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Author Craft / Re: Originality--How important is it?
« on: June 06, 2010, 02:10:31 PM »
So basically, would that be a no? Originality is not as important as the characters and tone/style of the writing?

A friend introduced me to the Nightside series, and I'm actually surprised by how much they are similar to the Dresden files. Well, okay, one is in a hidden city in England, and one is in America, but the characters are really very much alike, which is kind of what sent me off thinking about all this.

I'm kind of working on a teenage vampire slayer sort of book right now, but it's not like Buffy. (See, there it is, all you have to say is "teenage vampire slayer", and someone will reply, "Buffy". So much for original there.) And obviously, I'm worried about the Buffy comparison. I won't go into specifics here for fear of violating forum rules, but suffice to say that the main character is not Buffy, nor the anti-Buffy; does that make a difference? I'm worried that people will think it's some sort of warped Buffy fanfic...

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Author Craft / Originality--How important is it?
« on: June 06, 2010, 10:50:41 AM »
Another writing question. Well, more of a insecure writer question.  ;D

How important is an original plot/premise/concept to the novel?

Or is it more about the characters and the wording and so on?

Let's say I had an idea for a female wizard living in, um, New York. And the wizard was totally different from that other Barry/Larry guy  :D. You know, the sarcastic dude with the skull in his basement.

Let's say my wizard was sweet, kind, caring, timid, never sarcastic. She has no pets, lives in a huge penthouse with a pool in the backyard.She calls her mom twice a week, hates fast food and soda.  Whatever. Like anti-Barry.

And then I give this wizard a bunch of pals like supersexy cop dude who loves her, dates her, and wants to marry her; couple of sisters; vampire buddies. Again, anti-Barry.

So then I write this whole book about this wizard and how she solves a mass vampire killing.

(Don't worry, I didn't actually have the idea to write this, it's just an example. In case Jim's lawyer and agent happen to be around...I am not stealing his wizard. Relax.  ;D)

If I were to write said story, what would your opinion be of that story? Would it be, um, marketable? Is it a bad thing to lack originality in a plot?

I know the above was kind of an extreme example, but how about if one was writing a vampire novel or something of the sort? It's hard to step outside a genre entirely and be completely original.


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Author Craft / Re: Character Question (and PS hello)
« on: June 06, 2010, 09:32:12 AM »
I would agree. Sounds sort of messy for the beginning of a story. It doesn't sound like you're following a traditional story arc.

Messy = bad?

Yeah, I guess you'd say it wasn't a traditional arc as such...it kind of plops down in the middle. Well, not really the middle. It's the beginning of the story, but the middle in a chain of events.

Complicated.  ;D

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Author Craft / Re: Character Question (and PS hello)
« on: June 05, 2010, 04:16:51 PM »
Um...little hard to bring the characters out over time.

The first bit is kind of intense, where the 4 or 5 magic people are responding to a call from their "boss", and they're each doing it in their own personal way. So they're kind of brought out right there.

And then the scene with the hero guy and his family is over a family dinner sort of thing where I *try* to show his relationship to each one, and sort of foreshadowing (hopefully) which of them will come after him when the magic guys come get him.

Which is like intense character portraits in three chapters.

I'm beginning to think this might be messy...

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Author Craft / Re: Characters and devolpment
« on: June 05, 2010, 01:22:32 PM »
Bit late coming to this but wanted to add my own thoughts :D

Do you personally like or hate the main character? I mean, sometimes when character don't "jell" for me it's usually because I a) don't feel any emotion about/toward him or b) don't really know him all that well.

I think the stress test is a good idea as well (belial.1980)!

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Author Craft / Character Question (and PS hello)
« on: June 05, 2010, 01:05:27 PM »
Uh, hi to everyone.

I'm new to both the Dresden files and to the forum, but I've lurked here for a while, and I've read like 7 Dresden books in the past week, so hopefully I should be able to keep up.  ;D

I have a bit of a character question, and it's this: is it a bad thing to have too many characters?

I'll try to keep things vague so that I don't violate any forum rules. Basically, my hero guy is a normal guy who is dragged into a magical world. There are 4 or 5 magical people who work as a team to get him into the magical world, and then the hero guy has 4 family members he's really close to, and who fill important roles in the story later.

So that would be like 10 characters in the space of the first three chapters.

I'm worried that the reader might be distracted by some many names. But on the other hand, I've already cut a bunch of characters and I don't know if it's possible for me to cut out any more ???

Thanks in advance for any advice!

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