Sigh,
This perhaps should go in the angst corner, but it involves writing.
We have finished an entry in to a short story contest, (near future, space exploration stuff) Story came out about 16K words, contest size limit is 8K words.....
Cutting every other word sounds funny.... We are down to about 12K but are still swinging the hatchet. We have already scrutinized every word for it's ability to advance the story, trimmed interesting but nonessential plot lines, and are in the process of sweating down each paragraph to it' optimum size. Our biggest worry is squeezing the life out of the story, that is trying to keep a poblano chili from tasting like tofu. any ideas?
For those interested, the contest is here;
http://www.ralan.com/contests/listings/baenmem08.htmNote; If we cant get a story that fits the first contest our backup is this one,
http://www.heinleinsociety.org/contest.htmlRegards,
Kevin