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Author Craft / Re: Fight Scenes
« on: August 25, 2012, 12:54:47 PM »
Ordered the book over Amazon.  Many thanks, Quantus.

Glad to know that unlike Fight Club, the folks here will talk about fighting. 

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Author Craft / Fight Scenes
« on: August 22, 2012, 02:37:03 AM »
I've been using John Clements' "Medieval Swordsmanship - Illustrated Methods and Techniques" as my "go to" guide for writing fight scenes, but wondered if any of the other writers out there have any good sources that they use and would be willing to share.  I'd prefer to find something with illustrations since I learn more visually.  Any help would be welcome.

Also, do you have a feel for how many major fight scenes you like to see in the average novel?  Some of the worst crap that I've ever read seems to have some sort of fight scene every other chapter.

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Author Craft / Re: Is it appropriate?
« on: August 22, 2012, 02:25:40 AM »
Ouch.  Copyright and intellectual property issues.  No easy answer here. 

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Up to 160,000 words now.  Working on the climax, and had a flash of insight as I was struggling how to pull off a particular scene.  Why do those moments always happen at the worst time?  Driving, in the shower, at work . . . .

Anyway, just wanted to echo the thoughts of others that writing is something that comes with practice.  I hated writing in high school.  Muddled through big writing projects in college by handing in term papers warm off the printer.  Learned how to write during graduate school and now as part of my job.

So, for those of you who are doing creative writing while still in high school, I think you are ahead of the curve.

Best of luck.

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Author Craft / Re: Writing villains
« on: August 17, 2012, 02:11:10 AM »
I think the latest version of the Joker worked so well because we were never really sure what motivated the guy.  He told several stories about how he got his "smile," and each one of them pretty grim.  But he gave a different story seemingly at the drop of the hat.

I think we can all relate to someone who has gone "bad" because of unusual or tragic circumstances in their life, but the Joker kept us guessing as to what that might be.  That was unique.

Also, I think some of the greatest villains aren't necessarily ones who think they're right, but know that they're wrong and relish in believing that they're above or beyond the normal morals.  For example, Hannibal Lechter worked as a villain because he knew he was a killer, but thought himself beyond the rules of society -- "I ate his liver with some fava beans and a nice Chianti."  The same was true of the Joker.

Other villains are memorable simply because they are a complete badass -- like Darth Vader in the "A New Hope."  Or Agent Smith in "The Matrix."  Definitely not people to mess with.

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One possibility is to put your character in an everyday situation and have him/her reflect back on the way it used to be compared with the way it is now.  For example, a trip to a grocery store, movie theater, government office for a driver's license/food stamps/medicare, etc. 

I could imagine that by taking your character through a shopping trip, you could tell the tale of the economy.  By going to the movies, your character could discuss the social impact on society (watching Star Wars would never be the same again).  I could also imagine a character who must visit a government office caught up in a discussion about the changes to the political situation.

By doing it this way, it takes the character and your reader to a more personal level. 

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Back from vacation.  Up to 155,000 words on my first novel.  Started working on the climax, but I know that there are some lose threads/subplots that need to be worked on.  It is a long and slow process, sometimes.

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Nice forum.  Always good to see that there are people who are enthusiastic about their writing.  Also nice to see the encouragement shared between replies. 

I've been working on my first novel for about a 18 months using Jim's formula from his blog.  It works for me.  Up to a little more than 137,000 words.  Probably will end up at around 200k, but tough to tell because who knows what will be added/cut when I begin editing. 

Most of my work is done during the weekends or on vacation.  Taking two weeks off now and hope to add another 20,000 words.

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