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Author Craft / Re: Passive...
« on: September 24, 2012, 01:04:34 PM »
I think I was too general in my plea.  My problem is that as a writer, the majority of my characters in all of my stories tend to be passive.  More of an observer who gets pulled into events and tries to make sense of them.  It's an extension of me as a person, I think.  So so all my main characters have this side to them. 

I guess I'm looking for tips on approaches to writing, a mindset that drives the undercurrent, so that I can make steps toward fixing this problem in all of my writing going forward and not trying to fix just an individual manuscript.  I don't know if that makes sense to anyone. 

Some genres rely on a kind of passivity.  Mysteries need a detective who takes in a scene, collects clues, follows up with detail - makes and tests theories for interrogation - but largely lets the evidence do the driving.  Romances tend to be all about the "feels". 

But my sci fi stories always get nailed by my writer's group for the passive characters.  Have I internalized this too much?  Maybe. 

(I just typed and erased two graphs of whiny introspection full of parallels with my characters and the real life I live of being a stay at home mom to kids that are in college and high school.  Life choices that make me the pit crew for my family who go out into the world.  I just saved you from your eyes glazing over... your welcome:)  *sigh's and laughs at self* 


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DF Books / Re: Did you discover the books because of the TV Show?
« on: September 22, 2012, 06:39:36 PM »
I'd love to see an animated version of Dresden Files with the same quality 3D animation as Star Wars: Clone Wars.  In this way you wouldn't have to worry about the age of the actors over the course of the story arc.

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Author Craft / Passive...
« on: September 22, 2012, 06:17:37 PM »
I need help.  I have noticed in my writing that most of my main characters are passive.  They tend to have things happen to them, observe what's going on, internalize he situation, and make decisions after.  I need to make active characters!  Does anyone have any advice for me?

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Display Case / Re: Perfect Casting, part 2
« on: February 13, 2011, 05:43:25 PM »
Adam Baldwin as Warden Morgan!

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Display Case / Re: Perfect Casting, part 2
« on: February 13, 2011, 02:01:19 PM »
Joe Flanigan would be a good match in size/description... but Nathan Fillion has the better drama/comic range.

I vote yes for James Marsters as Bob. 

I would be totally down with the idea of digitally scanning all the actors to capture their facial movements, and then rendering the whole series in 3D animation.  Then age is no longer a problem and you can make the series last as long as their voice can sound the age it should be.

It frees up so many other things too, now you aren't bound by physicality for finding the right actor to look like their characters description and you can prioritize the choices by their acting range and vocal ability for the part.

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Picked apart and totally redid chapter 1, through pass on the rest of it, and I need to redo chapter 8 though hopefully that will not be so gruelling as what I did to chapter 1.  It's probably a good thing that I am seeing the need for this now rather than a year after finishing it, but it sure does make getting a first draft slower, I am about two-thirds of where I'd expect to be in wordcount for this span of time with this project.

Also, I think this bunch of people do actually have this culture's standard fusion reactors after all, so the cool liquid-salt deep-burn fission reactors wait until the next volume.  Damn it. (Which are in context the equivalent of, say, not having got the internal combustion engine when we did and instead having immensely advanced, sleek, efficient steam engines running everything.)

*stands and cheers*  Good for you!  Now I need to put my butt in the chair and spend time on my edits today!  Thanks for sharing your progress, I'm shamed/inspired to work on mine after reading it. 

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I keep my writing desk in the kitchen (next to the big sliding door so I have lots of light) and above my desk is a grease board where my family keeps track of messages, basic schedules (Who's home for dinner tonight?) and our yearly goals.  My goal this year is to edit Echo.  When I am super sick of rewriting, I will start a different story and put in as many words as I can into that project.  In this way, when I am procrastinating on one thing, I can make progress on the other. 

I think you are right though, it's like laundry or the dishes, ya just gotta do it.  So no more whining.  Thanks for the company.

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It sounds to me like you have your priorities in the right spot. 

You are much further along the road than I am.  I haven't had enough sales to make the SFWA , but I know the current secretary (Mary Robinette Kowal)  I met her a friends writing workshop. 

This is my first novel, and it's got enough flaws that it really needs a total rewrite.  I'm just having a hard time getting motivated.

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I joined here a while ago... didn't post much and lost track of the site.  Recently found it again.  I was happy lurking and catching up with the other posts, then I found this section.   

I have a few stories published online and recently finished my first novel.  It's 520 pages (over 100,000 words) long and desperately needs to be edited.  I feel whelmed because it needs so much work.  Does anyone know any tricks for motivating yourself?  I've been procrastinating.  :-(

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