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DFRPG / Joined my first campaign. Pointers?
« on: February 25, 2014, 06:16:54 AM »
I was invited to join a DFRPG campaign, but I don't have any RPG experience.

The DM knows the story universe pretty well, but none of the other players do.  They're all seasoned RPG folks, though.  I've read each book at least three times, so I figure my knowledge of the Dresdenverse will compensate for my noobness.

So I'm an apprentice wizard with 4+ lore, and one of my jobs will be to advise the other players on magic and politics.  I figure I'll learn the game as I go.  For now I'm just interested in figuring out some fun spells, and I'd like your advice.  Also, if you have any examples of standards, I'd be interested in hearing them.

Anyway, I've decided to go earth/water mage, and there isn't a whole lot of text support for those two elements.

Leg crusher:  A disabling spell that opens a sinkhole below an opponent and quickly snaps back, crushing leg bones.

Feasible?  I'm worried that the DM might accidentally make me kill someone by opening the hole too big and crushing a torso or something like that.  Is this something I should be wary of?

Coinshot:  This is stolen from Mistborn.  Harry uses his sword cane as a focus for spells involving magnetism.  Are there special rules governing this?  Do magnetic spells always attract metal towards the caster, or can I be more versatile with it?  For example, can I take a handful of ball bearings and shoot them outward towards a hostile?

If not, magnetism still has the advantage of disarming opponents and maybe I can even hit people with metal objects when my opponent is between me and the object itself.

Dampening Feild:  Can I use water to dampen the magic of others?  Say, pull ground water out of the earth and interpose it between me and an oncoming evocation?  Can my earth magic help me pressurize the ground water to assist pulling it out of the soil?

All of these ideas are pretty high-octane.  Would they cause me an unreasonable amount of stress?

These are just my first ideas, I'm going to mull t over some more.

Thanks in advance :)

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Site Suggestions & Support / Can a deleted account be reactivated?
« on: January 29, 2013, 04:04:21 AM »
Say I deleted my account in a moment of passion and came to regret it the next day...

Could I get it back?  If so, do I lose my post count?

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Author Craft / "Borrowing" Ideas...
« on: January 18, 2013, 10:53:05 AM »
I'm sure this happens all the time..  I came up with what I thought was an original idea, but somebody had beat me to it.  Nothing is new under the sun, and all that jazz.

I'll probably never get around to writing it, but I had an idea for a novel that blended contemporary urban fantasy with sword and horse through the simple expedient of introducing something I've been calling "the Shadow".  It came upon humanity as a surprise, and nobody (it seems) really know what caused it, why it happened, or how to reverse it.

The Shadow is some substance that had flooded the earth that caused a complete arrest of not only technology, radio waves, electricity, etc... but also combustion itself (happily taking guns out of the equation, as well).  This is just a plot device, though.  The world-building, the characters, and the messages would all be my own.

The problem is that the idea isn't so original.  The show "Revolution" is using the same idea, but I've been told that an author named S.M. Sterling had published a novel using that very same idea in 2004.  I haven't read it, and I don't want to for fear of it having an influence over me if and when I do decide to write this thing.

Which leads me to my question:  If I did write a novel using this idea as a major plot device, and I put my own spin on things to make it a unique story, would I then be able to submit it to agents without those agents rejecting it outright because of a "stolen" idea?  I've read enough Butcher to understand that borrowing ideas is part of the craft... *cough*Pokemon*cough*...  but this seems to me to be more significant than that. 

I don't know why I'm worrying about it.  I'll probably never get around to it, and even if I do finish it, I don't really stand a chance at getting published.  I have about /zero/ fiction writing experience.  If I do this, it'll just be something that I do for myself (and maybe I can force it upon a few of my closer friends).  I have free time, I'm leaning towards getting serious about time management and actually giving this a serious go..

Thoughts?

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Author Craft / Beta Reader Services
« on: January 03, 2013, 10:46:55 AM »
I'm curious..

Say I have a 60,000 word manuscript and I'd like someone to beta read it for me.  I'm just curious.  I don't have a manuscript at the moment.

My question is: What services are available?  I did a Google search and got plenty of hits, but how do I find a reputable source that isn't going to rip me off (I suppose what I'm asking for is someone to act as an editor more than a beta reader)?  What's a fair price for an experienced beta reviewing and critiquing a 60,000 word novel written by an amateur?

Also, what comes with the service?  Do you get copy-editing along with criticism of the substance itself?  Does one take a back seat to the other?

Thanks  :D

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Site Suggestions & Support / Silly Question
« on: February 02, 2012, 09:38:03 PM »
At the bottom of the index page where online users are listed, does everybody see their own name listed first, or am I just special?


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Author Craft / The "Urban Fantasy" Category
« on: November 13, 2011, 08:14:10 AM »
I think this is the best section to post this question..

In order for a book to be considered "Urban Fantasy" how strictly does it have to follow the rules of what's out there already?

For example, if a novel is set in modern times but doesn't follow the first person, single POV model and also takes place in a number of places including but not limited to cities, can it still be categorized as "Urban Fantasy"?

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Author Craft / Grammar
« on: October 04, 2011, 09:57:20 PM »
I need to improve my grammar skills.  I can devote some time to this over the next three months or so.  I'm not really interested in taking a class.  If I pick up a textbook and workshop on my own, I think I can manage.  Is that a good idea?  If so, what book(s) should I use?

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Site Suggestions & Support / Possible Spoiler Sub-Board? (MILD GS SPOILERS)
« on: September 26, 2011, 07:32:36 PM »
GS was heavy on magical theory.  Harry had to confront false assumptions and learn new things about the nuts and bolts of his trade, which was totally awesome.  There are a lot of topics on the spoiler boards that deal exclusively with magical theory in the DV. 

Might it be a good idea to, perhaps, devote an area just to that?  We've been given loads of new information, and we have a whole bunch of new questions about how magic works in the story universe.  I suspect that, over the next few books, we're going to be seeing a lot more of that.  That opens the door to oodles and oodles of new speculation.  Putting it all together would seem to be a good idea. 

Thoughts?

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