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Author Craft / Re: Passive...
« on: September 24, 2012, 01:04:34 PM »
I think I was too general in my plea. My problem is that as a writer, the majority of my characters in all of my stories tend to be passive. More of an observer who gets pulled into events and tries to make sense of them. It's an extension of me as a person, I think. So so all my main characters have this side to them.
I guess I'm looking for tips on approaches to writing, a mindset that drives the undercurrent, so that I can make steps toward fixing this problem in all of my writing going forward and not trying to fix just an individual manuscript. I don't know if that makes sense to anyone.
Some genres rely on a kind of passivity. Mysteries need a detective who takes in a scene, collects clues, follows up with detail - makes and tests theories for interrogation - but largely lets the evidence do the driving. Romances tend to be all about the "feels".
But my sci fi stories always get nailed by my writer's group for the passive characters. Have I internalized this too much? Maybe.
(I just typed and erased two graphs of whiny introspection full of parallels with my characters and the real life I live of being a stay at home mom to kids that are in college and high school. Life choices that make me the pit crew for my family who go out into the world. I just saved you from your eyes glazing over... your welcome:) *sigh's and laughs at self*
I guess I'm looking for tips on approaches to writing, a mindset that drives the undercurrent, so that I can make steps toward fixing this problem in all of my writing going forward and not trying to fix just an individual manuscript. I don't know if that makes sense to anyone.
Some genres rely on a kind of passivity. Mysteries need a detective who takes in a scene, collects clues, follows up with detail - makes and tests theories for interrogation - but largely lets the evidence do the driving. Romances tend to be all about the "feels".
But my sci fi stories always get nailed by my writer's group for the passive characters. Have I internalized this too much? Maybe.
(I just typed and erased two graphs of whiny introspection full of parallels with my characters and the real life I live of being a stay at home mom to kids that are in college and high school. Life choices that make me the pit crew for my family who go out into the world. I just saved you from your eyes glazing over... your welcome:) *sigh's and laughs at self*