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Title: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Snark Knight on May 05, 2020, 06:58:23 PM
So, looks like Irwin & Connie are going to be on the bench as local allies, and / or figure into the Maggie Jr. spinoffs...
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: magnuskn on May 05, 2020, 08:59:10 PM
Honestly? With the way things are going, I'm worried about their safety. That's perfect placement to get them to be part of the casualties of whatever is going to happen.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 05, 2020, 09:39:00 PM


  The subject of being able to have children came up, echos the surprise about Justine getting pregnant.  In love but seemingly not burning at touch having something to do maybe with the fact that neither are fully human.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Dina on May 05, 2020, 11:03:04 PM
Yes, I found that interesting, Mira. And Magnus? I really hope they are going to be all right.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: g33k on May 06, 2020, 01:32:02 AM

I don't recall... did we know before this that Connie is
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Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Yuillegan on May 06, 2020, 02:50:28 AM
Is she G33k, where did it say that?

But yes, it seems these two lovebirds will be making an appearance in Peace Talks and/or Battle Grounds. As allies of Harry, but also possibly as extra bodies. More likely, they will be allies replacing those that die during the next two books. It's a common enough move in a series.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Dina on May 06, 2020, 06:00:04 AM
@Yuillegan So, the Alphas are going to die? (I think they are more or less on the same spot that those kids)

g33k, what?
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Yuillegan on May 06, 2020, 06:34:25 AM
The ones that are still around, probably. Apparently according to a bizarre WOJ some of the Alphas just wrote of their experiences as drug induced delusions in college. Which to me sounds insane.

I suspect Will and Georgia might bite the dust. They are long-time characters with enough emotional value to be worth killing off, without being detrimental to Harry's future or messing up the series. Technically no character is safe but you can always work out who probably won't go. I don't think Andi will necessarily - unless Jim wants to make Butters' story darker.

Michael will probably die at some point in the series (likely in some incredibly selfless act of sacrifice). It would upset enough people reading it and makes for a good scene (the stuff Jim loves). I doubt any of his kids except Daniel or Molly will die, and almost certainly not Charity. Unless the series gets really dark - but Jim tends to balance things well enough. But we know of course that none of the Carpenters die in the next two books (confirmed from the Christmas short story).

Maggie is so safe she might as well be invulnerable. Which doesn't mean Mouse is but I think he'll be around for a while. Jim loves dogs and I doubt he would kill off Mouse just for the emotional pay off. Tbh it would upset me more than many of the characters.

But here is my list of those that are being circled by the Angel of Death:
- Thomas (Yeah...that's coming eventually)
- Murphy (almost certainly in the next two books, probably just after her and Harry finally sort their relationship out)
- Ebenezar (Death of the mentor is a pivotal moment in any book, for any number of reasons. I feel that it might happen somewhere in the next two books)
- Alphas (excluding Andi)
- Ramirez (Perhaps trying to keep up with Harry. Has awful luck. Maybe even fighting Harry's darker allies. Certainly things are being set up to have them at the opposite sides of the table)
- Luccio (For sure will die soon)
- The Merlin (probably doing the right thing, but too little too late)
- Ancient Mai, Listens-to-Wind, Gatekeeper
- Titania (but only in the BAT)
- Mab (almost certainly in the BAT)
- Vadderung (I mean, he is fated to die in Ragnarok)
- Mac (but only in the BAT)
- One of the Mothers
- Lea (I am mixed on this...she also makes a perfect Mab replacement)
- Gard (But not in the next two books)

Characters exist to serve the story. This story is getting increasingly violent and deadly and horrifying. The goofy PI Wizard novels are gone and are slowly being replaced with a Warrior-Wizard in the midst of a deadly conflict between the epic powers of the universe. Some will dislike that, some will love it. But that's how it was always going to go. Which means that a lot of the cast will get killed off eventually. It will break our hearts, develop the remaining characters and push the story along, and it will make room for new characters. Just the way of things.

Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Maz on May 06, 2020, 01:28:24 PM
I don't recall... did we know before this that Connie is
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I think you're misreading that line.  She is referring to being in Lara's territory, not her Father's.  She isn't going to refer to her Father as "Count Barrrowill" or whatever.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 06, 2020, 03:00:16 PM
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Characters exist to serve the story. This story is getting increasingly violent and deadly and horrifying. The goofy PI Wizard novels are gone and are slowly being replaced with a Warrior-Wizard in the midst of a deadly conflict between the epic powers of the universe. Some will dislike that, some will love it. But that's how it was always going to go. Which means that a lot of the cast will get killed off eventually. It will break our hearts, develop the remaining characters and push the story along, and it will make room for new characters. Just the way of things.

Yeah, it was that off beat PI/Wizard story line that attracted me to Dresden in the first place.  I too lament that the direction it is headed seems to be the more standard fantasy route.. 
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Con on May 06, 2020, 03:56:33 PM
I'm actually enjoying the more fantastical elements, supernatural nations and power becoming greater.

As for academic supernatural intellectualss I always thought that'd be the Alpha's role.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: AClone on May 06, 2020, 07:37:43 PM
So, looks like Irwin & Connie are going to be on the bench as local allies, and / or figure into the Maggie Jr. spinoffs...
With school starting in August, I was thinking that it would be hurrying things for them to manage to be in Chicago by July, in time for Peace Talks/Battle Ground. This seems more like a convenient setup for the Maggie stories.

That St. Mark's is applying for Accorded Neutral Ground status was also interesting. Why wouldn't they already have it--unless Jim is "up to something"?
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Dina on May 07, 2020, 03:23:19 PM
Yeah, it was that off beat PI/Wizard story line that attracted me to Dresden in the first place.  I too lament that the direction it is headed seems to be the more standard fantasy route..

Yes, same here.

@Yuillegan, the trailer makes me hope Mister will be safe.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: AClone on May 07, 2020, 08:33:40 PM
The ones that are still around, probably. Apparently according to a bizarre WOJ some of the Alphas just wrote of their experiences as drug induced delusions in college. Which to me sounds insane.

I suspect Will and Georgia might bite the dust. They are long-time characters with enough emotional value to be worth killing off, without being detrimental to Harry's future or messing up the series. Technically no character is safe but you can always work out who probably won't go. I don't think Andi will necessarily - unless Jim wants to make Butters' story darker.


I’m not sure that you see characters the same way as Jim does. As far as long time characters being effectively disposable and readily replaced by newcomers, remember what Jim has repeatedly said about being “too lazy” to write up new characters. At this stage of the series, there isn’t really time to fully develop new characters.

Yes, in the Christmas Story short, Harry was clearly feeling the guilt of people he knew being dead. Just remember, he felt the same way when Kirby died—whom we had barely seen on page. That death toll could include people as peripheral as Rawlins—or Mrs. Spunkelcrief. Shoot, he’d probably feel guilty if people like Hendricks or even Rudolph died—because he knew them as real people.

And it would hardly be unlike Jim to include a redemptive arc for even someone like Rudolph in the middle of what Battle Ground appears to be. Making even a worm a sympathetic character.

As far as anyone being “safe” I’m not sure there is such a thing. It wouldn’t surprise me to find that Jim diced out the fates of all of the tertiary characters for a book like BG. I can just see him: “Crap, Andi! Why’d you have to go and roll an eighteen here! That’s a critical failure!”

Or a three, of course. Whatever scale he’s using.

I will say that there is one absence from the Christmas Story scene that seems ominous to me. And no, not just because the older Carpenter kids didn’t make it back from college or on leave for Christmas. But that’s for that thread, so I’ll leave that alone.

Oh, if you’re worried about the Wizard/gumshoe thing, Harry still has a few books left to get back to that gig. It’ll just be on a bigger scale. And part of me is wondering if Murphy will get her PI license. Guess we’ll see.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 07, 2020, 09:41:43 PM
In love but seemingly not burning at touch having something to do maybe with the fact that neither are fully human.
Jim has said that power differences in the relationship could cause that. I think he said that in relation to Irwin and Connie specifically, but I don't recall it well enough to say for sure.

Apparently according to a bizarre WOJ some of the Alphas just wrote of their experiences as drug induced delusions in college. Which to me sounds insane.
Unless they were stoned the whole time anyway. In that WoJ, he also said one of them ended up in a mental institution. That one was probably a little too honest and not at all insane.

And it would hardly be unlike Jim to include a redemptive arc for even someone like Rudolph in the middle of what Battle Ground appears to be. Making even a worm a sympathetic character.
Rudolph admitting the error of his ways would be a good way to show the masquerade breaking or slipping and could be used to redeem him enough to make some readers a little sympathetic if he died.

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I get to be in Lara’s territory, not my father’s.
I think I found this to be the most interesting tidbit. We don't really know much about the structure of the White Court, but now we know that House Raith at least has territories. It may be that individuals in the Court have territories and it isn't limited to one house. I think that's likely, but we don't know that.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Snark Knight on May 07, 2020, 10:55:37 PM
That St. Mark's is applying for Accorded Neutral Ground status was also interesting. Why wouldn't they already have it--unless Jim is "up to something"?

Well, the whole supernatural ecosystem seems to be heating up. In more normal times, "don't shit where your offspring may have to eat one day" was probably protection enough. But when it's five minutes to midnight as far as the immortals are concerned ...
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: morriswalters on May 07, 2020, 11:07:56 PM
I think I found this to be the most interesting tidbit. We don't really know much about the structure of the White Court, but now we know that House Raith at least has territories. It may be that individuals in the Court have territories and it isn't limited to one house. I think that's likely, but we don't know that.
Apex predators. Territorial and possessive.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: g33k on May 08, 2020, 04:30:41 AM
Is she G33k, where did it say that?

g33k, what?
I think you're misreading that line.  She is referring to being in Lara's territory, not her Father's.  She isn't going to refer to her Father as "Count Barrrowill" or whatever.

Yeah... Sorry all.

Total brainfart on my part.

What I conflated was being close to WHOSE mother (Irwin's mother, who is a mortal), with being close to the White Queen...

 :-[
 ::)
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Avernite on May 08, 2020, 08:23:20 AM
It's also kind of in-the-face about how obvious Lara's takeover is by now, if even a non-vampire who wasn't involved in events knows it. Makes the Whites seem kind of wacky, that they don't just end the charade.

But well, that's apparently how they operate.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 08, 2020, 06:09:39 PM
@Morris: Yeah, it totally makes sense with what we know of the White Court. The White Monarch is more of a feudal king than an absolute monarch. It stands to reason, but we didn't know that power was that distributed in the houses of the White Court. It leads me to believe that the White Court is much larger than the novels have so far made them out to be.

@Avernite: Well we do have to consider that Harry was repeatedly impressed with both River Shoulders' and Irwin's intelligence. It's implied that the Forest People have superhuman intelligence. Before someone dismisses the Forest People's intelligence because of the Genoskwa, I would note that the Genoskwa objects strongly to being considered one of the Forest People and behaves very differently. He may be a subspecies or just a mentally retarded by comparison member of the species.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: g33k on May 08, 2020, 09:14:03 PM
@Avernite: Well we do have to consider that Harry was repeatedly impressed with both River Shoulders' and Irwin's intelligence. It's implied that the Forest People have superhuman intelligence...

The Forest people also have magic on a scale and scope that baffles Harry, who's quite a powerful (human) wizard himself.  If they wanted to penetrate the secrets of the White Court, I've no doubt that they could!

And... it's just possible that the Connie/Irwin thing makes Strength of a River in his Shoulders want to find out all he can about the White Court...

Last but not least... Connie could have known, and let the detail slip out.  I get the feeling she's VERY unhappy with the limitations the Whamps try to put on their young, and may have spilled that secret intentionally.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 08, 2020, 11:13:30 PM
It's also implied heavily that Marcone figured it out, so it wouldn't be surprising if River Shoulders and/or Irwin figured it out for themselves when others hadn't.

It also wouldn't surprise me if it was a widely suspected if not known secret.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Yuillegan on May 09, 2020, 12:46:25 AM
Yeah, it was that off beat PI/Wizard story line that attracted me to Dresden in the first place.  I too lament that the direction it is headed seems to be the more standard fantasy route.. 

I'm actually enjoying the more fantastical elements, supernatural nations and power becoming greater.

As for academic supernatural intellectualss I always thought that'd be the Alpha's role.

I don't necessarily lament the direction the series is taking. It had to go this way for the books to grow. If the series became merely episodic i.e. each story was self-contained and didn't move the plot forward I suspect it wouldn't have been successful. I was sucked in by the initial premise, and I loved those original stories. But I am relishing the dial being turned up for the current part of the series. I must admit though, Skin Game and Ghost Story were unfortunately not very strong novels as compared to much of the series and I am excited about Peace Talks and Battle Grounds getting Harry back in the world. And it seems like Harry will be doing a mix of his old and new roles: PI, Warden and Knight. So I am quite hopeful the next two books will manage to balance things. But I have missed Harry's interactions with the supporting cast - so it will be good to see that come back too (even if people are killed off).

I’m not sure that you see characters the same way as Jim does. As far as long time characters being effectively disposable and readily replaced by newcomers, remember what Jim has repeatedly said about being “too lazy” to write up new characters. At this stage of the series, there isn’t really time to fully develop new characters.

Yes, in the Christmas Story short, Harry was clearly feeling the guilt of people he knew being dead. Just remember, he felt the same way when Kirby died—whom we had barely seen on page. That death toll could include people as peripheral as Rawlins—or Mrs. Spunkelcrief. Shoot, he’d probably feel guilty if people like Hendricks or even Rudolph died—because he knew them as real people.

And it would hardly be unlike Jim to include a redemptive arc for even someone like Rudolph in the middle of what Battle Ground appears to be. Making even a worm a sympathetic character.

As far as anyone being “safe” I’m not sure there is such a thing. It wouldn’t surprise me to find that Jim diced out the fates of all of the tertiary characters for a book like BG. I can just see him: “Crap, Andi! Why’d you have to go and roll an eighteen here! That’s a critical failure!”

Or a three, of course. Whatever scale he’s using.

I will say that there is one absence from the Christmas Story scene that seems ominous to me. And no, not just because the older Carpenter kids didn’t make it back from college or on leave for Christmas. But that’s for that thread, so I’ll leave that alone.

Oh, if you’re worried about the Wizard/gumshoe thing, Harry still has a few books left to get back to that gig. It’ll just be on a bigger scale. And part of me is wondering if Murphy will get her PI license. Guess we’ll see.


Indeed I don't see the characters the way Jim does, no one does. Because none of us are Jim (I think...I wouldn't put it past him to have a secret account - I see you Butcher!) So of course I might make wrong guesses about his choices. But I think my guesses are pretty good based off what I know and what I observe. I guess we will just have to wait and see.

The thing is though, he isn't necessarily developing new characters. He is developing established minor characters from short-stories (at least in my example using the Job Placement short story characters). So it isn't really a stretch. And you might even say there is a set-up; we have seen the incredible physical and magical power of the Bigfoot types more recently (and Jim has said he is a Big fan of them, especially in recent interviews). So perhaps he is trying to give Harry a big "tank" type ally. Which doesn't necessarily mean he will kill off Will and Georgia. But he WILL be killing off characters. That's for sure.

I wouldn't worry about the Carpenters. They would have been FAR more morose had one of them been dead.

As above, not so worried about the Wizard gumshoe thing. I am not sure it would be appropriate for Harry to return to his old gig. But in going forward, something of his old life might be gained. He will always be a detective in his personality, and he will always be trying to solve the mystery to stop the "bad guys".
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 09, 2020, 01:50:22 AM
I am not sure it would be appropriate for Harry to return to his old gig.
I don't know. I think it's a great way for a warden to operate. I'm not sure if there's a better way, given the universe as established, for a warden to find out what's going on. Harry's been wardening for about 15 years because he set himself up as a wizard p.i. He should also let S.I know he doesn't need any money if they come up against something they can't handle themselves.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Yuillegan on May 09, 2020, 04:15:45 AM
I don't know. I think it's a great way for a warden to operate. I'm not sure if there's a better way, given the universe as established, for a warden to find out what's going on. Harry's been wardening for about 15 years because he set himself up as a wizard p.i. He should also let S.I know he doesn't need any money if they come up against something they can't handle themselves.

I disagree. He isn't the Warden of Chicago, he was (before his death) the regional commander of the North American Wardens. He IS the Warden of Demonreach, and he IS the Winter Knight. Assuming he has been reinstalled in his position (although the first chapter in Peace Talks suggests Ramirez took that post) he still would have responsibilities beyond Chicago. Being a PI now would be a poor use of his time and a waste of his energies. He has bigger problems than missing wedding rings and mysterious customers. I also suspect that he will have more responsibilities to Demonreach as time goes on, namely continuing the work that Merlin Emrys started but potentially jailbreaks and the like. Not to mention his continued and likely expanding responsibilities to the Winter Fae (remember he has specific duties to each Queen not just Mab). Once he is reintegrated fully into the White Council (and you can count on it not being like it was for him - he will be a full on political actor), he will have further duties as a Warden (assuming the Council doesn't crumble). I mean, the blurb of Battle Grounds implies that the masquerade is about to fall and I imagine the White Council will with it.

S.I. aside from being so small scale as not to matter in the scheme of his problems, is also well beyond their ability to understand. Not to mention parts of his job would likely ask him to break the law. S.I. is essentially irrelevant to the current books. They may have some future role in fighting the supernatural when the masquerade drops, but apart from that I think they are mostly just more bodies for the count.

From a literary point-of-view, S.I. have served their purpose. Harry's new allies are much more suited to his current level of problems. Same with the P.I. job. But the character trait/ability (i.e. his detective mentality and skills) is still highly relevant and useful and gets used every book to some extent.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 09, 2020, 06:03:51 AM
Everything we've seen so far indicates that Harry's going to be reinstated as the regional commander located in Chicago. Also, it's stated in the text that no one was willing to step into that position. I think it was in Cold Case (just before Ramirez tells Molly he specifically rejected the job). Ramirez hasn't taken over Harry's job. He has been given the specific task of security for the White Council during the summit.

When Harry was regional commander, he mostly stayed in Chicago (basically acting as the warden of Chicago) and checked in on the wardens under him to see if they needed help. He occasionally went on missions. Kamp Kaboom and some stuff mentioned in the comic books were explicit. Other missions are implied. Harry only signed on with the condition he wouldn't abandon Chicago. Harry's going to stay centered in Chicago if for no other reason than to give Maggie stability. The Carpenters and her school are in Chicago. (I too would prefer if the story opened up to a broader scale, even if it's just so that his mom's gift isn't just shelved).

Ronald Ruel had enough time to be a noted artist. I know a lot of painters, sculptors, and such. That stuff takes up a lot of time even if you're just doing it semi-pro. I imagine Harry is going to have enough time on his hands that he is going to need to be doing some Chicago wardening. Having an ad in the yellow pages is a good way to do that. Murphy's also going to need something to do (if she doesn't die). She'd be able to handle a lot of the workload of routine detectiving. Harry finding lost wedding rings and such would be a good way to maintain an "officer friendly" reputation since the image we get of wardens, not to mention Winter Knight, is scary and unapproachable. And finally, Jim strongly implied that Faith Astor would be his client who kicks of the BAT. https://www.reddit.com/r/dresdenfiles/comments/gbht7a/do_you_think_we_will_see_faith_astor_again_in_the/fp6ydqh/?context=8&depth=9 (https://www.reddit.com/r/dresdenfiles/comments/gbht7a/do_you_think_we_will_see_faith_astor_again_in_the/fp6ydqh/?context=8&depth=9). I mean, I assume he's a p.i. if he has an office.

S.I. may or may not be relevant for the rest of the series, but if you were the warden of/in a major metropolitan area, and you were on speaking terms with a division of the police force that was assigned all the weird stuff, why wouldn't you talk to them about keeping you in the loop? I doubt S.I. is too worried about the legalities of killing, how did Butters put it, "humanoid but definitely not human" problems. Most cops who know about the supernatural would probably be happy to let Harry deal with any warlocks too. You remember what old Jack Burton says, "cops got better things to do than get killed."

Sure, Harry is probably going to be kept busier by the BSF and the Paranet than by being a p.i. or something from S.I., but that doesn't mean he should ignore all other avenues of finding problems. Up to this point, somewhere around 15 of his adventures wouldn't have happened if he wasn't a wizard investigator for hire. I'm counting short stories. If we're talking just case files, it's 4-6.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: magnuskn on May 09, 2020, 07:12:15 AM
I must admit though, Skin Game and Ghost Story were unfortunately not very strong novels as compared to much of the series and I am excited about Peace Talks and Battle Grounds getting Harry back in the world.

That's interesting. I also thought Ghost Story was a let-down in many aspects, however Skin Game was, IMHO, fantastic in about everything it did. Fascinating how people view such things so completely differently.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Yuillegan on May 09, 2020, 07:20:45 AM
But why would Harry's junior be managing security AND giving him orders? It may have been the case that he initially didn't take the job, but Harry hasn't been active in the White Council for years. And things have been happening with increasing frequency and intensity. There are stronger and more experienced Wardens than Ramirez. The only reason to make Carlos the head of security would be if they wanted the security to be weaker and/or wanted a patsy. Which may well be the case of course.

That was how Harry operated, and he operated poorly. He might have thought he was doing them a favor but unfortunately that isn't the real world. If you just let the kids run themselves you're not actually leading, you're shirking responsibility. The fact that Harry went and helped them occasionally doesn't save him from that. He may have believed he was doing the right thing but he was actually doing both them and the mortals a disservice. But I am aware that Jim won't move Harry from Chicago unless he really has to. So I expect the reduction in his Warden of the White Council duties (and his title as regional commander) will play a hand in that.

Being a part-time artist and Summer Knight is a long way from Harry. Harry Dresden, who actively gets involved in every struggle him can stumble into. Who starts and ends wars, who fights duels, who storms the enemy strongholds and assassinates key people and otherwise causes chaos and destruction (in the name of saving the world from worse). I can't remember the last time Harry has had any free time (except for a bite at BK or IHOP). That quote is an old WOJ, and he has deviated from such in the past. Whilst Faith quite likely will kick off the BAT, don't be surprised if it isn't quite the same as before.

S.I. is both small and chronically, critically underfunded. Without Murphy to advocate for it and protect it I am sure it's more of a political exile than ever. Even before Murphy left they were being clamped down on and gutted. She's been gone a few years now and I doubt it does very much at all.

What's the BSF? Did you Brighter Future Society? I am sure he might have some alliance with BFS but if Marcone and Harry go head to head in the next two books I expect either the BFS will end up being Marcone's supernatural hitters (if Marcone gets stronger) or will disolve.

Maybe so, but the last few books had nothing to do with him being a professional PI and more to do with his natural tendencies towards investigating mysteries and fighting for justice. He hasn't had an office since Changes, and didn't have any client but Susan at that point (which barely counts). Changes existed to break up the paradigm and expect another one coming - as if you recall Jim announced that GS, CD and SG are all part of a mini-trilogy within the series and the next two books (particularly BG) are meant to be the start of a new phase and radically change things up again.

Magnuskn - Honestly it wasn't a bad book in and of itself. I just expected more and wanted to see Harry get back into the world sooner (essentially I wanted to read Peace Talks) and so my expectations were not met and I was a bit disappointed. But I really only have myself to blame. Jim wrote a good book but I just wanted more. Can't please everyone of course.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 09, 2020, 04:03:32 PM
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But why would Harry's junior be managing security AND giving him orders? It may have been the case that he initially didn't take the job, but Harry hasn't been active in the White Council for years. And things have been happening with increasing frequency and intensity. There are stronger and more experienced Wardens than Ramirez. The only reason to make Carlos the head of security would be if they wanted the security to be weaker and/or wanted a patsy. Which may well be the case of course.

Actually I believe Carlos was originally given a higher rank than Harry, would have to go back and check it, but I think that was made clear not long after we meet Carlos and he and Harry were given ranks.   If I remember correctly Harry was given the command of the mid-west and the eastern part of the U.S. where as Carlos was in total command of North America.  Also since Harry was considered dead for the better part of a year, that would cause a command shake up.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Dina on May 09, 2020, 06:50:32 PM
That's interesting. I also thought Ghost Story was a let-down in many aspects, however Skin Game was, IMHO, fantastic in about everything it did. Fascinating how people view such things so completely differently.

I agree with you, Magnuskn. I loved SG. Instead, I am not such a fan of GS and CD.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Arjan on May 09, 2020, 07:40:07 PM
I think ghost story is underestimated purely because Harry does not set enough buildings to fire. It has Lea and she was wonderfull.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 09, 2020, 09:36:25 PM
I think ghost story is underestimated purely because Harry does not set enough buildings to fire. It has Lea and she was wonderfull.

   I liked it as well, it also sets up how Harry's relationship with Mab is going to go.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Arjan on May 09, 2020, 09:46:00 PM
   I liked it as well, it also sets up how Harry's relationship with Mab is going to go.
And it has a lot of world building. It was a very important book for all kinds of discussions here.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: morriswalters on May 09, 2020, 10:20:13 PM
Ghost Story was padding.  It introduced nothing that could have not be done in Cold Days, without adding more than a chapter or so.  Cold Days sets up everything going forward.  The Outsiders, the forever war at the Gates and the final trilogy.  And Jim had been pushing it since at least Proven Guilty.

Skin Games is a great book that is one third fluff, dedicated to the idea that to be a hero you need a sword.  And that the writer can push something that on it's face is ridiculous, and that fan boys will buy it.  And it does a disservice to Butters character arc in the series.

To whoever I just insulted I apologize, without surrendering the point.  Having said that, the other two thirds is a pretty rousing heist plot with a very nice twist.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Dina on May 10, 2020, 03:21:50 AM
I am not saying any of the books are not good, or relevant for the story or even needed, just that I am not a fan, for different reasons. One of those reasons is that I did not find GS or CD as entertaining as SG.
And morriswalters, the books have shown many times that you can be a hero without a sword. SG only says that sometimes a sword is a very useful and cool thing. An idea that comes from long before Jim (for example, in Arthurian legends). And of course, I personally love light sabers.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: morriswalters on May 10, 2020, 04:57:29 AM
I am not saying any of the books are not good, or relevant for the story or even needed, just that I am not a fan, for different reasons. One of those reasons is that I did not find GS or CD as entertaining as SG.
And morriswalters, the books have shown many times that you can be a hero without a sword. SG only says that sometimes a sword is a very useful and cool thing. An idea that comes from long before Jim (for example, in Arthurian legends). And of course, I personally love light sabers.
Feel free not to share my opinion.  I won't be offended.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 10, 2020, 08:10:40 AM
But why would Harry's junior be managing security AND giving him orders?
How is the Western Regional Commander the junior of the Eastern Regional Commander? Harry was appointed as a regional commander when he got his cloak. Ramirez got the job as the "other regional commander in America" sometime after the second to last chapter of Dead Beat. Carlos has been a warden longer. Carlos probably has more points under any system based on superiors' evaluations. Harry is the Warden as opposed to a warden, but the Council, maybe even Senior Council, seems to be largely in the dark on that. So it's a toss up as to who is senior under whatever tie breaker the Council uses.

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Tell me that the Council doesn’t want me to be our emissary.”

Ramirez blinked. “Wait, what? Oh . . . oh God, no, Harry. I mean . . . no. Just no.”

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Ramirez cleared his throat before continuing. “But they will expect you to be the Council’s liaison with Winter, if needed, and to provide security for the Senior Council members in attendance.
That's why Carlos is in charge instead of Harry. 1. Harry would be a terrible choice because there's bad blood between him and just about everyone else, and Harry's a hot head. 2. If anyone was worried about offending Harry by putting someone else in charge of something in his territory, using Carlos, the person Harry asked to be in charge of security at the last official Council activity in Chicago, and the excuse that Harry is in a unique position to serve as the liaison to Winter would be enough to satisfy the protocol droids.

Former Captain of the Wardens, Senior Council Member Blackstaff McCoy, is going to be on the ground there, so I don't think the SC is going to be to worried about the young hotheads going off half cocked. It also pays to note that Carlos is one of the oldest wardens, not counting any who may or may not have been pulled out of retirement, because almost all of the active wardens were killed off in Dead Beat. At this point, the old guard can't be more than 50 or so. Probably less. I want to say the number of wardens was around 300 last time the number came up, but I'm not sure.

Being a part-time artist and Summer Knight is a long way from Harry. Harry Dresden, who actively gets involved in every struggle him can stumble into. Who starts and ends wars, who fights duels, who storms the enemy strongholds and assassinates key people and otherwise causes chaos and destruction (in the name of saving the world from worse).
Being a part-time artist takes up way more time than one weekend a year.

I can't remember the last time Harry has had any free time (except for a bite at BK or IHOP).
During the 363 days out of the year he isn't having the worst weekend of the year?

S.I. is both small and chronically, critically underfunded. Without Murphy to advocate for it and protect it I am sure it's more of a political exile than ever. Even before Murphy left they were being clamped down on and gutted. She's been gone a few years now and I doubt it does very much at all.
Stallings was said to be quite competent, so I'm not so sure it's going to be worse off without Murphy. Murphy hadn't been the one fighting turf wars since Proven Guilty. Honestly, S.I. might be better off. Even accepting your premise, that doesn't mean they aren't going to get all the weird cases in search of a scape goat dumped in their lap anyway. It's been around in one form or another for at least 40 years. It's still going to be a valuable source of information.

All that said, that response is a dodge of my question of if you were a warden in a city of millions, would you want S.I. to keep you in the loop? I ask that question because the answer is an obvious "yes." Harry doesn't have to keep his p.i. business to be kept in the loop, but he does have to offer something of value in return.

What's the BSF? Did you Brighter Future Society?
Yes. I don't think all the other parties we see meeting in GS are just going to quit fighting the good fight if Marcone cuts ties with their "Chicago Alliance." Maybe they loose out on Castle Dresden, but Harry doesn't need that. But if the BFS/Chicago Alliance/whatever does collapse and go away, that's a reason why Harry should re-open his office, not a reason that he shouldn't.

All I'm saying is that advertising as a wizard for hire in the yellow pages is a good way to:
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protect mortals in this area. To be vigilant against supernatural threats in your region.
Luccio describing (some of) the duties of a warden, Dead Beat, Ch. 31.

I could see Harry not reopening his business. I just think it would be a really dumb move from an in universe perspective. It's a good way to have information show up on your door step. It's also a good way to launder his diamond money, but I doubt that will even come up in the books. He may or may not need more money than the money from the diamonds and his warden pay depending on how much he can get for the diamonds and a bunch of other factors we have little to no information on. As such, I'd want a good in universe explanation of why he's not doing it. (Just as a side note, the last in text job Harry had as Harry Dresden, P.I. was one month before Changes).

As for the Ghost Story discussion, GS is currently ranked as number 14 on my best to worst case file list. (Which still puts it higher on my overall best book list than most books I've read). There wasn't a whole lot wrong with it. It was just too slow for my taste. I also think it was mostly unnecessary. My first time through the books, I accidentally skipped it and didn't realize I missed anything until about a third of the way into Cold Days or wherever it was that characters started talking about Harry running around Chicago as a ghost. If you add three or four chapters to Cold Days and Skin Game showing the effect of Harry's suicide on everyone, then you've probably completely covered the themes of Ghost Story. It's always the book that takes me the longest to get through.

Ghost Story was padding.  It introduced nothing that could have not be done in Cold Days, without adding more than a chapter or so.  Cold Days sets up everything going forward.  The Outsiders, the forever war at the Gates and the final trilogy.  And Jim had been pushing it since at least Proven Guilty.

Skin Games is a great book that is one third fluff, dedicated to the idea that to be a hero you need a sword.  And that the writer can push something that on it's face is ridiculous, and that fan boys will buy it.  And it does a disservice to Butters character arc in the series.

To whoever I just insulted I apologize, without surrendering the point.  Having said that, the other two thirds is a pretty rousing heist plot with a very nice twist.
I basically agree except I think you need more than one chapter to cover the points from Ghost Story. I think it's fine for Butters to end up a Knight, but I have trouble with his and Murphy's inverse faith in Harry plot arcs over GS to SG and Butters ending up as the Knight of Faith after his repeated doubting Thomas routines.

I don't think the point is that one needs a sword to be a hero. I do think that one does need the power to affect the outcome of events to be a hero if the end result is to be anything other than having "died heroically" on a tombstone.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: magnuskn on May 10, 2020, 09:41:04 AM
My big points of contention were that Fitz' story was a completely useless waste of time for a throwaway character, which could have been used to flesh out more what happened in the year Harry died, also where the other important characters were in their character arcs and that Murphy's character development in Ghost Story was pretty much completely reversed in Cold Days and hence also a big waste of time. The other stuff was good. But those two points soured the book for me.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 10, 2020, 11:50:04 AM
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How is the Western Regional Commander the junior of the Eastern Regional Commander? Harry was appointed as a regional commander when he got his cloak. Ramirez got the job as the "other regional commander in America" sometime after the second to last chapter of Dead Beat. Carlos has been a warden longer. Carlos probably has more points under any system based on superiors' evaluations. Harry is the Warden as opposed to a warden, but the Council, maybe even Senior Council, seems to be largely in the dark on that. So it's a toss up as to who is senior under whatever tie breaker the Council uses.

Thank you,  that is how I remembered it, it also makes sense that since Harry was considered dead
for the better part of a year and now Winter Knight as well, that Carlos would gain a little more standing since being the Western Regional Commander was his sole job. 
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I basically agree except I think you need more than one chapter to cover the points from Ghost Story. I think it's fine for Butters to end up a Knight, but I have trouble with his and Murphy's inverse faith in Harry plot arcs over GS to SG and Butters ending up as the Knight of Faith after his repeated doubting Thomas routines.

I think Jim has had a lot of trouble with Murphy since he kicked her off the police force.   He has
tried several versions of her and none of them have worked all that well in my opinion. 
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Snark Knight on May 11, 2020, 03:40:55 AM
Everything we've seen so far indicates that Harry's going to be reinstated as the regional commander located in Chicago. Also, it's stated in the text that no one was willing to step into that position. I think it was in Cold Case (just before Ramirez tells Molly he specifically rejected the job). Ramirez hasn't taken over Harry's job. He has been given the specific task of security for the White Council during the summit.
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S.I. may or may not be relevant for the rest of the series, but if you were the warden of/in a major metropolitan area, and you were on speaking terms with a division of the police force that was assigned all the weird stuff, why wouldn't you talk to them about keeping you in the loop? I doubt S.I. is too worried about the legalities of killing, how did Butters put it, "humanoid but definitely not human" problems. Most cops who know about the supernatural would probably be happy to let Harry deal with any warlocks too. You remember what old Jack Burton says, "cops got better things to do than get killed."


Per the conversation with Morgan about the job at the end of DB, Ramirez is also a regional commander, responsible for the west coast. He must have declined the Council trying to get him to manage both regions at once.

As for SI, I'm not too sure where they're going to stand on supernatural civilian vigilantes now that Harry is back in town. It probably depends how humanoid the creatures in question are, and exactly how clued the SI cops are. I don't get the impression Stallings knows as much as Rawlins, let alone on par with Murphy when she was in charge. Although the FBI building being gutted and the Fomor acting more openly probably should have forced Stallings to learn more than he knew as of Changes & Aftermath. I wouldn't count on SI being OK with exterminating things like whampires or technically-human turtlenecks, though. And executing a warlock was still something Murphy was really bothered by as of PG - I really wouldn't count on most of the rest of SI looking the other way for that.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Snark Knight on May 11, 2020, 03:55:34 AM
I don't think the point is that one needs a sword to be a hero. I do think that one does need the power to affect the outcome of events to be a hero if the end result is to be anything other than having "died heroically" on a tombstone.

The Butters short story does set the messaging a bit straighter than just "lightsaber, pwned", too. But he was already trying to do hero stuff before the sword came to him, it's just that he was largely out of his league against the serious threats.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 11, 2020, 11:21:11 AM
The Butters short story does set the messaging a bit straighter than just "lightsaber, pwned", too. But he was already trying to do hero stuff before the sword came to him, it's just that he was largely out of his league against the serious threats.

  Indeed he was, and what was beautiful about his character is he was an ordinary little guy, afraid of most things but trying to do his best.

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As for SI, I'm not too sure where they're going to stand on supernatural civilian vigilantes now that Harry is back in town. It probably depends how humanoid the creatures in question are, and exactly how clued the SI cops are. I don't get the impression Stallings knows as much as Rawlins, let alone on par with Murphy when she was in charge. Although the FBI building being gutted and the Fomor acting more openly probably should have forced Stallings to learn more than he knew as of Changes & Aftermath. I wouldn't count on SI being OK with exterminating things like whampires or technically-human turtlenecks, though. And executing a warlock was still something Murphy was really bothered by as of PG - I really wouldn't count on most of the rest of SI looking the other way for that.

I think any "justice" handed out by any group outside of the laws she enforced all of her life bothered her.  In other words though the execution of warlocks, especially young one who could possibly be redeemed bothered Harry, I think it was for totally different reasons than as to why it bothered Murphy.   I also think that comes down to how a wizard would see things verses a vanilla human  law enforcement officer.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: morriswalters on May 11, 2020, 12:55:45 PM
Whatever importance swords had in the story is history.  Butters can't have sword fights.  His sword cut Nic's in half, something that no other Knight had done to this point.  So unless Nic gets a light sabre he going to have to dance with a more modern weapon. This is my primary beef.

Butter's heroism was established in the museum when he attacked a dangerous wizard with his bare hands, despite his fear.  The light sabre doesn't make him more heroic, it simply makes him a 40 plus male with a plasma cutter.  And one with such bad vision that Jim uses it as a plot device in a short story.

I also realize that I am an endangered minority on this point so I'll let this be my last word on the subject.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 11, 2020, 02:48:48 PM
Whatever importance swords had in the story is history.  Butters can't have sword fights.  His sword cut Nic's in half, something that no other Knight had done to this point.  So unless Nic gets a light sabre he going to have to dance with a more modern weapon. This is my primary beef.

Butter's heroism was established in the museum when he attacked a dangerous wizard with his bare hands, despite his fear.  The light sabre doesn't make him more heroic, it simply makes him a 40 plus male with a plasma cutter.  And one with such bad vision that Jim uses it as a plot device in a short story.

I also realize that I am an endangered minority on this point so I'll let this be my last word on the subject.

   I think you are perhaps missing the point a bit, or maybe you aren't and it is a bit different.  It isn't about the Sword or the skill at wielding it, it is about the meaning behind it. It is about the "why", not the Sword itself, or the skill wielding it.  Murphy's fight with Nic demonstrates that, based on skill alone, she had him beat, but when she went against the meaning and belief behind the Sword, it got broken and she got the snot kicked out of her.   So as you say, Butters is a forty plus year old man with a plasma cutter, which works because he will never be a skilled sword fighter.  However consider, when the Sword transformed itself in his hand, it was adjusting to what would work for him, given his low level of fighting skill because in his heart and mind, Butters can carry out the "why" of the Sword.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 11, 2020, 07:23:59 PM
[1]He must have declined the Council trying to get him to manage both regions at once.

...[2]I don't get the impression Stallings knows as much as Rawlins, let alone on par with Murphy when she was in charge. ... [3]And executing a warlock was still something Murphy was really bothered by as of PG - I really wouldn't count on most of the rest of SI looking the other way for that.
1. That makes sense. Luccio mentions three North American regional commanders that Harry would have to coordinate with. From the end of DB when Morgan has his conversation with Harry up to the most recent info we have, it appears that number was never higher than two.

2. I got the impression that Stallings was highly competent, but I do think Murphy was more clued in than any other member of S.I. Not sure about Stallings v. Rawlins. I do think Stallings would make a better head of S.I. than either of them because a lot of being the leader of a department in a bureaucracy is not causing problems with superiors. Murphy and Rawlins have histories of causing such problems. I feel that Murphy was a bit of a bad leader. Leader's shouldn't take the field if it will immediately cause there to be an absence of leadership.

3. I've worked with cops, have/had several cop friends, and my brother was a cop before retiring. In my experience, most cops are far less concerned with the law than Murphy claims to be. (I say claims because her behavior in FM suggests otherwise). And S.I. is the place they stick all the "dysfunctional" guys. I'd be willing to bet they're okay with coloring outside the lines. Seriously, part of their job is to file false reports. I'm not sure if they'd be fine with executing warlocks, but I'm pretty sure they'd be find with Harry saying he'd handle a problem that they don't want any part of and then just not ask any questions. I think they'd be fine with Harry taking out any creature that fits Butters "humanoid but definitely not human" descriptor. I think wamps aren't going to be officially investigated at all because of Lara's influence. S.I. might be told to drop it and do so after tipping off Harry. Additionally, they may just use Murphy as a go between for a lot of the unofficial stuff.

Butters can't have sword fights.  ...

Butter's heroism was established in the museum when he attacked a dangerous wizard with his bare hands, despite his fear.  The light sabre doesn't make him more heroic, it simply makes him a 40 plus male with a plasma cutter.  And one with such bad vision that Jim uses it as a plot device in a short story.

I also realize that I am an endangered minority on this point so I'll let this be my last word on the subject.
I think we are probably in agreement on 80 to 90% of the stuff about Butters. Much closer to 100% on the quoted portion.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 11, 2020, 08:21:39 PM
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I think we are probably in agreement on 80 to 90% of the stuff about Butters. Much closer to 100% on the quoted portion.

I think if you guys want big Sword fights, Butters isn't your guy,  actually I don't think Sanya is either.
He maybe young and athletic enough for them, but I think he prefers to use his gun.  I think Michael and Shiro were big on using their Swords, it may depend on who is next in line for the Sword of Love..  I think Sanya prefers to use his gun because then he doesn't want to run into the problems that Murphy ran into.  If she had just executed Nic with a gun instead of trying with a Holy Sword, he'd be just as dead and she wouldn't have blown the rules governing the Swords, leaving Nic alive and breaking the Sword.   I think Michael has a few more scruples as did Shiro in this case, and never questioned the idea of giving the coin holder a shot at giving up the coin and redemption.  So they could have big Sword fights, no problem.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Yuillegan on May 12, 2020, 07:03:48 AM
How is the Western Regional Commander the junior of the Eastern Regional Commander? Harry was appointed as a regional commander when he got his cloak. Ramirez got the job as the "other regional commander in America" sometime after the second to last chapter of Dead Beat. Carlos has been a warden longer. Carlos probably has more points under any system based on superiors' evaluations.
Not what I meant. Carlos isn't Harry's junior perhaps in the White Council wardens (although I would point out that amoungst Wizards, and most of the supernatural community, seniority and age go hand in hand). Harry is the more experienced Wizard, and even amongst wardens of the same rank there is always unofficial ranking, which like most jobs tends to go to the most experienced and/or most respected person. Langtry likes Ramirez, but I think both he and harry hardly rank compared to what remains of the old guard. Beyond that though is the fact Harry is the more powerful person - not just magically but politically and personally. He commands a great deal of respect amongst the various powers, and represents a number of powerful individuals (and their "organizations"). Carlos by comparison is a well-liked, unofficial poster boy for the younger wardens. It doesn't even come close. It will be interesting to see how the Council treats him now that he is both Winter Knight, and the Warden of Demonreach. Carlos might have tacit authority, but commanding Harry would be like being the captain of a local men's basketball team when Labron James joins the team. The head of the club might have made you the captain, but leadership and power are more tenuous than titles would like them to be.

Harry is the Warden as opposed to a warden, but the Council, maybe even Senior Council, seems to be largely in the dark on that. So it's a toss up as to who is senior under whatever tie breaker the Council uses.
That's why Carlos is in charge instead of Harry.
I suspect that the fact that almost only the Senior Council know about the Warden position with any depth is that that island and it's purpose were covered up. The power of the position lead to the creation of the wardens (that much is implied), but the original role seems to be far more intense and important than the current emulation. If that position is reintegrated fully...who knows. Considering the first Warden (and warden) was the Original Merlin (Emrys), I suspect that it's likely a former Senior Council role that was done away with. But I am just guessing here.

1. Harry would be a terrible choice because there's bad blood between him and just about everyone else, and Harry's a hot head.
Yes he is. I am not saying that Harry should be the head of security in this situation. But had Harry not died and come back, I think that assuming the Peace Talks were still held in Chicago I believe that security of the talks would have been under Harry's purview (being that he was the Eastern regional commander). I agree that Harry's particular position and tendencies make him a bad candidate but it's no less true that had his tenure not been interrupted he would have been the one in charge.

2. If anyone was worried about offending Harry by putting someone else in charge of something in his territory, using Carlos, the person Harry asked to be in charge of security at the last official Council activity in Chicago, and the excuse that Harry is in a unique position to serve as the liaison to Winter would be enough to satisfy the protocol droids.
I think he used Carlos because he himself was being an advocate for the person on trial. Kinda hard to be impartial... I honestly don't think anyone would care about offending Harry, before or after his death (assuming he didn't want to kill them after - he has a pretty high chance of killing his enemies after all). This will be Harry's first official Council event since his death if I'm not mistaken, he hasn't been fully reintegrated. Not to mention his enormous conflict of interest, as he is now the Winter Knight. The fact they haven't revoked his membership is very interesting. I suspect that they will ask him to be a spy in Winter, and an advocate for them.

Former Captain of the Wardens, Senior Council Member Blackstaff McCoy, is going to be on the ground there, so I don't think the SC is going to be to worried about the young hotheads going off half cocked. It also pays to note that Carlos is one of the oldest wardens, not counting any who may or may not have been pulled out of retirement, because almost all of the active wardens were killed off in Dead Beat. At this point, the old guard can't be more than 50 or so. Probably less. I want to say the number of wardens was around 300 last time the number came up, but I'm not sure.
I suspect that they are including Harry only because A) it is happening in Chicago, B) It's Mab's talks and C) McCoy and the Gatekeeper would definitely have requested his inclusion. Carlos is one of the oldest warden's by mode, but he is still young. There are probably still at least 50 or 60  old guard above him. So he is hardly one of the oldest when he isn't even in the top 20 oldest out of maybe 200-300 wardens. He doesn't even make top 50.

Being a part-time artist takes up way more time than one weekend a year.
During the 363 days out of the year he isn't having the worst weekend of the year?
If you're going off that old stick about each book being "Harry Dresden's worst weekend of the year", I would rethink your position. That was about the how each book was set-up, and was Jim's attitude in the early series. But it hardly counts for Harry's life in the later series, much of which is not shown in the books. From teaching Molly to training wardens before Changes, and afterwards he was Dead for several months, then in physical rehab/Winter Knight training for several more, then Winter Knight missions and then spends most of his time on Demonreach under effectively house arrest only to then go on a heist in the Greek Underworld for the literal Holy Grail. You tell me where his free time is.

The pattern of the old books is gone, that was part of the point of Changes. Harry isn't the wizard gumshoe guy solving murder mysteries. He is the guy trying to save the world now.

Stallings was said to be quite competent, so I'm not so sure it's going to be worse off without Murphy. Murphy hadn't been the one fighting turf wars since Proven Guilty. Honestly, S.I. might be better off. Even accepting your premise, that doesn't mean they aren't going to get all the weird cases in search of a scape goat dumped in their lap anyway. It's been around in one form or another for at least 40 years. It's still going to be a valuable source of information.
They might still get the weird cases, but I am sure they won't be investigated thoroughly like they were when Murphy was in-charge. They are basically the clean up crew, "Hey man see that weird burnt skeleton that has fangs and isn't human but is human sized? Please make that look more like a regular murder case" "No worries Chief, probably just a weird gang thing or terrorists". No weirdness to see here!

All that said, that response is a dodge of my question of if you were a warden in a city of millions, would you want S.I. to keep you in the loop? I ask that question because the answer is an obvious "yes." Harry doesn't have to keep his p.i. business to be kept in the loop, but he does have to offer something of value in return.
But the thing is - Harry hasn't been a warden in Chicago since Changes, and really he wasn't doing much warden stuff in that book. And now that he is back, I don't think he'll have much time to go back to his old routine. So the question you ask is somewhat redundant. Besides, as I said before he can get information on the bigger problems he deals with from better sources like, I don't know, Mab and Kringle? You see where I am going here? He is moving into the majors now - so having his old little league team come and support him (especially when there are so few of the original crew from those days still there) is kinda ridiculous. Not to mention if the White Council falls there won't be anyone doing any wardening at all, and so presumably the masquerade will have fallen or be falling and all hell will be breaking loose. How much time will Dresden have then?

To be honest, I think there is a bit of "golden-age" Dresden Files going on (and you're not the only one thinking it). Harry, and the story by extension, are not what they once were. The evolution from Wizard cross Dirty Harry into Wizard/Superhero and the case files going from literal detective case files (of a sort) to the journal entries of a legend in the making has happened. It was always going to happen. This was part of Jim's plan. It's no surprise either because Jim has told us since day one that he had a big apocalyptic trilogy planned. The series had to build up to that somehow. Dresden isn't going back to his roots for a long-time, maybe ever. We have to accept that and move on. Perhaps some fans will stop reading, but others will celebrate and new fans might join up. I for one want to see where the series is going, and am excited about it. I can always read the earlier cases if I am feeling a bit nostalgic. But better that Jim grows the series organically and logically rather than just going back to what worked for the sake of it, or worse for fan service.

Yes. I don't think all the other parties we see meeting in GS are just going to quit fighting the good fight if Marcone cuts ties with their "Chicago Alliance." Maybe they loose out on Castle Dresden, but Harry doesn't need that. But if the BFS/Chicago Alliance/whatever does collapse and go away, that's a reason why Harry should re-open his office, not a reason that he shouldn't.

I could see Harry not reopening his business. I just think it would be a really dumb move from an in universe perspective. It's a good way to have information show up on your door step. It's also a good way to launder his diamond money, but I doubt that will even come up in the books. He may or may not need more money than the money from the diamonds and his warden pay depending on how much he can get for the diamonds and a bunch of other factors we have little to no information on. As such, I'd want a good in universe explanation of why he's not doing it. (Just as a side note, the last in text job Harry had as Harry Dresden, P.I. was one month before Changes).

I didn't say that the members of the Brighter Future Society would just stop fighting. They will likely just splinter off into their own factional group, as is often the case (unless they all die). But at that point unless everything calms down Harry will be too busy saving the world to go back to being his old self. The world will need Harry Dresden the superhero more than Harry Dresden the PI. There is strong evidence that the series won't calm down, that it will in fact get more wild. Hell, the blurb of Battle Grounds says the world changes forever. It would be a shirking of duty for Harry to bury his head in the sand and go back to his old life while the world is on fire around him, and completely out of character. Not to mention, if the world is burning down would there even BE any cops or clients to help him?




Per the conversation with Morgan about the job at the end of DB, Ramirez is also a regional commander, responsible for the west coast. He must have declined the Council trying to get him to manage both regions at once.

As for SI, I'm not too sure where they're going to stand on supernatural civilian vigilantes now that Harry is back in town. It probably depends how humanoid the creatures in question are, and exactly how clued the SI cops are. I don't get the impression Stallings knows as much as Rawlins, let alone on par with Murphy when she was in charge. Although the FBI building being gutted and the Fomor acting more openly probably should have forced Stallings to learn more than he knew as of Changes & Aftermath. I wouldn't count on SI being OK with exterminating things like whampires or technically-human turtlenecks, though. And executing a warlock was still something Murphy was really bothered by as of PG - I really wouldn't count on most of the rest of SI looking the other way for that.
True enough, it would depend on how humanoid the creatures were. But it could also go the other way i.e. SI might retreat deeper into disbelief and ignorance rather than working harder to find out the truth. Aside from it getting the previous heads of SI fired and police from other units chucked into exile, the supernatural tends to make mortals retreat into delusion (which is really just an allegory for anything people don't understand well). It wouldn't surprise me for SI to work harder at making things look more normal as a response, because confronting the awful truth that there may be a big hidden world - a demimonde - out there would be too terrifying for most of them to contemplate. To some extent, the mortals already do that. Even the White Council when faced with an invisible new threat (the "black council") refused to acknowledge the conspiracy. There is a lot of precedent that says that SI might bury their heads. But even if they did look into it more, likely they would be shut down or Stallings fired, unless they did it very quietly. My guess is they just do their best not to rock the boat.

And I agree - even if they were available and Harry was to go back to full-time being a warden (big ifs), whose to say that the current version of SI would be as helpful as the old one (if not antagonistic).
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 12, 2020, 01:41:10 PM
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Not what I meant. Carlos isn't Harry's junior perhaps in the White Council wardens (although I would point out that amoungst Wizards, and most of the supernatural community, seniority and age go hand in hand). Harry is the more experienced Wizard, and even amongst wardens of the same rank there is always unofficial ranking, which like most jobs tends to go to the most experienced and/or most respected person. Langtry likes Ramirez, but I think both he and harry hardly rank compared to what remains of the old guard. Beyond that though is the fact Harry is the more powerful person - not just magically but politically and personally. He commands a great deal of respect amongst the various powers, and represents a number of powerful individuals (and their "organizations"). Carlos by comparison is a well-liked, unofficial poster boy for the younger wardens. It doesn't even come close. It will be interesting to see how the Council treats him now that he is both Winter Knight, and the Warden of Demonreach. Carlos might have tacit authority, but commanding Harry would be like being the captain of a local men's basketball team when Labron James joins the team. The head of the club might have made you the captain, but leadership and power are more tenuous than titles would like them to be.

Yeah, I think it comes down to the Senior Council doesn't fully trust Harry, never has.  You can begin with how Harry became a full wizard in the first place and the Doom he was placed under.  It was well aired back in Summer Knight when a number of them wanted Harry demoted back to apprentice.  I doubt that for a couple of them there is anything Harry can do to change that.  So
for the sake of unity on the Senior Council as well as the White Council, it is best that a noncontroversial person be in charge, thus Carlos gets a little more power than Harry in the command structure of the wardens.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 12, 2020, 06:04:03 PM
Not what I meant. Carlos isn't Harry's junior ...
Okay. I still think Carlos would be picked, over Harry, for the same reasons as I said earlier. I also don't think anyone would be worried about offending Harry. Carlos is also picked over Harry for the same reason Carlos was picked over Eb. There was a better use for Eb.

it's no less true that had his tenure not been interrupted he would have been the one in charge.
I'm not sure that's the case. Especially if he was still the Winter Knight in that hypothetical.

My point about Carlos being in the top fifth or fourth of wardens by age is more that there aren't a lot of older wardens to go around than Carlos is old because I agree that he isn't old.

You tell me where his free time is.
He's got enough free time to investigate and solve a murder case that isn't his responsibility and plan a trip to the zoo between SG and PT.

I don't see S.I. ignoring Harry instead of giving him information. I don't see why they wouldn't at least hand him a copy of the file and be done with it. Murphy's bosses were never fine with routine S.I. cases being buried. They were constantly pressuring her to come up with answers. I don't think that will change.

[1]But the thing is - Harry hasn't been a warden in Chicago since Changes, and really he wasn't doing much warden stuff in that book. And now that he is back, I don't think he'll have much time to go back to his old routine. So the question you ask is somewhat redundant. [2]Besides, as I said before he can get information on the bigger problems he deals with from better sources like, I don't know, Mab and Kringle? You see where I am going here? [3]He is moving into the majors now - so having his old little league team come and support him (especially when there are so few of the original crew from those days still there) is kinda ridiculous. [4]Not to mention if the White Council falls there won't be anyone doing any wardening at all, and so presumably the masquerade will have fallen or be falling and all hell will be breaking loose. How much time will Dresden have then?
1. Okay. This doesn't answer my question, but it shows me why you didn't answer it, which is better. If Harry stops being a warden and is always busy with a global crisis, then I can see him not keeping up with S.I. I don't think he will always be dealing with a global crisis though because that's basically Jim saying that there's a bunch of interesting stuff happening in Harry's life, but I'm not going to talk about it. Maybe he will completely change the format of the books to where they take place over longer periods of time, but I don't think so. The closest we've gotten to that was CD where the book literally takes place over a few months.

2. Using those sources always comes with a cost. I'm not sure he's going to keep turning to them for information. They might be the source of the future case files, but Harry will still need to work his sources when investigating the cases. Harry doesn't know which ones will be useful and which won't, so it wouldn't make sense for him to cut ties with S.I. The first case Mab gave him had Harry asking Karrin for information.

3. I'm not saying Harry is going to involve them in any of the action. Harry has always been the guy leveraging the little resources everyone else ignored. He used a bunch of pixies to kill a Lady. He still uses pixies. Harry has also always been playing out of his league (except maybe in SF).

4. If the White Council falls, then Harry will need all the support he can get.

But at that point unless everything calms down Harry will be too busy saving the world to go back to being his old self. The world will need Harry Dresden the superhero more than Harry Dresden the PI.
When he's saving the world, he still needs information to do it. He got help from the "boats, boats, boats" guy in CD. Harry's still going to need information. He's still going to need to figure things out.

whose to say that the current version of SI would be as helpful as the old one (if not antagonistic).
Whose to say they won't be more helpful? My point is I don't see why they would be unwilling to exchange information with Harry. The only reason Karrin lasted as long as she did in S.I. was because she had Harry's help. I could see Harry not needing their help in any of the books from here on out and Jim never mentioning them again. I don't think it's likely, especially the Jim just not mentioning it part, but I can see it. I'm not so sure about them not needing Harry's help. I can see them becoming antagonistic in a full breakdown of the masquerade that results in a general "burn the witch" atmosphere. That's the only reason I can see for Harry cutting ties with S.I.

I think Harry is still going to be a p.i., but I would agree that it will continue to play less and less of a role in the story than it has. I wouldn't be too surprised if it mostly only shows up in short stories at this point, but I think it will still be there at least in the background.

A big part of my point isn't that Harry's life is going to be so different, it's more that Harry doesn't know he's heading to the BAT. Harry's going to try to get his life as close to regular as he can if for no other reason than to fight the influence Winter on his life.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Yuillegan on May 13, 2020, 02:07:44 AM
Okay. I still think Carlos would be picked, over Harry, for the same reasons as I said earlier. I also don't think anyone would be worried about offending Harry. Carlos is also picked over Harry for the same reason Carlos was picked over Eb. There was a better use for Eb.
Fair enough, we can agree to disagree who would have got picked. It's a hypothetical situation anyway - Carlos is picked currently. As I said, I don't think anyone has really EVER worried about offending Harry. Although some are fairly wary of him considering his propensity for killing his enemies and often destroying their entire world. Eb wouldn't manage security as he is a Senior Council member now. At most he might manage the wardens, but I suspect that they all report to the Senior Council for different things.

I'm not sure that's the case. Especially if he was still the Winter Knight in that hypothetical.
For the hypothetical to work, Harry never became the Winter Knight. Because it seems pretty clear that no matter what choice Harry made, if he took any deal he would have tried to kill himself (and the Fallen would have crossed the line to push him to do it). What would have been interesting is if Harry hadn't hurt his back and taken a deal, but he and the Grey and the White Councils respectively had teamed up against the Reds. Would the outcome have been the same? Would Harry and his pals have survived? Would the Reds have been wiped out or merely defeated? Or would the Reds have won?

My point about Carlos being in the top fifth or fourth of wardens by age is more that there aren't a lot of older wardens to go around than Carlos is old because I agree that he isn't old.
Yeah but being in the top 5th of oldest wardens is hardly the same as being "one of the oldest wardens". I agree there are not a lot of old wardens anymore and considering that of let's say 250 wardens, 2/3 are under 40 - it still doesn't really make Carlos one of the oldest. He is still in the bottom 2/3. But I do agree that of those younger wardens, he would be one of the oldest after Harry and possibly the most senior.

He's got enough free time to investigate and solve a murder case that isn't his responsibility and plan a trip to the zoo between SG and PT.
Which is the first amount of free time he has had since Skin Games ended. Between Changes and Skin Games (the last few years) he has had no free time. I suspect that this lull is just the calm before the storm anyhow.

Curiously, we know that the Christmas Eve short story is after Peace Talks but is it after Battle Grounds? Because the announcement was (and the story confirms) that it is after Peace Talks. But Jim and his team would have long known about the split into two books by that point. They obviously didn't want to reveal Battle Grounds at that point but I wonder if the fact that it is after Peace Talks is deliberate. Another moment of quiet before the inferno of Battle Grounds?

I don't see S.I. ignoring Harry instead of giving him information. I don't see why they wouldn't at least hand him a copy of the file and be done with it. Murphy's bosses were never fine with routine S.I. cases being buried. They were constantly pressuring her to come up with answers. I don't think that will change.
They were constantly pressuring her to come up with NORMAL answers. Not the same as actually solving the case. You're working with how SI used to operate. Not how they might now. Lots has changed in the world, both in Dresden's supernatural world and ours. Chances are there would be new bosses, new appointments and perhaps even new politicians (potentially from another political party) than when Dresden worked with them. All of which would impact greatly on how the police operate, and would filter down to SI. Yes, it's all hypothetical but not unreasonable considering how much time has passed.

1. Okay. This doesn't answer my question, but it shows me why you didn't answer it, which is better. If Harry stops being a warden and is always busy with a global crisis, then I can see him not keeping up with S.I. I don't think he will always be dealing with a global crisis though because that's basically Jim saying that there's a bunch of interesting stuff happening in Harry's life, but I'm not going to talk about it. Maybe he will completely change the format of the books to where they take place over longer periods of time, but I don't think so. The closest we've gotten to that was CD where the book literally takes place over a few months.
Jim has actually used that technique before. He has talked mentioned about how Harry trained new wardens, Red Court skirmishes, learning secrets of Demonreach (particularly about activating the defenses), and some Winter Knight training. We always see Dresden's craziest moments, but that doesn't mean he doesn't have plenty of slightly less crazy days throughout the year. And Jim is changing the format of the books I believe. That is part of the reason for Peace Talks being split in two. Which isn't to say that he will extend the amount of time each book covers. But it doesn't mean that isn't the case either. We will just have to wait and see.

2. Using those sources always comes with a cost. I'm not sure he's going to keep turning to them for information. They might be the source of the future case files, but Harry will still need to work his sources when investigating the cases. Harry doesn't know which ones will be useful and which won't, so it wouldn't make sense for him to cut ties with S.I. The first case Mab gave him had Harry asking Karrin for information.
Indeed it does. However Harry's life is never all that easy, and more and more he has had to cross lines that he once wouldn't have dreamed of crossing. Things he thought were abhorrent, insane and forbidden. Which is deliberate on Jim's part of course. Who knows how far Harry will go. Exactly, he went to Karrin. His long time friend, ally and love interest. Not some police guys he hasn't worked with in years and barely knows. The last time he dealt with law enforcement a building of feds was slaughtered. I doubt he will go near them anytime soon.

3. I'm not saying Harry is going to involve them in any of the action. Harry has always been the guy leveraging the little resources everyone else ignored. He used a bunch of pixies to kill a Lady. He still uses pixies. Harry has also always been playing out of his league (except maybe in SF).
Look, I wouldn't put it past Jim to use them as a bit of a throwback and to add some extra red shirts to a scene. But that's all they will be. They won't be a long standing ally, and certainly not the same relationship that he previously had. Yes, Harry always is out of his league. All the more reason he doesn't want to involve innocent people. More blood on his hands. The last few books before Changes he explicitly tells Murphy that SI need to stay out of things as it would be a slaughter. He has come a long way and understood the problem of involving mortals much more than in the early series. These days though - when he fights in a heavier weight class he tends to bring his own heavies and tips the scales. He is fighting smarter now.

4. If the White Council falls, then Harry will need all the support he can get.
When he's saving the world, he still needs information to do it. He got help from the "boats, boats, boats" guy in CD. Harry's still going to need information. He's still going to need to figure things out.
I agree he will need all the help he can get. But it won't be from cops to solve murder mysteries. The only help they will be is an extra red shirt. Harry may have no choice but to recruit them. But assuming that Titan hasn't burned down Chicago after Battle Grounds, I think they will be too busy in clean up mode. If they survive the assault at all.

Whose to say they won't be more helpful? My point is I don't see why they would be unwilling to exchange information with Harry. The only reason Karrin lasted as long as she did in S.I. was because she had Harry's help. I could see Harry not needing their help in any of the books from here on out and Jim never mentioning them again. I don't think it's likely, especially the Jim just not mentioning it part, but I can see it. I'm not so sure about them not needing Harry's help. I can see them becoming antagonistic in a full breakdown of the masquerade that results in a general "burn the witch" atmosphere. That's the only reason I can see for Harry cutting ties with S.I.
Me. They can't help against these types of issues. They just are not trained or equipped for fighting the supernatural. They would be hard pressed to contain a sorcerer. The Loup-Garou slaughtered them. Against a flat-out Fomor assault...well, it wouldn't be pretty. Karrin lost her job because of Harry. If anything, her whole tragedy is that she refused to look the other way. Which is why Rudolph was so successful. Had she turned more weird cases into nice, neat normal solved cases she wouldn't have stayed in SI long. She might not have even ever gone to SI. I guess we will wait and see what happens with SI. But I would point out that they haven't been actively involved in the series for a long time. I think since Turn Coat, and that was really only Murphy. The last time any of them were on-screen before that was Small Favor.

I think Harry is still going to be a p.i., but I would agree that it will continue to play less and less of a role in the story than it has. I wouldn't be too surprised if it mostly only shows up in short stories at this point, but I think it will still be there at least in the background.
It will have to be a wait and see. But officially, he is dead. And even if somehow that has changed/changes - I doubt he will go back to it. But perhaps there will be lulls and he will have time in the short stories.

A big part of my point isn't that Harry's life is going to be so different, it's more that Harry doesn't know he's heading to the BAT. Harry's going to try to get his life as close to regular as he can if for no other reason than to fight the influence Winter on his life.
True. Only a few clued in people know the shape of what's coming. And how soon. I agree that Harry will do his best to get back to his old life. But he also has to be a Dad now. So to some degree I think he will be just doing his best to create a new life. I also suspect a new love interest is incoming if Murphy dies and/or if she can no longer be looked after by the Carpenters when Harry is busy. At the very least it will help him balance his parenting duties. On the other hand, Butcher might just do the single Dad route for a while. Harry had that and he turned out...well, he is mostly alright. Certainly not a complete mess.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 13, 2020, 04:54:31 AM
I think you keep missing what I'm saying Harry should use S.I. for. You keep talking about literally fighting the supernatural. I'm saying S.I. would be useful as a source of information. They're often going to know what's going on because that's where weird cases go.

Murphy was constantly under pressure to stop the weird murders. That's why the position was a temporary one before Murphy hired Harry. No one in charge at S.I. was able to stop the weird occurrences. Stallings was probably able to stay in the position because of all the things that S.I. learned from Harry. S.I. called Harry in less and less as they could handle more and more. They come to Harry when it's urgent, something they haven't seen before, or something they've been told isn't a case.

The party in power in Chicago hasn't changed in about a century. The last Republican mayor was elected in 1927. Chicago's city council currently has 46 Democrats, 4 independents, and 0 Republicans. The political changes in Chicago are usually to do whatever was already being done, only harder.

Harry is officially alive. That's how he got jury duty. The Gatekeeper took care of it after he survived the events of CD.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Yuillegan on May 13, 2020, 06:53:22 AM
I think we both just disagree on the future role of SI altogether. I get that you see their use as information gathers and analysers for Harry. I just don't see it happening myself, for the reasons I have previously outlined.

Yes and No. Murphy was under pressure to solve the cases in a way that was palatable to City Hall. Not the same thing as actually stop the murders. Murphy, being good people, felt it was her moral and legal duty to solve these cases and protect Chicago's citizens from the weird stuff. But many would not have. More political animals would have blamed it on easy scapegoats (like Dresden) and pointed to their number of "solved" cases.

All positions are temporary, at least in the mortal world. I think you mean the position was unstable. Most left the position quickly. Murphy might have been the longest serving Lieutenant (although I don't think that was ever stated), but she likely was the best. Stallings has done well because he knows enough from his time with Murphy to know where the weird is but is probably better at dealing with the politics better than Murphy was (being less of a hot head and a zealot). Not to mention he doesn't have the same bias against him. Murphy was shunted to SI because she had too much integrity and bucked the system, and also because she was a young female. Whatever your views on gender discrimination, there is definitely systematic bias in boy's clubs like the police force. Stallings has only been in the position for the last few years. He's hardly an outlier. Thing is though, SI doesn't call Harry anymore because a) without Murphy Harry loses his biggest advocate in the police, and b) because as of Changes he died. When was the last time SI actually came to Harry with something "urgent, something they haven't haven't seen before... something they've been told isn't a case". Not for many years now. I think the last one was Small Favor.

Forgive my lack of knowledge of Chicago politics, I don't follow it and don't live there. But politics is a convoluted and multi-tiered game that intersects in curious and interesting ways, like 3D chess. You don't just look at the elected councillors and mayors, you also have to consider the political appointments like Judges, DA's, Chiefs of Police etc. which then must be magnified and combined with the effect of the state and federal politicians and their various appointments. It all intersects and it's a brutal and tricky world as bad as anything the Fae could imagine. So even if Chicago is a blue city, that only effects so much. And since SF there have been significant political changes in America. 

I forgot about Jury Duty, but as I said he is still too busy for his old routine, and he hasn't fully reintegrated. He hasn't yet set up his old shop yet. And I put this question to you: If Dresden had so much spare time, and really wanted to get set up again, why has he not yet?

Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 13, 2020, 05:07:22 PM
Love Hurts was the last time S.I. contacted Harry. That was one month before Changes.

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Karrin Murphy headed up Special Investigations, a post that head traditionally resulted in a couple of months bumbling and then a speed exit from the police force. Murphy hadn't bumbled-instead, she'd hired the services of Chicago's only professional wizard as a consultant.
Grave Peril, Ch. 11.

I guess they could have quit out of frustration, but that's never the impression I got. I always figured they'd quit before being transferred like that guy from TC if quitting the PD was their temperament.

Maybe Harry has opened up his office. Maybe he's setting up his personal life first. He's moving off the island, setting up a lab, maybe getting his own home, he's setting up his bank, he could be looking for where he wants an office, he could be liquidating enough diamonds to do all that, he's setting up Maggie in a new home and getting her into SMAGT. He's got a lot to do because of Changes. The kind of thing Harry is probably only going to have to do once.

And even if he doesn't start his business back up, he hasn't stopped being a warden. As long as he's a warden, it would make sense to keep in contact with S.I., as long as Stallings hasn't decided to burn him at the stake. It's part of warden training to manage relations with the police.

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Ramirez was going to cover the course on relations with mortal authorities, which made sense; Ramirez got on just fine with the cops in LA, and hadn't been shot by nearly as many law enforcement personnel as I had.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: 123Chikadee on May 13, 2020, 07:55:31 PM
@Yuillegan: I think it'll be a slaughter either way. Doesn't matter where anyone goes or who they are, be it a mundane or a magical. There will be no safe places. By the time Peace Talks is over, the masquerade will break, it'll be obvious that everyone has to band together or the Outsiders will destroy the universe.
Yeah there will be clean up mode of course but there's a lot of people out there, so it'll be interesting to see global repercussions of this. Even if Chicago and the rest of the US is busy with clean up, the rest of the world is going to be reacting. I don't think the US is the only country that has an SI group. This could be where the Men in Black step in. {The comic Dog Men reveals them to exist, which is a bad place to put such a reveal because not everyone reads the comics. I only know it because I read the synopsis somewhere else. Drives me crazy it does}.
I wonder if Harry will even want to be a PI anymore.
@Bad Alias: Maybe SI will ask Murphy back?  Even if it's only in an information capacity.
I mean when the masquerade busts open, people, City Hall included will want real information and there are quite a few people who can provide that. SI will want to make sure that they are the ones who can do so instead of shadier folks.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 14, 2020, 02:12:22 AM
If the masquerade breaks all at once instead of somewhat gradually, I think the response will be chaos instead of any sort of level headedness that would see Murphy or Harry vindicated. It'll be more like "burn the witch!" and "why have you been hiding witches from us!"

If it happens somewhat gradually, I think it's possible that they would get some measure of vindication, but not a lot. Something like the FBI asking Murphy/Dresden for help instead of the City of Chicago ever admitting they were wrong.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Yuillegan on May 14, 2020, 06:05:57 AM
Even so, Love Hurts was still a few years ago (in universe).

Likely it was a mix of frustration/depression/horror/nervous breakdown and being unable to explain certain things. But the line you quote is pretty old now, so it's relevance might not be strong as it was. But that is just speculation on my part.

Maybe he has done all that between Skin Game and Peace Talks (considering his sudden influx of capital). But there is nothing to suggest that so far (unless I missed something). But my question was about if he had the time and had the desire, why not yet? And I don't recall at any point between Changes and Peace Talks that Dresden has set up as a PI or resumed any of his old activities. You said he had the free time and the desire, but the result is currently nada. That might change between Skin Game and Peace Talks, but so far we have nothing. So you kinda didn't answer my question.

Actually, whilst he was reintegrated as a warden he has done precious little of that. He was dead, then not dead and trying to save the world for a weekend, then confined to an island and then went on a heist. So while he might be on the books, he hasn't been very active. He hasn't contacted them and they haven't contacted him (despite the fact that officially he is alive again). I am not necessarily saying Stallings has changed his opinion on Dresden (although the whole being-dead-then-coming-back might have made him more suspicious). I do get that it is part of a normal warden's job to work with mortal law enforcement, especially locally. But Harry is the furthest thing from a normal warden. Given that, I think it is less than likely they will have the spooky PI-Police relationship they had previously.

And I agree - depending on how quickly and how shockingly the masquerade breaks will color the response to Dresden and the supernatural. Just look how crazy people are right now, and how the events of 9/11 changed things. From the blurb of Battle Grounds I think should the masquerade fall in that book, I think it will be shocking and instant kind. However, I also wonder if Butcher will do the same as in the real world and have people just up and not believe what's happening in front of them. Probably a mixture - but when?

123Chikadee - Not 100% that the masquerade will fully fall in Battle Grounds (although that's the implication from the blurb), and as I said above if it does it will be fast and furious but potentially also have some people just straight up pull the wool over their eyes. So wouldn't be so sure everyone will unite together. People rarely do that as it is.

In fact, SI isn't the only mortal authority aware of the supernatural in the US - you even notice their existence in Dog Men. The Library of Congress (which has the "Men in Black" i.e. sort of secret service agency working with/ for it) is aware, and it is hinted they have been covering up the supernatural (such as making the tape of Harry and Murphy fighting the Loup-Garou disappear). Mostly they put pressure on to hush the situation up.

Well, Bad Alias think Harry will still want his old job. I am not so sure.

But I highly doubt SI will want Murphy back. Very rare in police circles, especially when someone leaves under a cloud. And if the masquerade falls but there is still a semblance of government (and Murphy is still alive, and wants to help/return to SI) whose to say she would work with them? She is on the radar of the Library of Congress - maybe they would want her working at a Federal level. I expect to see Agent Tilly working there when we finally encounter them.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 15, 2020, 02:45:59 AM
And I put this question to you: If Dresden had so much spare time, and really wanted to get set up again, why has he not yet?
I never said Harry had enough spare time. I said he will have the spare time, so the question is a bit of a straw-man. I also haven't really said he has the desire (other than it seems to fit his character to return to old habits). I said it would make sense because he would have the time, remain a warden, and it's a good way of collecting information/combating his scary image.

[1]And I don't recall at any point between Changes and Peace Talks that Dresden has set up as a PI or resumed any of his old activities. (emphasis added)...

[2]...So while he might be on the books, he hasn't been very active. He hasn't contacted them and they haven't contacted him (despite the fact that officially he is alive again).

[3.1]...But Harry is the furthest thing from a normal warden. [3.2]Given that, I think it is less than likely they will have the spooky PI-Police relationship they had previously.

[4]... From the blurb of Battle Grounds I think should the masquerade fall in that book, I think it will be shocking and instant kind. However, I also wonder if Butcher will do the same as in the real world and have people just up and not believe what's happening in front of them. Probably a mixture - but when?

[5]...In fact, SI isn't the only mortal authority aware of the supernatural in the US - you even notice their existence in Dog Men. The Library of Congress (which has the "Men in Black" i.e. sort of secret service agency working with/ for it) is aware, and it is hinted they have been covering up the supernatural (such as making the tape of Harry and Murphy fighting the Loup-Garou disappear). Mostly they put pressure on to hush the situation up.

[6]...But I highly doubt SI will want Murphy back. Very rare in police circles, especially when someone leaves under a cloud.
1. He went to Burger King, meets people at Mac's, started keeping Mac's beer at home and refrigerated. (Side note: Is it legal for Mac to distribute his beer/ale/etc.? It just recently became legal for breweries that serve their brews to also sale them like a store here in Texas). He sticks his nose in any supernatural business that shows up whenever he's around even when most people would say he is not supposed to be doing that. So much so that he was manipulated into it. The point is that he has resumed some of his old activities.

2. He was definitely contacted by Ramirez who knew just where to find him. He definitely handled a young practitioner who was in danger of going warlock. He's also "protect[ed] mortals in [his] area [and been] vigilant against supernatural threats in [his] region." Has he done the best job of that? Irrelevant as you maintain that he was never a very good warden. Harry never seemed to be in much contact with the wardens.

3.1. Acknowledged. 3.2 I suggested that he should maintain a relationship with S.I. I specifically said he should do something like let them know he doesn't need to be paid.

4. I've never really paid any attention to the book blurbs. I'm not sure if I've read any of them other than SF, PT, and BG. I'm not sure how much truth in advertising there is there. But Jim's indicated the masquerade is definitely going to end.

5. I got the impression that the feds from Dog Men were not the feds previously brought up by Jim who were hostile to the supernatural. The comics are not very good, in my opinion, so I only check them out from the library and read them once because I'm a completionist.

6. Agreed, but I would note that they do often hire them back as consultants who make a lot more money for a lot less work. I've known a few people who were fired only to be hired back as consultant who charged exorbitant rates.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: AClone on May 15, 2020, 04:20:51 AM
Just to plug what has become a very long discussion...

A. Jim has said that Harry will go back to being a PI again. “He needs something to do when he’s not Wizarding”.

B. I think the main reason Carlos was placed in charge of Security in what should be Harry’s area of responsibility Was that’s Harry currently has the White Council crapping their collective pants. Not just the Winter Knight thing, or being in control of Demonreach, but the whole “coming back from the dead” thing. The last guy to pull that trick was an ongoing problem—and they don’t know yet about Harry’s “special “code blue” circumstances.

As Thomas said, adding Harry to the security team, rather than placing him in charge of it, let’s them keep an eye on him. Because everyone on the Senior Council had to know that Harry was the first person Carlos would ask.

Harry has been busy rebuilding his life, and bonding with Maggie. I’m guessing that he hasn’t hurried into getting lots of things done while she is out of school—and staying with him—over the summer. Such as reporting in person to Edinburgh.

I’m also taking a wild guess that a substantial amount of the Senior Council mistrust is attenuated by the end of Battle Ground.

For whoever was counting potential deaths, remember that the “younger” Wardens, whom Harry mostly worked with and helped train, constitute somewhere around 240 of the 300 Warden roster figure we last had. I’m guessing that group gets hit hard in Battle Ground. Lots of people that Harry knows and cares about off page.

Given the nature of the book, the FBI (and Tilly) will be involved around. Since SI was bullied away from Harry by City administration, perhaps that will be Harry’s new contact level. Either that, or Marcone decided he’s tired of bearing such a big part of the bill for protecting Chicago from supernatural threats, and leans on those same administrators to open up the SI spigot again.

Since Butters character arc was mentioned, I’ll point out that not only was his story arc capped by his choice to go out and sacrifice himself—which he had never done before—his possession of the Sword as it currently is expressed isn’t a matter of “not being able to have sword fights”. The Swords exist to defeat evil, not to fence with it.

BTW—Did anyone else notice that Butters choice to sacrifice himself even just as a stall tactic actually would have worked? By the time Nick finished killing Butters and getting his Squires heads back together, Molly would have had boots on the grind.

I’m also not sure just how long Butters will bear that Sword. But that’s another story.

Back on topic...as far as Irwin and Connie are concerned, I’m not sure whether or not they’ll be on Chicago in July, when school starts at the end of August. However, the fact that they’re moving into a staff apartment on campus at least makes that possible.

I’m wondering—assuming the two lovebirds are in Chicago in July when a Titan and her “army” show up—if they’re at enough risk that River Shoulders hears about it...and Shows Up. Jim has talked about all of the action figures he has on the shelf he hasn’t really had a chance to take down and play with yet. Along with the whole Senior Council, I kinda hope that River Shoulders would be another one.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Yuillegan on May 15, 2020, 06:22:50 AM
I never said Harry had enough spare time. I said he will have the spare time, so the question is a bit of a straw-man. I also haven't really said he has the desire (other than it seems to fit his character to return to old habits). I said it would make sense because he would have the time, remain a warden, and it's a good way of collecting information/combating his scary image.
My apologies, perhaps I misunderstood you when you said:
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He's got enough free time to investigate and solve a murder case that isn't his responsibility and plan a trip to the zoo between SG and PT.
Which I took to mean past tense. Anyway - it doesn't matter much either way. I think we can just agree to disagree on the issue.

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1. He went to Burger King, meets people at Mac's, started keeping Mac's beer at home and refrigerated. (Side note: Is it legal for Mac to distribute his beer/ale/etc.? It just recently became legal for breweries that serve their brews to also sale them like a store here in Texas). He sticks his nose in any supernatural business that shows up whenever he's around even when most people would say he is not supposed to be doing that. So much so that he was manipulated into it. The point is that he has resumed some of his old activities.
It is legal in some places. But no idea on Chicago. My mistake, by activities I meant his old jobs. Not really his hobbies/routines (BK, drinking etc). I suppose the argument could be made that he has been doing his job of warden in terms of sticking his knows in others business...but as only some of that was official White Council stuff I am not sure it counts. And his PI license has not yet (as far as I am aware) been renewed since his death.

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2. He was definitely contacted by Ramirez who knew just where to find him. He definitely handled a young practitioner who was in danger of going warlock. He's also "protect[ed] mortals in [his] area [and been] vigilant against supernatural threats in [his] region." Has he done the best job of that? Irrelevant as you maintain that he was never a very good warden. Harry never seemed to be in much contact with the wardens.
If you are referring to his contact in the first chapter of Peace Talks...well that's hardly fair as the book isn't out yet. Well, I actually I maintain he was a poor commander and leader. Not necessarily a bad warden though. They are different skills/roles and some are more suited one way or another. I don't hold it against Harry, but he probably needs some advice/training himself.

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3.1. Acknowledged. 3.2 I suggested that he should maintain a relationship with S.I. I specifically said he should do something like let them know he doesn't need to be paid.
Forgive me, but I can't find where you said that. So I am a tad confused. Don't get me wrong, I don't necessarily think it is the worst idea for Harry to maintain a good relationship with local law enforcement (specifically SI). But I wouldn't recommend he helps them with the local weird death unless he has the time. Mostly, he should be worrying about how to stop the Black Council and Nemesis etc.

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4. I've never really paid any attention to the book blurbs. I'm not sure if I've read any of them other than SF, PT, and BG. I'm not sure how much truth in advertising there is there. But Jim's indicated the masquerade is definitely going to end.
Then allow me to assist you.
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I hope that makes my point clear. I don't put it past the marketing to hype it up. But at the same time...the shoe fits.

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5. I got the impression that the feds from Dog Men were not the feds previously brought up by Jim who were hostile to the supernatural. The comics are not very good, in my opinion, so I only check them out from the library and read them once because I'm a completionist.
On my reading they were the "Men In Black" that represent the agents of the Library of Congress. I don't imagine there are too many federal groups that are aware (as an organization) of the supernatural world. And they were rather hostile in that comic. I don't know why but I feel they are tied to the Archive, but I can't remember why that sticks in my brain.

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6. Agreed, but I would note that they do often hire them back as consultants who make a lot more money for a lot less work. I've known a few people who were fired only to be hired back as consultant who charged exorbitant rates.
Absolutely. What a world we live in. I don't normally advocate for it, especially when the person in question left in a various level of disgrace. Seems corrupt. But occasionally, some people just had a bad run and deserve a second chance. But I wouldn't say that was the majority.


Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Yuillegan on May 15, 2020, 07:38:44 AM
Nothing wrong with a long discussion, healthy debate is how good ideas are formed. But if they tire you - the option of creating new threads is always open. :)

AClone - where does Jim say that? I cannot find the WOJ in question. Be interesting to know how old that quote is.

A very good possibility that is why Carlos was chosen. I don't disagree with the reasons. My contention is that it wouldn't have been the case necessarily had Changes not gone the way it did.

There are few organizations that would allow you to blatantly not report in and not fire you. Looking after his daughter (which they supposedly have little to no knowledge of) wouldn't count (and Harry wouldn't disclose the existence of Maggie to them). That said, being all so old they might allow longer stretches of time. And they do have a lack of wardens and experienced combat wizards so he is probably too valuable to lose, generally speaking.

The Senior Council have always mistrusted Harry - and seemingly for good reason (if the Morgan microfiction is anything to go by). I don't expect that to change. It may well be vindicated or resolved in Battle Ground.

The body count will likely include his trainees. But considering his reaction in the Christmas Eve microfiction, I would say a fair few are familiar faces too.

Why do you think Tilly will be back in this book (Peace Talks)? Not that I disagree necessarily, but I am curious to hear you're theory. What about this book makes it more likely? I do suspect he will help with fighting the supernatural eventually. Not so sure that SI will have the same use.

I am sure that no matter the role, they will be present in either Peace Talks and/or Battle Ground. River Shoulders may well also make an appearance. I remember that quote about the action figures. There are some characters (particularly Langtry, Rashid and Cristos) that I would like to see take the field.

Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 15, 2020, 08:51:07 PM
[1]Such as reporting in person to Edinburgh.

...[2]For whoever was counting potential deaths, remember that the “younger” Wardens, whom Harry mostly worked with and helped train, constitute somewhere around 240 of the 300 Warden roster figure we last had.

...[3]Marcone decided he’s tired of bearing such a big part of the bill for protecting Chicago from supernatural threats, and leans on those same administrators to open up the SI spigot again.

[4]Since Butters character arc was mentioned, I’ll point out that not only was his story arc capped by his choice to go out and sacrifice himself—which he had never done before.


...[5]Back on topic...as far as Irwin and Connie are concerned, I’m not sure whether or not they’ll be on Chicago in July, when school starts at the end of August. However, the fact that they’re moving into a staff apartment on campus at least makes that possible.

I’m wondering—assuming the two lovebirds are in Chicago in July when a Titan and her “army” show up—if they’re at enough risk that River Shoulders hears about it...and Shows Up. Jim has talked about all of the action figures he has on the shelf he hasn’t really had a chance to take down and play with yet. Along with the whole Senior Council, I kinda hope that River Shoulders would be another one.
1. The only wizard who shows up to Edinburgh less is Rashid, so I wouldn't be surprised if he hasn't shown up in person. If he did, I'd bet it would likely be a short trip to sign some paperwork or something. He has probably at least updated his mailing address with them and gotten the new protocols.

2. We don't really know how many of the less than sixty wardens after DB were even the old guard. They could have been anywhere from Carlos's age to a few hundred years old. Likely they were unevenly distributed throughout that age range. We don't know how many of the +/-240 "new" wardens were old guard who came out of retirement either. We do know for a fact that Harry was enlisted after Carlos and that Harry is older. I do believe Harry said that the Wardens were now mostly young, and I do believe that Ramirez was the last warden to get a sword or in the last class of wardens to get a sword, so there aren't going to be a lot of wardens older than Ramirez. Another thing we don't know is how many of less than sixty remaining wardens have died between DB and TC.
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The Wardens are the White Council's version of police and military,[1] numbering roughly two hundred strong prior to Dead Beat, when they fell to below sixty as a result of Red Court engagements,[2] now numbering over three hundred as of Turn Coat.[3]
https://dresdenfiles.fandom.com/wiki/Warden (https://dresdenfiles.fandom.com/wiki/Warden).

It we say Carlos is 60th oldest out of 300, then he is in the top fifth. Depending on who has been recruited and who has been doing the dying, that number could easily move 10% in either direction.

None of that is meant to imply that Carlos is considered an "old guard" warden. I'd say we can be as certain he is not as we can be about pretty much anything that hasn't explicitly been stated somewhere by Jim.

Unfortunately (probably actually fortunately because it could easily make the books ponderous tomes) I don't think Jim is likely to go into the level of detail that we as superfans crave.

4. It could be argued that he did that in DB a couple of times. Though it is definitely framed much more as though it is certain death in SG.

5. I figure it's more likely than not that they would be there in July, depending on how late the fall semester starts. They need to get settled in, learn about their jobs at the school, come up with their lesson plans, and do whatever pre-school year things teachers do. Though being there in July doesn't mean they'll be there during the time frame of the next two books either. The books could be early July, and they could arrive in late July or even early August, once again depending on when the fall semester starts.

As to whether River Shoulder's shows up, it depends on how much notice he has and how much of a direct threat to Irwin everything is. One thing we've been shown about Bigfeet is that they are slow to come a decision.

I don't know. I think it's a great way for a warden to operate. I'm not sure if there's a better way, given the universe as established, for a warden to find out what's going on. Harry's been wardening for about 15 years because he set himself up as a wizard p.i. He should also let S.I know he doesn't need any money if they come up against something they can't handle themselves.
It was my first post in this debate which was about a week ago. My premise has always been "it's a good idea." Harry's repeatedly been able to put his thumb in the eye of the Black Council/Nemesis/etc. because he was a p.i. or worked with S.I. My main point is that it won't make sense for Harry to ignore what have been very valuable sources of information without sufficient in text explanation. If the pacing of Harry's life picks up sufficiently, that'd be a good explanation. If he just stops, not so much.

What Harry really should do, that I'm 90-99% certain he won't, is restart his wizarding business but have employees who can handle a lot of the routine stuff. He could teach any number of lesser talents to do all sorts of things that would be a waste of his time. A lot of people in his world could investigate this or that case. It would actually be best to have someone who has little to no talent run the office because such a person could take advantage of technology. This way Harry could make money, help a lot of people (clients and employees), and find those cases that only a wizard can handle, so he isn't wasting his time finding lost car keys. It's basically what he's already done with S.I. He's brought them up to a level that they didn't call on him as much by Changes. (Actually, well before that, but I don't remember which book(s) he's said that in). He should move away from "Harry Dresden, Wizard P.I." to "Harry Dresden, CEO of Dresden's Wizardly Investigatons." Or something with better branding. It actually would be pretty fitting for him to have one more thing in common with Odin.

I think the closest he'll get to this is working with Karrin and maybe an assistant or two if some of the talents he's come across do become apprentices as some have predicted/hoped for.

Which I took to mean past tense.
I was saying that Harry already has sufficient time to do those things from Jury Duty and Zoo Day because he did. Harry wasn't done moving in as of mid May (Jury Duty). He had time to resolve a murder case. There are several large tasks that I expect he will have done by Mirror Mirror. Maybe Battle Ground if it doesn't follow almost immediately after Peace Talks. This would indicate to me that he is going to have more time in the coming books unless Jim pretty drastically changes the series, which he might.

I think our disagreement really boils down to a couple of misunderstandings and that you think the pacing of Harry's life is going to drastically accelerate over pre Changes levels/remain the same as the past three novels, and I think it's going to return to near normal pacing.

I would note, due to my pedantic nature, that Harry had plenty of free time between CD and SG. He just couldn't use it.

On my reading they were the "Men In Black" that represent the agents of the Library of Congress. I don't imagine there are too many federal groups that are aware (as an organization) of the supernatural world. And they were rather hostile in that comic. I don't know why but I feel they are tied to the Archive, but I can't remember why that sticks in my brain.
It's been a while, but my impression was they were hostile to the wolf people because they thought the wolf people were responsible for the attacks of the ghouls. Once they realized it was the ghouls, they were no longer interested in the wolf people.

Now all that was just my impression, and the comics, imo, leave a lot to be desired. Motivations are often unclear and conflict with things established in the novels and short stories.

I recall something similar about the Library of Congress and the Archive be mentioned in relation, but only really vaguely. I can't find a single entry on the word of jim site about the Library of Congress.

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Can anyone remember which book Jim said Christmas Eve is going to be at the end of? I'm assuming that it will not only physically be at the end of that book, but the events will take place after that book. I'm pretty sure he said it in his livestream with Priscilla from when the trailer dropped. JD is mid May, ZD is late May/early June, PT is July, and CE is obviously December 24/25. Are we all assuming CE is after BG, do we know it, or do some people think it's inbetween PT and BG?
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Regenbogen on May 15, 2020, 11:04:53 PM

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Can anyone remember which book Jim said Christmas Eve is going to be at the end of? I'm assuming that it will not only physically be at the end of that book, but the events will take place after that book. I'm pretty sure he said it in his livestream with Priscilla from when the trailer dropped. JD is mid May, ZD is late May/early June, PT is July, and CE is obviously December 24/25. Are we all assuming CE is after BG, do we know it, or do some people think it's inbetween PT and BG?

I believe Peace Talks and Battle Ground were meant to be one book, but PT became to long, so he splitted the book in two.
So I would say, it takes place after BG, because it wasn't supposed to be a separate book.

This is from the timeline on his website:

"14 ASF, late February: Skin Game

14 ASF, mid May: Jury Duty, the short story from Unbound.

14 ASF, late May/early June: Day One, the Butters-POV story from Unfettered II, concurrently with Zoo Day, the Rashomon-style Harry/Maggie/Mouse POV story from Brief Cases. (Several weeks after Skin Game–h/t Eric Dawson)

14 ASF, July: Peace Talks

14 ASF, December 24th: Christmas Eve, a short story."

"ASF" meaning "after Storm Front"

https://www.jim-butcher.com/timeline
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 16, 2020, 01:20:28 AM
I believe Peace Talks and Battle Ground were meant to be one book, but PT became to long, so he splitted the book in two.
So I would say, it takes place after BG, because it wasn't supposed to be a separate book.
They were meant to be one book, but he did a lot of rewriting to make them into two books. See The Dresden Files Podcast, Episode 100: Prisicellie!. With that amount of rewriting, Jim could have then spaced the events out. Kind of like how nothing major happened (in Harry's life) after Grave Peril until Summer Knight.

I'm just trying to figure out if we know or just strongly suspect CE is after BG. If we know it, then we know that BG takes begins between PT and late December. Probably early December because Harry is probably going to need some time to heal after BG.

I am of the opinion that books are going to be pretty close to back to back, maybe a week or month apart or something instead of the usual average of nearly a year. I'm pretty sure Harry's going to get the crap kicked out of him in PT. He can't get too much more crap kicked out of him in BG if he hasn't had any time to heal, so I think he is going to have some time to heal. Or just get healed by magic like he did in Changes.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Yuillegan on May 18, 2020, 02:30:56 AM
Yeah, hard to know isn't it? My guess is Battle Ground is after Christmas Eve...but there is no way to tell right now. I kind of hope it is as that way Christmas Eve isn't the latest thing in the timeline.


1. Don't disagree. I just think Harry should have.
2. True. We can only guess. I would tend to think the more experienced wizards survived, just based on that. But it isn't necessarily true. I know, I wish Jim would release a companion guide or something to help expand the universe. Maybe we could kickstart one! He might hate us for adding to his workload though. :(


Sorry, so much writing to rifle through. Sometimes it is hard to find exact sentences, I wasn't doubting you wrote it.
Don't get me wrong. Harry opening a buisness and managing a team of PIs and Wizards would be great. Sadly, I think the character just isn't the sort to do that. But you never know - that might be exactly what Dresden does. Maybe it would look a little something like Monoc Securities in the early days...

Assuming Karen survives, I can see them working together. But I think she is marked for death, and has been for some time. Listen to Dresden's theme song "Gone Away" by The Offspring again. Almost like a neon sign.

Tbh - I am expecting Mirror Mirror to start right at the end of Battle Ground. The classic "wait, where's Dresden?" and he's been sucked into a Mirror looking at the bad versions of all his buddies or some monsters etc. Corny, but classic.

Yep - I think that pretty much sums up our debate. Guess time will tell on it. It will be fun to see!

Is free time really free if you can't use it? A debate for the philosphers among us

Yeah - the comics do need a bit of work. I really wished though that the graphic novel versions had kept coming out. Would have been nice to see. I wonder if Jim didn't want to give too much away though... But anyway, I think they are the same group. Might have come off badly though. Upon thinking further about it I am not so sure that the Library of Congress is completely hostile to the supernatural. They are just managing it.

I can't find the quote or video that mentions the connection, but I am sure there is one about the Archive and Library of Congress. Serack, Quantus, Knnn etc. care to lend a hand?

Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 18, 2020, 02:50:23 PM
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2. We don't really know how many of the less than sixty wardens after DB were even the old guard. They could have been anywhere from Carlos's age to a few hundred years old. Likely they were unevenly distributed throughout that age range. We don't know how many of the +/-240 "new" wardens were old guard who came out of retirement either. We do know for a fact that Harry was enlisted after Carlos and that Harry is older. I do believe Harry said that the Wardens were now mostly young, and I do believe that Ramirez was the last warden to get a sword or in the last class of wardens to get a sword, so there aren't going to be a lot of wardens older than Ramirez. Another thing we don't know is how many of less than sixty remaining wardens have died between DB and TC.

I don't think that is relevant here,  Ramirez was made a Warden before Harry was, he got a Sword because Luccio was still in her old body and had the skills to do so.  With in days of Harry being made a Warden, Luccio lost her body to the Corpse Taker, and discovered shortly after that she lost the magical abilities that enabled her to match a sword to the skills and personality of her new Wardens.   I seem to remember though I don't have the quote or the time to look it up, but she actually said to Harry that she no longer had the skills since her change but it was no reflection on him as a Warden.   However another thought, what if she just thinks she doesn't have the skill anymore?  Peabody had messed with her though his magic ink..  Perhaps the last thing he wanted was for Harry to be given a sword matching his talents, even if he never was a great swordsman. 
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Arjan on May 18, 2020, 04:01:41 PM
I don't think that is relevant here,  Ramirez was made a Warden before Harry was, he got a Sword because Luccio was still in her old body and had the skills to do so.  With in days of Harry being made a Warden, Luccio lost her body to the Corpse Taker, and discovered shortly after that she lost the magical abilities that enabled her to match a sword to the skills and personality of her new Wardens.   I seem to remember though I don't have the quote or the time to look it up, but she actually said to Harry that she no longer had the skills since her change but it was no reflection on him as a Warden.   However another thought, what if she just thinks she doesn't have the skill anymore?  Peabody had messed with her though his magic ink..  Perhaps the last thing he wanted was for Harry to be given a sword matching his talents, even if he never was a great swordsman.
More likely she does not have the right body for her skills now. In time she might change that wiring a bit if she exercises her magic.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 18, 2020, 07:25:45 PM
More likely she does not have the right body for her skills now. In time she might change that wiring a bit if she exercises her magic.

  Yes, but the other possibility cannot be excluded simply because he also encouraged her to
have a love affair with Harry though the ink.   Just throwing that out there.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: g33k on May 18, 2020, 07:59:59 PM
... Luccio was still in her old body and had the skills to do so ...
More likely she does not have the right body for her skills now. In time she might change that wiring a bit if she exercises her magic.

I don't think "skill" is quite the right term -- that implies a practiced, developed ability.  Luccio still had all her practical experience, all the "how-to" knowledge, and the developed "skill" that follows the practical experience and how-to knowlege.  Nevertheless, she cannot forge Warden blades.

I think there's some additional, inherent/inborn ability needed; it's not the case that any two wizards are "equivalent" as they enter apprenticeship.  Molly is great with subtle stuff, but Harry isn't.  Harry is a Starborn, but Molly isn't.

Luccio blames it on her new body, so it's presumably something physical (which includes neurological), not just an "attitude" problem.  As you say, @Arjan, she may be able to recover the ability, with enough practice.  Maybe it's "re-wiring" herself; maybe it's like exercising a weak muscle.  Maybe it's something else.  Maybe she'll never be able to.  Maybe we'll never find out, because she maybe she dies in the PT/BG duology (looks like Jim has "retired" her from being an active character; killing her off would be one of the deaths that could hit Harry particularly hard).
 
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Avernite on May 18, 2020, 09:01:18 PM
  Yes, but the other possibility cannot be excluded simply because he also encouraged her to
have a love affair with Harry though the ink.   Just throwing that out there.
Pretty sure the ink was only for the old coots Peabody couldn't directly mentally remodel.

But yeah, while he was in there he might as well have tried to 'fix' her into being unable to make the swords. Or maybe the swords require the kind of dedicated focus that compromised minds are not capable of.

Who knows - but it's certainly an interesting idea if you (like me) want to see Harry wield a cool sword (since the holy ones seem to be for other people). But as a spell-slinger 1st class, and a gun-nut, it may not be so critical.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 18, 2020, 10:09:09 PM
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Pretty sure the ink was only for the old coots Peabody couldn't directly mentally remodel.

No, Luccio was one of his main targets.   Turn Coat page 399 Rashid's conversation with Harry.

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"I've been working with the Wardens and administrative staff whose minds Peabody invaded."
  "I heard."
"It appears," he said, choosing his words carefully, that the psychic disruption to Anastasia Luccio was particularly severe."

There is a lot more about it on the page.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: g33k on May 18, 2020, 11:15:31 PM
Pretty sure the ink was only for the old coots Peabody couldn't directly mentally remodel.

"Old coots" would include Anastasia Luccio -- she's 200ish years of age (per WoJ she can recall the War of 1812, though she was young then and didn't much take note of it).
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Yuillegan on May 19, 2020, 01:20:07 AM
Indeed, yet it also would seem the physical body has some impact. The understanding is that Anastasia would have been caught unawares and not taken steps as she had gotten so used to being an old coot, she forget the danger of being physically young again - and hence was vulnerable. So her 200 years didn't insulate her.

Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 19, 2020, 04:35:05 AM


  The point is, old coot or not, Luccio was one of Peabody's main targets.  However lets not ignore that Peabody was after the young coots as well.  The only reason why Harry, a relatively young coot
was spared influence from the ink is he was never around headquarters to come in contact with it.  And when he did visit, Peabody tried his damnest to get him to sign paperwork.  The same goes for the rest of the younger Wardens.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 20, 2020, 07:02:59 PM
Yeah, hard to know isn't it? My guess is Battle Ground is after Christmas Eve...

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2. True. We can only guess. I would tend to think the more experienced wizards survived, just based on that.


...I wasn't doubting you wrote it.
Don't get me wrong. Harry opening a buisness and managing a team of PIs and Wizards would be great. Sadly, I think the character just isn't the sort to do that.

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Assuming Karen survives, I can see them working together. But I think she is marked for death, and has been for some time. Listen to Dresden's theme song "Gone Away" by The Offspring again. Almost like a neon sign.

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Is free time really free if you can't use it? A debate for the philosphers among us
I think Christmas Eve will be after BG, but I haven't seen anything that strongly supports anything one way or the other.

I'd agree that older wizards were more likely to survive because older generally means better in the DF, but I would also imagine that some of them still died. Just not as many as the younger wardens. In fact, we know that at least one died on Demonreach in Turn Coat and then Morgan died a little later, so we know some old guard wardens died.

Yeah, but I was doubting I expressed myself clearly enough, so I checked. Having checked, I figured I might as well share.

I agree that Harry is unlikely to turn his one man sole proprietorship into a real agency.

I honestly don't have an opinion on whether or not Karrin is on the chopping block.

Yes, because it helps my argument.  ;)

I don't think that is relevant here
Where's here? If it's who is senior out of Ramirez and Harry, then I agree. If it's why Ramirez is in charge of security instead of someone older, then it is relevant because there aren't a lot of older someone's to choose from.

Perhaps the last thing [Peabody] wanted was for Harry to be given a sword matching his talents, even if he never was a great swordsman.
Interesting. I imagine we'd find out soon because he's no longer messing with her mind.

Peabody tried his damnest to get [Harry] to sign paperwork.
I think Peabody always or almost always used the ink to establish his mind control because of the scene alluded to. IMO, it is the light touch that was reserved for the "old coots," which doesn't include Luccio because the brittleness of mind is apparently a physical consequence of age and Luccio isn't even physically older than Harry.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 20, 2020, 08:45:09 PM
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Where's here? If it's who is senior out of Ramirez and Harry, then I agree. If it's why Ramirez is in charge of security instead of someone older, then it is relevant because there aren't a lot of older someone's to choose from.

I was talking about the fact that Luccio made a sword for Ramirez because he became a Warden some time before she had her body change, where as her body change happened right after Harry became a Warden so she wasn't able.  Don't think having or not having a sword is relevant to whom was put in charge.

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I think Peabody always or almost always used the ink to establish his mind control because of the scene alluded to. IMO, it is the light touch that was reserved for the "old coots," which doesn't include Luccio because the brittleness of mind is apparently a physical consequence of age and Luccio isn't even physically older than Harry.

According to Rashid, Peabody did a lot of messing with Luccio's mind, further he enhanced her existing propensity for violence to set her up to murder LaFortier.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 21, 2020, 05:46:42 PM
According to Rashid, Peabody did a lot of messing with Luccio's mind, further he enhanced her existing propensity for violence to set her up to murder LaFortier.
I think he just directed it.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Avernite on May 21, 2020, 07:49:47 PM
No, Luccio was one of his main targets.   Turn Coat page 399 Rashid's conversation with Harry.

There is a lot more about it on the page.
My point is NOT 'Peabody didn't mentally manipulate Luccio'

My point is 'Peabody didn't use the ink to mentally manipulate Luccio, he used direct mind magic'.

The conclusion to Turn Coat says in Ch47  'A test of the inks he used to attain the signatures of the Senior Council', 'It is my (Eb's) belief that Peabody has been drugging the ink for the purpose of attempting greater mental influence over the decisions of members of the Senior Council'.

And more circumstantial about the others being different, in Ch49 the Gatekeeper tells Harry "I've been working with the Wardens and administrative staff whose minds Peabody invaded" - making clear that wasn't just inks.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 21, 2020, 08:15:36 PM
Eb finishes talking about Peabody's use of the ink with
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it is entirely possible that he has compromised the free will of younger members of the Council outright.
It's not clear whether or not he meant that Peabody used the ink to compromise their free will.

I don't see how the Gatekeeper's statement makes it clear that Peabody didn't use the inks to invade their minds. It just makes it clear that Peabody did invade their minds.

Peabody's reaction to Harry not signing for the file (Ch. 17) indicates that he was going to use the ink to invade Harry's mind. It's also demonstrated that they are alone in that section of the headquarters. This indicates that Peabody couldn't just manipulate someone's mind if they were alone. It indicates that Peabody needed something more than direct magic to manipulate even younger wizard's minds. We can be reasonably sure that he wasn't able to manipulate Harry with direct mind magic. (I don't know precisely what you mean by direct magic, but I'm assuming evocation).

Now it could be that Peabody needs more time than he was going to have with Dresden to do anything, but I think there is a good argument that he used the ink to mind bend all or most of his victims. I don't think there is anything decisive either way.

The point that Luccio was one of Peabody's main targets is evidence that he used ink on her. It's just very weak evidence if raised alone.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Avernite on May 21, 2020, 10:33:18 PM
Eb finishes talking about Peabody's use of the ink withIt's not clear whether or not he meant that Peabody used the ink to compromise their free will.

I don't see how the Gatekeeper's statement makes it clear that Peabody didn't use the inks to invade their minds. It just makes it clear that Peabody did invade their minds.

Peabody's reaction to Harry not signing for the file (Ch. 17) indicates that he was going to use the ink to invade Harry's mind. It's also demonstrated that they are alone in that section of the headquarters. This indicates that Peabody couldn't just manipulate someone's mind if they were alone. It indicates that Peabody needed something more than direct magic to manipulate even younger wizard's minds. We can be reasonably sure that he wasn't able to manipulate Harry with direct mind magic. (I don't know precisely what you mean by direct magic, but I'm assuming evocation).

Now it could be that Peabody needs more time than he was going to have with Dresden to do anything, but I think there is a good argument that he used the ink to mind bend all or most of his victims. I don't think there is anything decisive either way.

The point that Luccio was one of Peabody's main targets is evidence that he used ink on her. It's just very weak evidence if raised alone.
I agree there's nothing decisive, though I left that last bit of Eb's statement out on purpose as equal.

You could argue that it means the inks could be used to mindbend outright, or I could argue it shows how grossly, based on investigating just the inks, Eb underestimated what Peabody could do. "it is entirely possible" compared to "basically every younger warden had his or her mind remodelled to some extent with a stop-switch, up to and including suicide bomb level like Luccio".
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 22, 2020, 11:16:11 AM
I agree there's nothing decisive, though I left that last bit of Eb's statement out on purpose as equal.

You could argue that it means the inks could be used to mindbend outright, or I could argue it shows how grossly, based on investigating just the inks, Eb underestimated what Peabody could do. "it is entirely possible" compared to "basically every younger warden had his or her mind remodelled to some extent with a stop-switch, up to and including suicide bomb level like Luccio".

 It wasn't just Eb who underestimated Peabody, the whole damn Council did, witness the damage he did at his trial.   It was the ink, without the ink Peabody couldn't of pulled off the mind influence. The ink acted as a mind numbing drug for lack of a better word, then Peabody was able to suggest all kinds of things and because of the ink, the victim no matter how experienced or powerful wasn't aware that he or she was being manipulated.   Luccio was merely the most overt, most of the influence was much more subtle,  effecting Senior Council decisions for years and no one noticed.  That is why I think it was Eb, said the Council would have to go back at least ten years to revisit all
the decisions it made. 

Most young wizards weren't effected simply because most of them weren't in positions where they'd come in contact with the secretary for the Senior Council demanding that they sign this paper or that paper that often or at all.  That is what saved Harry's butt, even though he had moved up the Warden command chain, he hardly if ever went to headquarters.  Interesting that one of the first things when he did show up he was harassed by Peabody wanting him to "sign" this paper or that, which being Harry, he didn't do.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Avernite on May 22, 2020, 01:40:17 PM
It wasn't just Eb who underestimated Peabody, the whole damn Council did, witness the damage he did at his trial.   It was the ink, without the ink Peabody couldn't of pulled off the mind influence. The ink acted as a mind numbing drug for lack of a better word, then Peabody was able to suggest all kinds of things and because of the ink, the victim no matter how experienced or powerful wasn't aware that he or she was being manipulated.   Luccio was merely the most overt, most of the influence was much more subtle,  effecting Senior Council decisions for years and no one noticed.  That is why I think it was Eb, said the Council would have to go back at least ten years to revisit all
the decisions it made. 

Most young wizards weren't effected simply because most of them weren't in positions where they'd come in contact with the secretary for the Senior Council demanding that they sign this paper or that paper that often or at all.  That is what saved Harry's butt, even though he had moved up the Warden command chain, he hardly if ever went to headquarters.  Interesting that one of the first things when he did show up he was harassed by Peabody wanting him to "sign" this paper or that, which being Harry, he didn't do.
Most young Wardens WERE affected, hence why Peabody could put them all on pause as he made a run for it.

And your first paragraph is purely speculative, especially "without the ink Peabody couldn't of pulled off the mind influence"; we know mindbending without inks is possible (see Molly and Corpsetaker), so the question is, did Peabody use the inks on everyone and then something else on top for the youngsters, or did he use the inks on people whose minds he couldn't really remodel (and so he needed a more subtle way in) while using direct mind magic on more susceptible targets.

Based on exposure (how much ink was a run-of-the-mill warden exposed to? He admittedly tried for a bit with Harry) and estimated effect (what Eb thought Peabody could've achieved after investigating the inks), I believe the inks were not his major weapon on younger wizards, but only on the Senior Council.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Arjan on May 22, 2020, 02:12:55 PM
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A test of the inks he used to attain the signatures of the Senior Council for various authorizations revealed the presence of a number of chemical and alchemical substances that are known to have been used to assist psychic manipulation of their subjects

The ink was just there to make mind manipulation easier for Peabody. He used it on Listen to Wind, he tried to use it on Harry. He probably used it on Luccio to. No reason not to use it when it makes everything easier.

Except that it makes also handy evidence if found.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: morriswalters on May 22, 2020, 03:14:53 PM
Circumstances alter cases. Nobody ever detected it until they looked. So he did whatever he needed to do. If the ink was easy to make, then he would use it as a matter of course. On the other hand, if it was difficult to produce he would use it on targets which provided the most bang for the buck. But there is no indication that he used it everywhere on everybody. And in any case he was skilled at mind magic since he operated for years and was never directly detected doing it.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Arjan on May 22, 2020, 04:06:18 PM
The first time Peabody is shown in Summer Knight he already uses his ink to influence things:

From Summer Knight:
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He looked to one side, where a slim-faced, prim-looking wizard sat with a quill, a bottle of ink, and pages and pages of parchment. "Wizard Peabody , will you consult the registry?"

A few moments later:
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Peabody reached under his table and came out with a bulging satchel. He muttered something to himself and rubbed some ink onto his nose with one finger, then he opened the satchel, which held what looked like a couple of reams of parchment.
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His eyes glazed over slightly
, and he reached into the papers seemingly at random. He drew out a single page, put it on the desk before him, nodded in satisfaction, then read in a reedy voice, "Wizard Montjoy."

I did not check it but I think he is always mentioned together with his ink as seemingly inseperable. Me I would never use that even before the computer they invented ball points and those are far more convenient.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 22, 2020, 05:46:58 PM
The first time Peabody is shown in Summer Knight he already uses his ink to influence things:

From Summer Knight:
A few moments later:, and he reached into the papers seemingly at random. He drew out a single page, put it on the desk before him, nodded in satisfaction, then read in a reedy voice, "Wizard Montjoy."

I did not check it but I think he is always mentioned together with his ink as seemingly inseperable. Me I would never use that even before the computer they invented ball points and those are far more convenient.

 Exactly, and I believe I wrote a post connecting the passages to what happened in Turn Coat shortly after it came out.

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And your first paragraph is purely speculative, especially "without the ink Peabody couldn't of pulled off the mind influence"; we know mindbending without inks is possible (see Molly and Corpsetaker), so the question is, did Peabody use the inks on everyone and then something else on top for the youngsters, or did he use the inks on people whose minds he couldn't really remodel (and so he needed a more subtle way in) while using direct mind magic on more susceptible targets.

No one said it wasn't possible without the ink, but usually the victim, especially an experienced wizard knows when someone is messing with his/her mind directly.  They had no clue and all were exposed to Peabody's ink at one time or another.
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The ink was just there to make mind manipulation easier for Peabody. He used it on Listen to Wind, he tried to use it on Harry. He probably used it on Luccio to. No reason not to use it when it makes everything easier.

Except that it makes also handy evidence if found.

Indeed, but the catch was because all were under the influence they didn't suspect it.  Only Harry who wasn't exposed began to put two and two together.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 24, 2020, 05:30:44 PM
Why didn't Peabody use mind magic on Harry when Harry went to Peabody's office?
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Arjan on May 24, 2020, 06:04:04 PM
Why didn't Peabody use mind magic on Harry when Harry went to Peabody's office?
Peabody tried to get his ink on Harry but that failed. Apparently Peabody needs the ink to be successful or he decided it was just too risky to try it without his ink. A good reason to assume he used it most of the time.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 24, 2020, 07:01:00 PM
Peabody tried to get his ink on Harry but that failed. Apparently Peabody needs the ink to be successful or he decided it was just too risky to try it without his ink. A good reason to assume he used it most of the time.

  I think Peabody did need his ink, that is why he tried so hard to get Harry to sign some papers with his pen and ink.  Without the ink, the subject/victim is aware that someone is trying to get in their head..
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Arjan on May 24, 2020, 07:14:55 PM
  I think Peabody did need his ink, that is why he tried so hard to get Harry to sign some papers with his pen and ink.  Without the ink, the subject/victim is aware that someone is trying to get in their head..
Not as good as Molly.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: g33k on May 24, 2020, 09:29:29 PM
I don't think we know enough to know if Peabody "needed" his ink, or if the ink just made his magic harder-to-detect (and thus less risky, more pervasive), or what the exact mechanisms were.

Harry dismissively labeled Peabody a "bureaucromancer," and I think in some ways that isn't far off, and ink is a central feature of his magic.  In the SummerKnight bit quoted above, Peabody appears to have used magical ink on himself.  Presumably, a different kind of ink, but still ...
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 25, 2020, 03:04:13 AM
I don't think we know enough to know if Peabody "needed" his ink, or if the ink just made his magic harder-to-detect (and thus less risky, more pervasive), or what the exact mechanisms were.

Harry dismissively labeled Peabody a "bureaucromancer," and I think in some ways that isn't far off, and ink is a central feature of his magic.  In the SummerKnight bit quoted above, Peabody appears to have used magical ink on himself.  Presumably, a different kind of ink, but still ...

Eb believes the theory and along with Ramirez finds evidence and testifies to it in court.

page 386 Turn Coat

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"Working on the evidence Dresden found," Ebenezer said, "Warden Ramirez and I searched Peabody's chambers thoroughly not twenty minutes ago.  A test of the inks he used to attain the signatures of the Senior Council for various authorizations revealed the presence of a number of chemical and alchemical substances that are known to have been used to assist psychic manipulation of their subjects.  It is my belief that Peabody has been drugging the ink for the purpose of attempting greater mental influence over the decisions of members of the Senior Council, and that it is entirely possible that he has compromised the free will of younger members of the Council outright."

There is your evidence.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: g33k on May 25, 2020, 05:50:24 AM
Eb believes the theory and along with Ramirez finds evidence and testifies to it in court.

page 386 Turn Coat

There is your evidence.

No, only that he uses the ink; not that he "needs" it.

Harry doesn't "need" his staff, or his blasting rod, or his shield bracelet, or his force rings, etc etc etc.

But he uses them, nonetheless!
 
We just don't know enough about Peabody; but I suspect it's something similar -- he uses the ink to enhance or leverage or hide or ... (???) his magic.  Maybe to serve more than one purpose!
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 25, 2020, 11:24:07 AM
No, only that he uses the ink; not that he "needs" it.

Harry doesn't "need" his staff, or his blasting rod, or his shield bracelet, or his force rings, etc etc etc.

But he uses them, nonetheless!
 
We just don't know enough about Peabody; but I suspect it's something similar -- he uses the ink to enhance or leverage or hide or ... (???) his magic.  Maybe to serve more than one purpose!
   I think you are totally missing the point here of what Eb was saying.   Does Peabody need to use the ink to get inside of minds?  He is a fully qualified wizard, secretary to the Senior Council, that means he has skills.   A surgeon has the skill to take out a liver without anesthesia,  but the patient would be very aware that he was doing it.   That is the whole point of the ink, "revealed the presence of a number of chemical and alchemical substances that are known to have been used to assist psychic manipulation of their subjects."     

  Peabody screwed with the minds of fully qualified wizards, like the patient under the knife getting his liver removed without anesthesia, he'd know it was happening ..  If someone is trying to manipulate a full wizard's brain, they know it..   Doing that kind of thing is forbidden, punishable by death.   So just as anesthesia makes the surgeon's job a lot easier if the patient is asleep while he removes the liver, the ink numbed the brains of his fellow wizards enough that they weren't unaware that Peabody was tip toeing in their heads, making it easier and safer for him. 

Repeat, it wasn't ordinary ink that was found in Peabody's room, it was ink " revealed the presence of a number of chemical and alchemical substances that are known to have been used to assist psychic manipulation of their subjects."   It really doesn't matter whether or not he needed it, the whole point is he used it.   Could he have manipulated their brains without it?  Yeah, he is a full wizard, he could, but at great risk of detection..  The use of the ink eliminated that risk.. 

So on the academic question on whether or not Peabody needed the ink to pull off mental manipulation of his fellow wizards?  No, any qualified wizard could do that.

However on the question of whether or not he could carry it on for years without the anesthesia of
the ink compromising the free will and awareness of his subjects?  No, he needed the ink..  Like liver
surgery, if the patient is awake, they know what is happening.   

As Eb said, " It is my belief that Peabody has been drugging the ink for the purpose of attempting greater mental influence over the decisions of members of the Senior Council, and that it is entirely possible that he has compromised the free will of younger members of the Council outright."

Yeah, the ink's sole purpose was to hide and leverage his magic..  And yeah, he needed it, maybe not so much on the youngsters, but on the decision makers, he couldn't pulled it off without it.   
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 25, 2020, 05:53:22 PM
I don't think there is any direct evidence that the ink is anesthesia. There is evidence that Peabody needed the ink to use mind magic on a young warden. He was unwilling to use evocation mind magic on Harry when no one was around even when he was in panic mode, if we believe Murphy's theory. Everything was falling apart. The walls were closing in. There wasn't just a slight risk of detection.

So that leads to the conclusion that the ink was necessary succeed, either because he couldn't mind bend Harry without it, or he couldn't mind bend Harry without it before being detected and stopped.

Now Harry isn't your average wizard. Harry's mind is a natural fortress. It could be that Peabody probed Harry's mind and found out about his natural mental toughness. Or it could be that he needed the ink for any wizard.

I think the explanation that Peabody needed the ink more plausible. But we really only know three things. The ink is for mind control. The ink was used on the Senior Council. Peabody didn't mind control Harry without the ink when they were alone.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 25, 2020, 06:22:44 PM
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I think the explanation that Peabody needed the ink more plausible. But we really only know three things. The ink is for mind control. The ink was used on the Senior Council. Peabody didn't mind control Harry without the ink when they were alone.

Harry never signed anything that Peabody wanted him to sign.   So no contact with ink, no mind control..

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I don't think there is any direct evidence that the ink is anesthesia. There is evidence that Peabody needed the ink to use mind magic on a young warden. He was unwilling to use evocation mind magic on Harry when no one was around even when he was in panic mode, if we believe Murphy's theory. Everything was falling apart. The walls were closing in. There wasn't just a slight risk of detection.

Evidence is Peabody was messing with wizard minds for a decade or more, that is why the Senior Council needed to revisit all of the decisions it made in that time.  How is it possible that none of these senior wizards had any clue that they were being mentally manipulated?  Um, the ink is your answer, " revealed the presence of a number of chemical and alchemical substances that are known to have been used to assist psychic manipulation of their subjects."    No, he didn't put his subjects to sleep, but it numbed the senses just enough to leave them open to suggestion and they had no clue that it was going on... 
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Now Harry isn't your average wizard. Harry's mind is a natural fortress. It could be that Peabody probed Harry's mind and found out about his natural mental toughness. Or it could be that he needed the ink for any wizard.
If Peabody had probed Harry's mind first, Harry would have known it.  I doubt that Peabody touched any wizard's mind until he softened up their resistance and awareness first with his magic ink.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 25, 2020, 07:13:43 PM
Evidence is Peabody was messing with wizard minds for a decade or more

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If Peabody had probed Harry's mind first, Harry would have known it.
That's not evidence that it's anesthesia. Not even a little bit.

Not if the probing was passive.

I doubt that Peabody touched any wizard's mind until he softened up their resistance and awareness first with his magic ink.
Emphasis added. Exactly. You don't know. You strongly believe. I even agree that Peabody probably used ink on everyone. But we don't know that or how the ink worked. It's silly to pretend that you know one way or the other.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Mira on May 25, 2020, 09:10:40 PM
That's not evidence that it's anesthesia. Not even a little bit.

Not if the probing was passive.
Emphasis added. Exactly. You don't know. You strongly believe. I even agree that Peabody probably used ink on everyone. But we don't know that or how the ink worked. It's silly to pretend that you know one way or the other.

  Eb, Turn Coat

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"Warden Ramirez and I searched Peabody's chambers thoroughly not twenty minutes ago.  A test of the inks he used to attain the signatures of the Senior Council for various authorizations revealed the presence of a number of chemical and alchemical substances that are known to have been used to assist psychic manipulation of their subjects.  It is my belief that Peabody has been drugging the ink for the purpose of attempting greater mental influence over the decisions of members of the Senior Council, and that it is entirely possible that he has compromised the free will of younger members of the Council outright."
Um, the ink contained known substances used to assist in psychic manipulation.. That is pretty good evidence... 

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That's not evidence that it's anesthesia. Not even a little bit.

Not if the probing was passive.

The probing wasn't passive...  Consider what he did to Luccio's mind, that wasn't passive.  He influenced to the point where all decisions made for the last ten years or more have to be reconsidered, that is hardly passive... 

Yeah, if the mind can be dulled to the point where it doesn't know it's being probed, that is anesthesia..  Novocaine is a local anesthesia, one doesn't have to be knocked out.  The mind was numbed, defenses lowered so he could probe and influence, I'd call that good evidence of anesthesia like properties.
Title: Re: "Job placement" microfiction
Post by: Bad Alias on May 26, 2020, 08:27:18 PM
Um, the ink contained known substances used to assist in psychic manipulation..

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The probing wasn't passive...  Consider what he did to Luccio's mind, that wasn't passive.  He influenced to the point where all decisions made for the last ten years or more have to be reconsidered, that is hardly passive... 

Yeah, if the mind can be dulled to the point where it doesn't know it's being probed, that is anesthesia..  Novocaine is a local anesthesia, one doesn't have to be knocked out.  The mind was numbed, defenses lowered so he could probe and influence, I'd call that good evidence of anesthesia like properties.
That's evidence that it allows or helps mind manipulation. It doesn't say how it helps. If it numbs the mind, I'd imagine it would be described as similar to the thing we've seen that do that. Mind fogs.

Probing: inquiring closely into something; searching. Probing isn't manipulating.

The reason they don't know their minds were manipulated is because their minds were manipulated. Not necessarily because the manipulation was undetected at the time it was being manipulated.