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Author Craft / Switching between editor mode and creator mode
« on: February 22, 2015, 02:41:13 PM »
In the process of publishing my first book myself, I realized that with the 650,000 symbols (letters, numbers, punctuation, etc.) in addition to the thousands of literary elements (characters, settings, conflicts, arcs, plots, sub-plots, emotions, ...) that even if I got 99.9% of it all perfect, it would still leave about a thousand errors. And with each error comes the possibility of kicking a reader out of the story (there might also be some that luckily add charm, which one runs the risk of removing through the editing process). In addition to this, my brain is able to compensate for errors far too easily, making it harder to see what problems exist in the book (which I hear is why even the best copy editors will probably only get about 80% of the grammar and spelling errors).

So I understand much better why even publishing companies with there teams of editors still leave a fair number of errors in books.

And while one perhaps shouldn't "look down" while setting such lofty ambitions of being in the top fraction of a percentile of authors just to be successful, I feel for those like Aaron Rayburn, author of The Shadow God ( http://www.amazon.com/The-Shadow-God-Aaron-Rayburn/dp/1418499757 ) who have the natorious reputation for being at the bottom of the barrel. A position that we, as authors, face taking up by putting ourselves out there for the full scrutiny of the world.

But I did always want to publish myself because I wanted to learn everything I could about everything involved with writing, and I'm glad that as a self-published author I am able to fix problems that are discovered as quickly as they are found.

The one thing, however, that I'm really struggling with at the moment (besides possibly a bit of stage fright) is now switching back to "creator mode" and turning off the internal editor so that I can write the next hundred thousand words. I think, with my first book, I've narrowed it down to as good as it's going to get. (Which is hopefully somewhere closer to J.K. Rowlings than Aaron Rayburn, but I know, realistically, is somewhere in between.) Perhaps it is in part because of the "stage fright" that I'm having a hard time focusing on creating the next story, which I want to be even more amazing than the first.

I think that The Deposed King makes it look too easy. I'm always amazed at how much he is able to do. I want to be more like that, but I feel stuck. How do you push forward and fall in love again with the writing? How do you keep the dream alive and still face all of the realistic problems that one must face to be successful?

I know that even James Patterson has his bad days (You've Been Warned was one of his that was at the bottom of the barrel). But as somebody new, like myself, how do you overcome the "you're not good enough" or decide that maybe this isn't for me? I'm not fishing for compliments (though I guess if you wanted to, I wouldn't mind a lot of more favorable reviews on Amazon  ;D ). I want to hear what you do on your rough days to stay motivated and keep pumping out words even if, like with Stephen King, most of them will have to be rewritten.

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Author Craft / Contagious
« on: January 17, 2015, 09:34:01 PM »

I recently came across a good book on marketing called "Contagious: Why Things Catch On"
Here's a video of him promoting it https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FN4eDk1pq6U.

It looks really good. The basic "STEPPS" are:
Social currency -- What about this will make the person telling others about you, cool?
Triggers  -- What events will naturally occur in their life to remember (and want to talk about) this?
Emotional -- How will this make them feel?
Public  -- How available is this to everyone to see?
Practical value -- How does this compare with all of the other ones out there?
Stories -- A short, memorable story, joke, or anecdote about this that is easy to share quickly?

They sound like good things to think about. The "this" doesn't have to be the book; it can be what ever promotional (or other) thing you want others to help you share.

(Full disclosure: I checked the book out of the library, but I haven't gotten past the first chapter yet.)

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Author Craft / Rules for self-publishing
« on: January 10, 2015, 01:29:31 PM »

Never give up, never surrender!

My book is currently part of a goodreads giveaway ( https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/17231348-discipulus-secretus ). Just putting a book out there, or making any words public, is like putting a piece of yourself out for everyone to see and to criticize. It takes courage, humility, and really thick skin. It can be quite an emotional experience. I don't know if having a publisher helps with all of that or not, but doing it all on your own can be nerve racking. I have great admiration for everyone who has gotten there works out there, especially for those of you that do it with so much style that it makes it look almost effortless.




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Author Craft / Paper back discount
« on: December 06, 2014, 10:23:42 AM »
If anyone is interested in the paperback version of my book, I've set up a $3.00 discount here (https://www.createspace.com/4036130) with the promotion code (W7LSZ8GF). Amazon (http://www.amazon.com/Discipulus-Secretus-Discovery-Hidden-Volume/dp/0938399241/ref=tmm_pap_title_0?ie=UTF8&qid=1415736406&sr=8-1) offers a $1.50 discount and the possibility of free shipping. So there are a couple of more options available now.

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Author Craft / Reluctant believers
« on: November 24, 2014, 11:26:48 PM »
I'm reading Girl on a Wire, where the main character is very reluctant to believe in magic. In the book I wrote this aspect is fairly similar, but reading it in a different story I wonder.
While reading a book I'm able to suspend my belief, especially in magic, easily, and think that when the main character is too reluctant to believe in the magic that is clearly happening that it starts to take away from the story.
I'm hoping to get your views and perhaps examples of when it worked and when it was too much.

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Author Craft / Magic systems
« on: November 22, 2014, 12:57:11 AM »
For my Discipulus Secretus series I wanted to create a world that was close enough to reality that readers might wonder how much of it could be true. I wanted to blur the lines some between fiction and reality. Having loved The De Vinci Code, I thought that part of the magic of that story was that sense of blurred reality. I intentionally chose my conspiracies and magic based on this principle of having my pretend world look like it could be real.

I picked a magic system that I hoped could spark more of sense of wonder and imagination because it might look more believable. I figured that a lot of the fun in reading a book like this would be in imagining that it could happen. I picked a system that a reader might at least easily see as something that others might come close to already believing in.

I've realized, however, that in doing this, in creating a world "too close to home," that it might trigger in some emotional barriers. While I intended to spark imagination and fuel the excitement and adventure, I may have inadvertently knocked against strong barriers of psychological discomfort. The word, "Mormon," alone can have strong visceral meaning associated with it that instantly raises large defenses of impenetrable strength.

With my love of many of the fictional iconizations of Catholicism, I was excited to have the opportunity to help draw and define a fictional Mormonism. Where as "ancient" and/or perhaps "lost" texts can be found while searching through one of these fictional Catholic libraries in exciting stories of the supernatural, Mormonism offered a different path for me with it's additional scriptures and promise of restored ancient truths. The fictional dramatization of this into a world of mystery, mysticism, and deception was exciting to me and I hoped to capture the imagination of those reading this into my new world of fantasy and adventure.

I should have realized that with similarities to The De Vinci Code and The Golden Compass that I was starting to tread on sensitive subjects for some readers who might have loved the same story much more if told from a completely different context, without it being so "close to home (perhaps)." I was intrigued by how much I loved The Golden Compass and didn't take into account, as much as I should have, the readers that it did alienated.

I don't want readers to be kicked out of the story because of concern or worry about how some of these issues are handled. At the same time I love making loud noises and shaking things up, at least in this literary sense. I can't imagine having written this book with a different, more fictional or fantastic, world or magic system. So I'm afraid that even though I want to apologize for any bruised or injured feelings that I may have caused by creating this fictional world of mine, I'm still going to keep it where it is.

I am thinking, though, that instead of writing the sequel next, I want to write a horror novel that is based on this same world structure. I think that will help ease readers into this imaginary world better by taking a couple of steps back from religion and just exploring the magic. I think it will also help me as a writer as well, improving all of my writing skills that are needed to write a successful horror. (And I don't think I'll take it as personally when readers are turned off because they don't like horror.)

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Author Craft / Final editing is now done!
« on: November 11, 2014, 08:46:57 PM »
I know that Steven King says that if it takes you longer than five years to get your book out that you're just lollygagging, but I definitely had a lot more to learn about writing than Steven King did. And though I had tried to publish this same title with a minimal about of out-of-pocket expenses, I realized that if I wanted other people to invest even a couple of dollars in this that I needed to invest everything I could into it. I still needed to keep my day job, so investing strictly more time was limited. I don't know that I found the best people for art work and editing, but I am happy with what has come out of this process. I still have a lot to learn about writing and publishing but hopefully, now getting this one step closer, the rate at which I am learning can increase. I'm hoping that I can get the next book out in much less than a third of the time it took me with this one, with still even better quality.

As a promotion, this weekend from Thursday, Nov 13, through Saturday, Nov 15, the Kindle version of this book will be free. Please download a copy and tell anyone else that might be interested.

http://www.amazon.com/Discipulus-Secretus-Discovery-Hidden-Order-ebook/dp/B00BOO4Z66/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1415736406&sr=8-1&keywords=discipulus+secretus

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Author Craft / hook, hold, and payoff
« on: October 25, 2013, 06:41:00 PM »
In trying to understand what makes a good story, I've come to realize how personal and at the same time how universal this can be. From the universal stand point a good story needs a good hook, the better the hook the more compelling it is to dive into and forget everything else that might try and pull you away from the story. The story then needs to hold the "listeners" attention. Very much like the hooks, the hold needs to persuade the "listener" over and over again how important it is to follow the story all the way through to the end. And then there has to be a payoff at the end. The "storyteller" has to deliver on his/her promises that the "ride" was well worth the "price of admission".

Yet for each of those, (hook, hold, and payoff) what makes them compelling is individual. Each person can have very different goals for their life, how and where they find entertainment, and how each element of their life provide fulfillment and enrich their lives to make them more than they would have otherwise been. Some of these individual characteristics can be categorized, like if they are just drifting though life without any real or solid goals or if they are strongly compelled to some very specific goals. Other characteristics can be much more individualized like a strong affinity for purple and pink dragons with social personality disorders which compel them to try and please those less likely to be accepting.

In the processes of trying to figure out what creates a good hook, hold, and payoff I've come to a bit of an epiphany about myself ( http://wordmindjourney.blogspot.com/2013/10/understanding-me.html ). But, here, I realize it is better to get you're views and opinions on the best ways to hook, hold, and deliver. Because there are so many contradictory "suggestions" out there for writers on how best to do this. And for authors that want to try their hooks and such out, I've noticed that some are tried here, I've also heard that the Baen slush pile is a good place to get feed back. What are your views on how to make the absolute best hooks, holds, and payoffs?

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Author Craft / Building vs. growing your story
« on: July 11, 2013, 07:34:14 PM »
So as I understand it, there are two general approaches to story creation in terms of either starting with a strong outline and building the story inward or starting with basic ideas and strong characters and discovering where the story takes you.

I think I personally want some combination of the two, but it proves to be difficult. As I try to grow the story, it's hard to keep track of all of the details. As I try to build the structure and fill in the story, the story doesn't seem to fit (or fits awkwardly). I imagine that I just need to keep writing to work it all out, but the more I try the more pitfalls I find.

How do you avoid all of the pitfalls of story creation, or choose which ones to focus on? (and let the others happen and hope they're not to bad?) It seems like there's a lot to keep track of.

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Author Craft / winning ecstatic sales
« on: April 24, 2013, 02:46:14 PM »
I’ve heard that there are three types of sales:
1)      Soft sales: where the person might pay for the product after they’ve seen it and know that it meets their needs.
2)      Hard sales: where the person will pay up front for the product because their fairly certain in advance that it’s probably alright and worth the risk.
3)      Ecstatic sales: where the person loves everything you’ve ever done and wants everything you can sale them and is clamoring for more.

I figure that there is nothing that exemplifies this ideal of the “ecstatic sale” more than with writing. Whether you call it brand name recognition or the “Harry Potter” phenomenon, it’s an elusive ideal worthy of all the effort it takes to reach that lofty goal.

I recently went to a writing convention where one of the authors that spoke talked about how you can’t think of being an author as a hobby. He joked that when people say to him that they want to take off for the summer and write a book he’d respond with, “Yeah, I was thinking of taking the summer off to become a neural surgeon.” The point being, that when you create a book that you want others to read, it’s got to be professionally done. If the author bypasses traditionally publishing because it’s too much work to go through all of the editing and revision stages, then the book is really just good for one reader alone, and that’s the author.

On the flip side of this however, of the approximately 1% of people that get accepted by a publisher and get a book published, the average income is about $3,000. This means that even for those that are published it’s not likely that being an author is more than just a hobby. Perhaps this is the fault of the publishing industry. Perhaps the reason for so many inadequate books that get published is because of an inadequate model.

I’ve realized that before I want to do anymore marketing of my book, I still have to improve the writing inside – which means for me paying for copy editing. Having come from a science/engineering background where my communication skills and knowledge of the English language is still quite limited, in order to give my book a more professional feel I have to pay someone that knows what they’re doing. Even as I learn more spelling and grammar rules, I imagine I’ll still need someone who can professionally look through my work and make sure I didn’t mess up. My brain is just too amazingly good at filling in details that it wants to see as opposed to what is actually there.

I think the path to getting ecstatic sales also includes holding back on other promotional methods until the quality of the product does match the standard that you want to reach. Once a bad review is out there it will limit the potential audience. On the other hand each critical review offers the potential for improvements that can be made to insure that people are ecstatic about what you have to offer.

Hopefully someday I’ll be able to make a career out of this, it’s certainly exciting enough that I can imagine enjoying creating entire universes and tour guides through them on a full time basis.

There are so many amazing people here that I look forward to reading what you have to say on the subject.

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Author Craft / 3rd Person Omniscient
« on: April 08, 2013, 12:34:01 PM »
You know I’m trying to open up a can of worms by contradicting Jim’s word on the subject. I don’t mean to offend anyone, but in September 2004 when he wrote this short statement about the omniscient point of view, I was left confused. He wrote, “Omniscient viewpoint has been out of style for maybe a century.” But of the examples he gave for the different points of view I like his Omniscient best:
First Person--Written from the interior perspective of one character. "I went to the store and bought cookies. I ate them." The Dresden Files are first person POV.
Second Person--Written as if being described to the reader as their own actions. "You went to the store and bought cookies. You ate them."
Third Person--Written from an exterior perspective to one or more characters. "He went to the store and bought cookies. He choked on them and died."
Omniscient Viewpoint--Told from the perspective of an outside, all-knowing observer. "He went to the store, never knowing that the cookies were the instrument of the Grim Reaper. If only he'd purchased milk to go with them, he might have made it. But he didn't, and so sealed his fate with sweet, corrupt chocolaty goodness."

So a warning goes here, American publishers do discourage 3rd person omniscient, especially if it isn’t limited to only being inside only one person’s head per chapter (or book). They might not even read past the first paragraph if they sense you might be writing in this POV. But I’m going to advocate for it.
It looks like their primary concern is that it was too easy for the novice to get lazy and say something impersonal and detached, like "she was angry," instead of something more engaging, like "she stormed out of the room, slamming the door behind her." Writing what your main character sees instead of what the other character’s feel is more exciting.
In addition to that, some readers find it very distracting jumping from one head to another. I think I can liken it to the “shaky cam” of cinematography. While in cinematography the effect is used to feel closer to the action and get more of a first-person perspective, omniscient point of view, I believe, is used to get a broader understanding and convey more of an authoritative perspective.  But since it can jump around a lot and since readers can’t read your thoughts it is harder to see where you might confuse them. So it is highly advisable that the POV shifts are limited as much as possible and used with extreme caution.
But since many of the classics are written using this POV, and it is so powerful, I decided to take the current American sediment of “don’t write in 3rd person omniscient” as a dare. I’m a bit of a rebel that way. I’m still learning, and I don’t know how well I’ve done (I still haven’t sold a million books yet, or even close). But check it out if you’re interested and tell me how I can do better.

https://www.createspace.com/4036130?ref=1147694&utm_id=6026
http://www.amazon.com/S-L-Rogers/e/B00BZSWRMU/ref=ntt_dp_epwbk_0

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