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Author Craft / Re: Help with query latter.
« on: July 17, 2016, 06:20:01 AM »

Best query advice ever is Janet Reid's Query Shark blog. She has a good template. Keep it professional and short.  A query is not a cover letter and not a synopsis. It'll be an email these days, so format is straight forward business.

Generally, get to the point with your book specifics as Janet lists first paragraph. This is a formal business letter. Give a one or two short paragraph description of work (a bit more than a log line) and follow up w your writing credentials. Read Janet's advice if your creds are light.

THE GOAL OF A QUERY IS GET THEM TO ASK FOR PAGES. You don't get into long explanations anywhere, but make it zing. There are definite self-destruct word choices and phrases to avoid. No cute, "How will she save the world?" questions. See Query Shark. Add her via tweet too.

A synopsis is usually an attachment, I assume. Specifically,  it is single spaced and present tense. It is and isn't a listing of your plot points. And it needs to 'show' your voice and writing personality style for the work you are submitting. It shows you can be concise and professional. It will show your plot ability and that you can handle a long form work. And keep normal margins. Don't cheat. *smile* And don't hide the ending. You put it all out there.

My fav quote on synopsis was our Neurovore who said, "If I could tell my 400,000 word manuscript in two pages, I would have."

Honestly, if the editor or agent goes ape shit on synopsis ability, s/he and I will never get along anyway. I'd consider them ready for a mental ward. Not all agents ask for them and prefer those 1st 50 pages if they are interested, but here's their world...

Anyone can polish up the 1st 50 or pay someone to do it. A synopsis will show him/her that you can sustain it, understand plot structure, can create 3D characters, employ tension over the whole novel, and make the reader care/invest in your story.

And I don't think you'll sell your novel with either, but you might sell them on you. That's your goal. Aim for perking his/her interest in you..

Best wishes!


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Author Craft / Re: Did you write today?
« on: May 11, 2016, 08:59:24 PM »
Way to go DK!

This past month, my mind made a major turn. I've been a one pony type of writer. I would do one novel, or one short story etc. But this weekend, my mind exploded. I completed two short stories, plowed well through a third, and attacked a novel chapter outline that I need to send to the publisher. And no, I didn't take the Limitless pill.  I think my mind simply stepped into a new realm of creativity. I can now understand how one of the film producers at WyrdCon said he routinely handled eight projects at any given moment. Wow, I can't do that, but my mind did step into a new learning box.

I feel like fate dealt me a new super hero card.

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Author Craft / What is your best advice for a Fan to Author panel?
« on: February 01, 2016, 09:29:14 PM »
Yes, I've been asked to be on a panel with the above discussion at left Coast Crime (mystery/thriller fan con) in Phoenix this Feb, and that is the topic.  http://leftcoastcrime2016.com/

What advice would you give? What advice would you find helpful?

Any and all would be appreciated!

Meg

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Author Craft / Re: Small run printing?
« on: December 28, 2015, 10:47:08 PM »
I see Create Space from several people. You might try messaging LizW65

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Author Craft / Re: Could use a little help on two items
« on: November 17, 2015, 09:44:59 PM »
I like the Olympia trick for the name problem. Open up the wikipedia page for the Olympic team of the country you are looking for and mix and match the names you find there. You can even go by years, to see what might have been popular.
cool. cool. cool.

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Author Craft / Re: Bookbub really works
« on: June 19, 2015, 07:28:18 PM »
And I've no idea what you're saying, but obviously I will send you a 'great and awesome job' post even if it is quite belated! Congrats!

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Author Craft / Re: Too many species, or not enough?
« on: June 19, 2015, 07:26:23 PM »
Keep in mind that the Star Wars world was conceived with a major cheat. You could physically see the races on the screen. When you read the followups, they simply work off the knowledge the reader has assimilated.

K.I.S.S. - I agree. If you limit the number of races you do not risk losing readers.

It is how you introduce the races that counts. The more races you have the more you need to spread out the introductions. (And the best intro is in context of action rather than reporting.)

Now, wading into backstory discussion... Nah, not going there. Let's face it, you can either do this exceedingly well - think GRR Martin (And I curse thee "for the watch" move!). Can you accomplish that massive world building?

It is easy to add a race or a world species backstory, but if you included it initially and then have to cut it for reader clarity and purpose of the plot? Ouch, that's a lot of work going into little 'cut' files that may never see the light of day again.

Jim once famously said on moving into the comic book industry, "I knew that a picture paints a thousand words, but I didn't know that I would have to write a thousand words per panel."

The visual advantage that Star Wars had probably isn't something that you can take advantage of working.

Another example of multi-races is the Harry Potter series. My guess is that she had tons of the race differences in her head for all the animal species but included very little in the actual text by comparison.

Best wishes on your project.

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Author Craft / Re: opinion wanted
« on: April 01, 2015, 09:21:53 PM »

...As far as Mrs. Angela Sudbury was concerned there was way too much serious stuff in these kid’s life with there being a war going on. If the children wanted to believe in fairies and evil witches let them have their fantasy. Life was already hard enough without a little bit of pretend and she did not see how this was different from saying yes there is a Santa clause or putting a pence under the pillow from the tooth fairy when a tooth was lost.

Be cautious. This is from the point of view of the adult, but you are writing for children. You probably need to be in the child's mind trying to puzzle this out. Writing for children is difficult. You need to find that young voice and stick to it through thick and thin. Your instinct to cut was a good one, I think. Let the children explore and discover. No child reader wants to hear what an adult has to say. As to your other quotes. Those work for me...  Good luck! And your protag needs to be about two years older than your target group. Don't write down to them, but write who they are in your voice.

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Author Craft / Re: Making it real
« on: April 01, 2015, 09:14:27 PM »
Quantus and others have great input.

I will correct you though. I think all the paranormals that feature magic hidden from humans do explain it. It gets whittled down to a short paragraph after the first book or two.

Once you have your reason, use an example of the rule happening. Keeps from an info dump. Think MIB starting with the memory wipe out flash.

Good luck with it.

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Author Craft / Re: Switching between editor mode and creator mode
« on: April 01, 2015, 09:08:24 PM »
uhm, I think your question was how you switch from editing to creating again.

Old advice: Butt in chair. and Johnny Quest's, "Never give up. Never surrender." If your butt is in the chair, things will shake out. Congrats by the way.

Well, re-read that. I wasn't being funny. Write... Write... write...

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Author Craft / Re: Process Question
« on: December 19, 2014, 10:54:08 PM »
DK is a phenomenal writer with a near perfect work ethic, continually active creative mind, and, most important I believe, does a marvelous job editing his work. Most authors are not that competent. Most authors have full time professional jobs. I dedicate 6-8 each morning to my writing. Sometimes, I skip my shower. Yes, sometimes, I do.

I'm working with a small press who signed me in January of 2014, I think. I was placed in a queue for a tentative FEB - 2015 release. The press' editor had books to work before mine.

Of course, I was thrilled and told my family. They stared at me blankly when I told them the release would be at least a year away--and that was NORMAL. I wanted to show them the check and my contract to prove it, but that seemed unprofessional.

It was a two book contract. i got busy writing the second book, not quite believing that the higher ups would want a 2nd book. The offer was that they had first right to turn it down.

Just as I finished 302 pages of Book II rough draft an email arrived. Book I that the editor loved was back. She loved about 3/4ths of it. Ha! And this was the substantive editor, not the grammar/copy editor folks. It was two drafts later (through the summer) before she handed it on. I returned to Book II rarely, but then requests started showing up. "We need a new bio of several lengths for the publicity packets and cover." "We need a new synopsis--no, not the one you wrote for your submission, but one for the back cover copy. And we need a different tone to the long synopsis you did write so we can use it for the publicity packets, and we need it in varying lengths. (I despised writing the first one. Neuro once posted that if Neuro could have written the book in one page, it would have been written that way. i concur.)

Meanwhile, me with my Pooh brain couldn't remember the first part of book II so whenever I thought I could return to revising it--I had to start from the beginning again. (My Pooh brain was so bad that I accidentally revised something revealed from Book II into Book I! Horror story! Quick detailed re-reading of Book I for additional errors like that.)

Then it got quiet again. I took a few weeks and worked my way to the 1/3 way mark of Book II. Then the copy editor work started. Far easier, but still nerve wracking. Although the copy editor is a pro--there are still tiny things I'd not gotten right and my editor missed.

The cover art work came my way. Happy wallow! No writing! Showed my family who tried to look like they remembered that I'd sold a book. They ask, "But it's not out yet?"  "No. FEB - 2015"  "Will you be a millionaire?"  "NO!" I go back to Book II and solitude.

Pooh brain has to begin again from page 1. Getting into the flow, ARCs show up. Happy wallowing. Family see them and tried to remember that I sold a book. They ask, "This is the cover?" "NO!" "But it hasn't come out yet?" Same questions all over again. Back to beginning of Book II. (After happily reading Book I and sighing in contentment.)

Then hell broke out, as in sweat was dripping off my skin. The email from my editor came, "It's time to get endorsements for CT. [the book's title that took forever to decide upon, Chaos Theory, has shrunk to CT.] And we need them by XXX."  OMG, who do I contact? Who can I bug? And where did I get the courage? It took two weeks to make a plan, create individual letters, and comb through the ten years of business cards & bookmarks I'd collected from writing conferences. I started with two I knew from SCBWI. Shock, they both wanted hard copies of the ARC. The press sent them out.

Both came back with amazing endorsements fast. That gave me the guts to go for a big endorsement from an Edgar YA Finalist in 2013. I'd contacted her when I decided to make the switch from scifi to mystery/crime fiction. She was encouraging, loved that i loved her book. She sent me a whole bunch of her promo stuff. Bless her heart she remembered me and, yes, she wanted a hard copy of the ARC.
 
Luckily, at this point I'd sent out four ARCs and I still had thirty or so names on my list of pretty good possibilities. By accident in conversation with my editor, I found out these were for the cover only, not for inside pages. SHE EMAILS ME IN CAPS, "STOP ASKING. YOU'RE TOO GOOD AT THIS!" I had three glowing ones back, and the famous one dangling. Her initial tweets were amazing. It was looking good, but then her father died. End of any reading with great sadness, then my editor moved the deadline for endorsements up. I told them to go without the last one. I couldn't bother her while she's grieving at Thanksgiving!

Book II? Yeah, well there's this short story anthology that I had a good shot of getting into, if my short story was any good. Short story moved to top of queue back in September. If it's accepted, it's mine and I'll give it away holiday season 2015 from my website. It's good, really good, but so damn hard to write! 4000 words that I sweated over. Revised. Revised. Revised. Revised.(And there will be rounds of editing from them as well!) Book II taunts.

And somewhere in there the website went live, the Goodreads author's page went up (I completely forgot the joy of receiving the ISBN. Yes, I had an ISBN--more happy wallowing), new contacts and book clubs and threads there as well,

Now the real cover is pdf'd. Show my family, who this time remembered--kinda. Same questions. Happy wallowing. Book II sits unloved.

Then--horror of horrors the famous she-freaking-loves-the-book-and-my-writing-style, especially-my-mind-blowing-ending comes in! OMG, is it too late? I query the art director, pleading and I don't care if it is unprofessional... He asks, "Who do we cut from the other three endorsements?" ARGHH. "Me, cut me!" No one wants my photo or bio that's shrunk to "Lives in IA with a horse she trained herself, a neurotic sheltie, and a ghost cat no one sees but her. And she has family she loves around too." " NO GO," I'm told. I call one of the people who had seen their names on the first cover... She was gracious and thrilled for me. How do you top professional friends like that?

I'm back in Book II--at the beginning. Now, remember that I had a full year dedicated for the first book. That's a ton of necessary revisions, a ton of changes, a ton of character voice decisions, careful comparison of white/black space, decisions on subplot threading, etc. And most important, time to rest so I could return with a fresh mind to the work.

At this point, I've put everything else on hold from a writing point of view except for a Goodreads Book Club where I nominated a book. Turns out if you nominate, you moderate. ARGHH. Grin, enjoy, and I did. I'm at the half way mark with that still stinking Book II rough draft, but it's not as bad. Maybe in another two months I'll have it to submit. Except for some blog posts like Dear Teen Me, etc. And whatever else is thrown at me.

Now, you ask why it takes so long? Uhm, the polite answer is not screw you....  :-)

PS. At this point? I couldn't care less if not one copy sells. Those endorsements prove that I've got some talent, that I've learned a great deal over the last ten plus years of being a serious author. The high of that moment when the last endorsement arrived? You can't top that--ever.

And this time, my family will need to ask me for a copy of the finished book, if they remember. Thank God for authors on sites like this. You understand the madness, the hopes, the crushing defeats, the insanity...  Happy Holidays all. May 2015 be full of villains, heroes, and amazing supportive friends.

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Author Craft / Re: Sack up.
« on: December 19, 2014, 09:02:08 PM »
If you ever want to be a better writer, contact me. I'm sure all of my information is on this page. Let me know when you're ready to learn something about what you think you know. This has nothing to do with "magic", just by the way.

Tried to fix it for you.

If you want to be[come] a better writer, contact me. My information is on this page. [insert link] *Let me know when you're ready to learn something about what you think you know.* [edit to delete two of the three 'you's, delete one 'know', cut your phrases down to two instead of five here as well for clarity.] [I'd rethink your attitude if you are selling a product, which you should have researched before posting doesn't belong here.]  This [this meaning your information, your page, or 'learning'?] has nothing to do with "magic", just by the way. [delete 'just by the way'... if you must, leave by the way, but why  ever add just?]  [Ahh, perhaps 'just' is a character voice decision?]

Yeah, shouldn't have, but my body is killing me today. I felt snarly.

Seriously, have a great holiday season everyone. Write to your heart's content and may 2015 bring joy and happiness to you and your characters. At least happiness those you want to deserve them.


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Author Craft / Re: Reluctant believers
« on: December 19, 2014, 08:43:49 PM »
Nicely said, Quantus. I concur.

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Author Craft / Re: rules on watching telivision for writers
« on: December 19, 2014, 08:40:04 PM »
I write every morning from 6 until 8. Some of that might be head time, but usually it's butt in chair. I listen to Direct TV's 856 channel which is what my grown kids call elevator music. It works for me. On Sunday mornings, I often write much longer. Then I'll relent and listen to AM news shows while I work. Generally that means I listen to the stories I'm interested in and the others I use as background sound.

When I'm deep in creating, it doesn't matter what's playing because I sink deep into the routine, but if I'm revising (which seems all the time now) I have to be much firmer about that background noise.

Frankly, it's all getting jumbled up now and I'm having to really hone those concentration skills and squeeze in more hours. There's a lot of other 'busines' stuff you need to do like the website, twitter, emails, Facebook, communication with potential endorsements, communication with friends who read the revisions, and all your bios and the synopsis you wrote doesn't work for on a cover--so you have to redo all that. Add in some love time on the press' site and requests for blogging etc. It's frustrating. Not complaining, because hey--at last, but still I'm jealous of how free I was previously.

That means the 'business' stuff happens during the evening while the tv runs to keep me company. i've been seeing a guy since last Feb and that adds in time pressure.

It's something I'm desperately trying to manage.

I meandered off topic. It's nice to voice out my worries though... Thanks for the question.


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