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Author Craft / Re: Author In Progress
« on: January 11, 2007, 04:53:08 AM »
Name's Amanda, I'm a college student, part-time librarian, and fledgling novelist.  The title (cause I finally have one) of my modern-day fantasy novel is Chaos Unbound.  I'm writing it, most importantly, for me, to show myself that I can indeed write a novel.  It actually started out as a drabble...just bits and pieces of things, and then one day I sat down and saw that I had a...gasp!...novel forming.  It went from there, to become this fully-fledged world...I'm sure most, if not all, of you know what's that's like.  I'd say I'm doing all right so far...190 pages, 17 chapters, typed, and counting.... :-)

I wanted to encompass elements that I love about modern fantasy novels, like Jim's and Kim Harrison's, but I also had something I really, really wanted to focus on...a team.  With the story being first person, obviously one member sticks out from the rest, but I wanted the reader to feel as if they'd been thrown in with these four people, and they were seeing it from Lauren's (my narrator) point of view.  Maybe this is pretentious, but I wanted to throw the reader into the situations and have them, perhaps, feel as Lauren feels...like they don't have all the pieces sometimes, but they will eventually. 

It's my first attempt at a longer first-person narrated story, and I must admit, after writing in third-person for so long, I'm really enjoying doing it from one perspective.  Lauren's an interesting gal, and her relationships with her team members are very different, given that some of the members haven't been a part of her life as long as...well, Morgan has.  And no, that's not a reference at all to Jim's Morgan...I started writing this novel before I read any of Jim's books, so it's just one of those funny coincidences. ;-) 

I don't know about the rest of you, but I enjoy a story with a puzzle to it...I know when I read Storm Front I had a great time trying to piece out Harry's puzzle right along with him.  So I tried to encompass that kind of element into my novel.  We'll see what happens...if I think that, eventually, I've edited it to a point where I'll send it into a few publishers, great...if I get rejected (which will happen, I know), no big deal.  My life's pursuit isn't staked into this novel.  I wrote it for me, like I said earlier...I've got a few friends that want to read it when I'm through, and that's all fine and good.   I will be writing at least one more book, if not three or four to go along with Chaos Unbound, but I plan those to be later...far later in the future, unless by some ungodly chance my novel gets picked up by a publisher.  That's a different matter. :-) Good luck to you all...happy writing!

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Author Craft / Re: Jim speaks much truth
« on: July 26, 2006, 08:07:55 PM »
Jim certainly gives good advice, and I agree...his bit on LJ about character development was a huge help to me. In my reading and library work, I've run across some memorable characters: Harry Dresden, obviously; of course Bob is as well, because now everyone wants a talking skull...:) Other characters like Douglas Preston and Lincoln Child's Special Agent Aloysius Pendergast, Kim Harrison's Rachel Morgan, Janet Evanovich's Stephanie Plum, and Jeffrey Deaver's Lincoln Rhyme are all very memorable characters in modern fiction.

They're all memorable for different reasons. Harry is sarcastic and has a great sense of humor, but what makes him stick out, for me, is his heart. Yes, he may sling spells and have more than a few questionable allies in his line of work, but he is a guy who will do whatever it takes to protect the ones he cares about. What also strikes me with Harry is that his character has evolved, but not disappeared. There are other writers, whom I won't mention, whose characters have lost their touch, their uniqueness.

The other characters I mentioned have very unique attributes to them as well. Special Agent Pendergast is a New Orleans native, old money, whose complexion is white as a sheet, and he wears only black, tailored suits. He's a brilliant mind who has old-world tastes and a general...oddness about him. Of course, having a psychotic younger brother out to kill you (Diogenes Pendergast) also helps. :) Rachel Morgan's got her own array of spells and magic, along with a pixie sidekick, Stephanie Plum's a klutzy bounty hunter, and Lincoln Rhyme is a crippled, but brilliant, criminal analyst.

It's just like Jim said on his LJ (as I loop back around to the starting point of this reply)...you've got to make them memorable, because otherwise, they're as flat as the page they've been printed on.

Yes, your characters need, and, if you really want to go somewhere with your writing, are required to be interesting and three-dimensional. Otherwise...yeah, that whole "flat as the page they've been printed on" thing is very appropriate. :) That's why I love Jim's writing so; he never has any flat characters.

Also, I give you kudos for loving Pendergast; I adore him! ;D Preston and Child really struck gold with him and his series! I'm just so thrilled to see a Southern character who' s really smart and stylish, and who isn't portrayed as being a stupid, inbred hick! Because, despite what people may think, there aren't very many people from the South who are that way, thankyouverymuch.

Sorry. Rant over. :D Good post, pinkdoom!


Woohoo!  Why thank you, harryismyhero!  Pendergast is just...different, in the good kind of way :)  He struck me in Relic, and I read every book from there on out!  (By the way...read Book of the Dead yet?  Let me know what you thought!!)  I'm so glad to have found another Pendergast fan!  Character is so very important, and, once again circling back to the original point of this thread, and without character, the entire plot fails.  I don't care how good it is, how unique or original or Pulitzer Prize winning it may be...characters make the story, because they are the story.

Good rant, harryismyhero...nothing wrong with a good rant! :)

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Author Craft / Re: In Line With Outlines?
« on: July 20, 2006, 12:44:00 AM »
I rebel against outlining.  I have since the sixth grade.  I always hated it when teachers wanted an outline for every freaking assignment/essay.  So, when I started writing when I was fourteen, no outlines for me.  It's been that way ever since.  I'm no stellar author, but I think, for me, a story works better based off of one idea...then I hop from idea to idea, writing notes and bits and bobs of things in a notebook when they strike me.  Which is ususally right when I'm getting ready to go to bed.  So I don't sleep.  ;D  I'm also a big fan of sitting down and just writing...anything that comes to mind in any kind of relation to the story, when I'm stuck/blocked.  Some of my better ideas have come out of that "free writing", and whatever isn't of any use, I usually hold onto for a bit and then discard it.  Outlining, for me, is uber-pressure, as if I'm supposed to come up with something to put down.  I work well under pressure, but not the uber pressure.

Of course, that pressure is all in my head, and I've several people tell me I need my head checked....:)

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Author Craft / Re: Good books on writing
« on: July 08, 2006, 05:02:36 PM »
I just got done reading Spunk & Bite:  A Writer's Guide to Punchier, More Engaging Language and Style by Arthur Plotnik.  A fairly short read, and I thought it was really useful for today's reading audiences.  Check it out.

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Author Craft / Re: Fanfiction - Good or Evil?
« on: June 28, 2006, 06:01:01 PM »
My original writing had its starts in the fan fiction I wrote when I was a teenager (13 years old to around 16).  Like anyone familiar with the fan fiction world, I know there's the good, the bad, and the really, really ugly.  When I wrote fan fiction, it was because I was a huge fan of whatever fandom I was writing in, and I wanted to show my appreciation of that world and the people who created it.  It was never meant as anything but flattery.  But I know people who are frighteningly possessive of these worlds, so much so that they become warped, thinking that they're not just good, but better than the fandom's creator(s).  *shudder*  It was a tool I used to learn how to plot storylines, use characters, and understand the nature of language.  But it was just that: a tool, a way to practice.  Eight years later, I think I'm a better writer because of the practice I got.

While fan fiction can be fun, writing your own material is so much better. 

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Author Craft / Re: Jim speaks much truth
« on: June 20, 2006, 03:54:25 PM »
Jim certainly gives good advice, and I agree...his bit on LJ about character development was a huge help to me.  In my reading and library work, I've run across some memorable characters:  Harry Dresden, obviously; of course Bob is as well, because now everyone wants a talking skull...:)  Other characters like Douglas Preston and Lincoln Child's Special Agent Aloysius Pendergast, Kim Harrison's Rachel Morgan, Janet Evanovich's Stephanie Plum, and Jeffrey Deaver's Lincoln Rhyme are all very memorable characters in modern fiction.

They're all memorable for different reasons.  Harry is sarcastic and has a great sense of humor, but what makes him stick out, for me, is his heart.  Yes, he may sling spells and have more than a few questionable allies in his line of work, but he is a guy who will do whatever it takes to protect the ones he cares about.  What also strikes me with Harry is that his character has evolved, but not disappeared.  There are other writers, whom I won't mention, whose characters have lost their touch, their uniqueness. 

The other characters I mentioned have very unique attributes to them as well.  Special Agent Pendergast is a New Orleans native, old money, whose complexion is white as a sheet, and he wears only black, tailored suits.  He's a brilliant mind who has old-world tastes and a general...oddness about him.  Of course, having a psychotic younger brother out to kill you (Diogenes Pendergast) also helps. :) Rachel Morgan's got her own array of spells and magic, along with a pixie sidekick, Stephanie Plum's a klutzy bounty hunter, and Lincoln Rhyme is a crippled, but brilliant, criminal analyst.

It's just like Jim said on his LJ (as I loop back around to the starting point of this reply)...you've got to make them memorable, because otherwise, they're as flat as the page they've been printed on.

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