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Author Craft / Re: San Francisco sci-fi...location help needed!!
« on: May 21, 2011, 05:46:17 PM »
Oooh, pretty fog!!

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Okay, never mind *blushes*

It sounds like my night clubbing tale will not have a problem then....well, unless it rains.
Nope, you should be okay. Unless something exceptional is going on, of course.

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Fog on the freeway has got to be THE scariest thing in the world...how did you get out? Or did you just stop and wait for it to fade? Or something?
Slow down, lights on, and drive very cautiously.

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Author Craft / Re: San Francisco sci-fi...location help needed!!
« on: May 21, 2011, 01:40:23 PM »
Funny how you never see the fog in Hollywood movies on San F ;D

And, um, when you say FOGGY, do you mean, "Jim, I can't see my fingers in front of my face?" or more like, "There is a mist about your person?"

I'm worried that the weather conditions might not be as good as I thought it was (grrr Hollywood for misleading me). Most of the action in the book happens at night, though, so maybe by then things will have cleared up and it will merely be a little chilly and a little misty?

Probably because fog is an impossible to control factor in filming. And it depends. Sometimes, it's just a generic fog around the whole city, other times visibility is down to about a thousand feet. If it helps, the fog is usually an early morning thing, burning off as the sun rises, though it can last for a while. So, it's not tule fog bad, but it can be VERY bad. We only get it a few times a year down here in Redwood City, so I've got some experience with it.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/San_Francisco_fog
Here, have some cool pictures.

I actually have been in a fog almost bad enough to not be able to see too far in front of me. The problem was that I was on the freeway. Not a pleasant experience to basically see a big lump of fog then FOOMP everything's white and you can't see a thousand feet in front of you.

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There's probably going to be another Virtual Signing this year, so you may have the ability to order a signed copy?
Oh gods, I'd love to be able to do that. I'd even be okay with owning two copies of Ghost Story for that.

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Author Craft / Re: San Francisco sci-fi...location help needed!!
« on: May 20, 2011, 06:32:41 AM »
Grrrrr. F*cking grrrr. I had this whole big thing written up here, and then my browser decided to play the Spinny Loading Icon game and I had to restart it, and I lost it all. Note to self for future endeavors: try copying posts every paragraph or so.

Okay, let me try again, though it probably won't be as long. I am not a San Francisco native: I was born and raised about twenty-five miles south, in a place called Redwood City. I'm not all that familiar with the city, nor am I entirely comfortable with it. I guess it's a bit like a fairy: very interesting and attractive and mysterious, but an undercurrent of danger and secrets and not all that pleasant things. Like most cities, it's got roughly two sides to it, and like a lot of other cities, there's no real defining line: the gritty stuff flows around the pretty stuff, so you're not gonna get far from it. Which really works for a supernatural story/setting. There's lots of locations you can do stuff in or have stuff set there. Golden Gate Park is REALLY high on my list of recommended locations: lots of areas to hide secret meetings and even a fairy court or two. Also, there are a LOT of areas with lots of overpasses and highways splitting and rejoining: lots of shadowy places for dark things like trolls to hide.

General notes: google maps and google street view are truly your friends. If Jim Butcher had had that when he'd gotten started on The Dresden Files, he'd get a few less light-hearted ribbings from fans. :p But it's very useful for planning routes and chase sequences. Wikipedia is another great source of information, so you can learn about famous districts, streets, and the history of the place. Even just googling stuff like "magic shops in san francisco" will get you some good results, though I'd recommend playing around with names a bit to avoid getting into trouble.

Other people have touched on the fog, but it's really worth bringing up: Frisco is FOGGY. We're famous for it, and for a fantasy/science fiction story it helps create an air of monsters hiding in the fog. Even in summer, it's cool and windy. In winter, it's wet and miserable. If you've got the sun, then it can get hot, but San Francisco is right at the end of the peninsula, jutting into the passageway between the ocean and the bay, creating some fun weather conditions. It's also hilly: from certain areas, you can see almost the whole city, while from others, you can't see anything besides huge skyscrapers and roads. Lots of roads. Though there are always trees, the smaller kind you get in cities that are planted regularly along the street.

The area around San Francisco - the Bay Area - is just as varied as San Francisco, and there's a lot of areas there for someone to get away to for an adventure or two, though relying on fast travel between any of these areas is silly at best. Traffic can get bad in San Francisco. I think the worst I've ever experienced was about an hour or so to go ten miles, and I just needed to drive across a highway running over San Francisco. So, hard to get around, but relatively easy to go to another location to expand your view. And of course, once you leave the San Francisco area, you've got Wine Country to the north, mountains to the east (eventually), Monterrey Bay to the south… there's a lot here. Also, the San Andreas fault is a great location for a ley line (I live about three miles away from the fault line, seriously)… oh wait, sorry, you're doing a science fiction story. Um… lots of wooded areas within about fifty miles of San Francisco to hide stuff in. Heck, Angel Island might be a good place for an alien landing site, and it's just across the bay from the city.

As for your questions… sorry, I'm not so hot on locations. I can do a bit of thinking and come up with some stuff for ya, if you'd want.

Man, all of this stuff is making me want to set an urban fantasy book in San Francisco. Where was Elaine working out of again? I can't remember.

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DFRPG / Re: Sharing the PDF
« on: May 20, 2011, 05:51:08 AM »
Some friends of mine and I were planning to do an online version of the game (the closest one to me is in Georgia, on the other side of the country), but I was the only one who had the books. What we were going to do was I would send them the PDFs so that they could research the game, read up, and design their characters, and once we were ready to play was they'd delete them and I'd run the game from home, using the books and the PDF to keep things straight. It'd just be between the group of us, everyone could make the notes they wanted to make and laugh at the comments in the margins, and it was basically the only feasible way to do this (mailing two heavy books like that around the world would have been a nightmare. An expensive nightmare, and we might as well have bought everyone books at that point).

I'm not the best person to answer this question, but I'd go with treating the PDFs like a book: only one person has the file at a time, everyone's asking questions and getting answers, and the people with the hard copy and the PDF help fill everyone else in. Treat it like you would a regular book would probably be the best answer. But I'd recommend asking someone higher-up on the chain than "fanboy."


As a side note, Evil Hat is super-awesome. The store I bought the books from were not a part of the program where you'd get a free PDF download with the book, but I asked someone there if I could still participate. A quick proof of purchase and a picture of me holding both physical copies later, and I had the email with the PDFs. I've got 'em loaded on my iPad so they can go EVERYWHERE with me.

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Calendar Event Discussion / Re: Where would YOU like Jim to appear?
« on: May 19, 2011, 11:03:26 PM »
San Francisco
I'm gonna quote you here, because I completely missed him the last time he was anywhere near me. Really, anywhere on the San Francisco peninsula is good, but unfortunately that Borders he appeared at a few years ago has closed.

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Author Craft / Re: Author In Progress
« on: May 19, 2011, 05:16:11 AM »
Hi, my name's Andrew, but everyone calls me Jay. I'm mostly a science-fiction/fantasy writer, and haven't done much beyond some short stories and a lot of notes for fuller ideas. I'd love to be able to show some of that off, get some constructive criticism.

I've always liked telling stories. The first story I "wrote" was in second grade, and is what I now know is referred to as an "interquel:" in this case, filling in the story between the movies Peter Pan and Hook. On reflection, this was an auspicious omen for how my storytelling style would proceed…

Since then, I've tried and failed to work on numerous stories, covering everything from lost worlds to time travel and multi-universal epics. I've currently got a bunch of ideas bubbling in my head, including:
The Covenant Wars, a deconstructive fantasy epic.
Mad Ventures, what I call a "fusion punk fantasy" about a world torn apart by magic and mad science.
Sojourner, a science-fiction space opera.
LUNAcy/i will survive, a science fiction survival horror story.
And a whole bunch of other stuff, which does not bode well for my poor stories that will never get told.

It's a bit hard to nail down my style or my likes. I like fantasy settings where the magic has rules, but the protagonists (and villains!) can figure out how to turn those rules to their advantages. I like things to be explained or justified, and if there's one thing that bugs me it's someone saying "It's magic! I don't have to explain it!": if you're not going to explain it, at least justify why it can't be explained. I like protagonists who get ahead through thinking and planning, not through deus ex machina. And, well, the ability to let people be AWESOME. If I can justify someone resurrecting a dragon or dual-wielding a death ray and a magic wand or an army of cybernetic demons battling psychic knights in powered armor, then I'll do it.

As for how I'd like to improve, I'd like to at least write and complete something. I'd like to refine my style so it feels more natural and not so purple-prosey. I want to be able to write stuff that can make people laugh and cry. I'd like to write stuff that people like. And I'd like to write stuff that I like. That may be my biggest problem, that I'm my own worst critic who sometimes can't see what people like in what they've read. I suspect that my confidence issue is what needs to be conquered before I can improve much, but hey, admitting you've got a problem is the first step to fixing it, right?

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