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McAnally's (The Community Pub) => Author Craft => Topic started by: CenturionsofRome on January 12, 2014, 09:27:10 PM

Title: Adflictus Planis- feedback please
Post by: CenturionsofRome on January 12, 2014, 09:27:10 PM

I have begun writing my series Adflictus Planis, and I have finished the first four chapters already. I would like feedback on whether you guys like it or not, and wheter anyone would be interested in buying the book when it's published.
Chapter 1: http://centurionsofrome.deviantart.com/art/Adflictus-Planis-Herald-of-Change-Chapter-1-421325955 (http://centurionsofrome.deviantart.com/art/Adflictus-Planis-Herald-of-Change-Chapter-1-421325955)
Chapter 2: http://centurionsofrome.deviantart.com/art/Adflictus-Planis-Herald-of-Change-Chapter-2-423672121 (http://centurionsofrome.deviantart.com/art/Adflictus-Planis-Herald-of-Change-Chapter-2-423672121)
Chapter 3: http://centurionsofrome.deviantart.com/art/Adflictus-Planis-Herald-of-Change-Chapter-3-425233438 (http://centurionsofrome.deviantart.com/art/Adflictus-Planis-Herald-of-Change-Chapter-3-425233438)
Chapter 4: http://centurionsofrome.deviantart.com/art/Adflictus-Planis-Herald-of-Change-Chapter-4-426522376 (http://centurionsofrome.deviantart.com/art/Adflictus-Planis-Herald-of-Change-Chapter-4-426522376)
I will only be posting these four chapters online. If anyone is interested in becoming a beta reader, please contact me.

Title: Re: Adflictus Planis- feedback please
Post by: The Deposed King on January 15, 2014, 04:02:05 AM

Quote from: CenturionsofRome on January 12, 2014, 09:27:10 PM

I have begun writing my series Adflictus Planis, and I have finished the first four chapters already. I would like feedback on whether you guys like it or not, and wheter anyone would be interested in buying the book when it's published.
Chapter 1: http://centurionsofrome.deviantart.com/art/Adflictus-Planis-Herald-of-Change-Chapter-1-421325955 (http://centurionsofrome.deviantart.com/art/Adflictus-Planis-Herald-of-Change-Chapter-1-421325955)
Chapter 2: http://centurionsofrome.deviantart.com/art/Adflictus-Planis-Herald-of-Change-Chapter-2-423672121 (http://centurionsofrome.deviantart.com/art/Adflictus-Planis-Herald-of-Change-Chapter-2-423672121)
Chapter 3: http://centurionsofrome.deviantart.com/art/Adflictus-Planis-Herald-of-Change-Chapter-3-425233438 (http://centurionsofrome.deviantart.com/art/Adflictus-Planis-Herald-of-Change-Chapter-3-425233438)
Chapter 4: http://centurionsofrome.deviantart.com/art/Adflictus-Planis-Herald-of-Change-Chapter-4-426522376 (http://centurionsofrome.deviantart.com/art/Adflictus-Planis-Herald-of-Change-Chapter-4-426522376)
I will only be posting these four chapters online. If anyone is interested in becoming a beta reader, please contact me.

It says here is chapter one and below it are lots of 'oh this is great' comments but as for the body of the text... nada.



The Deposed King

Title: Re: Adflictus Planis- feedback please
Post by: trboturtle on January 16, 2014, 02:53:24 AM

It may have to do with the Mature content filter being on, and not being abu to change it unless you're a devientart member....

Craig
(That's what I think it is....)