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McAnally's (The Community Pub) => Author Craft => Topic started by: SCARPA on May 28, 2010, 01:21:31 PM
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Would love to get some input on the Authors website for my novel, Veil of the Dragon. (See below)
I posted it as I am finishing up the novel this summer. Basically ading some length to it to bring it closer to 400 pgs.
But I would greatly appreciate any insight ayone has on either the site or the work. The prologue is posted on it.
Thank you!
www.tombarczak.com
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Couple of comments:
1) get rid of the word homepage. Take it out of the Header, and change it to the word Home on the button.
2) dark blue link colors on black background = can't read a damn thing.
3) frame up your prologue to be more 'center of page' and less wide. Clean up the carriage returns.
4) as a corollary to #1, get rid of the name of the page you're on from the header. Instead have the 'button' darkened depending on which page you're on.
5) Good luck!
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Thanks for the tips.
Unfortunately the dark letters are not my doing but stupid gamevance advertising.