" that might be key if Thomas becomes seen as merely a hammer.

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“What about the turtlenecks?” I asked.
“What of them?”
“Will you . . . deal with them?”
Etri just looked at me. “Why would we?”
“They were sort of in on it,” I said.
“They were property,” said the svartalf. “If a man strikes you with a hammer,
it is the man who is punished. There is no reason to destroy the hammer.
We care nothing for them.”

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DF Spoilers / Re: Continuity drift - Lara and soul gazes
« on: January 18, 2026, 04:42:53 PM »
I have a feeling a few key beta readers have left in the last few years the ones who really pick up on tiny things.

I remember the good old days of these old forums and Jim and prescille and so many close to Jim were active here. There was a trust in Jim’s writing, everything felt so deliberate and thorough. And while the story is still very strong (12M is a favourite) I can’t help but think the tightness of the writing since PT is gone. It’s small things but then again Justine being on the island in cold days but it being the entire plot point for battle ground and the Jim claiming in an interview actually she wants nfected then.. it could get really plot holish and messy if they don’t tighten things up and pronto. More is at stake.

I think this is a problem generally with series that a) have more than a dozen books and/or b) have large gaps between publication dates. Then there's the fatal flaw of doing a "untold story from earlier" book, which Jim has avoided doing ... so far.

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DF Spoilers / Re: Thomas and the Svartelves
« on: January 16, 2026, 05:13:15 PM »
I could see the duress being a reason for the svartelves to forego killing Thomas, but he still murdered one of their own and a very high weregild would still be demanded.

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DF Spoilers / Re: Twelve Months, chapter one
« on: January 10, 2026, 08:42:11 PM »
:o  ... ??!? ...   ???

I was gonna say, "not possible, Blampires cannot."

But Harry does still know the secrets of the Word of Kemmler.

And we know from the more "conversational" passages Harry had (with Cowl & Kumori) that that ilk has some sort of "end death" and "death in service of life" agenda.

(and of course Jim writes the rules, so "possible" is anything Jim writes)

Soooo....

I guess it's Mavra?

How about a freshly turned Yoshimo? Jim might think that more believable than that a centuries old Mavra is suddenly having kids.

Or, maybe Mirror Harry and Mirror Mavra are married with children and that covers that one.

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DF Spoilers / Re: Twelve Months, chapter one
« on: January 09, 2026, 08:23:43 PM »
But if Harry fathers a child with Lara then he'll have fathered a child with a Red Vampire and a White Vampire. Then he'll only need to father one with a Black Vampire to cause reality to collapse.

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DF Spoilers / Re: Monsters
« on: January 07, 2026, 06:24:37 PM »
Just pre-ordered the Paranormal Payback anthology (edited by Jim Butcher and Kerrie Hughes) to be released the mid-April containing a new Goodman Grey story "Mister Petty".

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DF Spoilers / Re: Twelve Months, chapter one
« on: January 03, 2026, 02:49:05 PM »
Possible cure for Thomas?  Interesting that he is now sleeping or in an induced coma, last we heard of him he was screaming suffering from every crime he had ever committed.

Thomas was done with the screaming and dozing before Lara hit the beach back in Peace Talks.

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I felt what my brother felt. Which was not much. There was distant pain, but mostly he had simply sunk into an exhausted stupor. His mind had been overwhelmed by physical stimuli. Now he sought blessed shelter in oblivion. “He’s . . . unconscious.”

Which is amazing. Certainly didn't take too long for Thomas to get through all the pain he'd caused others.

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DF Spoilers / Re: Will he marry her?
« on: December 23, 2025, 05:32:46 AM »
After waiting so long for the book. We've discussed pretty much everything under the sun. But I don't know if this had been asked so I will. Will he or won't he?

Harry will go to the bathroom right before heading to the altar and ... transfer to Mirror Mirror land, leaving Lara at the altar and Mab seething.

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DF Spoilers / Re: Can we see Rudy take up a sword
« on: December 16, 2025, 10:43:20 PM »
I always come back to the similar scene of Michael losing it in the short story "The Warrior" and Harry stopping him from beating an unconscious man with a baseball bat. It mirrors Harry losing it on Rudolph after Murphy's death. The same loss of control, the same "he hurt her" motive, the has to be stopped for the sake of his soul as much as to stop the person getting pounded.


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Cinder Spires Spoilers / Eager for new Cinder Spires book
« on: November 29, 2025, 05:26:32 PM »
Am I a bad person for feeling a greater longing for a new Cinder Spires book which is not even in progress yet, than the release of Twelve Months (and Mirror Mirror if I'm honest)?

The unwritten subtitle of Twelve Months seems like it will be "Wallowing in Angst" and Mirror Mirror's action seems like it will be mainly outside Harry's reality though it will inform Harry's understanding of his own reality through the juxtaposition of alternate events.

Meanwhile, Cinder Spires is still in the straightforward phase of the series.

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DF Spoilers / Re: Out Law, novella (?)
« on: July 21, 2025, 11:16:53 PM »
If the list says "Out Law" occurs after Twelve Months then I suppose it's something Jim is writing now, or proposing to write soon and it will be released next year.

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