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Title: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on October 23, 2015, 07:37:57 PM
Hubby has began reading the book. He is struggling with it because he is irritated for the constant racism against the Aurorans (corrupt, inneficient). As we are Latin Americans and have Spanis inheritage he feels offended when the Spaniards are attacked. I've told him that the book only reflects the English point of view of British against Spain, at least in the Victorian times. So, it's accurate. He feels it is offensive anyway.

I know you are not of Spanish descent, but do you think someone should be offended by a novel written by the point of view of something who hates your country? I actually loved this book but I am wondering if I should have resent its treatment of my people. I am being not patriot enough?

So my question is not about the particulars but about the general idea of "should we be offended when a book speaks poorly of our country, even if it is in the mindset of an enemy country?" What do you think?
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Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: novaseaker on October 23, 2015, 07:55:55 PM
Aurorans are supposed to be Spaniards? Please forgive my ignorance, but I had no idea that was the case at all.

I think the Aurorans acquit themselves fairly well, objectively, as the main antagonists of the book. Their officers and leaders are shown to be just as honorable as the Albions (keeping their word, being resistant to needless cruelty, abhorring the very idea of mistreating prisoners). When you do get a POV chapter from the Auroran's perspective, you see that they think of the Albions as complacent, greedy, and decadent. It's just that there are many many more Albion POV characters, who are subjective in their opinions, just like everyone else is.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on October 23, 2015, 08:01:51 PM
Well, it is never explicitly said in the book, as it is not said that Albion is England, but the echoes of the Spanish Armada are clear for me and there are also many Spanish names (Like "Ciervo").

I agree with your second paragraph. Hubby has not yet arrived to the Landing attack (I don't know if he is going to reach that part. He is really angry with the book right now)
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Griffyn612 on October 23, 2015, 08:51:48 PM
Can't control what people are offended by.  Personally, I'd take heart in the fact that the Aurorans we met all resented the mission they were on, and resented the evil woman they were working with.  And the point of view that they provided, that their Spire was struggling while Albion wasn't, is understandable.  It could turn out that they're desperately trying to save their people, and they're willing to harm the few to save the many.  I honestly didn't consider any of them as the 'enemy', other than whats-her-name.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Shecky on October 23, 2015, 10:02:41 PM
Remember, in every society, the Enemy is always portrayed in a negative light with a broad brush. This continues even today with the world tightly interlinked as it is; the Other is always a bad thing.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on October 24, 2015, 12:21:52 AM
I know all that. But the Aurorans accept to work with Cavendish so I don't like them. Anyway, apparently I've convinced him to keep reading.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Chiroptera on October 24, 2015, 01:48:09 AM
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at least in the Victorian times.

I think that says it right there.  Ignoring or sugar-coating history doesn't change how it happened and re-telling or re-imagining a historical event or viewpoint doesn't mean the work is condoning it, or suggesting that it should continue today.

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Well, it is never explicitly said in the book, as it is not said that Albion is England, but the echoes of the Spanish Armada are clear for me and there are also many Spanish names (Like "Ciervo").

I think Albion is an old name for the British Isles.


And I have Spanish Armada (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HlrCdhUCGSA) stuck in my head now. I couldn't find a better version of it.

 
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on October 24, 2015, 01:51:35 AM
Yes. I've always heard Albion as meaning "England" but perhaps you are right and it involves the whole British Islands. I didn't want to be restricted. Only saying that Albion= British Empire. Aurora= Spanish "empire" (before or after losing the American territories)
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Second Aristh on October 24, 2015, 01:59:35 AM
I think Albion is an old name for the British Isles.
Yeah, wiki has a few different possible etymologies for Albion, but it's an old name for Britain.  Does anyone know about something similar for Aurora?

As another nice quote, we have that Spire Aurora is west by southwest of Spire Albion from Ch.62 in the beginning, so earlier theories about Aurora referring to some northern settlement are out.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Brightbane on October 24, 2015, 02:04:11 AM
Another point towards it being england

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A lean, slick airship flying Albion's scarlet, azure, and white colors sailed up into view
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Griffyn612 on October 24, 2015, 02:07:42 AM
I don't know.  There was a mention about something existing for about two thousand years if I recall.  I think we're dealing with another human colony situation, like Alera. 

Anyone know of a lost fleet of multicultural ships?   :P
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Second Aristh on October 24, 2015, 02:10:28 AM
I don't know.  There was a mention about something existing for about two thousand years if I recall.  I think we're dealing with another human colony situation, like Alera. 

Anyone know of a lost fleet of multicultural ships?   :P
There was a quote about trying to domesticate the silkweavers for two thousand years.  It's hard to tell how exact that is though.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Rygar on October 24, 2015, 02:12:50 AM
Another point towards it being england

While Albion is quite obviously English in nature, there are scads of nations with those colors on their flags
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Brightbane on October 24, 2015, 02:18:06 AM
While Albion is quite obviously English in nature, there are scads of nations with those colors on their flags
Yeah, but if the flag had been brown and yellow and purple it would have been a point against
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Mith on October 24, 2015, 04:02:02 AM
Honestly, Azure and white makes me think Scotland's Cross of Saint Andrew.  Which would be a bit off, since then it would be Alba, not Albion (or Alban).

As for where the name comes from, there is no historical link of the Aurorans to the dawn.  Unless they are a French Spanish hybrid, in which case their is the Sun King.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on October 24, 2015, 04:07:08 AM
I don't remember French names. Actually, I remember having seen one French name besides Bayard but I don't remember which one now.
On the other hand, Itasca it's a name from USA if wikipedia serves right, but it was created from Latin.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Brightbane on October 24, 2015, 06:46:48 AM
I don't remember French names. Actually, I remember having seen one French name besides Bayard but I don't remember which one now.
On the other hand, Itasca it's a name from USA if wikipedia serves right, but it was created from Latin.
Itasca is a county from the state I lived in. I think it was a native American word
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Shecky on October 24, 2015, 03:30:55 PM
General, undirected point of advice: never think anything is obvious where Jim is concerned.

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Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Second Aristh on October 24, 2015, 03:55:43 PM
It may or may not be relevant, but there was a ship named the Itasca involved with Amelia Earhart's disappearance.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Aminar on October 24, 2015, 04:27:36 PM
I wouldn't worry about it. If you have to ask if you should be offended the answer is no.
Instead it's useful to examine other points of view and see what can be learned from what others have said and done.
Being offended is a waste of time.
Learning about other viewpoints, even blatantly wrong ones is not.
In this case, as has been said,  there are a number of hints that the book is making a point about the disfunctional nature of stereotypes and propaganda, not espousing a view point on said stereotypes.
And remember these are not Earth Cultures. Just loosely based on them.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on October 24, 2015, 05:43:24 PM
That is your opinion, Aminar. I think they are Earth cultures all right.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Aminar on October 25, 2015, 04:47:58 AM
That is your opinion, Aminar. I think they are Earth cultures all right.
At best that's like saying Mad Max is misrepresenting Australians.
We've got millenia of cultural evolution if they are earth cultures. At which point drawing enough comparison to take offense is reaching.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on October 25, 2015, 04:51:51 AM
Yes, that is true.
In fact, I am wondering if they are colonies (each spire) specially created to preserve a way of life.
That said, the point of the thread was not so much about my particular case with this book but about discussing if someone should be offended for the points of view of characters in a book, even if they are the main characters.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Arjan on October 25, 2015, 11:23:09 AM
Especially because writers often give them to protagonists just to create problems for them.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: wizard nelson on October 26, 2015, 01:33:46 AM
Hubby has began reading the book. He is struggling with it because he is irritated for the constant racism against the Aurorans (corrupt, inneficient). As we are Latin Americans and have Spanis inheritage he feels offended when the Spaniards are attacked. I've told him that the book only reflects the English point of view of British against Spain, at least in the Victorian times. So, it's accurate. He feels it is offensive anyway.

I know you are not of Spanish descent, but do you think someone should be offended by a novel written by the point of view of something who hates your country? I actually loved this book but I am wondering if I should have resent its treatment of my people. I am being not patriot enough?

So my question is not about the particulars but about the general idea of "should we be offended when a book speaks poorly of our country, even if it is in the mindset of an enemy country?" What do you think?
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No more than the Brits for being displayed as arrogant,racist, @sses, discriminating others based on perceived superiority?
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on October 26, 2015, 01:39:20 AM
I didn't realize they were depicted as more racist than others, in fact apparently Aurorans are more racist against warriorborns than Albionites. But even accepting it, yes, would they be right in be offended? Again, I don't want to discuss particularities, only if people should be offended by characters opinions, basically.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Roverbey on October 26, 2015, 02:57:32 AM
I didn't realize they were depicted as more racist than others, in fact apparently Aurorans are more racist against warriorborns than Albionites. But even accepting it, yes, would they be right in be offended? Again, I don't want to discuss particularities, only if people should be offended by characters opinions, basically.
In my opinion at least, the only reason someone should feel offended by what opinions are expressed by characters in a story is if you believe that the author is championing them as the "correct" view.  Jim seems to be giving us characters that are consistent with the society that they come from.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Tsunami on October 26, 2015, 01:30:55 PM
General Stuff
I don't think the reader should take the characters' opinions to heart so much.
As long as the characters are working as characters and not just as vehicles for the author's opinions.
In Windlass, and indeed all of Butcher's work i have read, the characters and their viewpoints are diverse and believable enough to stand on their own and make sense inside the story world.

A little Detail
We have seen assholes among the Albions as well as the Aurorans, and we have also seen honorable folk among both. Also, i think it works in the setting for the characters to be somewhat bigoted. Apparently most people in the spires never even leave their home habble. Even less people would be leaving their home spire, resulting in highly insular cultures in the spires.
And then there's the fact that we are seeing that world mostly through soldiers eyes in wartime... no wonder that we are dealing with a certain amount of prejudice.

To sum up again: No i don't think one should be offended in general. And also not in this particular case.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: wyltok on October 26, 2015, 06:00:21 PM
That said, the point of the thread was not so much about my particular case with this book but about discussing if someone should be offended for the points of view of characters in a book, even if they are the main characters.

My general thoughts: Jim has made it quite clear that his intention when writing is to evoke emotional responses in his readers. In fact, to quote the man himself:

Quote from: 2012 JimButcher AMA Reddit Q&A (http://www.jimbutcheronline.com/bb/index.php/topic,34849.msg1667173.html#msg1667173)
I tell giant, complicated, long-term LIES for a living, man. People pay me to manipulate their emotions--to make them laugh and cry, to cheer for the good guys and to hate the bad guys.

On the one hand, the fact that your husband is reacting emotionally to Jim's writing could be seen as a positive. On the other hand, the fact that it makes it harder for him to "cheer for the good guys" makes it a negative.

In and of itself, I would say it's OK to be offended by a main character's negative traits. What I consider more important, however, is how one chooses to act after taking offense. And before making the decision of how to react, I would recommend taking a moment to try to figure out why the author made his main character(s) offensive.

If, for example, the cause of offense seems to stem from the author's own prejudice, I could see how reading the remainder of the book could be problematic; such an author is unlikely to change the character's behavior, taking away from the reader's empathy for the nominal good guys. As others have mentioned, there's also the possibility of the author being driven by a desire for verisimilitude: if people have historically reacted in an offensive way, having the characters not react that way runs the risk of breaking the audience's willing suspension of disbelief.

Given such circumstances, dropping the book could be considered a reasonable choice - why read something you won't enjoy? On the other hand, I've always enjoyed the argument that fiction should not only entertain, but also educate. Personally, I could see myself still reading a book even if I find the protagonist(s) offensive, specifically to teach myself to better empathize with people I don't agree with. It's always easiest, after all, to appreciate people who think like us.

There's a third possibility, namely that the author intends to address this offensive quality, and so, needs to first establish it, in order to incorporate it in the protagonist's character arc. I suspect that's the direction Jim is going with the racism. In such a case, denying oneself the opportunity to see how the situation will evolve would be a disservice to both the author and the reader.

TL,DR: I believe one is entitled to feel offended by a fictional character's actions  or views(fiction, after all, is about evoking emotional responses), particularly if the guilty party is a protagonist, but I don't believe taking offense would be reason enough to stop me from reading a story.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Rygar on October 26, 2015, 07:24:41 PM
I'd have to reread while specifically looking for this, but I remember the Aurorans themselves as being potrayed well.  Their government was depicted as corrupt and generally bad, yes, but I don't think any scenes involving the Espira and his men left me thinking of them as anything other than professionals operating at cross purposes to the protagonists. 
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on October 26, 2015, 07:44:47 PM
wyltok, Tsunami, thank you. Your posts have been very interesting and I appreciate that. Your insight about the reasons to keep reading are more or less the sane I thought, wyltok

Rygar, the Aurorans themselves that are depicted are military, so hubby and I don't care for them. The problem is that speaking of the government as unefficient and corrupted is spreading the stereotype of the Latino government (think the stereotype of the tropical country dictator). That is precisely what incensed my husband.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Mith on October 26, 2015, 07:53:54 PM
It could also be a take on historic Spanish economic inefficency with regards to how the silver mines of the New World inflated the Spanish economy in the 1600s.

Basically, I am looking at this as a basis for the European Spaniards, and not in connection with Latin America.  But then again, I do not have any roots in Latin America to notice that potential point of view.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Rygar on October 26, 2015, 08:05:25 PM
wyltok, Tsunami, thank you. Your posts have been very interesting and I appreciate that. Your insight about the reasons to keep reading are more or less the sane I thought, wyltok

Rygar, the Aurorans themselves that are depicted are military, so hubby and I don't care for them. The problem is that speaking of the government as unefficient and corrupted is spreading the stereotype of the Latino government (think the stereotype of the tropical country dictator). That is precisely what incensed my husband.

Yeah, and Spire Aurora doesn't (presumably) have the history of repeated foreign backed coups either.  I could see how that could upset someone. 
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on October 26, 2015, 08:56:59 PM
LOL, yes.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Quantus on October 26, 2015, 09:21:18 PM
Itasca is a county from the state I lived in. I think it was a native American word
If it's the town in Illinois, it was named for the Lake in Minnesota, which in turn was it was a combination of the latin word for Truth and Head.

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"The Ojibwe name for "Lake Itasca" was Omashkoozo-zaaga'igan (Elk Lake);[1] this was changed by Henry Schoolcraft to "Itasca", coined from a combination of the Latin words veritas ("truth") and caput ("head"),[2][3] though it is sometimes misinterpreted as "true head." It is one of several examples of pseudo-Indian place names created by Schoolcraft."
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lake_Itasca (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lake_Itasca)

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Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Tarion on October 27, 2015, 09:39:56 AM
It could also be a take on historic Spanish economic inefficency with regards to how the silver mines of the New World inflated the Spanish economy in the 1600s.

Basically, I am looking at this as a basis for the European Spaniards, and not in connection with Latin America.  But then again, I do not have any roots in Latin America to notice that potential point of view.
Yeah, I think you've really got to stretch to tie it into Latin America.  I mean, I get why people from that part of the world would do that, but I think that's something that the readers are bringing to the book, rather than something already there. 

Spain's economic troubles and it's imperialism aren't really controversial.  Reading it, it felt like fairly clear parallels with Phillip II, who faced multiple state bankruptcies (Even with rampant imperialism), sent the Spanish Armada against England, and had notable corruption - He sold off state roles to people with money, but without talent. 
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Quantus on October 27, 2015, 12:21:35 PM
Setting aside the question of cultural links to RL nations, I think there are equitable derogatory statements from and about both sides int he stories, and I expect we'll get some for Olympia in the next book as well.  The Albion folks arent presented as any more noble or fair-minded than the Aurorans, as I read it.  The soldiers had the soldiers mindset of hard actions during war, but so did Grimm and Co.  The Aurorans were
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Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Second Aristh on October 27, 2015, 01:44:02 PM
Setting aside the question of cultural links to RL nations, I think there are equitable derogatory statements from and about both sides int he stories, and I expect we'll get some for Olympia in the next book as well.  The Albion folks arent presented as any more noble or fair-minded than the Aurorans, as I read it.  The soldiers had the soldiers mindset of hard actions during war, but so did Grimm and Co.  The Aurorans were
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does a good deal to balance the scales against which Spire is more honorable.  They both have their weaknesses in individuals and in reputations.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on October 27, 2015, 02:49:52 PM
I was not talking about the real actions of the characters but about their prejudices, what they think about the others.

Yeah, I think you've really got to stretch to tie it into Latin America.  I mean, I get why people from that part of the world would do that, but I think that's something that the readers are bringing to the book, rather than something already there. 

Spain's economic troubles and it's imperialism aren't really controversial.  Reading it, it felt like fairly clear parallels with Phillip II, who faced multiple state bankruptcies (Even with rampant imperialism), sent the Spanish Armada against England, and had notable corruption - He sold off state roles to people with money, but without talent. 

Well, if you offend Spaniards you offend Latin America because many of us have Spanish ancestors. My grandma was from Spain, for instance. So no "very distant relatives" but concrete people we love are from Spain.

Well yes, the historical Spain had those problems. When you extend it to the future or other planets...prejudice.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: mikejramsey on October 28, 2015, 10:04:07 PM
Pirates have to fight somebody.  Given the real history, you had French pirates operating out of New Orleans who attacked British shipping but not US shipping.  Who do you think supplied the cannons that Andrew Jackson used to defeat the British in the war 1812?

English privateers were given a letter of marque and reprisal authorizing them to become commerce raiders.  Spain was richer than England.  At the time of queen Elizabeth the first of England, Spanish commerce raiders would have had slim pickings.  :-)

I think your husband is reading into the story more than Jim Butcher has written.  If it helps, think of the Aurorans as French.

Besides, the divisions between the spires will disappear when they have to face the common enemy.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on October 28, 2015, 11:41:13 PM
They are not French. They have Spanish names, including names of people we know.
As I said in another thread, there was a French name (besides Bayard) but I don't remember who, so I don't know where he was from. Perhaps a vermi...I forgot the right name of those people.

Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Tsunami on October 29, 2015, 02:35:19 PM
Maybe Butcher should start putting the usual disclaimer into his books...   ::)
All characters appearing in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.
In this case:
"All nation-like constructs (i.e. "Spires") are fictitious. Any resemblance to real nations, modern or historical, is purely coincidental."  ;D

I've read so many versions of the "evil Germany" story. Some written well, some written crappy. None offended me, because they were obviously  fictious.
Ok, maybe the crappy ones offended... my taste in literature :P

Take the story and the world for what it is, a story. You will always be able to find something that could be taken as offensive to someone.
They eat meat! Offensive to Vegetarians.
They have talking cats! Offensive to dog lovers.
They have an aristocracy! Offensive to egalitarians.

I am overweight, 95% of overweight people in literature and other media are made out to be jokes, and that includes Butchers work.
Do i let that offend me personally? No.

Just let the story be a story, it's not the real world.

Sorry for the rant.
I will leave you to it.
Have a nice day :-)
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: namkcas on October 29, 2015, 02:54:04 PM
Actually, I don't think that they were meant to be fictionalized.  But if you look at the way people are portrayed the Auroran's are honorable and highly skilled.  The actual "bad" people in the story are from Albion.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Quantus on October 29, 2015, 02:58:31 PM
To the OP, has this view changed at all once you and/or your husband have completed the novel, and so reached the parts that highlight the honorable nature of the Aurorans?
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on October 29, 2015, 03:25:21 PM
I had not been offended, only he was. And he has not finished it yet.
That said, I don't think that changes. As I said, the problem is not the actual characters, but the stereotype about the government.
And again, this is not a history book, it is probably a book about the future. So because there was a bad government all future governments would be bad?

namkas, everybody is bad. I don't think there is good people in the book. Perhaps brother Vincent
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Chiroptera on October 29, 2015, 04:15:13 PM
Steampunk societies often portray alternative history and a post-apocalyptic future, and tend to maintain stylistic and cultural elements of the historical period it's drawn from.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Quantus on October 29, 2015, 05:57:54 PM
I had not been offended, only he was. And he has not finished it yet.
That said, I don't think that changes. As I said, the problem is not the actual characters, but the stereotype about the government.
And again, this is not a history book, it is probably a book about the future. So because there was a bad government all future governments would be bad?
My biggest take-away from the scenes at the end was the idea that while the governments might be at war, even though loyalties and perspectives may be different, at least among the Aeronauts (our hero class, like Knights or Samurai or Musketeers) they are proven honorable, all proper Gentlemen Soldiers on both sides.  I took it as the classic theme of Governments are all generally bad in their own ways, but that doesnt mean the Soldiers under tehir command cant be honorable folks that just want to protect their homes and families and way of life from outside attack. 

But then, Im an American mutt; I dont  have no strong feelings toward the cultures of my ancestors across the pond, we tend to idealize the era and motives that led us to break away too much for that sort of favorable link to remain (plus as a whole we Americans are jerks).  So I dont have a very good analoge experience to compare to the Latin America/Spain feelings.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on October 29, 2015, 08:13:07 PM
Yep, the offensive part was against the governments.

(minor quarrel I've already said many times. i consider myself American too. I live in South America. I was raised believing i am a citizen of Earth, America, Argentina, Buenos Aires, Flores (that is my neighbourhood). The way people of USA have to refer themselves as the only Americans it's what we call "cultural colonialism". And it is something that irritates me specially when a Latin American said it too. it's contagious! And no, I don't believe people is USA is being mean with us, I just think they are oblivious)
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Quantus on October 29, 2015, 08:41:48 PM
Yep, the offensive part was against the governments.

(minor quarrel I've already said many times. i consider myself American too. I live in South America. I was raised believing i am a citizen of Earth, America, Argentina, Buenos Aires, Flores (that is my neighbourhood). The way people of USA have to refer themselves as the only Americans it's what we call "cultural colonialism". And it is something that irritates me specially when a Latin American said it too. it's contagious! And no, I don't believe people is USA is being mean with us, I just think they are oblivious)
Well, I can attest that I certainly was Oblivious, but Ill endeavor to get better about that.  Sorry  :-[
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Rygar on October 29, 2015, 08:48:33 PM
It's worth pointing out that there is no other term in the (US) American lexicon for ourselves.  The idea that we are the only Americans seems to be waning at least.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on October 29, 2015, 08:49:56 PM
Well, I can attest that I certainly was Oblivious, but Ill endeavor to get better about that.  Sorry  :-[

Don't. Everybody uses that. i used to talk about that with Grey Knight and I miss our chats.  He was well aware I never use "Americans" unless I meant people of the whole continent, from Alaska to Tierra del Fuego. I use "people from USA" , but I sometimes joke with USers  :D. Probably not here because I have to explain the joke.

If you are curious, the "correct" word in Spanish is "Estadounidense" which means exactly "from United States"

My only intention was call the attention about that for a moment, nothing else. I understand it is easier for you to say "American".

Oh, we sometimes call you "yankees", which is unaccurate as not all people from USA are yankees. But then, we use to call all the Spaniards "Gallegos", even when that means only "from Galice". It is because we received many Gallegos. (and probably because we are lazy too). I mean, everybody uses unaccurate words.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: wyltok on October 29, 2015, 09:21:20 PM
I'm partial to "US citizens" myself.

(From Puerto Rico)
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on October 29, 2015, 09:22:57 PM
I use that too  :D
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Shecky on October 30, 2015, 02:34:56 AM
'Muricans! ;)
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on October 30, 2015, 02:42:39 AM
LOL! First time I've read that (here!) I was so confused, In my mind, Murica sounds so different from America that took me a long while to make the connection.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Shecky on October 30, 2015, 11:40:57 AM
It's meant to mimic the "relaxed" pronunciation of people like this:

https://www.google.com/search?hl=en&authuser=0&site=imghp&tbm=isch&source=hp&biw=1209&bih=875&q=murica&oq=murica&gs_l=img.3..0l7j0i10j0l2.859.1775.0.2031.6.6.0.0.0.0.79.373.6.6.0....0...1ac.1.64.img..0.6.372.KuVZ_elifmc
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Quantus on October 30, 2015, 12:25:29 PM
It's meant to mimic the "relaxed" pronunciation of people like this:

https://www.google.com/search?hl=en&authuser=0&site=imghp&tbm=isch&source=hp&biw=1209&bih=875&q=murica&oq=murica&gs_l=img.3..0l7j0i10j0l2.859.1775.0.2031.6.6.0.0.0.0.79.373.6.6.0....0...1ac.1.64.img..0.6.372.KuVZ_elifmc
Those are great! 

Im partial to:
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Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: novaseaker on October 30, 2015, 08:32:28 PM
Hey Dina,

I did some further research, and while reading the Tv tropes page for the Cinder Spires, I came across something interesting.

"Aurora" is the name of the Roman goddess of dawn. Furthmore, Ciriaco is a given name in both Italy as well as Spain.

So Spire Aurora may not be faux-Spain. It may be faux-Italy/Rome? The British vs. Spainards angle might be more appropriate to the Victorian themes, but the naming schemes of Aurora being a Roman goddess and soldiers bearing Italian names may point in a different direction entirely. This is a made up world, after all, and not all parallels need to be maintained.

Also, as someone who's entire family spanning back generations is 100% Sicilian, and I can tell you I don't personally take offense if Ciriaco is essentially faux-Italian, or if the Italian government of Spire Aurora is thought of as corrupt by the people they're being attacked by.


(Also Quantus, that action figure is amazing. I want one, and I'm not even from the South)
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on October 30, 2015, 09:05:23 PM
Oh. I know who Aurora is, but that is also one Spanish name for dawn itself. For instance, one of our (Argentinian) patriotic marchs in an Opera called Aurora.(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6JdvjBpcOWE). So of course it could be Italian but I think names like Ciervo or Castillo point to Spain. That said, I (like most Argentinians) have as many Italian blood as Spanish one but it could appaise hubby who is pretty much a Spanish product

Speaking of names, I laughed at the fact that the young men that Gwen killed was called Lazarus.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Mith on October 31, 2015, 02:55:07 AM
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Speaking of names, I laughed at the fact that the young men that Gwen killed was called Lazarus.

Good catch!  I had missed that.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on October 31, 2015, 02:59:48 AM
LOL! Hubby caught that in Albion they play golf. I had not idea because I didn't know the expression (something about par to the course or something)
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Second Aristh on October 31, 2015, 03:46:36 AM
LOL! Hubby caught that in Albion they play golf. I had not idea because I didn't know the expression (something about par to the course or something)
Yeah, it's at the end of Ch.40.  Though it could be another "horse" type situation where the language doesn't reflect the way things are in the story's present.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on October 31, 2015, 03:55:17 AM
Probably.
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Post by: xakko on November 03, 2015, 02:57:53 AM
for me, I always pictured the Aurorans as Italian-based.  I was listening to the audiobook while I worked, and my accent identification stinks anyway, but it /seemed/ like that was what Mr. Morton was going for.  I could easily be mistaken though.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on November 03, 2015, 03:01:20 AM
I had not heard the audiobooks so I can't tell. Mr Morton is the one doing the reading?
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: xakko on November 03, 2015, 04:43:43 AM
I had not heard the audiobooks so I can't tell. Mr Morton is the one doing the reading?
Euan Morton, yes

Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: trixsterjl on November 14, 2015, 03:11:55 PM
I didn't read all of the replies... However the spire names seem to derive from a Greek mythos base
Olympia, Albion, and Aurora... 2 are Greek Gods, 1 is the home of the gods. The other uses of the words are probably derived from those roots.

**hmm spire Jereezi?** As far as i know only these 4 spires are named if you spotted one update me please. I think the Spire Jereeze however, might not ever come up again.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Arjan on November 14, 2015, 03:37:35 PM
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Albion

Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: trixsterjl on November 14, 2015, 04:14:45 PM
Steam Punk by it's nature identifies with the Victorian Era of England which identified heavily with ancient Greece.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Arjan on November 14, 2015, 04:41:16 PM
Steam Punk by it's nature identifies with the Victorian Era of England which identified heavily with ancient Greece.
Just pointed out that Albion was not a greek god or the home of a greek god, it is just the oldest name for that island we have.

Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: trixsterjl on November 14, 2015, 05:45:37 PM
Just pointed out that Albion was not a greek god or the home of a greek god, it is just the oldest name for that island we have.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alebion

I suspect we should both be careful when using wiki as a reference as any true scholarly work would not allow that. LOL. Anyway Without doing a study i'd be unsure of what the true root of the islands name is. As to why Jim used it for the spire i'd have to defer to him. Aurora was roman not greek, and Olympia could be from either root. The point of the reply for me though was that Auroran most likely has nothing to do with spain.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Arjan on November 14, 2015, 06:45:29 PM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alebion

I suspect we should both be careful when using wiki as a reference as any true scholarly work would not allow that. LOL.
I did not use wiki for research, I knew what I was looking for. The term Albion is still occasionally used, occurs in old welsh and Irish texts and is the current Gaelic name for Scotland, i read the name on an official government building in Edinburgh years ago.

The term is also used by Englands enemies in this context:

http://www.encyclopedia.com/doc/1O214-PerfidiousAlbion.html

I did know the term but did not know where it came from, the french invented it.
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Anyway Without doing a study i'd be unsure of what the true root of the islands name is.
Read the article, it is actually quite accurate.
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As to why Jim used it for the spire i'd have to defer to him. Aurora was roman not greek, and Olympia could be from either root. The point of the reply for me though was that Auroran most likely has nothing to do with spain.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Second Aristh on November 14, 2015, 08:13:19 PM
Yeah, Albion is definitely a reference to an old name for Britain not some random offspring of Poseidon, just look at the spire's culture.  For example, the focus on tea isn't a coincidence.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on November 14, 2015, 08:16:52 PM
I never had any doubt. We (in Argentine) still heard "the blonde Albion" sometimes as a reference to the British Islands. Never had doubt about that, I am familiar with the use.
Still, perhaps reading the thread will tell you why I am convinced Aurora = Spain. I barely began rereading and the name Cortez and Castillo are clear enough (even when I admit Itasca being a name from USA disorients me)
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Sully on November 16, 2015, 12:25:21 AM
I feel like this thread has more people trying to marginalize the offense Dina is arguing, rather than acknowledging it.

Some of y'all are reaching pretty far, too.  It's kinda rude.  And weird.

"I'm offended by these depictions, and here's why."
"I, with my completely different cultural background(and philosophy as a reader), didn't parse nuance the same way, so your feelings are wrong, and so are you."

I'm pretty confused by people saying, "Oh, yeah, Albion is clearly British, because of this characterization..." but somebody saying, "I find the Latin stereotyping of Aurora offensive" gets a response of "Oh, you're just making things up and reading too much into it, it's totally not an analogue to an Earth culture/history."  Really?  That odd sound you hear is cognitive dissonance.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Arjan on November 16, 2015, 06:06:13 AM
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All characters countries appearing in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons countries, living or dead, contemporary or historical is purely coincidental.

And we know that disclaimer is sometimes fiction as well.
And even more useful as real countries are the cliches about real countries. Some writers hide it better than others by combining, mixing and changing themes but it happens a lot.

Tolkien, Howard, Eddings. Especially in fantasy.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on November 19, 2015, 05:09:36 PM
Sully, thank you  :)
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Mith on November 19, 2015, 07:23:20 PM
I guess where I sit is that I read TAW not as a future of humanity, but more of a alternate past in terms of cultures. 
I'll try to respond to this the best I can, but I am sure I will slip up in my words.

Steampunk (to my knowledge) tends to be heavily influenced by Victorian Age England and Europe if one goes international, so that is why the protagonists are all based on the UK and generally other European nations.  There are likely Steam punk stories that are based out of non-European countries, but I am not aware of any specific titles at this time. 

From what I can find, Spain at the time was in decline, and was one of the poorest countries in Europe at the loss of it's colonies, and could not readily compete with the UK.  The country was not able to easily develop itself to utilize it's own natural resources and fell behind on the world stage. 

Can the book be read as spreading bad stereotypes about Latin American governments?  I can understand that point of view, since a lot of the prejudice that can be cast against Spain can be cast against Latin America.  However, I am skeptical that Jim truly had any conscious or unconscious bias against Latin America or Spain in the context of the story.  I believe he drew his inspiration from the historical context of Spain in terms of culture, and so he has no intent in terms of spreading bad stereotypes or prejudice.
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Sully on November 19, 2015, 07:34:02 PM
((Dina  :-*))

Lack of malicious intent or genuine ignorance doesn't mean it can't be legitimately offensive, though.

I think some of the gay jokes in Dresden are cringeworthy bad(the earring conversation, especially).  If "being ____" is the punchline, it's probably an insensitive, bad joke.  Was it in character for Dresden?  Absolutely.  Do I think it was in poor taste and should've been left out?  Yes, yes I do.  Does it greatly upset me?  No.  Do I think Jim's editor should've gently said something like, 'you're making being gay a punchline, and that's kind of offensive.  You try to be inclusive in so many ways-are you sure you want this in here?' to try and convince him to cut that joke?  Yes.  Hell, for all I know, that conversation happened, and Jim decided to leave it in.

On a side note, that byplay actually confused me a bit, because Harry and Thomas used the whole Tomás thing as an explicit criticism of bigotry...and then Harry makes off-color jokes in poor taste. ::)
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Sully on November 19, 2015, 07:38:18 PM
And we know that disclaimer is sometimes fiction as well.
And even more useful as real countries are the cliches about real countries. Some writers hide it better than others by combining, mixing and changing themes but it happens a lot.

Tolkien, Howard, Eddings. Especially in fantasy.

David Weber, too.  He's full of stuff.  "All fictional, no relation to living or dead people or events!  Really!"  Then you look at the names of things, some battles are lifted straight out of history, etc.  It works for his audience!  He sells lots of books!  It's clearly not a personal handicap, but c'mon.

(Rob S Pierre being a murderous tyrant?  Really?  Gosh, I never saw that coming...)
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Dina on November 19, 2015, 07:48:34 PM
(LOL, Rob S Pierre)
Title: Re: Should I feel offended?
Post by: Quantus on November 20, 2015, 04:49:22 PM
((Dina  :-*))

Lack of malicious intent or genuine ignorance doesn't mean it can't be legitimately offensive, though.

I think some of the gay jokes in Dresden are cringeworthy bad(the earring conversation, especially).  If "being ____" is the punchline, it's probably an insensitive, bad joke.  Was it in character for Dresden?  Absolutely.  Do I think it was in poor taste and should've been left out?  Yes, yes I do.  Does it greatly upset me?  No.  Do I think Jim's editor should've gently said something like, 'you're making being gay a punchline, and that's kind of offensive.  You try to be inclusive in so many ways-are you sure you want this in here?' to try and convince him to cut that joke?  Yes.  Hell, for all I know, that conversation happened, and Jim decided to leave it in.

On a side note, that byplay actually confused me a bit, because Harry and Thomas used the whole Tomás thing as an explicit criticism of bigotry...and then Harry makes off-color jokes in poor taste. ::)
well, fwiw, when I read it I thought that the intended punchline was Harry's silly insecurities, rather than being gay.  But looking back it might not have been there; it would have taking a jab from murphy or somebody to solidify the target of the joke as his own fragile ego.  It would have in fact fit rather well with their budding flirtation in parts of the story.