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Author Craft / Pacing
« on: August 28, 2006, 04:11:31 AM »
Does anyone else find themselves pacing things way to fast? I find that I say in one page what would take most writers 10 and what would take Stephen King 100.

I don't think this is always a problem. I start nodding off when writers dedicate more than two sentences to describing something, so I tend to only ever give any given character or object in my novel a single sentence of description wherever such brevity is possible (though I do, of course, dwell on fun things like eviscerations).

The downside is that sometimes--especially in the longer chapters where a lot is happening--this pace can be exhausting. I wrote a 4000 word chapter the other day (4000 words for a chapter is positively epic by my standards) and no matter how I tweak it, I can't make it read like it wasn't written by an overzealous crackhead. By the 1000 word mark, every sentence is crashing into every sentence the follows. Reading it feels like running a marathon where the hurtles are all placed three inches apart.

Is there any way I can fix the pacing without making the chapter boring by my own standards? 

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Site Suggestions & Support / Allowed Language
« on: May 31, 2006, 03:52:08 AM »
fuck

Is that okay to say here? Because I usually talk like a character from a Quentin Tarantino movie, but I've been making an effort to keep myself PG-13 around here. Can I drop F-bombs too, or do I have to wait until I get my own forum?

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