My few thoughts. I like it.

To knnn:

However, it is possible that the headache from TC was in fact the result of Nemesis trying to take control. It's very likely it had some knowledge of Morgan plan and wanted Dresden to kill him.

In response to the pain: Lash doesn't realize the pain she's causing in dresden until Demonreach points it out? Both of these explanations are somewhat thin, but hell, with my wife's cooking thin is my middlename.

Finally, Rashid straight up says its impossible to determine with any certainty if someone is infected. Or perhaps I'm misremembering that conversation.

Hey, I've used this program on my desktop, and I agree. It works really well.

However, i'm trying to get it to work on my labtop, without any luck. My computer won't let me download and update to version 4.0 of Microsoft.net framework. Does anyone know why that is or if there is anyway around this? I would really like to use this program and any help would be greatly appreciated. My laptop uses xp, if that helps.