be my guest. In general officers "Know a little about a lot" and the Non Commission's Officers (NCO's sgts ect...) "Know a lot about a little" and your pvts and what not are "paid labor."

Awesome post man.  As a man that has been both a military enlisted/officer (im an Artillery officer who has commanded an Infantry Company, a Camp and ive been offered an Artillery Battery in my national guard brigade) and now in law enforcement your concepts are pretty accurate. Your officer and sergeant are a little over powered but in a game your assuming that these are are at the top of their game.  For a more accurate/wet behind the ears officer you could use the Sgt right up but lower guns for a high rapport/presence skill.  

JR. OFFICER: Concepts "wet behind the ears."  "Can't spell Lost without LT."  "What i lack in experience I will make up with enthusiasm."  "Young Stud"

Sgt Concepts: "If i had a sense of humor the army would have issued it to me."  "Sir Listen to me and we will be all right."   "Hates anything with brass (rank for those of you not in the military)."  "Back Bone of the Army,  and my favorite "Officers have Authority, but I have the power"  

Good luck, my wife is a Librarian when shes not playing army. There is a helluva lot more to that degree then I thought.