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Author Craft / Re: Author In Progress
« on: March 01, 2010, 10:40:47 PM »
  which is why writing for your own pleasure is a vocation not a career for what-- 90% of novel writers? 

Ayup.  And welcome welcome!  Good to see new budding vict*cough* aspiring dreamers ;)

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Iambic pentameter
does not quite work for this here
idea.  For seven lines
of fourteen syllables does
not seven by seven make.
So if only fourty-nine,
free flowing or strict line time?



Really, I think of the form like a sonnet: the syllabic structure is always the same, but the rhyming requirements change [see the difference between a Shakesperean and Italian sonnet].  Potential schemes:
a-b-c-d-e-f-g
a-b-c-d-c-b-a
a-a-b-b-b-c-c [c could also be a]
a-a-a-b-c-c-c [where c is neither a nor b]
a-b-a-b-a-b-a
a-b-b-a-b-b-a
etc.  So many possibilties!  That also leads to the question: you could define it by flow instead of rhyme.  Or simply be like haiku: a picture-thought that simply has the number of lines with their number of syllables.  I'd name them 'septic', but that's been taken and has a rather negative connotation ;)  I think I'll refer to them as septisyllabic septets for strict accuracy of defining the form for now.

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Here I am seeking a name
for a form of poetry
which has been unknownst, for lame
to be seven squared.
Seven lines of just seven
syllables, so iambic?
Perhaps.  Rhyming? Still unkown.

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Author Craft / Re: Found a really good article on writing today
« on: January 15, 2010, 02:03:15 AM »
[edit] what the hell is my computer doing? wrong thread.  Insert discussion about how diversifed vocabulary is also a STRENGTH of English, and how it is 'super-alive' in that it is constantly changing by use.

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Author Craft / Re: Books about writing
« on: January 11, 2010, 10:37:55 PM »
I reccomend "The Constant Art of Being a Writer" by N. M. Kelby.  It's a great look into all facets of writing, whether you write casually or as a profession.  The sections are also very convenient if there are things you are simply never going to do or to find that little piece of advice you want to read again.  Everything from writer's block and the muse to writer's communities and residencies to outling and review.

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Author Craft / Re: Author In Progress
« on: January 09, 2010, 12:50:03 AM »
My hair experiences have certainly supplied material for writing both humor and gender comparison...even the more unnerving stuff is funny now that I've got time and distance from it.

As to strategies beyond constantly taking advantage of willing alpha-readers and helpful assosciates I'm picking up a diversification of portfolio plan set out by others here.  By the end of the year I'm geared to having three seperate novel projects [in different genres] each being considered by multiple agents.  Talk about setting myself up for an ego bruising! :D

[edit]First rejection recieved!  Personalized and considerate, and the trouble appears to be the premise...)_)...(_(...*rushes to the drawing board and starts scribbling*

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Author Craft / Re: Author In Progress
« on: January 08, 2010, 09:22:31 PM »
And piks are needed for???   LOL   Like your piks.   

Apparantly I was required to back up my faux vanity remark, so I did.  Which ALSO reminds me: I'm now in touch with my aunt, who is actually in the business of writing, about making said manuscripts both better in the general sense and better in the marketable sense.  Another step forward to more rejection letters! ::)

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Author Craft / Re: Author In Progress
« on: January 08, 2010, 04:18:40 PM »
We have ample pictoral documentation of Jim's mane, and none of yours.

Piks plz.

Casually Dressed Up

plus

Free Flowing (in the best tux ever)

oh, and:

Eagle Scouts can have ponytails too

Obviously I'm not too concerned about my identity being known.  As I'm hoping to be a published author as well...yeah, doesn't matter :p

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Author Craft / Re: Author In Progress
« on: January 08, 2010, 03:51:10 PM »
Jim butcher is my hero, I think my ultimate dream is to someday be able to give a copy of MY published book for him to keep, just so I can tell him that he was the inspiration that kept me going. He's an awesome fantastic mane.

While I agree that Jim is a great guy, I have to say that his mane is rather lackluster.  Especially compared to my own flowing, curly, shiny one that I shamelessly use to garner female attention ;)

Still waiting to get my rejection letter (or not!), but it should only be less than a week now.  The anticipation is torture!  But I'm still working on making the manuscript better for submission if it ever comes to that, and working on manuscripts for both other books in the series envisioned as well as random side projects.

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A muse can be a fickle sprite,
the hint of genius but no full light,
which leaves one in the quandry of filling in the gaps.

A labour of love and of desire,
to write is like a burning fire,
but flame can't fully stem the darkness, chaps.

And so one labors in repetition,
Insanity of one's own volition,
for ideas bright can't fight the night without the artist's labour.

Like any deed of any size,
a point reached is tiring and truly tries
even the dedicated and lover through the trials of love's favor.

So like tasks necessary but menial,
One forces oneself to work and label
such deeds as salaried time in the business of the writing.

But lo! It needs to be chosen,
Lest in one mind it is frozen,
and denied the further readership and thereby lack in citing.

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Inspiration flees.
Writing becomes a chore, so:
How can I o'ercome?

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McAfee cannot
hope to match the awesome p'wer
of bad haiku here
 ;)

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It makes me want to curse and spit,
that a man can stand and hit
another with a rattan yard
and think it's fun to hit him hard.

And yet, the same male folk
get a boo-boo and whine and choke
and if a splinter they should take
can wake the dead with the fuss they make.

To think that men extol the manly
only to turn out quite pansy
hit for hit is turnabout
yet oh so many choose to pout
instead of thinking to fight fair
they bitch for being inferior
seems they forgot the cardinal rule
when stricken do not be a tool!

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To do a thing like slashing tires,
so stupid and clearly drawing ire,
such spite I find infuriating,
only the mooseburger can restrain.

For to rampage around and knock em down
is a sure enough way to gget taken downtown,
but by surrendering to the moosey bliss,
I am saved through the burgeryness.

 ;)

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This Monty Python moment brought to you by Karl TenBrew and Mt. Dew ((they didn't pay me a cent for the advertising, cheapskates)):

((Moosey-moose Mooseburger))
I’m made of moose,
I have a bun,
Mayonnaise and mustard too-oo,
Lettuce and tomato,
But never will I Moo-oo.

((Lusty chorus singers))
He’s made of moose,
He has a bun,
Mayonnaise and mustard too-oo,
Lettuce and tomato,
But never will we Moo-oo.

He’s a Mooseburger and he’s alright,
Being eaten is his plight!

((Encouraged Moosey-moose Mooseburger))
I tired to get
Some special sauce,
But then I was deny-ied.
I’m still just a mooseburger,
So through the night I cry-ied.

((Lusty chorus singers, a bit hesitant))
He tired to get
Some special sauce,
But then he was deny-ied.
He’s still just a mooseburger,
So through… the night we… cry-ied.

He’s a Mooseburger and he’s alright,
Being eaten is his plight!

((Emotional Moosey-moose Mooseburger))
I always was
So lonely
Before I was a gui-uy.
I wish I was a pastry,
Just like my dear Pa-py!

((Lusty chorus singers, confused and skeered))
He always was
So lonely,
Before he was…a gui-uy…
We wish that we… were….pastries?
*Chorus is unstead-dy!*

((Me))
So the chorus was afraid,
The mooseburger they left.
And as they ran, he cried and cried,
Of friends he was bereft!

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