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Author Craft / 24 hr clock in dialogue
« on: March 04, 2013, 09:10:42 PM »
My test readers have advised I use the european/military 24 hour clock (13:00 for 1 pm, 20:00 for 8pm etc) for my story and I concur.

My question is how do european civilians describe such times when speaking?  I know the military says thirteen hundred hours and such. I do not recall european civilians I've talked with using such terms. I don't recall any instances of people using the 24 hour clock in speech in shows like Dr Who or Misfits. Do I just use numerals 03:15 or 13:20 and let the reader figure it out?

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Author Craft / Test Readers - Limits
« on: December 07, 2011, 03:12:53 AM »
Hi,

I understand that test readers are supposed to do things such as mark up where when the action is confusing, highlight the adverbs, make a notation "pass." (or some such) for passive voice, or say a character or scene is extraneous and could be cut.

If they start re-writing phrases and sentences (sometimes making them flow better) does that make them co-authors, or is it just accepted that test readers get excited and stick their oar in the water occasionally? 

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Author Craft / Famous Dead People
« on: November 09, 2011, 08:35:58 PM »
Hi,

What are the rules about including famous dead people in your story?

I suppose getting permission from the heirs is the safest way, but suppose you say something critical?  Did Alan Moore get permission to include Richard Nixon in Watchmen? Did Farmer get permission from the heirs to have Herman Goehring in Riverworld, or Samuel Clemens?

I guess that as long as you don't say anything untrue it isn't libelous.

And I suppose most heirs would prefer not to give free publicity to writers they don't support and will ignore the story.

Any thoughts?


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Author Craft / Writer's Guide to Woodcraft
« on: May 31, 2011, 01:39:16 AM »
Hi,

Is there something like a writer's guide to woodcraft? Something that would cover all things forest related?  Like which plants grow together or definitely will not grow together? Or what there is to eat and how to prepare it?  Or is an Army survival guide my best bet for such questions?

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