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McAnally's (The Community Pub) => Author Craft => Topic started by: Abeille on July 03, 2010, 12:27:11 AM

Title: Help please
Post by: Abeille on July 03, 2010, 12:27:11 AM
Okay, so I have had an idea for a book for almost year now, and am just really geting to write it. I have the first and some of the second chapter typed up and would like some people's opinion about my writing style - Is it good or not? So, if you could please PM me if you are willing to help that would be great!

It is a fantasy story, that has not gotten to the fantasy part just yet, hahahe. I know where I am taking it, just not how exactly I am getting there... So, it would be very difficult for me to give you any plot information. Oh, and I have no clue what the title will be....
Title: Re: Help please
Post by: Abeille on July 03, 2010, 11:39:32 PM
Anyone? please? I have the first 3 and a half chapters done now.
Title: Re: Help please
Post by: Enjorous on July 04, 2010, 07:24:47 PM
Feel free to PM it to me Bee, I'd be happy to look at it.
Title: Re: Help please
Post by: shades of grey on July 04, 2010, 08:32:18 PM
^ditto here hun