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McAnally's (The Community Pub) => Author Craft => Topic started by: pcpoet on July 25, 2015, 05:00:57 PM

Title: looking for coments on story change
Post by: pcpoet on July 25, 2015, 05:00:57 PM

I removed this all because it was breaking the boards' policy about no posting storyideas....sory every on

Title: Re: looking for coments on story change
Post by: Quantus on July 25, 2015, 05:04:31 PM

Consider sourcing it somewhere in the Pacific Theater?  Imperial Japan was no picnic, and that's a side of the war that is often ignored outside of Pearl Harbor and the Bombs

Title: Re: looking for coments on story change
Post by: Farmerbob1 on July 26, 2015, 09:27:45 AM

I do not know how old you are, or if the story is still taught in schools.

I really suggest you read the Diary of Anne Frank before you continue, if you have not already.

Edited out a bit of this comment, based on forum rules.

Title: Re: looking for coments on story change
Post by: pcpoet on July 26, 2015, 12:49:36 PM

I removed my posts because I just realized I wasb breaking the rule of not posting your story sorry everyone......I am just excited about my project