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DF Reference Collection / Re: Series Spanning Plot Threads
« on: November 15, 2012, 11:07:32 PM »
Posting in what will soon be an epic thread.

Also, I'm not certain what your criteria are for separating various threads/arcs, and what qualifies as inception, but in Storm Front, Harry does mention his Fairy Godmother, the White Council, the Doom of Damocles, his shield bracelet and blasting rod, his office, and holy shit, this list could get huge fast.

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This looks like a whole barrel of fun, so I'm purposefully gonna avoid looking at anyone else's answers until I've finished my post.  Sorry if I retread over any old ground.


1 ) Harry usually has a few supporting characters in each book.  Who do you think will be the main sidekick in Cold Days and in what way will they help?  Who else will have a significant contribution to the plot?

This one's pretty much a no brainer.  Harry's been removed from his usual companions, and he's gonna have to be navigating Faerie.  Toot has lost his source of Pizza payment, and so the 'Za Lord's militia will have largely scattered, but the core members of the Guard will have held together, with Toot as their surprisingly capable commander.  In fact, I'd be willing to bet they'll have carved out a nice little domain for themselves among the lower-ranking winter Fae, due both to their history of working together for a common goal, and Toot's surprisingly capable leadership.  I wouldn't be surprised if Toot were knee-high by the time Harry starts PT.  He'll take it upon himself to show Harry all the ins and outs, giving Harry all kinds of information about things of (seemingly) no pertinence, while at the same time, being nearly useless for the things Harry actually needs.  I mean, he may be a bigger deal these days, but the habits formed over the course of centuries as a scatterbrained pixie aren't going to go away overnight.  However, something he mentions in passing, something about the relations and politics between the lowest ranking members of the Winter and Summer courts, will prove vital to Harry's eventual solution.  I even predict that Harry will realize, either that Summer and Winter are very much in collusion, with both Mab and Titania working together toward a common goal, or that Titania is the one who has been insane all along.  Not sure which.

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2 ) At the end of Ghost Story, Harry has said goodbye to all his friends in Chicago.

a. Who will be the first friend to find out Harry isn't dead? 

Of his 'friends,' Elaine will be the first to find out, or possibly Fix.  Elaine will be very much involved in whatever's going down though, and this book will end up either clearing her, pretty much for good, or culminate in her ultimate betrayal.  Again, I'm not sure which.  Either way, she still has a major debt to clear with Summer, despite what she said at the end of Summer Knight. 

Of the Chicago crowd, my money is on Marcone being the first to Know, through Monoc.  However, Harry will appear to Murphy first, though she may be in a big-ass scrap with the JLoC when that happens.

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b. What shenanigans/snark will Harry use when he "re-appears"?

"I am Harry the White, and I return to you now, at the turn of the tide!"

(Option B: "I got better!")

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c. Who will have the coolest reaction?

Butters may well continue any geek quote Harry uses for his re-appearance.
 
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d. Who will have the most touching reaction?

This one will depend on who you're more invested in, as a reader.  For me, Molly, who will finally be able to break down and cry, after having had to be strong for so long.  The sudden relief will be what nearly breaks her, but the fact that she can still cry will show there is hope.  She'll probably kiss him. For many, Murphie's reaction will be the most touching.  She'll kiss him too, and then she'll punch him right in the face.  Honorable mention, Thomas, again with the fist to the face.

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3 ) In nearly every book, Harry usually comes up with a new powerup/tool/way of making things go boom.  Given that he just became the new WK, what new abilities will he rely on and which new ability will be the most useful to him during the story (and how)?

Harry will continue to refine his current evocations, as well as playing with more complex combos.  I think we'll see Harry use Ice as a defense again, perhaps to make a temporary shield that doesn't require constant juice. Perhaps a  defensive igloo to buy him some time to pull off a big working.  He may also use it as first aid, to stop bleeding.  Extra points, if he uses it on Fix.

I also think he'll learn some tricks about Faerie glamours. Magic disguises of seeming, similar to the potion he used in Fool Moon.  He's used them before, and to good effect, but I think he'll get some good ideas here.  I also think that we'll really start to see the effects in a couple books when he pulls of a really clever disguise, similar to how he used Luccio's fire needle in Changes.   With Fae tutelage and soulfire to give his crafting solidity, it's possible that he could create something that would fool normal detection methods, perhaps even cause difficulty for the Sight (I doubt he could fool it completely, but he might be able to make it difficult to figure).

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4 ) Harry generally has a "Big Bad" to worry about.  In fact, according to the blurb, Harry is going after someone very specific.  Who will that enemy be, and how will Harry take him/her/it down?
 

I would love it to be Dracula (Baby Vlad, not Daddy Drakul), just for the cheesy dialogue, but I don't think that's likely.  We've already got the Fae and the Fomor plotlines going strong.  I don't think Mavra is due to show up for another book or two, at least, and it would be disappointing to have Harry make like Buffy without her at least making an appearance. 

I'll say Mab will order Harry to kill Santa Clause, mostly because it would be hilarious. I don't think we'll have a clear cut "Big Bad" here, rather several majorly badass proxies. 

Still, we need a badguy who really deserves a beatdown.  Not really sure on that one. Might come back to this.

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5 ) Harry usually faces some sort of "Choice" in every book.  A point where the easy way out will cost his soul/humanity in some way. According to the blurb, this book will be no different.  What will be the most crucial "choice" Harry makes?
Follow Mab's orders and kill the Clause, or defy her will and face the consequences?  Also, how far is he willing to go to preserve Fix and Lilly's lives during their duels?

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6 ) As the new Winter Knight, Harry is pretty much garunteed to encounter his Summer counterpart -- Fix.  What will their interactions be?  Will Fix survive?

Harry will, at various points, have to deal with Fix, the Lily, Gruffs, and a shitload of elves desperate to protect their jolly bearded leige.  Fix and Lilly, who are obviously lovers, will attack pre-emptively, and wipe the floor with Harry, but Harry will manage to escape.  On the second encounter, they'll take Harry captive, because let's face it, Harry always ends up captive, however, it turns out that they're basically being controlled as a puppet, and Harry will manage to find a way to exploit that to escape.  Third encounter, Harry's gotten a hang of the whole knight thing, and he has Fix's number, but he leaves him alive,  possibly using that freezing as first aid trick I mentioned earlier. Eldest Gruff will give him a donut, and laugh.  Tiny will have thoroughly rustled jimmies.

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7 ) Jim has mentioned that it's about time now to start revealing some of the motivations/dealings of the shadowy figures working behind the scenes (i.e. what Harry calls the "Black Council").  What Black Council secrets/actions will be revealed in this book?

8 ) There are many WAG ("Wild A$$ Guess") theories on the boards.  Write up to three WAG theories you believe are correct that will be confirmed (or at least have evidence in favor of) in Cold Days.

9 ) Extra credit:  Write down any prediction about that you think might improve your final score.  Only issues aluded to within Cold Days will be counted.

I'll have to come back to these

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DF Reference Collection / Re: Questions for Jim 2012 style 2
« on: September 26, 2012, 08:42:23 PM »
I could see that.  Though Magic still has to do business with the Laws of Physics, and in theory somebody had to write those Laws.

There's another WoJ that says there is no upper limit on what magic can accomplish.  If a practitioner has enough juice, and a strong enough will, they can literally do anything they can imagine. 

The whole thing about how magic has to do business with 'the laws of physics' might well just be the way an individual practitioner's will interacts with all the other 'wills' currently at work upon the universe.

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Author Craft / Re: 1st vs 3rd
« on: July 03, 2012, 12:54:34 AM »
I was with you for the I, M, H, and even the O, but you lost me on the T and G.

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Author Craft / Re: 1st vs 3rd
« on: July 02, 2012, 06:03:50 AM »
I personally dislike this technique.  I'm perfectly fine with multiple perspectives, but if it's done as a one off, or just to provide a bit of dramatic tension (where the audience knows something but the protagonist doesn't), it always lessens my immersion, and frankly strikes me as lazy writing.  It's perfectly possible that someone has used this technique to great effect, or that I'm unjustly discounting it because I'm stubbornly set in my own preferences.  I'm not any kind of literary buff, and have no formal training.  I'm just a guy who reads 5-6 novels a month, and would like to write stories for a living someday.  Still, the stories I find most engaging tend to either stick with one perspective to maximize empathy, or weave together a braid (or in some cases, a tapestry) of perspectives together to allow for more complexity and broader scope.

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Author Craft / Re: 1st vs 3rd
« on: June 28, 2012, 01:53:14 PM »
People have been telling stories for a long time, and more importantly, people have been listening/reading/watching stories for a long time.  Audiences tend toward specific structures/devices/methods for a reason, and while the "why" of such tendencies are certainly open to interpretation and debate, "what" they are is a bit more concrete.  You can try to "mix things up" by switching tenses, point of view, etc. Lots of authors have done so, with varying degrees of success. Thing is, if you play with conventions, it's going to be jarring to audience immersion.  Shaking things up can be a good thing, but it must be handled delicately for it to have its intended effect. 

It's your book, and you can do anything you want with it.  The stories most often touted as "brilliant" often flout convention, but the reason there's so few of them is because it's very difficult to flout convention and still keep your audience at the same time.

I personally dislike books that switch between first and third PoV's, and I've yet to find an example where the same effect couldn't be achieved, and better, without resorting to that particular conceit, but that's only one person's opinion.

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Author Craft / Re: Oh jeez, does this seem like too much of a ripoff?
« on: June 27, 2011, 03:26:05 AM »
One of the rules around here is to avoid putting story ideas on the forum itself. It could cause jim problems if he ever wrote a story with a similar concept. I don't think there's anything wrong with something this general, but if you're going to go into more detail, you should probably take the conversation somewhere else, or at least go to private.

As for the monster hunter idea, it all depends on how it's handled. There's not enough detail there for me to say.

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Author Craft / Re: Addictions - your experiences?
« on: June 27, 2011, 03:23:00 AM »
You guys are amazing, thanks. You gave me exactly what I needed.

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Author Craft / Re: Addictions - your experiences?
« on: June 27, 2011, 01:12:51 AM »
Exactly. I've seen the same thing, but I've also heard some stories about addicts that manage to stay at their jobs during the process.  I don't know if that was due to different constitutions, different levels of addiction, methadone therapy, or just plain lies.

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Author Craft / Re: Addictions - your experiences?
« on: June 26, 2011, 08:39:22 PM »
Sorry to necro this thread, but I have a specific problem relating to this topic.

Without going into too much detail, a character has been using drugs as a means of controlling my protagonist for the past couple of years. With the events of the story, that supply will be cut off, and she'll have to contend with something approximating heroin withdrawal.  The addiction is important for later books in the series, but for now I need to know how to handle it.  In this first book, my protagonist is a young teen, and while her physiology is somewhat more robust than human normal, the general rules still apply. 

What I'm looking for are specific details about how much such a serious withdrawal would hamper someone mentally, emotionally, and physically over the course of a week or two.  Getting more drugs is not a viable option, so she won't be having to battle temptation or anything, just the unavoidable symptoms.  Her normal routine tends to include scrambles across rooftops at night, and sneaking into and out of places that most people consider inaccessible.  What I'm trying to figure out is whether this will simply be more difficult, or flat out impossible.

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And to think, I was proud of my 2k words =(

Not to mention that those 2k words aren't anything that  I'll ever be able to publish =(

sigh.

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Started compiling a lot of loose documents and handwritten papers into a comprehensive story bible using wikidpad.  Spent about 3 hours with it yesterday and made some good progress.  I also got 554 words written on a scene that might just end up in the story.  It's a ton of fun going over all my random-ass notes, especially when I find something I honestly can't remember having written.  Most of the time they're the "I'm glad I found this before anyone else could read this crap" kind of discoveries, but every once in a while I find something and think "Wow! That came from me? I'm sortof impressed with myself."

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A new thread right in time for my new project. Auspicious? Guess we'll see.

Got 714 words of narrative written today, exceeding my goal by 214.  Unfortunately, every word was almost immediately rendered useless since the brainstorming session that followed altered the plot sufficiently that the scene not only won't make it in the book, but also could never have even occurred in the new timeline.  Two steps forward, three steps back, snafu.

The new continuity brought another scene to mind, so I'm gonna go get it out of my head and onto the page.  We'll see how long this one lasts.

Edit: 273 words of pure crap.  That'll have to do for the day.  My brain is gonna be sore in the morning.

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This is a fantastic passage from The Name of the Wind by Patrick Rothfuss where the protagonist is challenged by the girl he likes (heh, understatements are fun) to choose a flower that suits her.  It might not help you much with your specific goal of finding "good" or "evil" flowers, but the passage sheds a lot of insight into the complexities of flower symbology, and might prove useful, especially if you want to have a morally complex magical system.  

My recommendation is to simply read The Name of the Wind.  It's one of the very few books that I recommend equally to anyone, without reservation or qualification.  It is damn damn damn damn good good damn damn good good good damn good... damn.  If you still would rather just read the quote, I'll include it below in spoilers.

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-The Name of the Wind (Ch. 62), by Patrick Rothfuss

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Author Craft / Re: Fictional curse words
« on: June 14, 2011, 12:40:26 AM »
Using "made-up" words and terminology in any context is a delicate balance, and all the more so when it comes to invective. Generally these moments in your story will come when a character wants to emphasize his/her seriousness.  These key scenes will either make or break the immersion for many readers.  One mistep and you'll find yourself landing in either hopeless melodrama or unintentional hilarity.

Joe abercrombie has a pretty good post on the subject of swearing which can be found here:
http://www.joeabercrombie.com/2007/09/23/zounds-swearing-in-fantasy-2/

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