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Title: The I'm Writing Thread.... Celebrate your pages written etc Part II.
Post by: Paynesgrey on February 03, 2013, 06:46:45 PM
The old one hit it's expiry date, so here's a fresh one to discuss our progress...
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on February 04, 2013, 01:30:54 PM
It's so clean and new! The board smells like citrus!  ;D

I personally have not been able to set aside writing time for myself. Family life does that I guess. However over the last week and a half I have been hand writing anytime I can. It's been working really well and I have five pages to type up. Now I just need to find the time to type them up!

On the plus side I can allow myself to be messy in the handwritten version, then clean it up when I type it.
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Post by: Ren on February 04, 2013, 03:19:34 PM
Got a good start on this weeks writing, 4 pages in one sitting...yay me! IF I can maintain that pace I can easily reach my goal of completing a book by my next birthday!
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Post by: gatordave96 on February 05, 2013, 03:02:29 AM
Okay, I'll bite.

Up to 238,000 words on my first epic fantasy novel.  Spent a lot of time editing this past weekend because there were some scenes that just did not work. 
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Post by: spywolf on February 06, 2013, 07:15:25 AM
Yesterday. 300 words for two school things.
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Post by: Gilitine_Memitim on February 06, 2013, 04:18:07 PM
It was either yesterday or the day before yesterday. 1,100 some words. Around that range.
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Post by: Paynesgrey on February 06, 2013, 06:28:20 PM
About 7500 words over the last week.  Only 2500 or so are part of the WiP, but the others are for a novella which is something of a prequel I'm considering for one of Musa's theme calls. 

I've had good luck restricting any mental "leg stretching" to the same story-verse.  Granted, a four or five thousand year timeline gives me plenty of room, yet everything eventually contributes to the WiP.

The thousand-years-before prequel got a personal rejection from the editors of Clarkesworld & Penumbra, and it's working it's way into becoming a chunk of the novella.  So it counts as backstory/worldbuilding.  And that, in turn, has generated a couple of characters in the novella who will nicely fill some holes the WiP had in it's cast.  I'm thrilled that when I have an Idea Compulsions that would require something of a change in settings, I just need to jump to a different point in the WiP's timeline.  And it then creates either seed material, or something to build story towards.  I think I've bumbled into a pretty good system.
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on February 06, 2013, 09:20:16 PM
Nothing actually written over the weekend, because of being a combination of exhausted and ill such that my brain would not do that.  it appears to be well back on form now, and winter having eased up to the point where I can reasonably walk home again (-18 ! Who needs Florida !) I am getting plenty of time to mull stuff over, going back and forth between what the major adjustment of backstory and focus in WIWTWO volume #1 means for #2 (relatively little but scattered through it) and the first ten chapters or so that i have written of #3 (somewhat more) and also rethinking how best the people returning from #2 will interact in #3, particularly two who never met in person in #2 but have very strong shared history with the same people.

Chapters 5 through 11 of #3, while they are resolving one plot element, are also about introducing quite a lot of people and connections such that when there's a murder there's no shortage of plausible motives.  I do hope I have the balance right here, but that' going to be very hard to tell until I have the thing finished.
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Post by: spywolf on February 07, 2013, 09:49:47 PM
615 history essay
I think thats more then the recomended word count...
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Post by: Ren on February 08, 2013, 03:12:32 AM
Chapter 8 of the "Makeshift Mermaid" Completed (Working title)!
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Post by: The Deposed King on February 08, 2013, 04:51:40 AM
Quit the day job and flew back to the Philippines last saturday.  Almost one week back in country, decompressing and hanging around with the wife (when she's not at school) and the kids (when not in pre-school).  Finally started back in on Admiral in Spite of Himself.  Yesterday and the day before I spent revising and extending as I went back through everything I have.  Today I did 2k forward progress, on a scene that I had to redo.  Apparently it got lost somehow.  Went in a slightly different direction, more pain and hardship for the victory hahahahha.

total word count is up to 55k on AIS (Admiral in Spite)

I'm going to try and pound out a few thousand more before the wife gets home and monopolizes my time  :P have a great one guys you can do it  8)



The Deposed King
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Post by: Paynesgrey on February 08, 2013, 04:54:47 AM
I hoist a glass in your honor!  I've enjoyed the first two books greatly, and I'm looking forward to this one.  Here's to your continued success as an Official Word Herder!

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Post by: The Deposed King on February 08, 2013, 04:58:56 AM
I hoist a glass in your honor!  I've enjoyed the first two books greatly, and I'm looking forward to this one.  Here's to your continued success as an Official Word Herder!

Thanks!

That and the Ten Grand I made off of amazon for those two books tell me... I need to get busy finishing book three!!!


The Deposed King
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Post by: spywolf on February 08, 2013, 05:10:34 AM
Well done D king.
See if I was clever I would get ready for school now and go down stairs and write. :-/ (as its 5 am and I don't have to leave the house till 7 45 am)
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Post by: The Deposed King on February 08, 2013, 06:46:36 AM
Well done D king.
See if I was clever I would get ready for school now and go down stairs and write. :-/ (as its 5 am and I don't have to leave the house till 7 45 am)


Up to 57k!

58k and slowing down!


The Deposed King

P.S. - Thanks Wolf Girl Spy Thing!
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on February 08, 2013, 12:30:57 PM
Now that I've found my rhythm the book is almost writing itself! I'm about 10,000 words in and very excited.
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Post by: spywolf on February 08, 2013, 01:41:52 PM
the word(s) your looking for is show off ;)
so yeah I have not written anything
because life
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on February 09, 2013, 05:21:58 PM
Through pass on first two new chapters again, and what were first four chapters.  It is being extremely tricky to unpick and redo things with the few important changes in timing and distance just before and at the start, keeping all the knock-on effects under control and not ruining my plot is challenging.
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Post by: The Deposed King on February 13, 2013, 12:44:12 AM
Admiral In Spite of Himself

67k


The Deposed King
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Post by: blgarver on February 13, 2013, 08:02:19 PM
I missed hangin' on the board, so I'm back.  I'm also writing again.  Lurching by, trying to get a handhold on Saturday mornings as dedicated writing time.  Once that is secured I'll reach out for Sunday as well.  Workdays are harder, because work completely fries my brain and I have a two-hour round trip every day.

Anyhoo, I've been trying to develop a more concrete method to help develop writing as a habit; thought-vomit in a notebook until I lose patience and just have to get to the keyboard, type it out until I lose steam, return to the notebook and vomit up the next few scenes.  This week I'm going to introduce another step: talking into a voice recorder during my stupid drive to and from work, then using that as the basis for my notebook pre-writing.

Hopefully this will result in a stronger rough draft, and create some momentum to increase my productivity during each session.

Currently I have about 15 pages, single spaced, on the WIP. 
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Post by: The Deposed King on February 14, 2013, 01:00:44 AM
I missed hangin' on the board, so I'm back.  I'm also writing again.  Lurching by, trying to get a handhold on Saturday mornings as dedicated writing time.  Once that is secured I'll reach out for Sunday as well.  Workdays are harder, because work completely fries my brain and I have a two-hour round trip every day.

Anyhoo, I've been trying to develop a more concrete method to help develop writing as a habit; thought-vomit in a notebook until I lose patience and just have to get to the keyboard, type it out until I lose steam, return to the notebook and vomit up the next few scenes.  This week I'm going to introduce another step: talking into a voice recorder during my stupid drive to and from work, then using that as the basis for my notebook pre-writing.

Hopefully this will result in a stronger rough draft, and create some momentum to increase my productivity during each session.

Currently I have about 15 pages, single spaced, on the WIP.

Keep after it.  If you want it bad enough, it'll happen for you.  But even if it doesn't click this time, you'll still have a lot of fun along the way!


The Deposed king
Title: Re: The I'm Writing Thread.... Celebrate your pages written etc Part II.
Post by: blgarver on February 14, 2013, 01:47:43 AM
Keep after it.  If you want it bad enough, it'll happen for you.  But even if it doesn't click this time, you'll still have a lot of fun along the way!


The Deposed king

Thanks for the encouragement!  I just walked in from work...and I was talking through story bits the whole way.  And what do you know, I'm pretty dang excited to get the stuff off the recorder and onto the page.  Wee!  Funny how a little passion will turn your day around.
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Post by: Ren on February 14, 2013, 02:51:18 AM
Chapter 9 Complete! a little over 100 pages so far!
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Post by: The Deposed King on February 15, 2013, 02:06:30 AM
Go team!


The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on February 15, 2013, 03:21:21 AM
69K

been sicker than sick yesterday and still not feeling well today.  Hope I can put out a few thousand more.


The Deposed King
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Post by: Paynesgrey on February 15, 2013, 03:53:17 AM
Hope you feel better soon.  Hunkering down and trying to avoid the stomach bug rampaging thorugh my area atm.

Got about 7K done this week
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Post by: The Deposed King on February 20, 2013, 06:01:55 AM
Well been sick with Dengue Fever since the 14th.  So of a necessity the word production dropped down to nothing while I went to the hospital and recovered.

Current word count is 71k

up to 73K

up to 76k

The Deposed King
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Post by: spywolf on February 22, 2013, 10:57:44 AM
124 words yesterday
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Post by: Ren on February 22, 2013, 10:02:16 PM
Chapter 10 finally Completed! At an average of 12.5 pages that's 125+ pages...I have no idea of the word count as I can't translate that in my brain, and feel a greater sense of accomplishment going by page count.
My current goal is 400+ pages by the end of June, my birthday. So far so good!
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Post by: Paynesgrey on February 23, 2013, 06:05:01 AM
2.8K tonight.  First draft of Breath of Scheherazade is now done, weighing in at 25.5K. 

Now for a brandy.  I've earned the sumbitch.
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Post by: Ulfgeir on February 24, 2013, 12:42:58 PM
Finished earlier a horror short story. 2 down and 18 to go towards my goal of writing at least 20 of them and trying to get them published as an anthology.
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Post by: The Deposed King on February 25, 2013, 02:05:45 AM
Congradulations.



The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on February 25, 2013, 03:21:33 AM
Another through pass on chapters 1 to 6 of TIWTBWO #1 to confirm they flow now that I have added two new chapters on the front, and then chapter 7, and now I have to eat and have a bath and get to bed in time for work tomorrow, boo.
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Post by: spywolf on February 25, 2013, 10:25:41 AM
last night had problems sleeping
started a story on the note pad of my phone
this might be fun
I will get back to it when another project I am doing is done...
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Post by: spywolf on February 25, 2013, 12:07:21 PM
370 words  :o
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Post by: The Deposed King on February 26, 2013, 03:34:20 AM
Up to 85K - AIS


The Deposed King
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on February 26, 2013, 01:05:16 PM
2500 words written Sunday, and yesterday produced another 1700. Also in talks with an artist for a book cover. Yay!
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on February 26, 2013, 01:05:30 PM
Through pass on three more chapters; one of them definitely needs a reframing, the other two work as is.
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Post by: The Deposed King on February 27, 2013, 09:53:22 AM
95k AIS


The Deposed King

p.s.
Neuro - are any of your books up on amazon?  I know you were trying the Publishing House route, anything there yet?
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on February 27, 2013, 04:11:15 PM
Neuro - are any of your books up on amazon?

Nope.

Quote
I know you were trying the Publishing House route, anything there yet?

Nothing definite enough to talk about in public. 
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Post by: The Deposed King on February 28, 2013, 12:04:09 AM
Nope.

I generally say put it to the people.  They'll let you know how you stack up!


Nothing definite enough to talk about in public.

Keep on trying.  If at first you don't succeed!


The Deposed King
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Post by: Ren on February 28, 2013, 02:26:45 AM
Chapter 11 Completed!
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on February 28, 2013, 01:08:12 PM
1200 words again last night. If I can keep this momentum up, with 1000+ words on weeknights and 2000+ on weekends my manuscript should be finished in a couple months at most! So exciting!

My editor (My wife - Trust me, if it sucks she will tell me.) started reading the first couple chapters last night and overall enjoys it, and I believe I found the artist to do my cover. This is so much fun!

Keep on writing!!!
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 01, 2013, 11:57:00 PM
107k AIS

This thing is looking huge.  I hope it doesn't run into the 170k I'm fearing.  But only because I've got a vacation planned with the wife for the end of this new month.  And I could have it done by then but not edited.  Grrr.  I don't know how much faster I can write.








The Deposed King
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Post by: gatordave96 on March 02, 2013, 03:38:53 AM
107k AIS

This thing is looking huge.  I hope it doesn't run into the 170k I'm fearing.  But only because I've got a vacation planned with the wife for the end of this new month.  And I could have it done by then but not edited.  Grrr.  I don't know how much faster I can write.


Damn.  That is some quick writing.  You people put me to shame with how prolific you are.  Please tell me you write for a living.

Up to 244k today.  Taking a four-day weekend to relax.  Hope to do some more editing and writing.





The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 02, 2013, 08:01:56 AM


Damn.  That is some quick writing.  You people put me to shame with how prolific you are.  Please tell me you write for a living.

Up to 244k today.  Taking a four-day weekend to relax.  Hope to do some more editing and writing.


116k AIS

I do right now.  Although I've got to put out another book to get into that 'for a living' part.

So far about 9k written today.  I was kind of hoping for 10k when I had 5k by noon and that might still happen but I'm definitely feeling the grind at this point.


The Deposed King
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Post by: trboturtle on March 03, 2013, 03:35:52 AM
Merlin's Courtship is currently at 95K, and projected at 125K right now...

Craig
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 03, 2013, 12:22:01 PM
121k - AIS


The Deposed King
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Post by: Gilitine_Memitim on March 03, 2013, 03:55:11 PM
I did 500 and some words yesterday, early morning.
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 04, 2013, 12:45:22 AM
Keep up the good work everyone.  Life can get in your way more than you can tolerate sometimes.  But if you grind through it someday you'll get back to the creative side

Congradulating to everyone whose posted some forward progress.  Keep up the good work guys.  Tell yourself that completion and eventual success is around the corner and keep going as best you can!

If you haven't been able to do anything for a while don't despair.  I spent about ten years off and on just doing story starts and not really getting anywhere. Wife, kids, family, day job and all those other critical side things that are life can get in the way.

Just come back to it as you are able.

I've said this before and I'll say it again David Drake manages 500 words a day every day.  Hardly a paragon of rapid forward progress!  And he's a published author with 20-30?  books.  Its not always the rabbit that wins the race.  So don't let anyone's speed get you down.  Personally I've been writing more than 5K a day, writing at top speed and spewing out, IMO, a great story.  My brother routinely does 12k a day when he's writing and on my best day ever, a 9k day, that same day he managed 20k.  Talk about being overshadowed.

It doesn't matter what others do, I mean it does if you want to read their books for yourself! but otherwise the most important thing is that you stay dedicated, you stay focused and eventually get your creation completed (at least to the point of book 1) and get it out there!

Best of luck to everyone.  I believe in you!  You're here, you're trying and that's half of it right there.  Now all you have to do is that very hardest part in the world.  Keep pounding on it without diverting!








The Deposed King
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Post by: Paynesgrey on March 04, 2013, 01:00:36 AM
No new writing this weekend.  Been incorporating the edits I've gotten back from the Red Pen Devil Monkeys of Doom Brigade.

Valorous Daughter is now finished... and it is with a tremulous, tremblesome and twitching hand that I begin to draft the cover letter...
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 04, 2013, 02:09:21 AM
Congrats PG.  Way to go.  Take a big deep breath and pause a moment to appreciate all you have done.

NOW

Get ready to dive right back into it!  Either new writing or re-edit/submissions!



The Deposed King
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Post by: Paynesgrey on March 04, 2013, 02:20:44 AM
Going back to work on Stormjammer this week.  Nice thing about the novella... it's all backstory for the same world, and it spawned two new characters for the main book, as well as gave me some development direction for a couple of existing ones.  I'm pretty damn pleased with my decision to limit any side projects (like the submission call Breath of Scheherazade is for) to the same storyverse.  Means I don't have to miss out on targets of opportunity while ensuring that I'm still working in some way or another on the main book.
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 04, 2013, 07:42:11 AM
Going back to work on Stormjammer this week.  Nice thing about the novella... it's all backstory for the same world, and it spawned two new characters for the main book, as well as gave me some development direction for a couple of existing ones.  I'm pretty damn pleased with my decision to limit any side projects (like the submission call Breath of Scheherazade is for) to the same storyverse.  Means I don't have to miss out on targets of opportunity while ensuring that I'm still working in some way or another on the main book.

126 - AIS

That's a great way to go to keep your head in the game but give the subconscious time to grind away on the main line stuff.  Its sort of a mental fertilizer.  Lets you get some of that creative angst from bearing down on only one project, out of the way, while at the same time enriching your world and keeping you productive.



The Deposed King
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Post by: spywolf on March 04, 2013, 09:39:48 AM
no new writing unless you count the history essays for school that are normally 500-700+ words each
I do about 2-4 a week
so no fun writing for me
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 04, 2013, 12:15:18 PM
no new writing unless you count the history essays for school that are normally 500-700+ words each
I do about 2-4 a week
so no fun writing for me

129 - AIS (8k total for the day, not a bad day's work!)

That's too bad spy thing!  I understand how hard it can be to get in that creative groove when everything else is trying to get in the way.  Case in point, school work!



The Deposed King
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on March 04, 2013, 03:10:54 PM
2500 words last night and two blog posts!

I'm very happy with my progress right now. For a little over a week I've been able to keep a goal of 1000 words per weekday (I have a full time job) and 2000 per weekend (Saturday didn't work because I had guests over) but things are really flowing!

I'm estimating a June release for my book. I wanted to originally shop it out to publishers but after doing some research I decided to self-publish.
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on March 04, 2013, 04:46:49 PM
Spent Friday night mostly picking apart and reassembling what are now chapters 6 and 10 of TIWTBWO #1, which are by far the trickiest bits in this rewrite. 

(The story concerns four people who have been sent into a situation that was badly misread, and needs something closer to four hundred people to handle; the four hundred people are on their way once the right people can be gathered and transported, and should be there fairly soon, and the four who are already there are struggling to hold it together in the mean time.  The previous draft opened with a bang, as it were, and with my protagonist and her colleagues as the obvious suspects for that bang, and the chapters I am talking about were the first on-stage introductions of colleagues #1 and #2.  After having it pointed out that that structure created an expectation that the book, and indeed the series, would be focused on the police-procedural/mystery aspects more than it turns out to be, I've gone back to put two more chapters on the beginning, with these four people arriving in the situation in the first place, to introduce the broader context and clarify the scale that I want readers thinking on and caring about.  This has made what those first-after-the-bang scenes have to do really quite different; I think they now work on content, but I need to let them sit for a week and reread them to make sure that all this fiddling flows smoothly.  I'll probably have a similar wrestle with chapter 15 or 16 where I had previously been first introducing colleague #3, but I doubt it will be as rough as 10 was.) During which all I would seem to have cut about 150 words and written about 800 new.
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Post by: spywolf on March 04, 2013, 05:54:14 PM
I can get creative for about an hour but by then I can not look at a computer screen  :(
I am hopefully going to get some free time sunday
if things go acording to plan
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 05, 2013, 01:13:48 AM
Spent Friday night mostly picking apart and reassembling what are now chapters 6 and 10 of TIWTBWO #1, which are by far the trickiest bits in this rewrite. 

(The story concerns four people who have been sent into a situation that was badly misread, and needs something closer to four hundred people to handle; the four hundred people are on their way once the right people can be gathered and transported, and should be there fairly soon, and the four who are already there are struggling to hold it together in the mean time.  The previous draft opened with a bang, as it were, and with my protagonist and her colleagues as the obvious suspects for that bang, and the chapters I am talking about were the first on-stage introductions of colleagues #1 and #2.  After having it pointed out that that structure created an expectation that the book, and indeed the series, would be focused on the police-procedural/mystery aspects more than it turns out to be, I've gone back to put two more chapters on the beginning, with these four people arriving in the situation in the first place, to introduce the broader context and clarify the scale that I want readers thinking on and caring about.  This has made what those first-after-the-bang scenes have to do really quite different; I think they now work on content, but I need to let them sit for a week and reread them to make sure that all this fiddling flows smoothly.  I'll probably have a similar wrestle with chapter 15 or 16 where I had previously been first introducing colleague #3, but I doubt it will be as rough as 10 was.) During which all I would seem to have cut about 150 words and written about 800 new.

All this revamping you keep posting about sounds grueling.  I'm so glad my reworking and insert has only been squeezed into two weeks worth of editing before release.

Keep up the hard work, I'm sure it'll turn out the way you like it.


Modified:  135 - AIS


The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on March 05, 2013, 09:09:39 AM
I've just turned in the second set of edits to my next novel, and I'm 5 chapters in on the first draft of the third installment of the trilogy.
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 07, 2013, 11:28:17 AM
150k - AIS


The Deposed King
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Post by: Ren on March 08, 2013, 04:46:41 AM
Chapter 12 complete!
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 09, 2013, 01:31:02 PM
Chapter 12 complete!

AIS - 161k

The epic continues

The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on March 09, 2013, 05:38:36 PM
Got past the difficult bit, I think, and have done the through pass to chapter 18; one or two more evenings ought to finish this pass on #1.
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 10, 2013, 12:10:32 PM
168k - AIS


The Deposed King
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Post by: LizW65 on March 10, 2013, 01:51:43 PM
Finally made some good progress on The Sequel last night, though the wordcount has gone way down...how does that happen? ???
(Actually, I know exactly how it happened; I 86'd a subplot that wasn't working, and am still finding traces of it that need to be excised.)
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Post by: Lanodantheon on March 10, 2013, 05:36:02 PM
Dusted off a shelved idea on a whim, an Epic Fantasy with a twist and a gimmick I am excited about. I have been making strides to work on the project a little bit each day so I would be writing each day.


So far I have been World-Building, researching, plotting a macroview and am working on the outline for the novel itself. Although I could hope to write a series, I'll write the first book as though it's all I'll get with room for expansion.


A total of about 65% of the pre-writing done so far. If I want to actually finish the thing then after finals next week I'm going to have to content lock the world-building so that I can actually start writing scenes and not get scope creep.
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 11, 2013, 06:20:52 AM
Dusted off a shelved idea on a whim, an Epic Fantasy with a twist and a gimmick I am excited about. I have been making strides to work on the project a little bit each day so I would be writing each day.


So far I have been World-Building, researching, plotting a macroview and am working on the outline for the novel itself. Although I could hope to write a series, I'll write the first book as though it's all I'll get with room for expansion.


A total of about 65% of the pre-writing done so far. If I want to actually finish the thing then after finals next week I'm going to have to content lock the world-building so that I can actually start writing scenes and not get scope creep.

175k - AIS


The Deposed King

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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on March 11, 2013, 01:14:39 PM
I managed 2500 words over the weekend. The biggest news is that I recieved my book cover design from my artist. I was floored at the awesomeness of it! There were a couple small edits I requested, and then I will reveal it and my book's synopsis on my blog.
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 12, 2013, 02:39:17 AM
Way to go DP.  Having a Cover is one of the most awesome parts about creating your own book.  I'm glad to hear your cover is totally ruling!

Keep pounding away, you can do it!



The Deposed King
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Post by: trboturtle on March 12, 2013, 02:54:45 AM
Been sidetracked with projects for the Battletech gaming line, and Battletech stories for the last week, will try to get back to it this week.....

Craig
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on March 12, 2013, 12:03:41 PM
Way to go DP.  Having a Cover is one of the most awesome parts about creating your own book.  I'm glad to hear your cover is totally ruling!

Keep pounding away, you can do it!



The Deposed King

Thank you Deposed! As the days pass I'm getting more and more excited!

1000 words last night. For the last month I have been able to keep my 1k a day writing goal and 2k over the weekends, except for this past Friday.

and my blog post is up with my cover art and synopsis! If you have time check it out!
http://thomasraymann.wordpress.com/2013/03/11/books-its-finally-time-for-the-big-reveal/
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 12, 2013, 12:04:24 PM
186k - AIS


You'll get back to it Turbo-turtle.  Just keep after it.  Its all part of the same thing so you're not really suffering yet  ;D



The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 12, 2013, 12:13:13 PM
Thank you Deposed! As the days pass I'm getting more and more excited!

1000 words last night. For the last month I have been able to keep my 1k a day writing goal and 2k over the weekends, except for this past Friday.

and my blog post is up with my cover art and synopsis! If you have time check it out!
http://thomasraymann.wordpress.com/2013/03/11/books-its-finally-time-for-the-big-reveal/

Neat cover DP.  Keep up the good work.  I'm writing full time and I managed a record setting all time high of 11k in one day!  Woo hoo go me!

1k a day to keep the gremlins away is a great achievement and I hope everything works out great for you!

Let me know when it comes out.



the Deposed King
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on March 12, 2013, 12:35:33 PM
Neat cover DP.  Keep up the good work.  I'm writing full time and I managed a record setting all time high of 11k in one day!  Woo hoo go me!

1k a day to keep the gremlins away is a great achievement and I hope everything works out great for you!

Let me know when it comes out.



the Deposed King


Thanks Deposed! I really like it and hope everyone else does too.

11k would be a dream come true for me, as would writing full time. For now I just write as much as the kids and wife will let me  ;D
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 13, 2013, 12:32:35 AM
Thanks Deposed! I really like it and hope everyone else does too.

11k would be a dream come true for me, as would writing full time. For now I just write as much as the kids and wife will let me  ;D

I am writing full time (at least for now) and while that 11k is a dream come true, the last part of what you said is still a big part of the equation for me ???

By the way how much did your cover set you back?  Inquiring minds want to know.



The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on March 13, 2013, 02:31:09 AM
Neat cover DP.  Keep up the good work.  I'm writing full time and I managed a record setting all time high of 11k in one day!  Woo hoo go me!

heh. Well done.  My personal high is 14.5 k but that was in really exceptional circumstances; 5k a day is the absolute most I can keep up with any consistency when doing it full time.  (Which has only happend in this past decade during a fortnight between one job ending and another beginning.)
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 13, 2013, 04:26:32 AM
heh. Well done.  My personal high is 14.5 k but that was in really exceptional circumstances; 5k a day is the absolute most I can keep up with any consistency when doing it full time.  (Which has only happend in this past decade during a fortnight between one job ending and another beginning.)

During Book 1 and 2, 5k a day was the most I could average also.  Then my brother started writing, putting in 10-20k days and Chris Nutall another writer I knew online said he did 8-10k days routinely and it all must have inspired me.  I've been averaging 6-9k days for the past two weeks.

But ultimately it isn't not how fast you can write, its your dedication to finishing the book.  The hare ran almost all the way to the finish line and then fell asleep, and while the plodding tortis kept on it steady and beat him over the finish line.

Consistently write anything over and including 500 words a day, day in and day out and you can make it as a writer.

Thanks for the compliment Neuro.

Everybody keep your chins up and stay inspired.  Speed isn't everything, its grit and determination to never quit that ultimately are the most important.





The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 13, 2013, 11:21:34 AM
195k - AIS

9k today, I'm still in the groove!



The Deposed King
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on March 13, 2013, 12:44:26 PM

By the way how much did your cover set you back?  Inquiring minds want to know.



The Deposed King

The cover cost me $150.00, which gives me the ebook cover that I previewed on my blog, and it also gets me a cover for a print edition.
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on March 13, 2013, 05:43:14 PM
Consistently write anything over and including 500 words a day, day in and day out and you can make it as a writer.

Indeed, but it's also the case that if you can consistently write a novel in four to six weeks and goof off the rest of the year, you can make it as a writer - not that I am recommending it to anyone, it's sort of an opposite extreme to writing every day, but it has worked for Iain Banks for a couple of decades of solid career, and there's a huge space in the middle.

Getting the words out matters.  Their distribution across time... less so.  I am a mite twitchy on seeing "you have to write every day"-type advice because so many successful writers just don't do that.
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Post by: roteral on March 13, 2013, 09:55:40 PM
You guys amaze me. Some of you guys get 9000 words a day with limited time but I cant even get a couple of words in and I have almost the whole day. I guess I just can't get into it. How do you guys do it?
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on March 13, 2013, 10:51:51 PM
You guys amaze me. Some of you guys get 9000 words a day with limited time but I cant even get a couple of words in and I have almost the whole day. I guess I just can't get into it. How do you guys do it?

Most Fridays, I come in after work, I eat, and I start writing, usually about 1830 or 1900.  I stop usually between midnight and 12 am. 

On particularly exhausting weeks I sometimes rest Friday and do it Saturday instead, and sometimes when I have travel or social stuff happening I cantch up in advance by also working Wednesdays.

You do that for a decade and a half and the words add up, and so does the practice at making them come out.
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 14, 2013, 01:11:21 AM
Indeed, but it's also the case that if you can consistently write a novel in four to six weeks and goof off the rest of the year, you can make it as a writer - not that I am recommending it to anyone, it's sort of an opposite extreme to writing every day, but it has worked for Iain Banks for a couple of decades of solid career, and there's a huge space in the middle.

Getting the words out matters.  Their distribution across time... less so.  I am a mite twitchy on seeing "you have to write every day"-type advice because so many successful writers just don't do that.

Sure if you're one of the top flight Gal's in the business, one a year is doable.  Most dead tree stable house authors can do one book a year and hold another job, but what I hear it takes two a year writing full time to be able to quite the day job in the 1st world.  I guess its all life goals and location and such.

Most successful top indie's I see out there are putting out 3-4 book a year.

Whatever tickles the pickles and guys like Jim Butcher and David Weber certainly make enough to live comfortably off one book.  Others like Ilona Andrews, and Patty Briggs need two a year to write full time.  At least from what I recall reading on their forums.

As for word count, sure you have a point. If are that wild hare with the ability and dedication to keep going until you cross the finish line you don't have to look up to that plodding turtle.  If on the other hand you square pig right in there with the children's tale, you need that every day mentality to keep you motivated.

Most aspiring authors never get anywhere because its hard to stay consistently focused on one story and put out the word volume (at least it very much was for me).  I view it a little bit like running your first mile.  Its not just hard, its dang hard and almost impossible when you're a kid/teen/whatever starting out.  But after you do it the first couple times, mentally it gets easier, even if physically it's still a struggle, and if you keep after it, pretty soon you're doing 2 miles and then 3 or wherever you set your sights to and level out at.

I put out the write every day advice because it gets you mentally prepared for the long haul and its a winning strategy, when most of aspiring authors are still in need of a win.  If it gets someone motivated to spew out 5-10k a day and finish their book quick so they can go back to whatever else they've got to do to make ends meet, I'll be over joyed.

For me if I say I've got to write a book every three months and that equals out to 1.5k a day every day for just under 90 days allowing for editing, then if I get it done in one or two months I would feel free to slack off for the next month.  If I started another book at least I would feel no pressure.  I'd made an arbitrary game winning goal and already crused the move.

For self starters out there everywhere, ignore my advice, do whatever works, you'll have a book in no time I don't care how slow you write.  If on the other hand you're flailing, try this, if it works great.  If its not I'm just another guy with an opinion and you know what they say about opinions.




The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 14, 2013, 01:32:31 AM
You guys amaze me. Some of you guys get 9000 words a day with limited time but I cant even get a couple of words in and I have almost the whole day. I guess I just can't get into it. How do you guys do it?

If you've ever seen the Care Bears I visualize my struggles to write sometimes like what No Heart is always trying to do.  Turn Everyone including the carebears into a Grey, blah, uninspiring, lethargic creature.

That's why I refer to my innate desire to stare at the screen or worse, surf the net or read someone else's book instead of write my own, as The Desert.  Cap locks very much deliberate.

I have all day to write, at least for right now.  Every time I start writing it looks like something that came out the hind end of a dog.  First I refuse myself permission to go online.  I set myself a little time in the beginning and end of my day to do it.  After that avaunt your foul seducer!  I go to a part of the house without internet access.  I refuse to open my kindle.

I write the first sentence.  I stare at it a moment and finish the paragraph hoping against hope it looks cooler once its complete than the dog dodoo it is now.  Its not.  And yet amazingly, my books on amazon are selling very well.  I can't get my head wrapped around this paradox.  I don't want to write because what I am writing is complete and utter dung, and yet people like it.  Convincing myself it'll all be made nice and pretty during the editing pass, because other wise why would anyone read this drek?  I force my self to write.  I don't want to, I'm ruining my book with every sentance that spews from my hands.  I have to.  I do it because my job is to write today and really if you've got a good editor, he/she or it doesn't even need to be a writer to be a real help.

I set myself a realisitic target.  For me that's 5k a day.  When I started out I said 1k.  I did that and wrote 2k instead.  So I said, 2k and then did 3k for a while.  I declared the move at 3k and like a runner training up, before I knew it I had 5k days.  Now I do between 6 and 9k a day.  My daily goal is 5k so that at anytime after I finish my daily quota and I want to stop I am totally free to do so. If I write more in one day and have a family function the next, I take that extra apply it against tomorrow and thus have a lower target yet still am able to spit it out like clockwork.

Don't look at my numbers.  Set yourself a goal.  Refuse to stop because its bad.  More give yourself permission to write the bomb and I'm not talking about the fun bomb or cool bomb, I'm saying the stink bomb.  I originally wrote the Little Admiral because I couldn't bear the thought of ruining my Military Insect story, that is still almost half done, that story is cool, its wonderful and its still not done.  While I'm almost done with the first draft of my 3rd Spineward Sector's Novels.  Go figure huh?

I gave myself a story I didn't mind messing up.  I set out determined to have some fun along the way, as anyone who's read my somewhat humorous Admiral Who should be able to tell and I bore down.

You have to harness your creativity and break it to your will, when you force it in the direction of the book you are writing and it suddenly goes all No Heart on you turning dull and grey with disinterest.  You must force yourself through that desert one dehydrated, dull, boring step at at time, until you finally force your sub-conscious to realize, just like a little child that wants to go out and play, that its not going to get away with it.  There is no fast one, your sub-conscious writing child can play, there's no trick, no constant cries for water or the toilet or I'm hungry right before bed time that will let your winy inner, creative child out of its chores.

Just like an angry child, you spank it or time out it or just plain don't let it do anything fun until the chores are done and eventually it will do it.  After a while your little inner kid won't even notice how terrible its chores are and just give a perfunctory whine at the beginning.  Then as you slog through some utter drek, your imagination will reluctantly take off and before you know it you're actually writing something fun!  You love it even if no one else will!  and almost before you can realize it, even though you've been stuck laboriously writing it every step of the way, you're done.  You have a book.  Its yours.  you're proud of it, even if totally terrified everyone else will turn up their nose at the stink coming out of it.

Then low and behold you edit and fix and repair and suddenly its not the utter stink bomb you thought it was.

That's how you write 9k a day.  In my experience.



The Deposed King
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Post by: roteral on March 14, 2013, 02:37:31 AM
That was awesome
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Post by: Wordmaker on March 14, 2013, 12:17:50 PM
Yup. This man knows his stuff.
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 14, 2013, 01:24:48 PM
AIS - 208k

13k today a new record!

Also thank you for the kind words guys.  I just try to help out others with examples from my own experiences and what I've observed with other, as much as I can.

I know its not always applicable to others, but I had help and encourgement along the way, and its nice to help out others if and when i am able.



The Deposed King
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Post by: Rasins on March 14, 2013, 03:39:08 PM
At this point I'm just starting out.  I have an idea, now I'm trying to figure out how to get INTO the story.

I did 1,100 words Saturday, and nearly 1,500 last night.  I'm happy with the word count and all I'm doing is brainstorming but from seeds come fruit.

Also, I discovered that Windows 7 comes with a voice recognition program.  I'm not sure I'll be able to "talk" my story any better than typing it, but it's fun to try.
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Post by: Wordmaker on March 14, 2013, 03:50:43 PM
My writing has slowed since my wife gave birth to twins before Christmas. But I've still managed to break the 16,000 word mark on the third book in my trilogy.
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 15, 2013, 12:43:06 PM
AIS - 216K



The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on March 16, 2013, 05:20:10 AM
This pass on #1 is done.

27 chapters.  96,679 words.

Next, to get it to betas, and move on to tighten #2 for continuity, which should move much faster.
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 16, 2013, 09:56:12 AM
222k - AIS


I ran out of gas today.



The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 20, 2013, 12:24:38 AM
225K - AIS


3k from yesterday.  But my main laptops been down for 3 days and the powercord for my back up for 2.5.

Should be back in it though!


The Deposed King
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Post by: roteral on March 20, 2013, 02:04:24 AM
Woooo 100 words!
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 20, 2013, 05:15:49 PM
231k - AIS


After an almost pathetic 1k I rallied strong at the end of the day and gutted out a 6k win.


The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on March 20, 2013, 05:17:38 PM
I closed off Chapter 9 of my third book at just over 2,000 words.
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Post by: Paynesgrey on March 21, 2013, 01:17:30 AM
Just fired another short off, now back to the last minute preparations before submitting the novella.  When that's off to the slush-tub, I will have a day of Doctor Who, a beer, and resume the novel.
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on March 21, 2013, 02:19:52 AM
Finished the night off with 1500 words. Only 9 chapters away from finishing the book! So excited!
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Post by: trboturtle on March 21, 2013, 02:56:16 AM
98K on Merlin's Courtship, but I'm about 9,000 words behind of my yearly goal. I have two stories I'm reworking, ywo more stories I need to outline and a mess of writing to do....

Craig
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on March 21, 2013, 04:23:32 AM
Through pass on the first 16 chapters of #2.  That was faster than expected; one more night should finish it.
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Post by: Wordmaker on March 21, 2013, 02:08:46 PM
My third book is up to 19,330 words now. It still feels strange to be writing the final book of my trilogy when the first only came out in November.
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 21, 2013, 05:00:38 PM
242k - AIS


At one of my potential ending points.  Gonna finish up with the second potential end point before I declare the move and go back for edits and plot holes.


The Deposed King
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Post by: roteral on March 21, 2013, 09:51:37 PM
Got into a groove and finished two pages in 10 minutes.
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Post by: gatordave96 on March 22, 2013, 03:32:09 AM
252k

Filled some plot holes.  Worked on some of the end scenes.  Hope to finish this spring and get it to the "alphas." 
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Post by: Ren on March 22, 2013, 04:24:44 PM
Chapter 13 completed, a week behind schedule...but done
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Post by: trboturtle on March 23, 2013, 02:53:08 AM
No writing today, but I have a good reason -- finally got a hold of "Cold Days," and I'm reading that..... ;D

Craig
(Merlin's Courtship is close to 99K though......)
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Post by: Paynesgrey on March 23, 2013, 05:29:27 AM
Today's been spent unwriting.  Going through, looking for redundancies and bits I love that do nothing to move the story forward.  Knocked about 2K off of a 33K novella.  Listening via Text to Speech, I found a number of places that were plodding infodumps which weren't really obvious when reading.  Paragraph here, two or three sentences that could be replaced by one nice, crisp one, that sort of thing.
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 23, 2013, 05:17:58 PM
251k - AIS

Finally reached the end of the first draft.  I have about 6 possible chapters that need/ should be written and put in, stuff that fell by the wayside pounding my way through to the finish line.  After that I think its all editing.


The Deposed King
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Post by: Paynesgrey on March 23, 2013, 06:56:08 PM
Great work!
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Post by: trboturtle on March 25, 2013, 02:27:07 AM
Merlin's Courtship is over 100K and still climbing..... ;D

Craig
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on March 27, 2013, 02:55:08 PM
Still going strong with 1000+ a night. I have about 7 chapters left until the finish. My book will probably round out at 80-85,000 words, not nearly as much as others here  8)

I should finish the draft in mid-april, then I will spend two months fixing errors and plot holes found by my editor, then come the middle or end of June the book will be released!  ;D
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Post by: Wordmaker on March 27, 2013, 03:02:48 PM
80,000-85,000 is a good wordcount, especially for a first novel. My first was even shorter than that after editing.

Not sure if this sort of thing counts, but I got word that my second novel, Silent Oath, is now moving on to copy edits.
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Post by: trboturtle on March 28, 2013, 01:52:11 AM
Merlin's Courtship = 103K. Managed to string together five stright days of exceeding my daily wordcount goals, but I'm currently only at 67% of March's monthy goal.... >:(

Craig
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Post by: Lanodantheon on March 28, 2013, 07:49:30 AM
Spent a few hours today at a Panera Bread in Redmond and broadly outlined a Superhero Serial Killer Movie I had had in mind for a while.


It was fun...and a bit disturbing...


Even if it never gets made it'll be fun to write a first draft.
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Post by: Wordmaker on March 28, 2013, 02:11:48 PM
Chapter 10 of Book 3 finished, bringing me to 20,370 words.
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on March 29, 2013, 02:55:14 AM
Through pass on #2 finished.  98,364 words.  This is a good place to stop before heading off for Cambridge.  Not that I did; I poked at chpater 1 of #3 and wrote a first 400 wordsish of chapter 12, which will hopefully help me by giving me a hook to come back to when I do.
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Post by: The Deposed King on March 30, 2013, 05:25:44 AM
So far I've broken the book up into two parts.

Just got done with the 1st pass edit for the 135k section which has expanded to something around 147-150k.  I still need to figure out where to weave in a couple of the tack on chapters that got missed in the general push to get this beast done.  That could be hours or days, as if its not done by tomorrow noon, I'm off for a couple days to Leyte.

Regardless be it later today or middle of next week.  I'll be putting out the first half for the betas.  right now thinking to make it two books and release at the same time.


The Deposed King
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Post by: gatordave96 on March 31, 2013, 12:39:21 AM
260k

Added 2k today.  Wrote part of the climax for one character arc. 
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Post by: Wordmaker on April 04, 2013, 01:12:22 PM
Another chapter down. I'm up to 21,687 words. This book will definitely be my longest yet.
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Post by: spywolf on April 08, 2013, 12:54:04 PM
could not sleep last night
so um 826 words
yeah...
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Post by: The Deposed King on April 08, 2013, 01:38:50 PM
I wrote 2k on a new start I'm titling Falon Half Blood today.  And yesterday I wrote 1.5k on a start I titled Buying In (A Dark Magic User Tale)

I think I might just keep plugging away on the Falon stuff.  Although both of them are actually quite interesting.



The Deposed King
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Post by: KevinEvans on April 10, 2013, 07:44:09 AM

Grin,
We had a writing milestone last week. We received our first TV option pay out.... Not quite enough for a cup of coffee, but a payout none the less.

Regards,
Kevin
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Post by: Wordmaker on April 10, 2013, 01:05:03 PM
Took a few days off there, so I'm only up to 23,225 words on my third book.
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Post by: The Deposed King on April 10, 2013, 01:21:45 PM
up to 9k on Falon Half Blood (A Magistra Half Blood Tale)


The Deposed king
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on April 10, 2013, 01:52:35 PM
I am one chapter (about 4000 words) away from completing my manuscript. Then the editing begins!  8)
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Post by: The Deposed King on April 10, 2013, 02:24:01 PM
I am one chapter (about 4000 words) away from completing my manuscript. Then the editing begins!  8)

Way to go Dresdenus Prime!  Keep up the hard work.




The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on April 10, 2013, 02:27:54 PM
That's awesome!
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Post by: gatordave96 on April 11, 2013, 02:27:23 AM
264k

Getting close to the end.  Just a few more scenes and then time to start editing and polishing.
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Post by: The Deposed King on April 11, 2013, 02:37:36 AM
264k

Getting close to the end.  Just a few more scenes and then time to start editing and polishing.


Keep after it gatordave96.  Never give up, Never Surrender!

You can do it!



The Deposed King
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Post by: Paynesgrey on April 11, 2013, 03:34:00 AM
WiP is up to 85.5K, I know what scenes need to happen for the finish and how to get there, chugging along writing them.  Can't call it "the final stretch,"  But I can see it from here.  Boo-YAAAA, and suchlike.
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Post by: meg_evonne on April 11, 2013, 05:27:38 AM
Finished first draft a couple weeks ago of my recent project. I'm now working through revisions and editing. Conference this weekend and also one the first weekend in May.

Nice Kevin! And everyone's really plugging away! Congrats. Sorry that i haven't checked in. I set a hard schedule on this WiP and I'm thrilled that I'm right where I wanted to be, but I miss the community here. Promise to hang a bit more often.
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on April 11, 2013, 12:32:46 PM
Way to go Dresdenus Prime!  Keep up the hard work.




The Deposed King
That's awesome!

Thanks a lot guys! I stayed up late last night listening to the storms and writing my last chapter. I tweeted this before bed  :D

@ThomasRayMann tweeted at 11:55 PM on Wed, Apr 10, 2013:
After years of brainstorming, writing, trying out ideas, my first full length manuscript is done. I can't believe it.

Now comes the editing!  :o
and great job to everyone else and the amazing progress you're all making!  8)

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Post by: gatordave96 on April 15, 2013, 12:27:12 AM
Thanks to everyone for the encouragement.  Up to 270k today.  One scene and three sequels of scenes to go.
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Post by: Ren on April 15, 2013, 01:17:53 AM
Chapter 14 completed...finally...8P
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Post by: Wordmaker on April 15, 2013, 01:00:24 PM
Another chapter down and I'm up to 24,891 words on my third book.
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Post by: The Deposed King on April 16, 2013, 01:38:40 AM
Another chapter down and I'm up to 24,891 words on my third book.

Up to 21k on my Falon Half Blood fantasy novel!

And I just put up a new novella.  One my brother wrote in the main and helped co-author and edit.  Its a 150 page (45K) Akantha novella, entitled Admiral's Lady: Eyes of Ice, Heart of Fire and it shows what happens from Akantha's side of the equation.  Taking place from sometime near the start of book one and terminating around the same time as the events of chapter 25.




The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on April 17, 2013, 01:19:56 PM
Chapter 14 done. That's 26,422 words so far on Book 3.
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Post by: The Deposed King on April 19, 2013, 12:34:38 PM
26k on Falon Half Blood




The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on April 20, 2013, 03:33:45 PM
Through pass and tighten on first three chapters of #3.  The second one is extremely full, and I am not yet sure I have got it right.

Also, trying to get writing done when continually interrupted by queasy innards is not fun.  And my mother will be here for a couple of weeks and then I am off travcelling again, so this is probably the last serious writing sessing I will get for a month or so.
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Post by: The Deposed King on April 21, 2013, 08:47:29 AM
I just uploaded Admiral's Tribulation book 3 of my spineward sectors novels.  Expect it out between 6-12 hours after Amazon finishes reviewing.



The Deposed King
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Post by: Ren on April 22, 2013, 08:52:10 PM
wow...if word can be trusted my total for 14 chapters is 91,086 words...8O
Out of curiosity, how many pages/words do you all write per chapter?
I'm averaging 13 pages and 6600 words or so per chapter...
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Post by: Wordmaker on April 22, 2013, 09:38:46 PM
I tend towards shorter chapters. An average chapter for me will be about 2,000 words. But with my current WIP, I'm keeping some chapters as short as 1,500.
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Post by: The Deposed King on April 23, 2013, 03:38:43 AM
I tend towards shorter chapters. An average chapter for me will be about 2,000 words. But with my current WIP, I'm keeping some chapters as short as 1,500.

Falon Half Blood - 30k

With my current work I'm shooting for 2.5k per chapter.  With some of my previous books I tried to keep it around 5k.  But it would dip lower and sometimes go up to 7.5k.  For me chapters revolve around two things.  Where there is a good break in the flow of the story needed, or character transitions and the other factor is how much I can write in a day's work.


The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on April 23, 2013, 06:32:59 AM
It's a matter of pacing as well. Shorter chapters make it feel like the story is moving faster, and keeps an air of tension. Longer ones are better for emotional scenes with a stronger focus on character development. So I adjust my chapter length depending on those, as well.

And of course, yes, sometimes you just spot a natural break and know it's time to change chapters, regardless of length.
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Post by: The Deposed King on April 23, 2013, 07:51:49 AM
It's a matter of pacing as well. Shorter chapters make it feel like the story is moving faster, and keeps an air of tension. Longer ones are better for emotional scenes with a stronger focus on character development. So I adjust my chapter length depending on those, as well.

And of course, yes, sometimes you just spot a natural break and know it's time to change chapters, regardless of length.

32.5k Falon Half Blood!


I'm sure you're doing better with chapter breaks than I am.  I'm still going by feel more often than not.  I have my overall story planned out, the broad strokes as it were.  How my characters get there is not preplanned out on a chapter by chapter basis.  So I just give a general idea at the start of a chapter, try to stay true to it, and try not to foul things up too much.


hahahahah


have fun guys!


The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on April 23, 2013, 01:06:06 PM
My editor on my first and second book hammered home the importance of spotting strong chapter breaks. It's become habit now.

Speaking of which, I'm up to 28,285 words on Book 3.
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on April 23, 2013, 01:12:19 PM
My manuscript is between 3k and 4.5k per chapter. I'm currently editing and so far I've pretty much re-written everything in the first three chapters  ;D The story is still the same, but the wording wasn't terribly good. I feel like my revised draft (technically draft 3) will be awesome!

In other news, if anyone has time for a short story, venture to http://www.thomasrmanning.com/Short_Stories.html (http://www.thomasrmanning.com/Short_Stories.html). I wrote an Urban Fantasy short titled "Spell Breaker" there's also an additional story, a sort of barbaric fantasy tale, but there's only one chapter available so far. For fun a friend and I are writing this short together, alternating chapters   :o

Things are going great! I have two beta readers lined up for a read through in early May, then release the book in June!  8)
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Post by: Wordmaker on April 23, 2013, 01:20:08 PM
Awesome!
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Post by: Ren on April 23, 2013, 01:37:30 PM
Thanks for the input, I may have to look at re-setting my chapters down the road.  I usually aim to write 12-13 pages per chapter which is usually 3-4 days of writing.
Now I need to finish summarizing what I've written so far so I can get back to writing without fear of writing something that is obviated by previous writing, sadly I suffer memory issues so it makes it hard for me to remember details I've written...8P
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Post by: The Deposed King on April 23, 2013, 02:50:22 PM
Thanks for the input, I may have to look at re-setting my chapters down the road.  I usually aim to write 12-13 pages per chapter which is usually 3-4 days of writing.
Now I need to finish summarizing what I've written so far so I can get back to writing without fear of writing something that is obviated by previous writing, sadly I suffer memory issues so it makes it hard for me to remember details I've written...8P

I make a separate word or text file for my novel length works.  I put down the names of any and all characters, primary, secondary, tertiary, etc as well as vital details.  Who are they, where are they coming from, what side are they on.  You just don't realize how tough it is to keep things consistent until you are scratching your head and wondering if it was Jeff from engineering you needed or if his name was Charles and was it Jeff or Charles that worked in environmental, cause you definitely needed the engineering guy for what the supporting character on this one!


The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on April 23, 2013, 02:54:59 PM
Oh, yeah absolutely. I have a pretty solid memory for story details and I still rely on keeping an up to date record of who's who and such.
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Post by: Ren on April 23, 2013, 02:57:18 PM
I have a word file of just my case and some brief descriptions/information. I also have all of the chapters, characters, places and things added into Scrivener as well...just in case I lose the USB key with everything on it...8P
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Post by: The Deposed King on April 23, 2013, 03:02:56 PM
Yup, you can dink around with stuff that's 5-10k and keep most or all of it in your head and scroll rapidly back to any spots you missed but you get up over that amount and unless you've got some kind of photographic memory... well I certainly can't keep up with it all.  Its easy to remember the story.  But the name of some guy you mentioned 60k words ago?  Not gonna happen unless he's a primary secondary character.

I also like to save these things in as many places as I can.  Cause you never know when your computer is going to crap out on you.  I've lost three lap tops over here in the philippines.  Thank god for flash drives and curse me for not updating them as often as I should have.



The Deposed King
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Post by: Lanodantheon on April 23, 2013, 03:16:59 PM
Yup, you can dink around with stuff that's 5-10k and keep most or all of it in your head and scroll rapidly back to any spots you missed but you get up over that amount and unless you've got some kind of photographic memory... well I certainly can't keep up with it all.  Its easy to remember the story.  But the name of some guy you mentioned 60k words ago?  Not gonna happen unless he's a primary secondary character.

I also like to save these things in as many places as I can.  Cause you never know when your computer is going to crap out on you.  I've lost three lap tops over here in the philippines.  Thank god for flash drives and curse me for not updating them as often as I should have.



The Deposed King



I started using Scrivener and it has worked wonders organizing my writing. I second TDK's advice in following the words of the late great George Carlin, "Write everything down.". In scrivener I make separate text files for each bit of pre-writing stuff. I have a text file for each individual character, each major piece of world-building and a file for the outline material. When I write scenes I'll have it splitscreened with one window open to where the chapter is being written and one open to either the character write-up, the outline or more commonly a reference photo of some kind to keep the tone and imagery I'm trying to evoke in mind.

I also use a flashdrive with my work Laptop but I recommend backing up your stuff a lot. Don't end up like me and lose a hard drive halfway through a quarter...


Meanwhile...

In my writing life recently I did something cool:


I was spinning my wheels too much on a major project in favor of the beginnings of a new project for a 200,000 word novel. I don't have the time, energy or brainpower to work on the new novel right now because of more important projects so I had to put it to the side.


But, being unable to get it out of my head and with my previous writing projects falling apart because I hadn't planned enough I did something I had never done before. I thought a Project Plan all the way through.


To explain, I am going to school for Project Management. A big part of Project Management is thinking the steps of a project all the way through to completion and beyond. I had never approached creative work this way before taking the classes so the other day I decided to approach novel writing with a little Project Management.
I wrote up Objectives, a Mission Statement and did a Work-Breakdown Structure for the lifespan of a Novel Project from pre-writing to final draft.
I also broke the work down in Microsoft Project into hours and sometimes minutes. I had to because I usually don't have a schedule and as a result I will get distracted and never get anything done. Now I have a schedule


I ended up with a Microsoft Project Template I will use for other projects that came out to 56.7 Days of work + however long it takes to get to 200,000 words in days.


It humbled me to realize that if I started on the project now full-time I wouldn't be done with it until Christmas...
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Post by: Wordmaker on April 23, 2013, 03:20:52 PM
Man, back your stuff up, back your stuff up, back your stuff up!

I had an external hard drive wipe itself on me recently. It had been over a year since I'd backed it up and I lost every bit of music I'd bought (thank goodness for account histories that let you re-download!), along with some drafts of early versions of my second book, the notes for an entire RPG campaign, and even photos of my daughters. Though thankfully the photos were also still on my camera's SD card!
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on April 25, 2013, 04:46:09 PM
I started using Scrivener and it has worked wonders organizing my writing. I second TDK's advice in following the words of the late great George Carlin, "Write everything down.". In scrivener I make separate text files for each bit of pre-writing stuff. I have a text file for each individual character, each major piece of world-building and a file for the outline material. When I write scenes I'll have it splitscreened with one window open to where the chapter is being written and one open to either the character write-up, the outline or more commonly a reference photo of some kind to keep the tone and imagery I'm trying to evoke in mind.

One of the reasons why I have not been particularly motivated to getting round to fiddling with Scrivener or the like is that organisation like this a) feels entirely natural and sensible to me (modulo that I sort my relevant input data pretty much entirely by where it fits in the narrative rather than by character or piece of world-building, because to my mind both of those are subordinate functions of narrative voice) and b) is something I have been happily doing in emacs for nearly two decades.

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I also use a flashdrive with my work Laptop but I recommend backing up your stuff a lot. Don't end up like me and lose a hard drive halfway through a quarter...

The minimum safe number of backups is three, at least one of which should be in a different geographical location from you. I recommend a dedicated gmail account as a straightforward and thus far quite reliable form of offsite backup.

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I wrote up Objectives, a Mission Statement and did a Work-Breakdown Structure for the lifespan of a Novel Project from pre-writing to final draft.
I also broke the work down in Microsoft Project into hours and sometimes minutes. I had to because I usually don't have a schedule and as a result I will get distracted and never get anything done. Now I have a schedule

I hope you find that useful.  I am disinclined to make overly detailed project plans myself, because they have the failure mode for me of realising during Chapter 4 that something new I figure out about characters or world while writing will actually seriously change Chapter 7 and mean I have to put a new Chapter 11 in between existing Chapters 10 and 11 and I end up spending non-trivial amounts of time revising the plan that I should be spending writing.  So my chapter plans now tend to be full of highly condensed notes like "where have you been, Caravaggio ?" and  "l'eucatastrophe, c'est moi" which mean a bunch of different things at different levels but don't pin me down too much on how they fit together to let the writing breathe when I get around to them.

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It humbled me to realize that if I started on the project now full-time I wouldn't be done with it until Christmas...

Heh. Heh. Heh. 

I have completed nine novels in the past twenty years, and have several others in various states of development; there are projects there I do still intend to complete - that are about fourth on my current set of priorities - which are old enough to vote, if not yet to drink (in the US.)
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Post by: meg_evonne on April 25, 2013, 05:22:27 PM
Celebration time! I finished my shitty first draft about a month ago and I'm finishing up my not-so-stinky 2nd of my YA contemporary mystery. It doesn't stink as much as normal! For the first time, I had DK's (and Greg's) excel sheets--too many to count on everything from plot to place to characters to lexicons for dialog and the writing itself.) I hear you Neuro, but I think I'm sold now on the project routine. I did write individual short character scenes to hone the characters first. Although my plot wasn't complete before I started, the villain timeline and motivations were.

And, drum roll please! I was honored with the YA mentorship from author Jill Blazinin by Iowa's Society of Children's Book Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI-IA). Not only was it humbling to receive the honor, it comes with $1200 of page review!

And please roll out the big marching band now: She chose my work because of my strong author's voice and because my character's voices were unique, exciting, and different from each other. As they say, you can fix a lot of stuff, but you can't fix voice. I think I'm proof positive that you can with a lot of hard work and time.

Thank you for this supportive writing community. You are amazing and dedicated. I'm sorry I've been in the writer's zone for so long and away from the boards. Take care and hugs.
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Post by: Wordmaker on April 25, 2013, 10:19:17 PM
Awesome, congratulations!
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Post by: trboturtle on April 26, 2013, 01:39:20 AM
I've spent the last week and a half rewriting/editing three stories that I hope to submit toBattleCorps by the end of the month..... ::)

Craig
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Post by: The Deposed King on April 26, 2013, 02:17:50 AM
Celebration time! I finished my shitty first draft about a month ago and I'm finishing up my not-so-stinky 2nd of my YA contemporary mystery. It doesn't stink as much as normal! For the first time, I had DK's (and Greg's) excel sheets--too many to count on everything from plot to place to characters to lexicons for dialog and the writing itself.) I hear you Neuro, but I think I'm sold now on the project routine. I did write individual short character scenes to hone the characters first. Although my plot wasn't complete before I started, the villain timeline and motivations were.

And, drum roll please! I was honored with the YA mentorship from author Jill Blazinin by Iowa's Society of Children's Book Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI-IA). Not only was it humbling to receive the honor, it comes with $1200 of page review!

And please roll out the big marching band now: She chose my work because of my strong author's voice and because my character's voices were unique, exciting, and different from each other. As they say, you can fix a lot of stuff, but you can't fix voice. I think I'm proof positive that you can with a lot of hard work and time.

Thank you for this supportive writing community. You are amazing and dedicated. I'm sorry I've been in the writer's zone for so long and away from the boards. Take care and hugs.


Go Meg!  Put that perfume on it!!!


And of course when it goes live, make sure to send up a link.





always follow the dream,


The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on April 26, 2013, 01:13:32 PM
Chapter 16 down. Book 3 is past the 30k mark at 30,421.
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Post by: The Deposed King on April 27, 2013, 04:19:08 AM
40k - Falon Half Blood

2.5k a day is keeping the strangers away but those goblins are haunting my dreams.  (I know I was actually forced to write an opening chapter to a goblin novel)  My advice to myself is that unless you want other stories setting up camp inside your head and roasting rock lizard or eating cave spiders raw, you have to pick the pace up to at least 5k per day!

(But its so much fun reading other books and watching TV, at 2.5k I can do those other things also, whines my inner muse)


The Deposed King
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Post by: belial.1980 on April 29, 2013, 01:34:59 AM
I did Camp NanoWriMo this year. Just finished. Final word count 80,042 in 28 days.

I'm actually pretty pleased because, while far from being perfect, I feel like the text reads like an average first draft rather than the frenetic-oh-god-must-make-words-now explosion on paper that my last Nano ended up being. I've even allowed my girlfriend to read it, in all its rough and unfinished grandeur.
Now it's back to the drawing board for the next project. No rest for the wicked.  :)
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Post by: Paynesgrey on April 29, 2013, 04:01:06 AM
9K this week.  Wasn't happy with the way some events and characters in the central narration went, so I'm doing a side piece from another character's PoV.  Her narrative only brushes against my protagonists in a few places, but she's key in some major events.  It's helped me round a number of characters out, as well as build some better motivations and more realistic action/reaction sequences in the main work.
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Post by: Wordmaker on April 29, 2013, 12:49:21 PM
A little tweaking of Chapter 16 (realized after finishing it that I broke several of my settings magical rules) and I'm at 30,579 words.
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Post by: The Deposed King on April 29, 2013, 01:38:00 PM
A little tweaking of Chapter 16 (realized after finishing it that I broke several of my settings magical rules) and I'm at 30,579 words.


47k - Falon Half Blood


Sounds like you've hit a slow patch.  Sometimes the best thing to do then is go back and reread it.  Others you just have to say damn the torpedos and full steam ahead.

Hope it resolves for you soon.

I did good today but before that its been a pretty slow road to hoe.  Hang tough.




The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on April 29, 2013, 01:42:31 PM
Oh, don't worry, it's not a slow patch. I just had an event take place which broke so many of the rules of my setting that I couldn't leave it in at all. So rather than keep going and try to remember that it didn't happen, I decided to re-write the end of the chapter.
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Post by: The Deposed King on April 29, 2013, 01:52:25 PM
Oh, don't worry, it's not a slow patch. I just had an event take place which broke so many of the rules of my setting that I couldn't leave it in at all. So rather than keep going and try to remember that it didn't happen, I decided to re-write the end of the chapter.


Oh alright then.  I guess I must just be getting antsy to finish this Falon book and am projecting.  Current goal is to finish it this week before its time to go edit book 4 Admiral's Trial with the brother.  That way I can get pounding away on the next Admiral book as soon as possible.

Don't know how I'm going to manage to finish Falon in one week, but I'm ready to give it the old honest effort.


Have a blast and good luck with the book,


The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on April 29, 2013, 01:55:06 PM
Ooof, that's a heck of a deadline.

I have until about August to get my third book done and sent to my publisher if I want to be sure of it coming out next year. I have at least another 50,000 words to go, so at some point I'll need to step things up.
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Post by: The Deposed King on April 29, 2013, 02:43:39 PM
Ooof, that's a heck of a deadline.

I have until about August to get my third book done and sent to my publisher if I want to be sure of it coming out next year. I have at least another 50,000 words to go, so at some point I'll need to step things up.

Well my original goal was to write this little Fantasy novel (1st draft only) of Falon Half Blood to broaden my reader base, and do it between the time it took my brother to finish editing book 3 and the edit and launched book 4.  So about a month in total.  That's really not that fast since I'd only need to do about 3k a day to smash it out in that kind of time frame.  (trying to keep this one 90k instead my usual 130-150k books)

I was doing an average of 8k words a day with forays up to as high as 13k and no lower than 5k a day, every single day without fail when I was writing the final 4/5ths of what eventually became Admiral's Tribulation and Admiral's Trial.  Or about 200k words.  So I know a month is doable if you stay dedicated.

I figure if I do no better than my last book money wise and only make $8k per every book I release then all I need to do is put out 4 books a year or rather one every quarter.  Cost of living over here is pretty cheap, although I've got to pay for school for the wife.

I can write a book in a month and with my brother's help edit it in one more.  So I figure without paying anyone to edit them for me I could crank out six books a year if that's what I needed to do.

Don't know what I'd do without his help though and he's almost half way completed with a 5-6 book arc he wants to have fully written before releasing on Amazon in some kind of ad/release blitz.  So I'll have to figure that out at some point.  Or start stacking the electronic books against the wall when the editing production line starts to bottleneck.

If only I had a 20 book back list like a bunch of these yahoos I see online.  2 books a day x 20 books is like 40 sales per day baseline!  at 2.99 you get 70% before taxes and so that's 2 bucks per book.  40/day x 30 day-month x 2bucks = $2400.00 base line monthly revenue.  Plus you get that 6-8k surge upon the release of a successful book (although I've seen guys do much better than I have with initial release sales).  From looking at their amazon ranking that's about what you can count on (at least for the back list) so long as you keep pumping out a new book to keep your back list fresh.

Oh well I'm going on for far too long.  Maybe in a couple years if I stay dedicated I'll be in the same league as those other guys with the big lists of books in their arsenal.



The Deposed King
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on April 29, 2013, 06:02:29 PM
Oh well I'm going on for far too long.  Maybe in a couple years if I stay dedicated I'll be in the same league as those other guys with the big lists of books in their arsenal.

The Deposed King

You certainly have the drive and determination Deposed. I have no doubt one day you'll reach those guys.

Personally I managed to edit three chapters last night, which was awesome. Up until this point I was doing a lot of rewrites to get the story as sharp as it could be. I'm almost halfway through editing my book as of now, then I'll be sending it out to two beta readers mid-May.

I was also contacted by a respectful blogger who does author interviews every month, and offered to give me one to post on the release day of my book, which I've decided will most likely be June 7th! I think I'll be releasing it specifically for Kindle and using their KDP Select program as a start.
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Post by: The Deposed King on April 30, 2013, 01:27:22 AM
Way to go DP!  Let us know how it works out for you.


50k  Falon Half Blood (managed to light a fire last night!)





The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on April 30, 2013, 06:14:16 AM
That's fantastic!
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Post by: Wordmaker on May 01, 2013, 01:08:29 PM
Another chapter down. Things are getting bad for my heroes. Up to 32,316 words now.
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Post by: Ren on May 01, 2013, 03:37:08 PM
Sigh...haven't written anything new in almost 2 weeks...been spending my time summarizing each chapter, something I should have been doing all along, but its also forcing a re-reading and minor adjustments so taking more time...and already found at least one major conflict in an early chapter...8P
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Post by: Wordmaker on May 01, 2013, 03:44:56 PM
Noooo! Don't give in to the Dark Side! Summarize if you need to, but make notes of those problems and leave them for when you're editing, otherwise you'll keep re-writing and changing things and you won't actually write the book.
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Post by: roteral on May 02, 2013, 12:13:06 AM
I just found inspiration in music and I am starting to outline my short story called The Stranger in the Top Hat. Really pumped to start writing
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Post by: The Deposed King on May 02, 2013, 12:22:41 AM
Noooo! Don't give in to the Dark Side! Summarize if you need to, but make notes of those problems and leave them for when you're editing, otherwise you'll keep re-writing and changing things and you won't actually write the book.

Do no listen to the Wordmaker, Ren.  Feel all the self destructive power of the red pen Flow Through You!  Only then can you know the true power of the Force!!!

Join the Emperor and his Minions of Darkness!!!  Edit on your books before they are ever actually written!!!



The Deposed King
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Post by: Ren on May 02, 2013, 04:50:27 PM
Well so far its only been one issue and its a relatively easy fix. Only 6 more chapters to summarize and I'll fix the issues only then get back to writing.
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Post by: The Deposed King on May 03, 2013, 05:32:55 AM
Well so far its only been one issue and its a relatively easy fix. Only 6 more chapters to summarize and I'll fix the issues only then get back to writing.

Let the frustration flow through you.  Only then can feel the true power of the Dark Side!

(Its actually good to hear you're doing well.  Keep up the good work.)




The Deposed King
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Post by: Ren on May 03, 2013, 02:16:44 PM
Only 4 chapters left to summarize! And still only the one major flaw which is easily corrected...it's seeing all of the minor flaws and itching to correct them that's driving me crazy!...8P
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Post by: AesopsInvestigations on May 03, 2013, 05:31:16 PM
Working on Chapter 4, while also writing a series bible for a UF serialized fiction. With the latter I'm going to do it sorta like a TV show. In other words each story will be an 'episode', I'm just not sure how many stories are going to make up a season. I want to get a couple of the ep's written before I go to press. Then maybe write as I go, listening to reader feedback.

Then at the end of the season, compile them all into one book with say "DVD" extras. Like thoughts on the writing process, maybe notes etc etc etc. My goal (at this point) is to have the first episode ready by January.
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Post by: spywolf on May 04, 2013, 06:15:33 AM
400 words yesterday
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Post by: The Deposed King on May 05, 2013, 02:10:01 AM
I wrote 6.8k for a sneak peak chapter of book 5 for the end of Admiral's Trial.

Just about ready to send to my beta readers.  even got a widget on the website for people to sign up for the e-arc.



the deposed king
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Post by: Ren on May 05, 2013, 08:59:24 PM
2 chapters left to summarize...whee!
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Post by: gatordave96 on May 06, 2013, 02:49:15 AM
Wrote the last scene in my first epic fantasy novel this weekend, barring any major hiccups during editing and polishing.  Final word count:  286,000.

Hope to finish the edits in three or four weeks.  Then I'll send it off to friends and family to read and give me comments.

Whew.  Three year process of writing my first book coming to an end.  Probably should have planned a stand alone novel for my first project, but what the hell.  Maybe I have a trilogy in me. 

Anybody have any good ideas about how to get something readable to alphas?  Wrote everything in 12-point courier, double spaced.  So the draft is close to 1,300 pages.  Want to give printed versions to as many people as possible without breaking the bank.  Wonder if I should convert a version to single spacing and a different font.

So how do you deliver your finished product to alphas? 
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Post by: The Deposed King on May 06, 2013, 05:32:16 AM
I use a regular Word file with times new roman font.  No spaces between anything.  Just regular paragraph indents and shoot it off to the betas.

I don't know about paper copies.  Just make sure the font is large enough.

When I go amazon, my brother converts it to an e-pub file.

Great news on the finish.  I'd seriously consider breaking your book in two.





the Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on May 06, 2013, 08:55:52 AM
I use basic Times New Roman, 12-point font, with double-line spacing and about an inch and a half indent for new paragraphs.
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on May 06, 2013, 02:17:13 PM
So how do you deliver your finished product to alphas?

I send them text files, which they can import into whatever program they like and format to their pleasure; my own vision is far enough from the norm that sending the files in the format I work in or prefer reading is a non-starter.
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Post by: Ren on May 06, 2013, 08:17:38 PM
Huh, I don't do any spacing in my writing...have to check my reply from Tad Williams and see if he spaces...
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Post by: Wordmaker on May 07, 2013, 01:23:06 PM
Just finished Chapter 18, bringing me up to 34,404 words.
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Post by: Ren on May 07, 2013, 01:59:17 PM
So finishes my summarization, just have the one bit to correct then I can get back to writing...I should probably also do up my outline now that I have a better idea of where the story is going.
Yes I live dangerously, writing without an outline written ahead of time. But I tend to write as inspire; come up with an idea for a story, setting, write tons of characters then try to fit it all together. Yes its horribly inefficient and likely explains part of why I've never finished anything...but now that I've got the summary down I think I can get myself into a more efficient writing mode and get this thing done, especially with a good framework to work from.
I'll also have to go back and double-space everything now...I heard back from Tad and thats what he does...I shudder to think how much that will balloon up my page count...8P
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Post by: Wordmaker on May 07, 2013, 02:00:59 PM
Don't sweat if you don't have an outline written. Most of my writing, especially when I'm just starting a book or series, is all done on the fly.
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Post by: Ren on May 07, 2013, 02:02:05 PM
Ah good, I'm not alone then...8)
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Post by: The Deposed King on May 07, 2013, 04:34:58 PM
Yeah my experience is that you can start out with a concept, a few general ideas on where you're going with the story and a couple key characters in your head and run with it.  As you write more books and in the same series, you'll find yourself both needing and producing a more defined outline either mental or physical of what's going to happen next.

But nothing I've done would warrant a 5-10k outline prior to actually starting the book.  Not to say such outlines don't work for many people, David Drake for one.




The Deposed King
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Post by: Ren on May 07, 2013, 06:01:52 PM
Rofl after adjusting my Master Doc to double-spaced...ballooned to 349 pages...so way over my goal for what I wanted to achieve by my birthday...8)
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on May 07, 2013, 06:15:57 PM
Don't sweat if you don't have an outline written. Most of my writing, especially when I'm just starting a book or series, is all done on the fly.

*nod* Outlines are tools for keeping everything in one place and roughly connected, to my mind, not only do they not have to bear much resemblance to the finished product, but for me if they do, it means the book's not got enough life to be surprising me and that's generally a very bad sign.

I'll note, which I haven't for a while, two writers with successful careers of a few decades in genre who occupy extreme positions on outlining which they have talked about in public; Tim Powers outlines his every book down to what happens in each conversation before writing it; Steve Brust makes it up entirely as he goes along, and when he gets stuck, will write about the characters having meals and bitching about being stuck and so on until he gets to the next bit of plot and then cut as apt.  He appears to be as in the dark and as fascinated by how his creative process works as any of his readers; if you've read Cowboy Feng's Space Bar and Grill, the bit with the goat was something he deliberately included as a throwaway early on specifically to see how his subconscious would make it important later in the book..
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Post by: Ren on May 07, 2013, 07:18:50 PM
Yeah every Author I've ever talked to has their own process. And I would want to get more of a general skeleton/framework of an Outline so I know generally where the story is going...so I can then work on getting there...8)
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Post by: Ren on May 08, 2013, 01:39:43 PM
Started on Chapter 15 last night...still n outline, but I got started...8)

update: very rough outline done and written out the main plot...yay for Mexican stand-off endings...sorta...lol
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Post by: Wordmaker on May 10, 2013, 01:03:25 PM
Phew! Chapter 19 was pretty epic. Brings me up to 37,402 words.
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Post by: Ren on May 11, 2013, 03:10:24 PM
Chapter 15 completed!
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on May 13, 2013, 01:03:18 PM
I finished editing my manuscript on Saturday night, and the beta copies go out today!  :D
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Post by: The Deposed King on May 14, 2013, 03:10:22 AM
Way to go DP.



The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on May 14, 2013, 06:24:12 AM
That's fantastic!
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Post by: The Deposed King on May 14, 2013, 03:15:56 PM
59k Falon Half Blood

Hopefully done with most of the hard core slacking.  I need to get this thing done and ready for editing.  2/3rds of the way through it though so hope is in sight.  about 6k so far today.  Maybe I'll hit 60k today.  Fingers crossed.

Made 60K right before going to sleep!
 



The Deposed King
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Post by: Ren on May 14, 2013, 03:47:57 PM
I finished editing my manuscript on Saturday night, and the beta copies go out today!  :D

Good for you...mine is the story that never ends...lol
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Post by: Wordmaker on May 15, 2013, 12:59:47 PM
Oooh, so close to the next big wordcount milestone. Chapter 20 is done, putting me at 39,496 words for Book 3.
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Post by: The Deposed King on May 16, 2013, 10:59:10 AM
62k Falon Half Blood.



The Deposed King
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Post by: Paynesgrey on May 16, 2013, 01:02:09 PM
22K on The Terror of Twelvety Town.  Works out to a bit over 1K a day... not bad for being squeezed in around the day job.  A current scene to finish, a big finale, and then the conclusion, and the first draft'll be in the jug. 
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Post by: Wordmaker on May 16, 2013, 01:08:20 PM
1k is an excellent daily word count. At that rate most people can get a full novel drafted in 3-4 months.
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Post by: The Deposed King on May 16, 2013, 02:10:21 PM
Yeah good job PG.


65k Falon Half Blood.





the Deposed King
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on May 17, 2013, 11:50:48 AM
22K on The Terror of Twelvety Town.  Works out to a bit over 1K a day... not bad for being squeezed in around the day job.  A current scene to finish, a big finale, and then the conclusion, and the first draft'll be in the jug. 

My writing process is 1k a day on weekdays due to job and kids, then on weekends I try to crank out 2k. I think it's a realistc and fulfilling goal.  ;D

Currently I'm waiting for my beta readers to get back to me! ARGH, I'm not a fan of the waiting game lol!  ::) But one of them did chime in a few chapters in and tell me she was enjoying it so far.

I'm now outlining my next two books - 1 of them being the sequel to the book I'll release next month, and the other is a fantasy trilogy.
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Post by: Wordmaker on May 17, 2013, 01:08:09 PM
Another chapter down on Book 3, putting me at 41,181 words.
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Post by: Ren on May 18, 2013, 03:46:29 PM
Chapter 16 Complete!
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Post by: KevinEvans on May 18, 2013, 05:04:49 PM
We spent last week on Colorado Springs, had lunch with our publisher, had a story (22,000 words) moved up to the next anthology. (11 months out)

Sold another story, and finalized reprint contracts for past serialized novellas.

Was a great week.

Regards,
Kevin
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Post by: Wordmaker on May 18, 2013, 07:59:20 PM
Fantastic!
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Post by: The Deposed King on May 19, 2013, 09:52:48 AM
Good job KevinEvans!


70k Falon Half Blood.

72k!!


always follow the dream,


The Deposed King
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Post by: Ren on May 20, 2013, 09:22:53 PM
Heh just added the last two chapters to my Master doc; 400 pages, 104,450 words...
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Post by: The Deposed King on May 21, 2013, 01:34:22 PM
75k Falon Half Blood


The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on May 22, 2013, 01:06:23 PM
Chapter 22 of Book 3 is done. 42,742 so far.
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on May 22, 2013, 02:21:35 PM
Awesome progress guys!

I started my second book, a sequel to the first. It's only at 1200 words so far.

Out of my two beta readers one is sending their copy back to me with notes and opinions. I'm looking forward to seeing what she thought. She did message me saying, "When's book 2 coming out?!" lol!  :D

My second beta reader is half way through the book and he tells me he's really enjoying it so far.  8)

So good news all around!!! The only bad news is I had a bunch of story ideas this morning and failed to write them down and now I think I'm missing one...drat!  ::)
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Post by: The Deposed King on May 23, 2013, 01:32:54 AM
79k Falon



The Deposed King
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Post by: meg_evonne on May 23, 2013, 12:08:31 PM
Revision, revision, revision... I'm in the cutting down mode and fighting for a decrease of 250 words every five pages or so. My first rough draft word count of 88,642 and since then subsequent drafts have lowered it to a far tighter 82,088. The goal is 75,000, which is still longish for my target audience--lower YA/upper MG.

Then, after DFW conference, I made a major revision decision to change over to present tense. Halfway through that revision, I rest at 77,246. I'm convinced it will settle under my 75,000 goal. The present tense is a scary change, but my main character is basking in the new intimacy and my editing soul is devouring the new tight configuration.

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Post by: Aminar on May 23, 2013, 07:06:32 PM
41kish on my Sci Fi WIP.  It's going awesome, moving into the final arc of the story a little early, but given the fact it's a whole Heist plotline I should be fine to getting around 30-40K words out of it.

Also inserted some killer early book forshadowing.
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Post by: Ren on May 24, 2013, 02:41:18 AM
Chapter 17 completed! 6700 words! And managed to Solid who my actual Villain is...and got my main character's Nemesis in the bargain! Whee!
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on May 24, 2013, 11:11:46 AM
I finally heard back from both of my beta readers. I'm excited to look at their notes and some of their suggestions will help make this book more rich and engaging( I hope!)

But the biggest part of my conversation with one of them was when he told me:

- "The story is amazing, I loved it."
- "Concerning the alien race in the book...thank you, just thank you, they're incredible."
- (Concerning a specific scene in the book) "That was awesome, really amazing."

Suffice to say I've been squeeing my pants from their reactions. Now I'll be spending the next two weeks fine tuning the book, taking their suggestions into account, and finally on June 7th...release!
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Post by: Wordmaker on May 24, 2013, 11:15:38 AM
Good luck!
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Post by: Wordmaker on May 24, 2013, 12:35:03 PM
Chapter 23 done, bringing me to 44,632 words on Book 3.
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on May 24, 2013, 04:04:55 PM
Good luck!

Thank you!

Chapter 23 done, bringing me to 44,632 words on Book 3.

It's so funny - everytime I see your progress I'm excited because I'm anxious to read the book, then I realize book 2 isn't even out yet!  :o
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Post by: Paynesgrey on May 24, 2013, 04:06:06 PM
First draft of The Terror of Twevlety Town is done.  40K in just under a month.  Proofing and beta feedback in progress.

I shall now make gooey, brain-melted noises.
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Post by: Wordmaker on May 24, 2013, 04:07:24 PM
It's so funny - everytime I see your progress I'm excited because I'm anxious to read the book, then I realize book 2 isn't even out yet!  :o

Haha! You think it's bad for you? I have to keep reminding myself I'm writing events that are over a year away from being seen by the public.
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on May 27, 2013, 01:22:24 AM
Getting back into the groove after some time away by rereading a project I am officially abandoning and noting which bits to take for other projects; unfortunately, most of those fit in TIWTBW #5, which is at best a couple of years away.
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Post by: gatordave96 on May 27, 2013, 01:26:10 AM
More editing today.  I can see the end of editing in sight.  Maybe another week to go.  The book is now up to 298,000 words.  Whew.
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Post by: Wordmaker on May 28, 2013, 01:04:10 PM
Book 3 is now at 46,586 words and building towards a major turning point.
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Post by: The Deposed King on May 29, 2013, 07:02:37 AM
86k - Falon Half Blood



The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on May 29, 2013, 01:13:12 PM
A writing blitz on my lunch hour has chapter 25 done and my wordcount up to 48,093.
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Post by: Wordmaker on May 30, 2013, 01:12:42 PM
Another chapter done, bringing me to 49,523 words.
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on May 31, 2013, 12:56:17 PM
One week until I release my book on Amazon! I'm spending the weekend going through the manuscript to fine-tune everything.

If anyone is interested, I posted the first chapter of the book on my website - http://www.thomasrmanning.com/Energize.html

Keep up the awesome progress everyone!
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on June 01, 2013, 03:13:15 AM
And here we go.

Through pass on Chapters 1 and 2 of #1, and on chapters 1 and 4 of #3, at the same time.

Chpater 2 of #3 needs a breakdown and almost-complete restructure, damn it.  And I think I need to swap things aroung in chapter 2 of #1 instead.  But at least I have a way forward now.

New short-term goal; get all 11 existing chapters of #3 sorted to my satisfaction by the end of June, before I have two weeks of visitors and possibly a week of major building work.
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Post by: Ren on June 01, 2013, 03:30:55 PM
Chapter 18 completed!
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Post by: gatordave96 on June 02, 2013, 12:05:08 AM
Sent my first novel, "Less than Honorable," to my beta readers today.  Final word count: 301,000.

Time for a deep breath, and then I will start on the sequel. 

Cheers, everyone.  Keep up the good work!

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Post by: The Deposed King on June 02, 2013, 02:13:48 PM
Just uploaded Admiral's Trial to amazon.  Book 4 is now officially an indie book!



The Deposed King
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Post by: trboturtle on June 05, 2013, 03:04:39 AM
Sent in my third story submission in as many weeks to BattleCorps,com -- and there's a fourth waiting for feedback from the Battletech Story workgroup. So, no novels, but the short stories are going well.... ;D

Craig
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 05, 2013, 01:03:53 PM
Chapter 27 brings me to 51,925 words.
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 05, 2013, 01:24:07 PM
Way to go guys!

97k Falon Half Blood



The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on June 06, 2013, 02:25:20 PM
Spent five hours last night wresting with chapter 2 of volume 3.  It looks like I need to chop and shape bits from two quite different previous drafts as well as write a bunch new, but I hope i will get it finished Friday.
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Post by: gatordave96 on June 07, 2013, 02:11:05 AM
Wrote out the plot arc, and some sub-plot arcs for my second novel.  And now I've got my first 2,000 words of what will be my second novel.  It just proves there is no rest for the wicked, especially the for villain that is in the first scene.

Cackle, cackle, cackle.

Just out of curiosity, how long do each of you give your beta readers to give you some feedback?  I have promised myself not to bug anyone during this first week of getting a draft to them, but damn . . . it's difficult to avoid the temptation of calling them to see what they think so far. 
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 07, 2013, 03:52:29 AM
Wrote out the plot arc, and some sub-plot arcs for my second novel.  And now I've got my first 2,000 words of what will be my second novel.  It just proves there is no rest for the wicked, especially the for villain that is in the first scene.

Cackle, cackle, cackle.

Just out of curiosity, how long do each of you give your beta readers to give you some feedback?  I have promised myself not to bug anyone during this first week of getting a draft to them, but damn . . . it's difficult to avoid the temptation of calling them to see what they think so far.


I generally tell people I spend a month writing and a month editing.  As a rule of thumb, that way I'm going hint hint instead of give me your COMMENTS!!!! ARGHA!!!!  People have lives sadly enough.  and I've had to go about a week and a half once before anyone commented on my draft.  I figure two weeks and they've forgotten you and after a week its time for the old hint hint.

My favorite response if too many days go bye without a feedback is to simply get more beta readers.  At least that way I feel like I'm doing something to control getting this thing edited.  Really unless someone else owes you for reading their stuff you kind of need to go with the flow and wait.



The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 07, 2013, 01:15:00 PM
And that's 53,618 words. Book 3 is easily going to be the longest in the series.
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 09, 2013, 04:48:49 AM
100k Falon Half Blood.



The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on June 10, 2013, 02:20:14 PM
Finished this pass on chapter 2 of #3, and did some more small things; next up, fixing chapter 5.
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 11, 2013, 02:43:56 AM
102k Falon


The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 11, 2013, 01:16:37 PM
Hitting 55,709 words, Book 3 has officially passed Locked Within in terms of length.
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Post by: trboturtle on June 11, 2013, 05:23:28 PM
Just sent in my fourth story in as many weeks to BattleCorps. Fingers' crossed!

Craig
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 12, 2013, 07:06:10 AM
Way to go guys!  It sounds this is the season to publish some stories!  Keep up the good work!!!



The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 12, 2013, 01:13:12 PM
57,301 on Book 3 now.
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on June 12, 2013, 01:40:21 PM
I have about 2000 words typed up for my second novel. No reviews on the first one yet but a couple people have mentioned that they're really enjoying it  :D
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on June 12, 2013, 02:32:29 PM
Finished this pass on chapter 2 of #3, and did some more small things; next up, fixing chapter 5.

And walking home form work yesterday I figured out what I think is wrong with this and need to redo #3.2 again, though not so thoroughly as last time I hope.
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 13, 2013, 01:10:30 PM
I'm onto a sequence of scenes I've literally been waiting years to write! Up to 59,187 words.
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Post by: spywolf on June 13, 2013, 01:12:22 PM
no dieing of shock
but 839 words
its about halth of chapter four of this project
(which I still need a name for)
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 13, 2013, 11:24:31 PM
I'm onto a sequence of scenes I've literally been waiting years to write! Up to 59,187 words.


@Neuro: get through those revision, you can do it.   ;)

@Workmaker: Nice.


@Spywolf: You go girl!!!  (whoop!!!)






The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 13, 2013, 11:30:48 PM
Did about 6k yesterday and completed a Spalding shortstory.  Brought the story up to 17k... well really 15k because I had a second 2k short story in there as well.  But anyway that grand total of 17k is now off to the brother and we're going to meld it in with a couple of Jason shorts and make another 150 page (or there abouts) little novella.



The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 14, 2013, 01:13:04 PM
61,079 words on Book 3 now.
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on June 14, 2013, 02:58:12 PM
@Neuro: get through those revision, you can do it.   ;)

Thank you.

I am a bit miffed that it has been basically six months since I wrote anything new, but I really need to get all the dents hammered out of TIWTBWO #1 and #2 and the first ten chapters or so of #3 before I write the rest of #3.  (And all of this is procrastinating from the TISBWO revisions and the TISBWO prequel revisions.)
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 15, 2013, 08:06:42 AM
We've got to all help encourage each other, Neuro.  And besides I know you can get through it if you stay dedicated.  (dedication something that seems to be sorely lacking over here where I'm at for some reason -whistles aimlessly to the side while avoiding anyone's gaze- )


Falon - 104K

going to try for one more chapter today!

Falon - 106k (Banged out that extra)

Falon 108k - finished with a 6k day!! Hurray the battle against sloth and laziness has been won for one more day.


always follow the dream,





The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on June 16, 2013, 01:42:24 AM
Finally, I hope, put that chapter 2 to bed, have gone on through the next three again, 5 being the next one to need a lot of work is done, and am taking a dinner break befor doing a few more.
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on June 16, 2013, 03:11:11 PM
Finally, I hope, put that chapter 2 to bed, have gone on through the next three again, 5 being the next one to need a lot of work is done, and am taking a dinner break befor doing a few more.

And got two more chapters done afterwards yay.

I want to reread the bit at the end of chapter 2 again as it may need one more tweak, but then 8 to 11 get a clear pass.
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 17, 2013, 01:11:51 PM
Another short chapter, but the break was too natural to pass up. 62,508 words.
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 18, 2013, 01:08:39 PM
113k - falon




The Deposed King
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Post by: spywolf on June 19, 2013, 08:58:40 AM
edditing first four chapters of current project
word count is mostly going up
but I do wish I had a pet grammar nazi right now...
(trying to get this one to novel word count... might take me a few years ::) )
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 19, 2013, 09:07:16 AM
What's your current word count, and the genre?
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 19, 2013, 09:08:23 AM
edditing first four chapters of current project
word count is mostly going up
but I do wish I had a pet grammar nazi right now...
(trying to get this one to novel word count... might take me a few years ::) )

Stay strong spything!  You can do it.  You just have to embrace your inner spygirl and then... victory shall be 'yours!'



The Deposed King
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Post by: spywolf on June 19, 2013, 09:12:15 AM
What's your current word count, and the genre?
word count
4,303 (its only got three and a half chapters so far... it will be longer)
cureently a twist on urban fantasy
but its unlikely any one will ever read it... its only my 7th story to ever be written down and its a big working progress


Stay strong spything!  You can do it.  You just have to embrace your inner spygirl and then... victory shall be 'yours!'



The Deposed King
trying to
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 19, 2013, 09:34:31 AM
word count
4,303 (its only got three and a half chapters so far... it will be longer)
cureently a twist on urban fantasy
but its unlikely any one will ever read it... its only my 7th story to ever be written down and its a big working progress

*shrug* The first full-length novel I managed to write became my first published novel. Don't sweat about how much/little you've written in the past. Remember that every first draft is terrible, no matter who you are or how good you are. That's why we edit.

Okay, so urban fantasy. If it's for adults then you're looking at about 80,000 words. Very doable. Heck, after editing my first novel went from 80,000 to 55,000!
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Post by: spywolf on June 19, 2013, 11:37:40 AM
ha ha ha doable maybe
but as the longest thing I have managed so far is 35,000 words
it sounds like a lot...

yeah I try and edit
but most of the time if no one is yelling at me about deadlines I get really bored of it quickly and give up... ::)
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 19, 2013, 11:53:38 AM
ha ha ha doable maybe
but as the longest thing I have managed so far is 35,000 words
it sounds like a lot...

yeah I try and edit
but most of the time if no one is yelling at me about deadlines I get really bored of it quickly and give up... ::)

This describes me from about a decade and a half until about a two years ago.  Doesn't mean you can't change it.  Its all about motivation girlthing!  When you find in yourself the ability to stop writing for fun and start writing because its your boring day job, then young padawan, a true spygirl will you be (que in dramatic star wars music)




The Deposed King



The Deposed King
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Post by: spywolf on June 19, 2013, 11:58:48 AM
*giggles*
I don't think writing would be a boring day job, it would depend on the topic you were writing about, and how interesting that topic is to the writer...
4,456
the reason I think I have had problems with editing before is because I already written the whole story so did not want to change any of it... so trying new method, edit each chapter after it is written. maybe it will work. we will see...
I can at least test the theory...

4,519 chapter 4 first draft finished
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 19, 2013, 12:17:54 PM
That might work, but it's risky.

My honest opinion is that you'd be better served in the long run getting over your reluctance to change what you've written, because when you work with an editor (either the publisher's for traditional publishing, or a freelancer for self-publishing) you will have to change things.
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 19, 2013, 12:21:48 PM
Falon - 115k

My advice is to find someone you trust who can help you with the editing and then try not to look while they are doing their job.  But whatever works, you can't know until you try it.  For me writing a chapter and then editing would kill the fun of writing more in short order but to each her own!



The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 19, 2013, 01:08:03 PM
A reliable other-party to help with edits is invaluable.

Book 3 is up to 64,728 words.
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Post by: spywolf on June 19, 2013, 01:33:35 PM
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I am mostly doing it to try different things out to see what works... its unlikely anyone will look at it let alone ever be submitted to a publisher...
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 19, 2013, 01:38:32 PM
Ah, I see. Well, whatever works for you and help get what you want from your writing. That's the important thing.
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Post by: spywolf on June 19, 2013, 01:41:23 PM
yeah...
maybe one day I will write something that is good enough to let others read it... but I highly doubt it will be this project... (and if it is it wont be any time soon)

4,525
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 19, 2013, 02:02:05 PM
yeah...
maybe one day I will write something that is good enough to let others read it... but I highly doubt it will be this project... (and if it is it wont be any time soon)

4,525


117k - Falon

That's why I started out somewhere fairly anonymous like Baen's Bar.  Just throw something up there and see what people say.  It took several years to build up a thick enough skin to be able to take the critisism like I need to.  Like everyone i have my good days and my bad days but for the most part I can siphon the good stuff out where I need it.

That said not only did the Bar inspire me to become a write, in part thanks to some comments over there I took a several year hiatus  from writing and focused back on the day job exclusively.

So you've got to know yourself first.  However and with that in mind I'd always say nothing ventured nothing gained.  You've got to build up a thick skin if you want to get anywhere with writing, unless its just for you and selected friends and family.

Its sad but really and honestly the only way to get better with writing is just simply to write.  Like Wordmaker the first full lengthed novel I wrote was the first one I put up for sale.  Admiral Who came out april of last year and I wrote most of it over the course of a month (about 80%).  That was my first time writing so much and so quickly.  You just have to get your back up against the wall and refuse to accept no from the back of your brain.

Regardless just keep plugging away, girlwolf.  You'll get there eventually.  Just don't let anyone, not even yourself, get you down.



The Deposed King




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Post by: spywolf on June 19, 2013, 02:10:12 PM
thanks
I know most of it though
my worst enemy right now is me...
sometimes the voice in the back of my head needs a good kicking... and I need to stop listening to it...
I think that is my major problem really... its not that I can't its more I chicken out ::)

but this summer we are going to stay focussed and by september I will have finished the first draft! (at least that is the plan)
I just need to right and shut out the stupid voice in the back of my head...

(you have written 2,000 words in the space it has taken me to edit chapter 4 have on lesson and start chapter 5. and do about 5 posts here. you write fast.)
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 19, 2013, 02:23:43 PM
thanks
I know most of it though
my worst enemy right now is me...
sometimes the voice in the back of my head needs a good kicking... and I need to stop listening to it...
I think that is my major problem really... its not that I can't its more I chicken out ::)

but this summer we are going to stay focussed and by september I will have finished the first draft! (at least that is the plan)
I just need to right and shut out the stupid voice in the back of my head...

(you have written 2,000 words in the space it has taken me to edit chapter 4 have on lesson and start chapter 5. and do about 5 posts here. you write fast.)

I was slacking pretty hardcore most of today, so I've been feeling the burn to get something down on canvas as it where.  Even then I'm not going nearly as fast as I should be.  Only about 3.5k so far today and I think I'm about to call it a night.

three plus K aren't going to be winning me any races or awards but I should get to the finish line eventually at this rate.  Right now I just need another evening training lesson with random scenery encounters with people in the army column/camp.  then some time passage and talk about running low on extra food stuffs because at the end of the army.  After that its seeing the Knights and Lords and theri tent set up and then the battlefield encampment followed by the big battle.  I might just throw in the pink princess there.

Another good 20k to write easy.  But it could run to 40k.  Boy I sure hope not.

Anyway I'm starting to ramble over here.  Its late, my eyes are sleepy and rambling is never a good sign.  So take care spygirl and take care.






The Deposed King
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Post by: spywolf on June 19, 2013, 03:40:31 PM
lol
the ramblings of an old man :P (you are all relatively old sorry)
its okay some of the ramblings of yours were useful...
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Post by: spywolf on June 20, 2013, 08:59:59 AM
I found a use for grammar nazies :o *sigh*

working on chapter five
slowly...
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 20, 2013, 10:43:11 AM
lol
the ramblings of an old man :P (you are all relatively old sorry)
its okay some of the ramblings of yours were useful...

The paranoid rantings of those still in their diapers has no effect on me, spything.  For when you get as old as I am you soon discover that the older you get the more people like to rant!  (hahahhahaha)

Have fun with your writing.  Those grammar nazi's do have their uses don't they.  A sorry state of affairs I concur but what can you do?


The Deposed King
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Post by: spywolf on June 20, 2013, 11:57:39 AM
am not that young! :P

also grammar nazies are evil!
and I am failing at chapter five because of biology homework :'(
gerrrrrrrr
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 20, 2013, 01:15:45 PM
Nathan Shepherd strikes back! 66,227 words!
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Post by: spywolf on June 20, 2013, 01:34:25 PM
don't take this the wrong way... but I hate you for that word count
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 20, 2013, 01:50:49 PM
It's all practice. If you start trying to write in 1-2 hour blocks and aim to get 500 words written in that time, you build up from there.
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Post by: spywolf on June 20, 2013, 01:54:39 PM
 ::) I know... but its annoying that you have had more practice than me...
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 20, 2013, 02:48:25 PM
Hehe. Keep at it.

Jim Butcher says the only difference between an aspiring author and a published author is that the published author never gave up.
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Post by: spywolf on June 20, 2013, 03:43:30 PM
noted

I have not given up... I am just tidying my room to find my bio essay before getting back to chapter five...
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on June 20, 2013, 06:37:51 PM
Chapter 1 of my second Daniel Quinn book is done! On to chapter 2 tonight!
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 21, 2013, 02:41:02 AM
Chapter 1 of my second Daniel Quinn book is done! On to chapter 2 tonight!

Congranulations!  Keep up the good work and you'll have a sequel in no time!
!
!



always follow the dream,

The Deposed king
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on June 21, 2013, 01:13:27 PM
Thanks Deposed! If you ever get a chance to read it let me know. I have your first book and I'm looking forward to checking it out as soon as I have time.

Speaking of - I attached a pretty cool screenshot!


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Post by: spywolf on June 22, 2013, 09:34:08 AM
working on chapter five... the story is starting to kick off... any time soon I am shore something is going to explode...
oh to word count is getting over 5,000...
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 23, 2013, 05:52:04 AM
Thanks Deposed! If you ever get a chance to read it let me know. I have your first book and I'm looking forward to checking it out as soon as I have time.

Speaking of - I attached a pretty cool screenshot!


Will do!

and

Its always cool to see that 'your' book is just like all the 'real' amazon books, LOL!  Keep after it Dresendus Prime and you'll be crushing your way to victory on the Amazon Ranking system before you know it.


121K - Falon
 
124k - Falon

125k - Falon
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Post by: spywolf on June 23, 2013, 11:24:43 AM
I have gone over 6,000 words (hole word count)
I have only written 100 words so far to day... most of that was just tweaking seens to make them flow better...
now to finish chapter 5
and hopefully start chapter 6 (yeah wish full thinking most likely... but I can try)
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 23, 2013, 12:20:02 PM
I have gone over 6,000 words (hole word count)
I have only written 100 words so far to day... most of that was just tweaking seens to make them flow better...
now to finish chapter 5
and hopefully start chapter 6 (yeah wish full thinking most likely... but I can try)

You can do it girlthing!  Don't let those diapers slow you down, young sprout.  Listen to your ancient elders and prepare to do battle with those evil word processor voodoo spells we hear have been put into just about every one of them new fangled computer/calculator things!

(good job)



The Deposed
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Post by: spywolf on June 23, 2013, 12:53:54 PM
LOL
you are slightly crazy ;D
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Post by: trboturtle on June 23, 2013, 06:03:01 PM
Well, I got the word back on the four stories I submitted to Battlecorps in the last month....

One's been accepted ;D, one rejected :(, and two are still up in the air :-\ :-\. I had to write an Email on one, explaining what was different about this story from one I'd submitted several years ago that was rejected. (I salvaged some of the pieces from the rejected story and wrote another story around them). As for the second one...it's gone to the fact-checkers *Shudders*

Posted about it on my Battletech State blog, (http://thebattletechstate.blogspot.com/ (http://thebattletechstate.blogspot.com/)) and my reaction to it. Back to work....

Craig
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Post by: spywolf on June 23, 2013, 06:07:33 PM
well done on getting one excepted...

I finished chapter five!

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Post by: Wordmaker on June 23, 2013, 07:01:26 PM
Congratulations on the acceptance!
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Post by: gatordave96 on June 24, 2013, 12:31:52 AM
Managed to write 2,000 words in my new book this weekend.  And I got the first three chapters of the completed book, "Less than Honorable," uploaded to Book Country. 

But I'm worried I crashed the Book Country site with the upload.  The site says its down for maintenance, but I know better.  The server probably blew a fuse with the putrid mess of my attempt to create a decent hook and synopsis.

Anyone have any secrets on writing a decent hook and synopsis?  I'm struggling because my book is third person limited POV, told from multiple characters. 
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 24, 2013, 02:32:29 AM
Way to go Turboturtle!

@gatordave96:  Remember just because they're all out to get you doesn't mean that the world revolves around you, accidents and flukes of fate do really happen (fake chuckle as he nervously glances from side to side before running away.)



The Deposed King
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Post by: gatordave96 on June 24, 2013, 02:43:02 AM
Oh, I know the world doesn't revolve around me . . . yet.  [Insert evil laugh here.]

I just wish the world would spin its bad juju someplace else for a while.   ::)
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Post by: spywolf on June 24, 2013, 05:58:28 AM
No it should not spin and juju any where ells I do not need your bad luck I have far more then most my age all ready I don't need or want any more! Stay away!
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 24, 2013, 06:30:19 AM
@gatordave96: Writing a hook and synopsis shouldn't really be affected by the POV you write. Just keep it snappy, engaging, and give just enough of an idea of the story to get a reader interested, without giving the plot away.
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Post by: KevinEvans on June 24, 2013, 09:45:20 AM
Well it is finally out, Eric Flint has announced "Ring of Fire Press".

It is a venue for novellas from the magazine, mostly stories that are too long for the "best of" yearly anthologies, and too short for their own book.

More specifically to my wife and I, is the release of our novella "No ship for Tranquebar"

http://www.amazon.com/Ship-Tranquebar-Press-Fiction-ebook/dp/B00DIHUNWM/ref=pd_rhf_se_p_t_2_TMEE

It is a first for Karen and I.

Regards,
Kevin
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Post by: spywolf on June 24, 2013, 01:07:58 PM
spent most of the day editing
there are still words in chapter 5 that I don't know the correct spelling for...
*sigh*
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 24, 2013, 01:16:45 PM
Always interesting when a chapter doesn't go quite as I'd planned. 67,955 words!
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Post by: spywolf on June 24, 2013, 01:17:51 PM
in a good way or a bad way?

also how long does it take to get to 67,000+ words?
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 24, 2013, 01:24:43 PM
Oh the good way, definitely. I was expecting more action, less emotion, in this one. It'll need fleshing out when I'm editing, I think, but unless something is utterly pivotal (Like changing a character's gender or something) I never stop to do edits until the first draft is done.

This book has been slow going. I've been writing it since mid-February. But it's impossible to say, from one book to the next, how long it'll take. Locked Within took me a year to write. Silent Oath took me about 5 months to get the first version done, but I managed to get an entire re-write (with mostly new material) done in the space of 2 months.
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Post by: spywolf on June 24, 2013, 03:50:14 PM
five months? WTH?
wait Charlotte these people don't juggle classes and homework at the same time as writing... ::)

if I don't check some things as I go along I end up with giant problems with spellings and grammar and forget the word I was meant to spell
i only tweak little things to make it flow better... I normally write a few chapters then go back and check for huge gaping problems
(I still can not spell for toffy though ::) )

I spotted a huge gaping problem with chapter 5 which is mostly fixed... (I still don't know the correct spelling for coradoor though, which is bugging me!)
but tomorrow I have no school so the aim is to finish chapter 6...
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 24, 2013, 04:16:12 PM
Well I might not have classes and homework, but I've had some ups and downs to get in my way, particularly while I was drafting Silent Oath in the first place.

I usually get up between 5am and 6am, and get to sit down for the night after 8pm. In all, I've got my day job which, including commuting, takes up 11 hours of my day, Monday to Friday. I've got edits and promotion for the upcoming book. I have a weekly Dresden Files RPG campaign to run as well. A wife who's partially disabled and has to use a wheelchair or crutches to get around. And, of course, two 6 month old baby girls.

Somewhere in all that, I also write.

So I have an idea of how hard it is to fit writing in with a busy schedule.  ;)

I find what works best is to set aside a specific block of time to write, and treat that time as sacred, as though you're already published and it is literally your job to write in that time, even if you don't feel like it.
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Post by: spywolf on June 24, 2013, 04:20:29 PM
yeah okay
if I was more organized I could write more... to day I did procrastinate
bad me
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 24, 2013, 04:35:31 PM
No, there's nothing "bad" or "good" about how you choose to write. At the moment you're answering only to yourself.
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Post by: spywolf on June 24, 2013, 04:44:00 PM
If I am going to complain about my pathetic word count if I am going to procrastinate
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 24, 2013, 07:05:08 PM
Basically what I mean is, there will always be something to get in your way. You'll find a way to make the time to write.
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Post by: spywolf on June 24, 2013, 08:37:02 PM
unless I have exams
no matter what I do
when the exam pireod starts writing plans get put on hold...
for some reason failing exams is bad

its okay I think I have managed to organise my time better now so more writing time


just let one of my friends (yes I have friends :P) read the first five chapters
 :-\
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 24, 2013, 08:52:48 PM
Of course, exams are important. I'm not saying you should jeopardise that.

Good luck with the feedback!
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Post by: spywolf on June 24, 2013, 09:02:24 PM
yeah
they don't let you in to university if you fail exams...  ::)

thanks
I wont know till tomorrow
but I suspect she will say it is crap
because I have no confidance in my self... and the voice in my head is being an ass  ::)
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 24, 2013, 09:04:18 PM
Well don't listen to that voice.  ;)
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Post by: spywolf on June 24, 2013, 09:05:42 PM
trying boss
but its being rather persuasive  ::) (also I was only one letter away from spelling persuasive right first time! I want extra credit for that!) 
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 25, 2013, 06:55:19 AM
trying boss
but its being rather persuasive  ::) (also I was only one letter away from spelling persuasive right first time! I want extra credit for that!)

I think its the diaper factor that's slowing you down spything!  You've just got to realize that when you get older and grow up these things will all come easier to you  :P

127k - Falon



The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 25, 2013, 01:11:18 PM
Another chapter down and I'm up to 69,614 words.
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 27, 2013, 01:02:45 PM
72,114 words now.
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 27, 2013, 02:36:50 PM
129k - Falon



The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on June 28, 2013, 06:38:07 AM
131k - Falon

133k - Falon

135k - Falon Half Blood

137k - Falon




The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on June 28, 2013, 01:10:04 PM
Things are getting pretty grim now. 73,570 words.
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on June 29, 2013, 02:27:14 AM
I think I am finally finally through this pass on what I have of TIWTBWO #3. (Except one line that needs to be moved back to chapter 5 as set-up, and one other similar-scaled moving something back to chapter 3.  Both of which will be quick and simple enough that I am leaving them to get myself going with next time.)

Through pass on chapters 8 and 9 again to check that what I did last week worked, tightened the end of 10, wnt through 11 and the opening para of 12.  A thousand words of additional opening frame written new, and I am pretty sure that the next bit of frame comes after 12.

Also, I have figured out where something in #5 may originate from in the chapters I have just written.

Total at this point: 48,205 words.
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Post by: roteral on July 01, 2013, 08:05:35 AM
Haven't actually wrote anything. Too lazy right now but I least I have something that sort of resembles an outline.
Here it is: A "man" is traveling through a vast desert with a horse, "raven", and a wagon full of Evolution. He comes upon a town centered around an oasis. The town is on the verge of political collapse and each side is desperate for a leg up. The "man" and his Evolution are the key to winning this conflict. But does the "man" really care?

Ive had a tough time describing the settings when I actually write and that usually stops me short. Any advice?
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 01, 2013, 08:11:15 AM
If you find that description is a weak point, shift the focus of your writing to something else.

My editor pointed out that my strengths lie in dialogue and how I describe action scenes, so my writing is quite dialogue-heavy and light on description, and that works for me.
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Post by: roteral on July 01, 2013, 08:21:13 AM
thanks Ill give it a shot
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Post by: spywolf on July 01, 2013, 09:12:17 AM
ot feed back, now to make some miner corrections
and then I can get back to the main story
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 01, 2013, 09:14:18 AM
@roteral:  Dialogue and action are hard to beat!  (says the guy whose strengths go that way himself)

@Spything:  Go go go!


139k - Falon

140k - Falon

The Deposed king
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Post by: spywolf on July 01, 2013, 09:22:08 AM
going
just slowly
I m shore there is some school work I should be doing but...
writing is more fun :P
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 01, 2013, 01:09:24 PM
A short chapter, but it couldn't be much longer without dragging on needlessly. Up to 74,903 words.
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 02, 2013, 01:11:03 PM
Up to 76,059 now.
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 03, 2013, 09:01:48 AM
144k - Falon Half Blood

145k - Falon half blood

146k - Falon Half Blood

147k - Falon Half Blood

149k - Falon Half Blood




The Deposed King
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Post by: spywolf on July 03, 2013, 12:51:33 PM
5,000 words one day? *deep breaths*
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 03, 2013, 12:58:48 PM
5,000 words one day? *deep breaths*

Actually 8000, and with another 200 words it will be 9000.

150k - Falon Half Blood (9k total for today - started out at 141k)


The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 03, 2013, 01:09:07 PM
Is it normal to get emotional writing a villain's death scene? 77,546 words.
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Post by: spywolf on July 03, 2013, 01:13:14 PM
Actually 8000, and with another 200 words it will be 9000.

150k - Falon Half Blood (9k total for today - started out at 141k)


The Deposed King
remind me again why I am not aloud to hurt you for gloating?

Is it normal to get emotional writing a villain's death scene? 77,546 words.
I will let you know when I get there...
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 03, 2013, 01:21:27 PM
Is it normal to get emotional writing a villain's death scene? 77,546 words.

Next to your hero's you put your most effort into the villains of your story.  Especially a main or important bad guy.  Sometimes it seems a real shame to end something you've put so much work into.  Agonizing at times, either knowing they have to die, there's no choice, or wondering if there's some way you can save them for later.  And then realizing that while you could save them, the story will be better off if you go through as originally planned.

We put a lot of work into our writing.  If we didn't then it wouldn't be as enjoyable.



The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 03, 2013, 01:23:19 PM
Yeah. I love endings. Many series' have actually left me really disappointed by how they end, so I'm determined to make the end of this trilogy the best book in the series.
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 03, 2013, 01:23:45 PM
remind me again why I am not aloud to hurt you for gloating?
I will let you know when I get there...

Its not gloating to put up an accurate word count (wink) I can't help it if you're jealous of my prodigous writing experience today.  And to think I jerked around until about 3 pm with less than a thousand written and now that its 9:30 pm here I'm already up to 9k.

Oh!  Feel the sting spything!




The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 03, 2013, 01:28:44 PM
Yeah. I love endings. Many series' have actually left me really disappointed by how they end, so I'm determined to make the end of this trilogy the best book in the series.

Is it the end for all your characters, the world, or just for this trilogy arc?




The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 03, 2013, 01:34:10 PM
Well there is scope for more stories in this setting, maybe even some of the characters, but realistically, this is the end of Nathan Shepherd's story, and afterwards I'll be saying goodbye to him, his city, and his friends. I'm going to miss them, but I'd rather let the story end on a high than drag things out.
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Post by: spywolf on July 03, 2013, 01:37:29 PM
Its not gloating to put up an accurate word count (wink) I can't help it if you're jealous of my prodigous writing experience today.  And to think I jerked around until about 3 pm with less than a thousand written and now that its 9:30 pm here I'm already up to 9k.

Oh!  Feel the sting spything!




The Deposed King
ouch
rub it in why don't you
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 03, 2013, 01:54:59 PM
Well there is scope for more stories in this setting, maybe even some of the characters, but realistically, this is the end of Nathan Shepherd's story, and afterwards I'll be saying goodbye to him, his city, and his friends. I'm going to miss them, but I'd rather let the story end on a high than drag things out.

I don't know if I could fit any of my story arcs into something as small as a Trilogy.  Not the ones I really get excited about anyway.

But hey good for you.  You've got a story to tell and you're doing it.  Next to entertaining your audience, tell the story you have and love in your head is the best thing you can do.



The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 03, 2013, 02:08:52 PM
Funny you should say that. Originally Nathan's story was 6 books long.

But my publisher wanted a re-write on Silent Oath when I first submitted it, to combine books 2 and 3. It was after that I decided that I had to cut things down to just the 3 books.
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Post by: spywolf on July 03, 2013, 02:14:48 PM
in other news 6,193
but as fact checking is happening this might jump round all over the place...
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 03, 2013, 03:00:56 PM
ouch
rub it in why don't you

151k - Falon Half Blood (=10k today)

(?that enough rub for you wolfgirl? or shall I have at thee again?)




The Deposed King
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Post by: spywolf on July 03, 2013, 03:30:06 PM
do you want me to hurt you?
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 03, 2013, 04:00:18 PM
do you want me to hurt you?

Why would you do that?  (innocent look)

152k - Falon Half Blood (11k today!)



Mwahahahhahaha!

The Deposed King
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Post by: spywolf on July 03, 2013, 04:03:26 PM
you know exactly why!
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 03, 2013, 04:37:04 PM
you know exactly why!

No, really.  Why?

153k - Falon Half Blood (12k for today)



The Deposed King
(and I think that's all folks, its around midnight over here and I need to get me some shut eye so I can hit it again early in the morning)
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 04, 2013, 05:40:35 AM
154k - Falon Half Blood




The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 04, 2013, 05:46:49 AM
*sigh* One of my crit partners spotted that I'd saved over Chapter 32, losing an important scene.

Today's lunchbreak writing will be re-writing that earlier scene before I continue.
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 04, 2013, 05:54:00 AM
*sigh* One of my crit partners spotted that I'd saved over Chapter 32, losing an important scene.

Today's lunchbreak writing will be re-writing that earlier scene before I continue.

Saint Murphy's Wretched Wrech!  I hate it when that happens.  Takes the wind all the way out of my sails.  Best of luck with the recreation!



The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 04, 2013, 06:01:03 AM
Thanks. Same here, it's the worst feeling.

Still, at least it was spotted now and not after I was celebrating the end of the first draft. Or worse, that I didn't overlook it in editing and send the whole thing off to my publisher, mistake and all.
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 04, 2013, 09:08:35 AM
Thanks. Same here, it's the worst feeling.

Still, at least it was spotted now and not after I was celebrating the end of the first draft. Or worse, that I didn't overlook it in editing and send the whole thing off to my publisher, mistake and all.

Yeah that would have been a nasty present to discover one day in the old email.

156k - Falon Half Blood



The Deposed King




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Post by: Wordmaker on July 04, 2013, 01:13:20 PM
After re-writing the lost scene, my current word count is 77,293. Lost a couple hundred words, but at least I fixed the mistake.
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 04, 2013, 01:18:21 PM
After re-writing the lost scene, my current word count is 77,293. Lost a couple hundred words, but at least I fixed the mistake.

I hope you didn't lose any interesting little twists along the way.  I had to redo about 200 words today due to a computer crash.  It sucked.



the deposed king
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Post by: spywolf on July 04, 2013, 01:28:49 PM
I hope you didn't lose any interesting little twists along the way.  I had to redo about 200 words today due to a computer crash.  It sucked.



the deposed king
LOL :D
sorry but this word count is in my league
it amuses me as I can achive that word count...

sorry the computer crashed... and at least you wrote something to day
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 04, 2013, 01:44:54 PM
LOL :D
sorry but this word count is in my league
it amuses me as I can achive that word count...

sorry the computer crashed... and at least you wrote something to day

Yeah I only got about 3k today and I was really hoping to finish wrapping up this novel so I could get started on the next one this week.  but that 200 was pretty frustrating.

As for the computer I'm pretty sure my lap top is all virused up right now.  I just want to finish up this novel at least before I take this thing into the shop.



The Deposed King
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Post by: spywolf on July 04, 2013, 01:47:02 PM
I bet...

ah not fun
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on July 05, 2013, 01:24:09 PM
Wordmaker sorry to hear that happened! I'm glad you got it taken care of.  :-\

Deposed King you are a writing BEAST lol. If only I could achieve the word count you do! Awesome!  8)

Spywolf don't ever worry about how much you write. What's important is that you just stick to it! Writing 100-200 words a day is better than no words at all!  ;D

As for me I'm about halfway through chapter 2 of my second book. I can't recall how many words I have at the present time.  :o

I also wanted to let everyone know that I'm running a free promotion on my first book, Energize! Today and tomorrow you can buy it at no cost! Just go to Amazon.com and search "Energize" in the Kindle store! Have a great day everyone!  :)
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 05, 2013, 01:32:41 PM
Thanks, man. Now I get to move on to the heroes' recovery from the Darkest Hour section.
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 05, 2013, 01:53:37 PM
Its all in a day's work, DP!


157k - Falon Half Blood (although speaking of today I have been slacking it up pretty hard core and too busy reading other people's books instead of my own like i should have)



The Deposed King
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Post by: gatordave96 on July 05, 2013, 07:19:59 PM
Made it to 8k in my second book, "Tyrant Without Equal."  And I wrote some scene/sequel outlines.  It is slow work getting started on the sequel.

Anyone else have those problems starting a sequel?  Or did it start flowing off the page from Day One?
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 05, 2013, 07:52:51 PM
I always struggle with beginnings. Starting my first book was hard. Starting the second was so much harder!
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 06, 2013, 03:51:55 AM
Made it to 8k in my second book, "Tyrant Without Equal."  And I wrote some scene/sequel outlines.  It is slow work getting started on the sequel.

Anyone else have those problems starting a sequel?  Or did it start flowing off the page from Day One?


I've found that the worst thing you can do when you stop writing for a night, is to put up your winner hands, declare the chapter is finished and go to bed.  Don't just leave a new chapter header up there for tomorrow.  Instead write at least two paragraphs of the opening for that chapter.  That way when you wake up in the morning you aren't left scratching your head and going huh.  Will I ruin things if I start this way, or where in the heck do we go from here!

Its the same thing with a new book.  Try to write at least a chapter, maybe two of the sequel immeiately after the end of your book.  Throw it in as a sneak peak for book 2 in the back of book one,  or book four for the end of three etc.  You might still feel that little bit of blah feeling when taking up the new project but that whole I need 'research' before figuring out where to pick up next angle is totally blown out of the water.  There is your new beginning now you just need to follow your plot (written down or mental) and naturally proceed from that.

Plus even if you screwed up the new beginning you can always delete it with that new and better idea burning a hole in your brain!


The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 06, 2013, 10:26:17 AM
158k - Falon



The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 07, 2013, 09:27:08 AM
161k - Falon

162k - Falon

163k - Falon

164k - Falon Half Blood

165k - Falon

166k - Falon Half Blood

167k - Falon

169k - Faalon Half Blood (an 11k day)

The first draft of this novel is officially completed.

hooray!



The Deposed King
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Post by: gatordave96 on July 08, 2013, 04:19:17 PM

I've found that the worst thing you can do when you stop writing for a night, is to put up your winner hands, declare the chapter is finished and go to bed.  Don't just leave a new chapter header up there for tomorrow.  Instead write at least two paragraphs of the opening for that chapter.  That way when you wake up in the morning you aren't left scratching your head and going huh.  Will I ruin things if I start this way, or where in the heck do we go from here!

Its the same thing with a new book.  Try to write at least a chapter, maybe two of the sequel immeiately after the end of your book.  Throw it in as a sneak peak for book 2 in the back of book one,  or book four for the end of three etc.  You might still feel that little bit of blah feeling when taking up the new project but that whole I need 'research' before figuring out where to pick up next angle is totally blown out of the water.  There is your new beginning now you just need to follow your plot (written down or mental) and naturally proceed from that.

Plus even if you screwed up the new beginning you can always delete it with that new and better idea burning a hole in your brain!


The Deposed King

That's good advice.  Now, following through on it . . . that's another story.  And congrats on finishing the first draft of Falon Half Blood.  Did you rush right out and draft the first scene of the sequel afterwards?
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Post by: Ren on July 08, 2013, 05:50:16 PM
Finally back to work on Chapter 19...hopefully I can continue writing...schedule changes at work threw me off for too damn long...8P
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 09, 2013, 04:45:18 AM
That's good advice.  Now, following through on it . . . that's another story.  And congrats on finishing the first draft of Falon Half Blood.  Did you rush right out and draft the first scene of the sequel afterwards?

I was bad.  Up until 0445 am writing and then raised my winner hands and went to sleep.  However its clear my ending needs lots of work.  So I'll have to write a sneak peak chapter of book 2 to clear every thing up.



The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 11, 2013, 03:58:26 AM
<Deity> its not the going forward that's the worst, this rewriting is the stuff that kills.  Early consensus seems to be that the ending of Falon left much to be desired so its revamp the last two chapters and write another one.

Which I can do! (although I'd much prefer to be doing a perfect immitation of Enigo Montoya ala princess bride when he says 'which I have' even if he was saying 'I can do') anyway the sickness that felt almost gone yesterday is back again today.  But we will persevere!

Oh and if you're interested the opening Book in my Spineward Sectors Series as well as the opening Novella (either of which should be good entry ways into my series  :P ) are scheduled to be up for free on amazon.  If you're interested come take a look at my blog for times or else surf the amazon!


have a blast guys,


The Deposed King



The Deposed King
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Post by: gatordave96 on July 12, 2013, 01:55:20 AM
Up to 16k in my second book, "Tyrant Without Equal."  And I ended the night by writing a paragraph in a new scene.  We will see how this works.

Many thanks, Your Highness. 
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 12, 2013, 03:49:55 AM
Best of luck gatordave.  Let us know how it works!



The Deposed King
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on July 12, 2013, 12:56:24 PM
Work on chapter 3 of my second book has begun! It definitely is harder to start the second book IMO, but now the words are flowing much easier. Gotta have it ready for a November release!
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Post by: Ren on July 12, 2013, 03:26:31 PM
Chapter 19 Finally Completed.
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 13, 2013, 08:14:12 AM
Back at it after a bit of a hiatus. 79,279 words.
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 14, 2013, 09:13:48 AM
80,712 words. Book 3 has passed Silent Oath in length.
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 15, 2013, 01:09:12 PM
Up to 82,381 words. Aiming to finish the book this week.
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 16, 2013, 02:59:25 AM
Up to 82,381 words. Aiming to finish the book this week.

Way to go Wordmaker.  Sounds like you're about ready to kick this thing in the head!  Me I've been in a little bit of a post book slump.  Even though I still really need to take another run at the ending.

Anyway keep going strong, you can do it!



The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 16, 2013, 06:01:26 AM
Thanks! I have a project in mind that I'd like to self-publish, so I want to get to work on it after the current book is done and sent to my publisher. I may give myself a bit of a break first, but I get really antsy if I'm not writing something.

One chapter away from a training montage in preparation for the final battle! ;)

I hate slumps. Hopefully you'll get through yours soon.
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 16, 2013, 07:20:21 AM
Thanks! I have a project in mind that I'd like to self-publish, so I want to get to work on it after the current book is done and sent to my publisher. I may give myself a bit of a break first, but I get really antsy if I'm not writing something.

One chapter away from a training montage in preparation for the final battle! ;)

I hate slumps. Hopefully you'll get through yours soon.

When you get there let me know.  At the very least I can give some tips on the amazon system.  And right now we've got a good artist.

Did your publisher not pick you up for anymore books?  Or is this just a project that's been burning a hole in the back of your mind?



The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 16, 2013, 07:24:09 AM
I go from contract to contract. The only thing I'm tied to them for is that they get first refusal on any sequels or spin-offs from Locked Within, but I still have to submit a query each time.

I've wanted to branch out and add some self-published titles to my back catalog anyway, and with this new project I may need more control over physical design and artwork.
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 16, 2013, 01:07:52 PM
Phew! Up to 84,529 words.
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Post by: slrogers on July 16, 2013, 03:11:56 PM
I go from contract to contract. The only thing I'm tied to them for is that they get first refusal on any sequels or spin-offs from Locked Within, but I still have to submit a query each time.

So for each sequel you have to send a query? Is that mostly just a formality, or is just the way some contracts are?
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 16, 2013, 03:22:34 PM
It's just the way some contracts are. Particularly because I'm a new author, a small publisher can't commit to a contract for more than one book at a time because of the financial risk.

That said, my publisher is really decent and reserved a slot in this year's lineup for Silent Oath, and they're looking forward to seeing the third book.
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Post by: slrogers on July 16, 2013, 03:35:33 PM
It's just the way some contracts are. Particularly because I'm a new author, a small publisher can't commit to a contract for more than one book at a time because of the financial risk.

That said, my publisher is really decent and reserved a slot in this year's lineup for Silent Oath, and they're looking forward to seeing the third book.

That awesome. Just to have a contract is great, and it sounds like you're moving up the food chain. What will you need when you want to negociate something bigger? Is it just sales numbers?
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Post by: slrogers on July 16, 2013, 03:39:01 PM
When you get there let me know.  At the very least I can give some tips on the amazon system.  And right now we've got a good artist.

The Deposed King

I also wanted to compliment you. I saw the new covers for your books. They look great!
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 16, 2013, 03:42:52 PM
Hard to say. My publisher is still quite new, they've only been in business since 2007. I would imagine, practically speaking, if I wanted something more than my current arrangement, I would either need to start self-publishing, which I plan to do as well as keep up with traditional publishing, or get myself an agent.
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Post by: slrogers on July 16, 2013, 04:03:11 PM
Hard to say. My publisher is still quite new, they've only been in business since 2007. I would imagine, practically speaking, if I wanted something more than my current arrangement, I would either need to start self-publishing, which I plan to do as well as keep up with traditional publishing, or get myself an agent.

So I imagine it wouldn't be all that hard for you to get an agent if you wanted one.
With self-publishing, I've heard that it can make it harder to get traditionally published. I can't imagine the same being true for you. Do you know if people still run that risk if they are already traditionally published? Or even how much truth there is to it in general?
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 16, 2013, 04:20:05 PM
It's a myth. The only thing you're less likely to do when you self-publish is get the thing you've self-published taken up by a publisher. In fact, self-publishing a successful collection of titles can potentially help you if you decide to seek out an agent or a publisher later, because you can point to your books in your query letter and show that you can put out consistent quality material.
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 16, 2013, 04:53:41 PM
I also wanted to compliment you. I saw the new covers for your books. They look great!

Thanks I think they're great also!  The brother took the lead on these and they've really turned out nice.


The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 16, 2013, 07:01:13 PM
Slipped in some extra writing to bring me to 85,992 words.
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 17, 2013, 01:58:15 AM
Slipped in some extra writing to bring me to 85,992 words.

Finished revamping the 2nd to the last chapter and am now half way through the Epilogue.  Added about 1.5k of new content as of last night around midnight.  Its now morning so reset the clock.  (groan)

But we can do it!



The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 17, 2013, 08:10:46 AM
I get teared-up writing some of these scenes. 87,408 words, and moving to the last few chapters before the final battle begins.
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 17, 2013, 09:16:02 AM
I get teared-up writing some of these scenes. 87,408 words, and moving to the last few chapters before the final battle begins.

I don't think that's ever happened to me.  The only tears can remember shedding have been when I'm up past midnight writing and the fan is blowing in my face.  Have to adjust it sometimes or I get terrible dry eyes.



The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 17, 2013, 09:20:03 AM
Haha. No, I get teary quite a lot, even when I'm just thinking about emotional scenes.
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on July 17, 2013, 02:19:23 PM
I normally don't get teary eyed while I'm writing certain scenes, but I did get teary eyed one day when I was brainstorming a coming of age story focusing on a father and son relationship. The tears solidified that the idea was definitely a keeper!
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 17, 2013, 03:24:50 PM
Well so far just about 6k of new words written today as well as finished editing the epilogue chapter.  all on revamping the Falon ending but its productive writing!




The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 18, 2013, 12:42:15 PM
Up to 88,966 words, now!
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 18, 2013, 12:50:37 PM
I took a flier today.  Yesterday I topped out at 9.5k though so I don't feel too bad about it.



The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 19, 2013, 01:12:35 PM
90,288 words. Looking forward to a writing binge tomorrow, which should see me finishing the book.
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 19, 2013, 03:04:10 PM
6k - Falon 2 =  up to 14k total

I was supposed to work on Admiral's Revenge today but by about 3pm with no work done I abandoned it in favor of an idea for another couple chapters on Falon Book 2.

Will try again tomorrow for jump starting the Revenge.



the Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 20, 2013, 01:15:26 PM
This is it. A day-long writing binge to get this book finished.

I'm off to storm the castle.
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 20, 2013, 02:02:31 PM
This is it. A day-long writing binge to get this book finished.

I'm off to storm the castle.

Sally forth and Tally Ho!!  You can do it Wordmaker, undermine those walls and bring ou the trebuchets.







The Deposed King
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Post by: Paynesgrey on July 21, 2013, 01:36:27 AM
Broke 100K today on the WiP.  This year, I've written about 140K total between the WiP and two completed novellas.
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on July 21, 2013, 03:34:04 AM
Finally got my brain into gear on TISBWO prequel yesterday, which I have been trying to do for way too damned long.  Then there was a power cut so I could not do anything about it other than Mull Furiously, but today I made a through pass on 30,000 words of what will probably end up about 100kwords long.
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on July 22, 2013, 02:29:39 AM
Finally got my brain into gear on TISBWO prequel yesterday, which I have been tyring to do for way too damned long.  Then there was a power cut so I could not do anything about it other than Mull Furiously, but today I made a through pass on 30,000 words of what will probably end up about 100kwords long.

And now I have finished that pass. 102,500 words.  a handful of small things noted, some of which need a bit of research which I am doing on my trusty Internet while eating dinner; I may well do those tomorrow.

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Post by: The Deposed King on July 22, 2013, 01:43:21 PM
1.5k = 8.5k total on Admiral's Revenge



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Post by: The Deposed King on July 23, 2013, 10:37:31 AM
10k - Admiral's Revenge

11k - Admiral's Revenge

12k - Admiral's Revenge



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Post by: Wordmaker on July 23, 2013, 07:20:06 PM
107,394 words.

The End.
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Post by: Aminar on July 23, 2013, 09:20:23 PM
Within 6k of finishing YA Sci-Fi novel.  Was 12k away last Friday, and I has more writing juice today if my neck tension stops messing with my left eye...(I'm pretty sure that's a bad thing to have happen...)
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 24, 2013, 02:53:57 AM
107,394 words.

The End.

Way to go!  That's a record book length for you isn't it?  Congradulations on finishing the book!



The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on July 24, 2013, 03:12:14 AM
Remaining small things on that pass done; it's coming out about 104kwords.  And that I hope will finally be that (short of a publishing professional requesting changes, of course.)
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 24, 2013, 05:31:40 AM
Thanks!

And yes, this is the longest thing I've ever written. About twice as long as my first book. It'll probably come down a bit in editing, though.

That's my Locked Within trilogy done. Aside from edits or the odd short story I have in mine, the next thing I write will be completely different.
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 24, 2013, 05:45:55 AM
Well way to go Wordmaker.  May all your endeavors be fruitful.



The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 25, 2013, 01:58:14 PM
14k - Admiral's Revenge



The Deposed King
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Post by: Aminar on July 25, 2013, 11:49:15 PM
80,296 words.  And done(pending edits, final spell check, etc.  But that can wait.)  Project Gateborn is completed.
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 26, 2013, 05:38:54 AM
Congratulations!
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on July 27, 2013, 03:45:27 AM
1200 words on TIWTBWO #3 tonight, and that chapter is falling together, I am just not sure that after a week like this I can keep my eyes open long enough to do any more useful work on it; maybe during the day tomorrow.
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on July 28, 2013, 01:41:34 PM
1200 words on TIWTBWO #3 tonight, and that chapter is falling together, I am just not sure that after a week like this I can keep my eyes open long enough to do any more useful work on it; maybe during the day tomorrow.

Chapter done; 3900 words, which takes this book over 50k.
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Post by: gatordave96 on July 29, 2013, 03:30:43 AM
No word counts or pages written to brag about, just to vent about the tedium of editing my first book.

I hate editing.  I hate even more finding the stupid mistakes . . . missing words, duplicate words, punctuation, spelling errors. 

Boring, boring, boring.
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Post by: The Deposed King on July 29, 2013, 03:57:39 AM
21k - Admiral's Revenge (7k over the weekend)

Also went through an editing pass on the Falon novella and novel, fixed the ending and wove in a few more threads!  Couple thousand more words on that.



The Deposed King
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on July 29, 2013, 02:18:16 PM
The wife and kids were out of town this weekend for a camping trip with her parents, so I got to stay home and punch out a few chapters of my second book. It was tough to start but I think I hit a good rhythm now.

On another note - I discovered a book coming out next spring sounds an awful lot like my next project. It's dystopian and mine is epic fantasy, but there were enough similarities that it made me look twice. It kind of sucks, but then again, the book isn't out yet, so I have no idea how similar the two would be. At least by self-publishing, I can still write mine and get it out there.
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Post by: Wordmaker on July 29, 2013, 02:27:40 PM
I wouldn't worry too much about writing something that's similar to another book. It happens. There are a finite number of plotlines. What matters is how you tell the story.
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 01, 2013, 08:51:10 AM
22k - Admiral's Revenge

23k - Admiral's Revenge


The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 02, 2013, 09:25:48 AM
24k - Admiral's Revenge

25k - Admiral's Revenge



The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on August 03, 2013, 04:16:33 AM
tightened newish first two chapters of #1 and most recent chapter of #3, then got distracted into reading #2 all the way through again.
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 04, 2013, 08:28:41 AM
26k - Admiral's Revenge

27k - Admiral's Revenge

28k - Admiral's Revenge





The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 06, 2013, 07:25:38 AM
Another 1k or there abouts on an epilogue for the Falon prequel.  My brother wrote it but I revised and extended another k on top of it.  Then he also came up with another pair of product descriptions.  Normally I help fix'er up but this time they came out just about perfect.  One logic flaw on the second one.  And a couple lines I thought could be added to the first.

Fingers crossed:  In a couple hours hopefully we'll have the prequel and book one up for amazon review!



The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 07, 2013, 03:52:17 AM
http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00ECY7CXI

The Boar Knife is live!




The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on August 07, 2013, 06:06:56 AM
Last night I sent the query for my third book off to my publisher.

Now to wait and see what they say...
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 07, 2013, 10:28:26 AM
29k - Admiral's Revenge

The Boar Knife and The Blooding are both out and my first 5 star review is already up on The Boar Knife!  Hopefully they like the novel just as well.

30k - Admiral's Revenge

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A big bug battle scene and I guess I just got tired of podunking around with low or no work output.  A reasonable day.



The Deposed King
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on August 09, 2013, 05:19:10 PM
So, after some thought, I've decided to shop out my first book to agents. I realize  since I've already self-published it that there's a better chance of being rejected, but I figure why not? You only live once right? If the book is rejected then it stays as is and I self-publish the next book.
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 10, 2013, 04:53:27 AM
So, after some thought, I've decided to shop out my first book to agents. I realize  since I've already self-published it that there's a better chance of being rejected, but I figure why not? You only live once right? If the book is rejected then it stays as is and I self-publish the next book.

I know the guy who wrote terms of enlistment got picked up by a publisher.  That's why we have to wait a year for the new sequel.



The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 10, 2013, 05:08:32 PM
35k - Admiral's Revenge

36k - Admiral's Revenge




The Deposed King
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Post by: Lanodantheon on August 10, 2013, 10:49:27 PM
Being unemployed, feeling an itch, finding a local writing group and the online Brandon Sanderson lectures website http://www.writeaboutdragons.com/ (http://www.writeaboutdragons.com/) , I took it upon myself to start writing an Epic Fantasy Caper of my own devising.



7931 Words and counting.


Checking a few boxes off the "Ideas I've always wanted to use" list.
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 11, 2013, 04:06:22 AM
The Boar Knife is free today the 10th and every 10th through october!  Get it while you can.



The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 11, 2013, 09:11:09 AM
37k - Admiral's Revenge

38k - Admiral's Revenge




The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on August 12, 2013, 02:38:28 AM
Have thrashed out pretty much all of what needs doing with TISBWO enough to start into it in a nice logical ordered fashion next time I sit down to write.
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Post by: Wordmaker on August 13, 2013, 01:15:26 PM
3,248 words on my new WIP, Lady Raven!
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 14, 2013, 07:26:47 AM
3,248 words on my new WIP, Lady Raven!

Way to go Wordmaker!  I did 5k myself today.


43k - Admiral's Revenge

44k - Admiral's Revenge

45k - Admiral's Revenge


the Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on August 14, 2013, 01:10:53 PM
Not quite as long a chapter today. Up to 4,372 words on Lady Raven.
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 14, 2013, 02:45:06 PM
What's Lady Raven about.  Genre and such.



The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on August 14, 2013, 03:28:59 PM
It's a young adult steampunk fantasy, the first in a new series I plan to self-publish.

The heroine, Cora, and her mother lose their status in society when her father dies of an illness. To save her mother after she is arrested, Cora becomes an outlaw, and discovers that piracy and the outlaw life runs in her family. She embarks on a quest to fight back against the corrupt patriarchy that rules the Empire, assembling a crew of fellow outlaws and resistance fighters.
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 15, 2013, 07:38:15 AM
It's a young adult steampunk fantasy, the first in a new series I plan to self-publish.

The heroine, Cora, and her mother lose their status in society when her father dies of an illness. To save her mother after she is arrested, Cora becomes an outlaw, and discovers that piracy and the outlaw life runs in her family. She embarks on a quest to fight back against the corrupt patriarchy that rules the Empire, assembling a crew of fellow outlaws and resistance fighters.

Keep after it Wordmaker!  It'll be interesting to see how it does for you.

50k - Admiral's Revenge (5k)

51k - Admiral's Revenge

52k - Admiral's Revenge

53k - Admiral's Revenge



The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 16, 2013, 07:29:21 AM
56k - Admiral's Revenge (3k)

58k - Admiral's Revenge




The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on August 16, 2013, 01:03:22 PM
5,888 words on Lady Raven now.
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on August 17, 2013, 04:31:53 PM
Very constructive day yesterday, 1500 words new fiction and about twice that much in organising notes and world stuff, and I think a couple of things in there might maybe be new ideas rather than parts of this one thing.  Shame it was the last summer half-day Friday for this year.
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 18, 2013, 05:55:01 AM
60k - Admiral's Revenge



the Deposed King
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Post by: Paynesgrey on August 18, 2013, 10:03:59 PM
Cleaning up a short before sending it back to the subbing pits tomorrow, and finished up the 1st draft of a 5K short.  Going back to the WiP this week while I let the short simmer for revision.
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 19, 2013, 12:26:54 PM
Cleaning up a short before sending it back to the subbing pits tomorrow, and finished up the 1st draft of a 5K short.  Going back to the WiP this week while I let the short simmer for revision.

Keep after it PG.


66k - Admiral's Revenge



The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on August 19, 2013, 01:08:23 PM
Good luck, Paynesgrey!

Up to 7,854 words on Lady Raven.
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 20, 2013, 08:34:23 AM
71k - Admiral's Revenge (5k a day to keep the Gremlin's away!)




The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on August 21, 2013, 01:11:02 PM
9,649 words. Almost to the big 10k mark on Lady Raven!
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 22, 2013, 07:46:42 AM
76k - Admiral's Revenge (5k!)

Took a lazy day yesterday, bad The Deposed King, bad-bad!  Anyway back on task today.  I've got to stay focused for my 1st week of september self imposed 1st draft deadline.

Go Lady Raven, kick them in the head!  Remember a bustle is made of whale bone, I'm sure those bones could make a very good club or if ground down to point and edge a very fine improve dagger!  Also a great place for a lady to hide her lock picks, in the hollowed out bones of her bustle!

Who said beauty and battle where incompatible, be the envy of all those tomboys everywhere, watch as they grind their teeth in a most unladylike frustrated rage as they are shown up and smile serenely as all the blushing violets swoon to the floor.

Learn all this and more at Lady Winter's Society for Dazaelling Debutants.  Here you will learn how to snub your rivals, land your beau, and save your country from foreign blackguards and spies all in the time it takes you to run your errends.  You'll even be back home in time to be fashionably late for tea!  And whoever said saving the day was decidedly unladylike obviously never attended Lady Winter's Society for Dazzeling Debutants.  Here we set the trends in both fashion and fashionable combat pettycoats!

Lady Winter's Motto: We can't let the gentlemen have all the fun, can we ladies!  Now arch your backs as I instructed you earlier.

77k - Admiral's Revenge

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The Deposed King

p.s.

Need to poison someone?  Or worried you or your Beau is the one being poisoned?  For a small extra fee and an extra two hours tuesday and thursday evenings, Lady Winter is holding a special Apothacary class, where you can learn about all the poisons, and their antidotes!  For those with concerned parents, worry not, a coach ride home along with suitable escort home is included.
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Post by: Wordmaker on August 22, 2013, 08:11:52 AM
Ha! Love it  :D

The book's going well. I've got the plot worked out, as well as how things like magic and technology work. I may go for broke and make it a 7-book series. I know broadly how my protagonist's personal arc is going to develop over that amount of books.
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Post by: Wordmaker on August 22, 2013, 01:49:43 PM
And so the adventure begins in earnest! 11,279 words on Lady Raven.
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 25, 2013, 07:58:11 AM
80k - Admiral's Revenge


and like a slug he rises again!




The deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on August 25, 2013, 08:36:48 AM
14,115 words on Lady Raven
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Post by: Wordmaker on August 27, 2013, 01:02:34 PM
16,122 words on Lady Raven, and I'm gearing up for the start of some intensive promotion for the release of Silent Oath (http://paulanthonyshortt.blogspot.ie/2013/08/final-preparations.html).
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 28, 2013, 11:56:13 AM
85k - Admiral's Revenge (5k)



The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 29, 2013, 03:30:04 AM
I just had a computer crash and took my laptop in for repair.  My yahoo back up wasn't completing its virus scan so I couldn't download it from there.  And I hadn't backed up to my flash drives in a while.  Thank goodness they were able to get directly into my sata hard drive and get my 85k file of Admiral's Revenge.  so even thought it doesn't count as forward progress, making sure you have weeks of work in hand is lots better than a big fat negative number!



The Deposed King
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Post by: Paynesgrey on August 30, 2013, 09:44:42 PM
Glad you were able to salvage your work!  Dropbox + Scrivener is your friend.  Scrivener backs up every 5 seconds and you can set it to save straight to Dropbox.  Had a power outage a week or so ago that would have cost me a couple thousand words and a heap of revisions/corrections, but all I had to do was open the archived file in dropbox. 
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Post by: The Deposed King on August 31, 2013, 08:16:29 AM
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Post by: moon on September 01, 2013, 05:31:19 PM
working on chapter six
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Post by: The Deposed King on September 02, 2013, 05:55:59 AM
working on chapter six


Go Moon!  Sounds like you're getting there!




The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on September 02, 2013, 03:17:04 PM
So I'm up to 19,133 words on Lady Raven.
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Post by: The Deposed King on September 03, 2013, 11:04:53 AM
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The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on September 04, 2013, 01:10:12 PM
20,643 words. I'm one-third to my target on Lady Raven, though I've a feeling it'll go over.
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on September 04, 2013, 02:25:50 PM
25,000+ for my second novel, Antagonize. A couple chapters in the beginning need some re-writes but I'm pushing forward for now!
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Post by: The Deposed King on September 05, 2013, 06:55:28 AM
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Sounds like you guys are on a roll.  Go-go-go!!!





The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on September 07, 2013, 05:03:40 PM
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The Deposed King
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Post by: moon on September 08, 2013, 04:29:43 PM
I am nearly at 7,000...
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Post by: The Deposed King on September 08, 2013, 04:35:47 PM
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keep after it moon!  You can do it.

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Post by: Wordmaker on September 08, 2013, 05:20:03 PM
22,945 words on Lady Raven now.
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Post by: trboturtle on September 08, 2013, 09:04:30 PM
Haven't been around much lately.....

Got three Battlecorps stories into the Fact-checkers to look at -- got the notes back for one and still await on two. Startted writing a four part novella for BattleCorps that still needs a lot of work, and have a few other Battelcorps stories in the fire....

As for my original stuff, free writing wasn't cutting it -- My stories tend to wander. SO I've sat down and gone into detailed plotting of my first original work. While I have most of the book written, I needed to sit down and streamline the plot and keep it focused. It's the start of a series, so a lot of groundwork needs to be laid down first. I have the first thirteen chapters plotted and started working on Chapter fourteen. I've already changed the plot a bit, and once I finish the story, I'll go back and make sure the plot holds together, making sure the storylines have some resolution, and the like. Not easy, but my urge to actually write is sated at this time by by BattleCorps writing. Besides, this plotting feels better and I think will make a stronger story....

That's it for now....

Craig
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Post by: The Deposed King on September 09, 2013, 07:49:58 AM
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good job guys, keep up the writing!  tubo-turtle I hope your battle-tech stories do great!



The Deposed King
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Post by: LizW65 on September 09, 2013, 03:05:38 PM
Hit the 80K mark on Body For Hire, the sequel to Murder Ballad, last night. Also busy plotting out my NaNoWriMo project, which will be my first venture into Urban Fantasy.
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Post by: The Deposed King on September 11, 2013, 08:32:06 AM
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Post by: Wordmaker on September 11, 2013, 01:19:33 PM
Today's writing brings me up to 24,770 words on Lady Raven.
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Post by: Ren on September 11, 2013, 02:20:07 PM
After months of no writing I was finally able to complete chapter 20!
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Post by: Wordmaker on September 11, 2013, 02:31:46 PM
Awesome! Stick with it.
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Post by: Ren on September 11, 2013, 05:05:35 PM
Current work schedule has put a damper on Creativity...I don't go in until noon and its a CHORE to write in the morning...8P
Plus I've been doing some thinking and once I'm done with the main draft I'l be whacking a bunch of extra characters that have been sort of main-ish, but too distracting...too many plot-lines...need to throttle back and save some material for later books.
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Post by: Wordmaker on September 11, 2013, 06:44:27 PM
I've found I'm most productive when I force myself into habitual behaviour with my writing. Picking the same time every day to work, at least Monday to Friday, is a great help, and encourages me to find extra time at the weekend.
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Post by: Ren on September 11, 2013, 07:51:59 PM
I used to write when I got off of work, a day full of frustration is great inspiration for writing...I like to write angry...8)
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Post by: Paynesgrey on September 13, 2013, 12:49:30 AM
Editing... sooo much... editing.  Red pen... fumes... too... strong...
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Post by: The Deposed King on September 13, 2013, 07:08:04 AM
Editing... sooo much... editing.  Red pen... fumes... too... strong...

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I am really blessed in that my brother does the lion's share of the editing.  So much in fact I can pretty much just sit back and come on in when he stumbles across something that he needs my input on.  We go over any comments from the betas and I pull out the big veto pen at need but pretty much, most of the grunt work with grammar or flow, he just takes care of.  I mean the first few books we were side by side but after that he not only didn't really need my help but I was just slowing him down.  Its gotten more to the point where he says, I need a new scene here, you missed something or we need to show and not just tell.

Best of Luck with your novels PG!

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The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on September 13, 2013, 01:06:32 PM
26,413 words on Lady Raven.
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on September 13, 2013, 02:43:10 PM
Editing... sooo much... editing.  Red pen... fumes... too... strong...

This gives me Wolverine-like images of you popping a set of pens out of the back of your hand.

("We need sushi. Lots of sushi."
"I'm the.. uh... one... "
"Stow it, flyboy. You picked up the blue pencil.  And there's one 'n' in 'Zion'.")
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Post by: The Deposed King on September 14, 2013, 04:13:10 AM
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The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on September 14, 2013, 03:47:28 PM
Well, last night's attempt to write turned into a through pass on a backburnered project that's almost certainly entirely moribund. *sigh* hard to focus and settle in for a major edit when you are conrunning in a fortnight and not going to have any time to do more than a small fraction of it between now and then in the best case.
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Post by: Paynesgrey on September 14, 2013, 10:52:57 PM
This gives me Wolverine-like images of you popping a set of pens out of the back of your hand.

("We need sushi. Lots of sushi."
"I'm the.. uh... one... "
"Stow it, flyboy. You picked up the blue pencil.  And there's one 'n' in 'Zion'.")

Heh.  Good one!
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on September 15, 2013, 03:03:31 AM
Heh.  Good one!

The bit in brackets was not originally mine; that was incidental John M. Ford from a Making Light thread a few years back.
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Post by: KevinEvans on September 15, 2013, 07:13:05 AM
News,

Our novella "Fire on the Rio Grande" is scheduled for "Ring of Fire IV" from Baen in 2014.

History, Idea pitched in 2011 at DragonCon, story turned in March 2013, approved last week.

This publishing thing grinds along slowly.....

Regards,
Kevin
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Post by: Wordmaker on September 15, 2013, 07:59:02 AM
That's awesome!

But yeah, publishing takes time. I'm already planning books that won't come out until 2015. Even my self-publishing project is going to take almost a year to get the first book out.
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Post by: LizW65 on September 15, 2013, 11:20:52 PM
Got another 2000 words on The Sequel this afternoon, fixed some awkward bits.
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Post by: The Deposed King on September 16, 2013, 10:01:47 AM
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Post by: The Deposed King on September 17, 2013, 09:21:04 AM
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The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on September 17, 2013, 09:33:37 AM
My regular writing is on hold for a few weeks since a friend hooked me up with a freelance writing gig that'll pay for my edits and cover design for at least two Lady Raven books.
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Post by: The Deposed King on September 19, 2013, 11:10:56 AM
My regular writing is on hold for a few weeks since a friend hooked me up with a freelance writing gig that'll pay for my edits and cover design for at least two Lady Raven books.

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Best of luck with that project.



The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on September 19, 2013, 05:50:23 PM
It would be easier to focus on the thing I'm supposed to be writing if I had not had a realisation of a different way to do the opening to the seventh volume of the thing I want to be working at, which if it still makes sense in a few days when the last traces of this fluey fever are gone, I may well go with.  (Eventually. Still only about a quarter of the way into volume 3, and gaah has this not been a good year for writing new stuff.)
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Post by: The Deposed King on September 20, 2013, 04:27:17 AM
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The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on September 21, 2013, 03:26:40 AM
TISBWO - through pass on prologue and first two chapters, which is less than I had been hoping because I also found one more load of notes I hadn't integrated into my master What To Do Where file and had to integrate it.

I think I am finally up to working on this blessed thing again, which is a great relief, as I have set myself a deadline of the end of the year for it.  Nothing will happen next weekend because conrunning, but maybe the weekend after I will be better able to focus.
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Post by: The Deposed King on September 22, 2013, 04:00:36 AM
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Get those novels finished up and published Neuro!

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The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on September 23, 2013, 10:05:51 AM
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The Deposed King
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Post by: Ren on September 23, 2013, 03:12:01 PM
Decided to back-burner my current writing project. Hate to do it with nearly 500 pages in, but I have little too much anger tied too it right now to work on it with a clear head...that and I'm not sure how its going to end anyway so need some time to sort it out.
Instead going back to writing in my Fantasy Setting with a new cast, new location and with a very dark twist...Life after Undeath!
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Post by: The Deposed King on September 24, 2013, 04:03:57 AM
Decided to back-burner my current writing project. Hate to do it with nearly 500 pages in, but I have little too much anger tied too it right now to work on it with a clear head...that and I'm not sure how its going to end anyway so need some time to sort it out.
Instead going back to writing in my Fantasy Setting with a new cast, new location and with a very dark twist...Life after Undeath!

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Sometimes a new project can help to keep you from spinning your wheels on an older one.



The Deposed King
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Post by: trboturtle on September 24, 2013, 04:37:51 PM
Close to finishing up Chapter 20 of my novel's outline.

The way I'm doing it is making the story more structured, as I can go back and forth in the outline when an idea comes to me. I am for the most part, "sit and write until it's done" sort of writer. Okay for short stories, but not so good for novels. I've been writing the novel for years, but I tend to think, "Hey, this is great, let's throw it in!" The result is a bloated story, with plot lines running every which way.

But outlining and summerizing the story, chapter by chapter, I can keep track of the plotlines (One main and four "subplots") I can make notes and questions I need to know for each chapter (Things I need to research, such as words in German, or what the state's laws are on a subject.) If I think of a character, or a plot point, I can look at the outline and think, "Where do I place this point/character/clue?"

For example, I realized I needed a new character about chapter 13, so I went back, added him to a couple of earlier chapter in the outline, estabishing his presnece and added him to the story. Now he's part of the story and doesn't feel tacked on at the last minute.

And to give you an idea how complex this outline has become, it's over 40 pages right now, with several more chapters outlined. It'll be a monster, but I think it'll be easier to write once I have the outline done.

Oh, and I've sent three revised stories to the BattleCorps editor, and I'm awaiting my first lead author product for the Battletech line. Hopefully, they'll be out before the end of the year.  ;D

Craig
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Post by: Ren on September 24, 2013, 05:03:00 PM
I've had the same problem Turtle, which is why I have at least 4 incomplete writing projects and just back-burnered the one to start the new project. And I've already finished my first chapter...only seven pages instead of the 24-26-page monster chapters I had been doing...but I wanted to start with smaller chapters with tighter crafting. That and the psychology of being able to write 1-2 chapters a week will hopefully help me keep inspired...I still need to do an outline as I only have a rough idea in my head right now...but I wanted a first chapter to establish tone and part of the set-up. So far its been fun!
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Post by: The Deposed King on September 26, 2013, 01:53:58 AM
Sounds like you guys are trying to keep it real.

Me I'm struggling with the ending of the 5th novel in my Spinewards sectors series.  The main struggle simply seems to be the desire to write.  But I'm hopeful on that front.  I just need to push it over the finish line!

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The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on September 26, 2013, 08:05:42 PM
For example, I realized I needed a new character about chapter 13, so I went back, added him to a couple of earlier chapter in the outline, estabishing his presnece and added him to the story. Now he's part of the story and doesn't feel tacked on at the last minute.

Thing is, something on that scale, I more often than not don't figure out without actually writing Chapter 13 and noticing something is missing and then having to do the backfill.  Doing this with complicated political stuff is hard, particularly when you want your setting to have at least three major political divisions over issues that do not map directly onto any contemporary issue.
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Post by: Ren on September 27, 2013, 05:52:49 PM
Chapters 1 and 2 Completed. Just need a Better Title..."Empire of Darkness" is just to generic...
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Post by: The Deposed King on September 29, 2013, 07:33:29 AM
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We're getting there guys, keep up the good work.

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Post by: The Deposed King on September 30, 2013, 10:44:27 AM
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Post by: The Deposed King on October 01, 2013, 08:13:49 AM
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I'm on the last two chapters!

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The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on October 01, 2013, 06:59:15 PM
3 am Saturday, figured out a new structural skeleton to overlay on book #1 of TIWTBWO.

Getting up to apply it then would not have worked even if i hadn't been up to my eyes in not-technically-a-convention  this weekend.  Feh.
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Post by: The Deposed King on October 05, 2013, 09:32:00 AM
3 am Saturday, figured out a new structural skeleton to overlay on book #1 of TIWTBWO.

Getting up to apply it then would not have worked even if i hadn't been up to my eyes in not-technically-a-convention  this weekend.  Feh.

It sounds like you're getting close.  But you've been close for a while.  Have you considered after this latest round of revisions, starting a new series?


The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on October 07, 2013, 01:13:06 AM
It sounds like you're getting close.  But you've been close for a while.  Have you considered after this latest round of revisions, starting a new series?

After this round of revisions I am going back to the series of which I have written two and a quarter novels and hopefully finishing the trilogy, is the plan; which will be minor tweaks to the first two based on new reader comments and things that have shown up over the past few months and then full steam ahead. (Always subject to the needs of the service actually selling something and having editors want changes with more urgency than that.)

No writing Friday because severe headache, but this afternoon and evening, through reworking of several more chapters of TISBWO.  that is seven chapters done out of 36.
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Post by: Wordmaker on October 07, 2013, 01:16:04 PM
And I'm back to writing! 27,740 words on Lady Raven!
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Post by: trboturtle on October 07, 2013, 04:26:28 PM
Halfway All the way through plotting Chapter 23 and into Chapter 24....I can see the end of the novel a little closer now!  :) ;D

Craig
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Post by: The Deposed King on October 08, 2013, 07:47:55 AM
And I'm back to writing! 27,740 words on Lady Raven!

Way to get back up on the horse Wordmaker!  Go go go!!!




The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on October 09, 2013, 01:19:30 PM
Almost halfway to my word goal on Lady Raven, 29,668!
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Post by: LizW65 on October 10, 2013, 04:30:30 PM
Hit the 90K mark last night on the first draft of the sequel to my murder mystery. Got about 3/4 of a book now...
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Post by: trboturtle on October 10, 2013, 05:35:36 PM
Plotting Chapter 26 of what looks to be a 32 chapter novel....Just a matter of arranging the pieces I have left.... ;D

Craig
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on October 11, 2013, 01:06:49 AM
I think I have the structural skeleton for TIWTBWO #1 fixed.

These are fiercely political books. (In the sense of having complex and involved internal politics, rather than mapping simply or directly onto any real-world political divides.)  I have come up with the matrix of six axes their diplomats use to assess the political position of newly contacted worlds, and I see where in the story an example relevant to each axis of variation fits, so that gives me a structure. (My protagonist, fwiw, comes from the perspective that that model makes for pretty graphics in the reports you have to hand in after making contact but is of little practical use with the immediate details of any given situation.  And I very much intend information about the political axioms and assumptions of the wider setting to come across to the reader in what sorts of variation those six axes don't cover.)
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Post by: Ren on October 11, 2013, 03:44:13 PM
Chapter 3 of Empire of Darkness...I still need a better title...
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on October 12, 2013, 05:18:48 AM
TISBWO; wrestling with one chapter, got much of it done but not all I want to do, it kept having consequences in other places.

TIWTBWO: applied the first bit of the fix mentioned in my last post.
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Post by: Wordmaker on October 15, 2013, 01:15:21 PM
Halfway point reached! 31,581 words on Lady Raven.
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Post by: Wordmaker on October 23, 2013, 01:10:59 PM
Slow going with everything else I have going on right now, but I'm up to 33,408 words on Lady Raven.
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Post by: LizW65 on October 24, 2013, 12:01:06 AM
Hit 95,000 on the Big Sequel last night, and then dumped 1000 that no longer worked.

Anyone doing NaNoWriMo this year?
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Post by: meg_evonne on October 24, 2013, 03:53:02 AM
Hey guys. It's official apparently. My debut YA crime fiction novel will be published by the Poisoned Pencil, which is a new young adult imprint of The Poisoned Pen Press. It's a small press that prints 3-5 thousand copies. There is even an advance. I met the publisher and and an editor from Poisoned Pen Press, along with several of their authors. And yes, I fell in love with the Poisoned Pen Bookstore as a result of getting a couple of Jim's autographed books. So it was a natural fit.

I've been in shock mode after the initial squealing. Friends from SCBWI-IA encouraged me to wait until after the fall conference. My critique with an agent was filled with glowing comments and desire for more pages, but after a great deal of thought, I've signed the papers. I will slowly be notifying several of the conferences and schools of the deal. You guys are my first and greatest teachers, mentors, and guides. Thank you.
 
I can't tell you how excited I will be to search my own name on publishersmarketplace.com. After this, there will be more mountains to climb, a lot of blood, sweat and tears, but it's a time to celebrate.

Take care everyone.
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Post by: Wordmaker on October 24, 2013, 06:17:50 AM
That's fantastic! Good initial print run, and an advance too. You did great.

There's nothing like the feeling of that first book deal. Go celebrate, you deserve it! And let us know when the book is out ;-)
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Post by: The Deposed King on October 24, 2013, 06:58:00 AM
Hey guys. It's official apparently. My debut YA crime fiction novel will be published by the Poisoned Pencil, which is a new young adult imprint of The Poisoned Pen Press. It's a small press that prints 3-5 thousand copies. There is even an advance. I met the publisher and and an editor from Poisoned Pen Press, along with several of their authors. And yes, I fell in love with the Poisoned Pen Bookstore as a result of getting a couple of Jim's autographed books. So it was a natural fit.

I've been in shock mode after the initial squealing. Friends from SCBWI-IA encouraged me to wait until after the fall conference. My critique with an agent was filled with glowing comments and desire for more pages, but after a great deal of thought, I've signed the papers. I will slowly be notifying several of the conferences and schools of the deal. You guys are my first and greatest teachers, mentors, and guides. Thank you.
 
I can't tell you how excited I will be to search my own name on publishersmarketplace.com. After this, there will be more mountains to climb, a lot of blood, sweat and tears, but it's a time to celebrate.

Take care everyone.


Way to go Meg and Congratulations.  I'm pumped for you!  Go knock'em dead sister!




The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on October 28, 2013, 04:14:28 PM
Finally had a whack at the dreaded chapter 7 of TISBWO; hope it will now satisfy.

That makes 9 chapters out of 36 revised; I really have to move a bit faster if I am to get this done by the end of the year, damn it.
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on October 30, 2013, 01:34:26 PM
Hit 95,000 on the Big Sequel last night, and then dumped 1000 that no longer worked.

Anyone doing NaNoWriMo this year?

I decided late last night that I'm going to try NaNoWriMo this year. It'll be my first time! As I've been working on my second book, I realized my goals have really been falling short, and I'm not getting as much done as I used to. I figure what better way to get back in the groove than to take one of my story ideas and try and punch it out in 30 days?!
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Post by: trboturtle on October 31, 2013, 12:12:05 AM
Hit 95,000 on the Big Sequel last night, and then dumped 1000 that no longer worked.

Anyone doing NaNoWriMo this year?
 

I am - just finishing my plotting/scene breakdown document!

Craig
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on November 01, 2013, 04:09:52 AM
Through whack on chapters 8, 9, and most of 10.  That puts me a few paras short of a third of the way through this blasted thing.
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Post by: Wordmaker on November 01, 2013, 02:03:36 PM
35,257 words on Lady Raven!
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on November 04, 2013, 01:16:36 AM
Finished chapter 10 and did a through pass on 11 and 12 today. One more small thing now wants going back to 7, but other than that we are good to move forward.

That's five-twelfths of the whole thing.  Still hoping by the end of the year will work.
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Post by: Wordmaker on November 05, 2013, 02:15:11 PM
Things are moving towards the end of the Second Act in Lady Raven, at 37,206 words.
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Post by: The Deposed King on November 07, 2013, 12:23:45 AM
Hey guys, Admiral's Revenge just went live on amazon a couple hours ago!  This is the 5th novel in my sci-fi series and my 6th full length novel over all.  Throw in a pair of novellas and I honestly have to say that if you told me two years ago that i'd be a working author with 6 novels and two novellas under my belt I'd have laughed in your face.  Wow just wow.  As far as I'm concerned if I can do it, so can anyone.  So can you!


http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00GHQD18O





The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on November 07, 2013, 08:55:18 AM
Rock on, that's fantastic work!
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on November 07, 2013, 01:32:26 PM
Three more chapters, I'm halfway there.
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Post by: The Deposed King on November 10, 2013, 12:30:57 PM
1k - Admiral's Lady: Ashes for Ashes, Blood for Blood

Not the greatest production day ever but at least I'm back on the wagon.



The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on November 11, 2013, 01:59:12 PM
I've reached 39,416 words on Lady Raven.
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Post by: The Deposed King on November 13, 2013, 12:38:24 PM
2k - Admiral's Lady


The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on November 13, 2013, 02:03:48 PM
Feel like I'm making better progress on Lady Raven today. 40,944 words.
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Post by: The Deposed King on November 13, 2013, 11:00:24 PM
Feel like I'm making better progress on Lady Raven today. 40,944 words.

Keep after it Wordmaker, you're over the hump.



The Deposed King
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Post by: meg_evonne on November 15, 2013, 07:21:09 AM
Congrats DK!

Cranking out my 1000 a day, plus rough editing the prior days work. Still, I got out of whack because I'm taking an online class requiring 15 pages a week and crits on everyone else's. And, because I really don't know these guys, the assignment of rough shitty draft 15 pages isn't as shitty as normal. I mean, if you've got classmates reading it and the agent teaching it? You spend more time revising and editing even it's still in crappy shape... It's a 12 week class and at 7 weeks, we've weeded out the less serious writers and are down to a hard core of folks plugging out work. (Or perhaps the serious writers are concentrating on their work and not posting or doing critiques. LOL.)

At this point, we're cranking out fresh pages and we're giving each other lots of leeway for shit...  Challenging, fun, but I miss my sole concentration on my work... Yet, I'm getting great feedback weekly.

Best writing all.

Whoever put me onto Chuck's writing thoughts--Thank you. I read them daily as a kick starter, or perhaps a butt kicker would be more appropriate.
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Post by: The Deposed King on November 15, 2013, 10:34:46 AM
Congrats DK!

Cranking out my 1000 a day, plus rough editing the prior days work. Still, I got out of whack because I'm taking an online class requiring 15 pages a week and crits on everyone else's. And, because I really don't know these guys, the assignment of rough shitty draft 15 pages isn't as shitty as normal. I mean, if you've got classmates reading it and the agent teaching it? You spend more time revising and editing even it's still in crappy shape... It's a 12 week class and at 7 weeks, we've weeded out the less serious writers and are down to a hard core of folks plugging out work. (Or perhaps the serious writers are concentrating on their work and not posting or doing critiques. LOL.)

At this point, we're cranking out fresh pages and we're giving each other lots of leeway for shit...  Challenging, fun, but I miss my sole concentration on my work... Yet, I'm getting great feedback weekly.

Best writing all.

Whoever put me onto Chuck's writing thoughts--Thank you. I read them daily as a kick starter, or perhaps a butt kicker would be more appropriate.


Thanks.  I'm up to a mighty

3k - Admiral's Lady

Its not a lot but it is forward motion.  I hope your writing class helps you get one step closer to achieving your dreams.



The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on November 16, 2013, 11:19:34 PM
Two more chapters today, have just stopped for dinner, and am going back to do some more.
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on November 17, 2013, 04:38:09 AM
Two more chapters today, have just stopped for dinner, and am going back to do some more.

And to that we can add four more chapters, which were five before this pass.  That puts me two-thirds of the way through, and I think almost all that's left of this pass is significantly easier.
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Post by: The Deposed King on November 19, 2013, 08:51:26 AM
Couldn't stay focused on Admiral's Lady today so I popped on over and worked on my Falon Rankin series.

I went from 15k to 17k on The Painting.  Mostly in the form of revised and extended what I've already written but hey new words are new words.



The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on November 19, 2013, 09:02:47 AM
I've considered starting on one of my other series' to give myself ocassional breaks from Lady Raven.

How do you find it, writing multiple books at once?
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Post by: The Deposed King on November 19, 2013, 12:19:37 PM
I've considered starting on one of my other series' to give myself ocassional breaks from Lady Raven.

How do you find it, writing multiple books at once?

I tend to focus in on one book exclusively.  I have found that if you are getting burned on one book and producing low word count, that switching to another book/series with the idea that your word count is suffering in the first series due to lack of inspiration, will often spur me on.  Et I write a bit in the other series and either find out I am really inspired to write in the second series or more likely that my lack of 'inspiration' is not series specific and I need to give myself a kick in the pants.

But I will say that there's only so many books in the same series before you are legitimately burned.  I wrote the Falon books because I needed a break from the Admiral.  So I wrote book 1 and the prequel and then switched back to the Admiral and cranked out book 5.

My main point I guess is that whatever series I'm focusing on I drill down until the book is completed.  Then I either write the next one or fish around for a bit and settle on my next book (in whatever series).  I don't tend to write more than one book simultaneously.


Sorry if I rambled too much.




The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on November 19, 2013, 12:26:51 PM
I gave it a try when I was writing Silent Oath. I worked on another book on the weekends, and ended up not really going anywhere with it.

Once Lady Raven is done, I'll switch to my next urban fantasy series, get the first of that written, then see where I'm at.
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Post by: Wordmaker on November 19, 2013, 02:03:04 PM
42,498 words on Lady Raven.
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Post by: The Deposed King on November 20, 2013, 02:48:58 AM
I gave it a try when I was writing Silent Oath. I worked on another book on the weekends, and ended up not really going anywhere with it.

Once Lady Raven is done, I'll switch to my next urban fantasy series, get the first of that written, then see where I'm at.

My brother stopped about half way through his third book in his first series and switched over to starting a new novel which is about 2/3rds done at this point.  He was feeling uninspired in his main series.

I would say that it doesn't matter how many books you have on going (although I strongly advise not leaving too many hanging as that can lead to not finishing anything!).  You just have to stay mono-focused on 'whatever' it is you're writing.

Like you I can't write a few k on one book and switch to writing a few k on the other.  I need to be immersed in whatever it is I'm doing.

18k - The Painting



The Deposed King
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Post by: meg_evonne on November 21, 2013, 03:31:31 PM
Continue to crank out pages, but discouraged over the quality. Three days ago, I wrote my best and most emotionally filled scene ever--rough draft junk but good. And then bang, the next day the rest wouldn't flow. Yesterday, with a head to desk moment, I realized that I wasn't done with the last scene and couldn't leave it yet. I backed up and came at the transition again and now patching in the stuff I wrote yesterday. My typical 1000 a day scrapped to about 500 each day... Hoping to get back in the flow tomorrow and make up the word count this weekend.

The rise and fall of emotions as I write never fails to amaze me. OTOH, in the midst of first draft, I also have no true judgement call on the quality--just the raw emotional impact. Keep writing. Keep writing. Keep writing.
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Post by: The Deposed King on November 22, 2013, 02:22:28 AM
4k - Admiral's Lady

5k - Admiral's Lady



the Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on November 22, 2013, 02:07:00 PM
44,046 words on Lady Raven
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Post by: The Deposed King on November 23, 2013, 02:44:13 PM
44,046 words on Lady Raven



6k Admiral's Lady





The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on November 23, 2013, 03:30:11 PM
Through pass on five more chapters.

One more evening like this will get me to the end, there are a couple of specific things I want to give a final pass on, and then that is that.
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Post by: Sean 'Bjørn' Blackstone on November 23, 2013, 08:51:02 PM
I've finally sat down and started working out a plot line, but I think I've put myself in over my head with my expectations. Too many great ideas and no good way to phrase them. Sigh.
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Post by: The Deposed King on November 24, 2013, 02:58:36 AM
I've finally sat down and started working out a plot line, but I think I've put myself in over my head with my expectations. Too many great ideas and no good way to phrase them. Sigh.

All you can do is keep writing until you hit those great idea areas.  If you are determined and don't mind expanding your novel intentions from 60-70k to 120-140k you'll get there.  Even if it takes more than one novel!  You might only get 80-90% of your ideas in there but in the end you'll have something you can be proud of.

Without knowing anything about what you're doing, I'd just say to dive into it feet first and keep your nose down.  You'll get there eventually, just so long as you refuse to give up.



The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on November 25, 2013, 04:29:34 AM
7k - Admiral's Lady  (the snail has struck again!)




The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on November 25, 2013, 02:08:04 PM
45,718 words on Lady Raven.
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Post by: meg_evonne on November 25, 2013, 02:58:03 PM
I love when I reach the point in a novel that I'm compelled to set up my little spread sheet for 1/4, 1/2, 3/4, and 9/10 marks so I know where I'm heading for that next major plot point. It's like the road click clacking under the wheels of my car... 

Slow week, but lots of complicated issues resolved and mental preparation for the road ahead. I'm in 1st POV and the three sub-threads are going to be a b**** to get sequenced and timed in the story arc. Last three days I'm back on my 1000 minimum per day and one day I reached 3000, which for me is an unheard of occurrence.
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Post by: The Deposed King on November 26, 2013, 10:54:19 AM
8k - Admiral's Lady

9k - Admiral's Lady





The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on November 27, 2013, 03:21:43 PM
10k - Admiral's Lady



The Deposed King
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Post by: Paynesgrey on November 29, 2013, 02:36:01 AM
Well, I can think of no better way to celebrate the final finishing, polishing, tweaking, and editing of a novella than this way:

(http://i516.photobucket.com/albums/u330/paynesgrey2000/12vety-Cover-Comp-081_zps710eee9b.jpg)
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Post by: The Deposed King on November 29, 2013, 02:56:16 AM
Well, I can think of no better way to celebrate the final finishing, polishing, tweaking, and editing of a novella than this way:

(http://i516.photobucket.com/albums/u330/paynesgrey2000/12vety-Cover-Comp-081_zps710eee9b.jpg)

Way to go PG!!!  When's she going up?



The Deposed King
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Post by: Paynesgrey on November 29, 2013, 03:18:36 AM
As soon as I write the cover blurb.  ;)

And have a brandy to steady my nerves.
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Post by: The Deposed King on November 29, 2013, 07:53:06 AM
Well put up a link when you do it and remember not to freak out after you hit the final save and publish button.  In about 12 hours you can frantically rush back in and make changes to all those little things that have you worried.   ::)

Also if you have any issues with the formatting of your file screwing the e-book fonts.  Just let me know.  My brother knows how to set it up nice and pretty.

Make sure to put up a link!



The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on November 29, 2013, 09:39:26 AM
Awesome!
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Post by: The Deposed King on November 29, 2013, 09:51:20 AM
11k - Admiral's Lady

12k - Admiral's Lady

13k - Admiral's Lady




The Deposed King
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Post by: Shecky on November 29, 2013, 01:19:00 PM
Well put up a link when you do it and remember not to freak out after you hit the final save and publish button.  In about 12 hours you can frantically rush back in and make changes to all those little things that have you worried.   ::)

Also if you have any issues with the formatting of your file screwing the e-book fonts.  Just let me know.  My brother knows how to set it up nice and pretty.

Make sure to put up a link!



The Deposed King

http://www.amazon.com/Terror-Twelvety-Town-Kenton-Pierce-ebook/dp/B00GZEDSIQ/ref=sr_1_1?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1385726548&sr=1-1
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Post by: Paynesgrey on November 30, 2013, 01:58:14 AM
Well put up a link when you do it and remember not to freak out after you hit the final save and publish button.  In about 12 hours you can frantically rush back in and make changes to all those little things that have you worried.   ::)

Also if you have any issues with the formatting of your file screwing the e-book fonts.  Just let me know.  My brother knows how to set it up nice and pretty.

Make sure to put up a link!



The Deposed King

Thanks, everyone!

Scrivener seems to have done a flawless conversion, except for eating the acknowledgments page.  I've already crapped myself and uploaded a version with some corrections.  Did it first thing this morning, so it's live now.  I expect when the royalty payment comes, I shall purchase a pony made of diamonds.

Or, more likely, a grape, maybe...

In any case, it's exciting as hell and I'd like to thank everyone for the encouragement, general advice and such.
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Post by: meg_evonne on November 30, 2013, 05:37:05 AM
It's beautiful! Used Shecky's link and it downloaded great. I won't get a chance to read it for a bit. (Two unfinished reads in my hopper already and one is Jack Gantos' book that won the 2013 Newbery Metal. I will be hearing him Dec 7th.) When I do get it read, I'll post a review. Hugs and congrats! Love the synopsis teaser you posted.
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Post by: The Deposed King on November 30, 2013, 06:07:46 AM
Thanks, everyone!

Scrivener seems to have done a flawless conversion, except for eating the acknowledgments page.  I've already crapped myself and uploaded a version with some corrections.  Did it first thing this morning, so it's live now.  I expect when the royalty payment comes, I shall purchase a pony made of diamonds.

Or, more likely, a grape, maybe...

In any case, it's exciting as hell and I'd like to thank everyone for the encouragement, general advice and such.

So when are we going to get to read a book about the actual Terror?  Everything I've read keeps hitting around the margins.



The Deposed King
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Post by: Paynesgrey on December 01, 2013, 12:20:14 AM
So when are we going to get to read a book about the actual Terror?  Everything I've read keeps hitting around the margins.



The Deposed King

The actual novels are from Shaifennen's PoV.  I've got one scene left to write on "A Kiss For Damocles," then I can start the 2nd draft/polishing.  Her story will work out to at least three books.  There's another novella that'll I'm polishing now for self-publishing which is from Zeddie's PoV.
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Post by: Paynesgrey on December 01, 2013, 12:21:10 AM
It's beautiful! Used Shecky's link and it downloaded great. I won't get a chance to read it for a bit. (Two unfinished reads in my hopper already and one is Jack Gantos' book that won the 2013 Newbery Metal. I will be hearing him Dec 7th.) When I do get it read, I'll post a review. Hugs and congrats! Love the synopsis teaser you posted.

Thanks!  I'm looking forward to hearing what you think about it.
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Post by: meg_evonne on December 02, 2013, 12:47:02 AM
Good word count production for several days. Some concrete plot planning. Generally feeling good, but a bit frazzled. Zero-ing in on that mid point confrontation with alarming speed and a lot to complete before I get there. Sometimes, I can't wait until I can really dig into revision work, but for now it's charge forward into the smelly muck of the first rough draft.
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 02, 2013, 11:18:20 AM
14k - Admiral's Lady




The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 03, 2013, 08:37:24 AM
15k - Admiral's Lady

16k - Admiral's Lady

17k - Admiral's Lady




The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 04, 2013, 11:05:55 AM
18k - Admiral's Lady



The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 06, 2013, 11:42:57 AM
19k - Admiral's Lady



The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on December 07, 2013, 03:27:57 AM
Five more chapters gone through, several with larger changes than I realised, and have half a dozen of the more seriously reworked in this pass ones I want to read again for flow, and a handful of little things to insert here and there in the "needs a bit more set-up in chapter 14 if I want this particular secondary character to make this decision in the denouement" sort of direction that I hope will be straightforward enough. Also, I haven't done the through pass on the short different-POV epilogue, because that is a lot of fun and I may as well keep it until the very end of this pass, to serve as a motivator.  With luck I will get this draft done in one more night, if not, then two will definitely do it.
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 07, 2013, 05:28:53 AM
20k - Admiral's Lady

21k - Admiral's Lady





The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 09, 2013, 09:09:12 AM
22k - Admiral's Lady

23k - Admiral's Lady





The Deposed King
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Post by: meg_evonne on December 09, 2013, 11:58:25 AM
If it wasn't for a 24 hour flight delay I wouldn't have gotten anything done since last Tuesday. 3010 words. Family clashing with RL, but I wouldn't trade the family time for anything else in the world. Also my revisions/edits came in from the editor for Book I, so now it begins with the old book and writing the new book. Thank goodness I'm half way into the second.

Unrelated, I attended a talk and book signing by Jack Gantos, the 2013 Newbery Award winner at Arizona State's Piper Writing House. He is freaking awesome and awe inspiring. Thus the 3AM to 5AM writing session. Nothing new written this AM but letter off to editor on titles, assignment for my online mediabistro.com classposted, and scribbled notes for my blog on the Jack Gantos talk. He's with Farrar, Straus & Giroux - Macmillan BTW, the home of "A Wrinkle in Time" and my forever and ever favorite pub house.
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 10, 2013, 12:24:37 PM
24k - Admiral's Lady

25k - Admiral's Lady

26k - Admiral's Lady

27k - Admiral's Lady


That's about all I can do this evening, I need to get to bed.




The Deposed King
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Post by: Xerjester on December 10, 2013, 02:36:55 PM
Tales of Calopa: The Fahlworth Papers - finally done and up.

Book 2 of the Archetype Trilogy- The Shattered Clock - 15k in.
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 11, 2013, 03:37:51 AM
Tales of Calopa: The Fahlworth Papers - finally done and up.

Book 2 of the Archetype Trilogy- The Shattered Clock - 15k in.

Keep after it Xerjester.  Keep cranking on those books.  You've got one in the box ready to go.  Now its time for #2.




The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 11, 2013, 04:03:45 AM
28k - Admiral's Lady

29k - Admiral's Lady

30k - Admiral's Lady

31k - Admiral's Lady

32k - Admiral's Lady (5k)







The Deposed King
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Post by: phoenixjustice on December 11, 2013, 08:29:21 AM
Doing planning for another series which might be connected to the series I'm working on now. Rather excited. Especially since the hierarchy of one of the things has come together and I have the general plot line for the story. :)
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 16, 2013, 01:13:33 PM
33k - Admiral's Revenge




The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on December 16, 2013, 01:15:10 PM
Last week I finally got done with the first draft of Lady Raven and sent it on to my beta readers.

Now it's time to get my research & planning in gear for my next urban fantasy series, Candlelight - the first book of the Carver & McCain mysteries.
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Post by: Dresdenus Prime on December 16, 2013, 04:43:02 PM
I really haven't been on here in a while!

I'm sending out the first two chapters of my second Daniel Quinn novel, Antagonize, to beta readers this week. I'm trying somethign new where I send them two chapters every week for the next couple of months.

The cover art is done and looks amazing. I'll be revealing that on my blog and website January 3rd.
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Post by: Wordmaker on December 16, 2013, 04:48:35 PM
Awesome!
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 17, 2013, 02:15:56 AM
Way to go guys.  You two are on a roll!




The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 17, 2013, 11:23:04 AM
34k - Admiral's Revenge




The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 18, 2013, 09:09:16 AM
35k - Admiral's Lady

36k - Admiral's Lady





The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 19, 2013, 06:23:34 AM
37k - Admiral's Lady

38k - Admiral's Lady




The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 20, 2013, 06:44:31 AM
39k - Admiral's Lady

40k - Admiral's Lady




The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on December 20, 2013, 12:59:14 PM
More tightening, more fixing, flow-checking, running a few days late because of exhaustion.  I hope to finish this pass tonight.
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on December 21, 2013, 09:34:57 PM
And now this pass is done. Terminus est, I have put the damn thing down and sent it off, and next comes something different, though in the immediate short-term there is a pint of icecream with my name on it.
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 23, 2013, 03:31:46 AM
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 25, 2013, 11:35:13 AM
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The Deposed King
Title: Re: The I'm Writing Thread.... Celebrate your pages written etc Part II.
Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on December 25, 2013, 07:26:21 PM
And now this pass is done. Terminus est, I have put the damn thing down and sent it off, and next comes something different, though in the immediate short-term there is a pint of icecream with my name on it.

Receipt acknowledged, too.  *bounce*
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 26, 2013, 10:53:28 AM
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 27, 2013, 04:35:25 AM
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The Deposed King
Title: Re: The I'm Writing Thread.... Celebrate your pages written etc Part II.
Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on December 27, 2013, 05:01:23 PM
And now I am working on the thing I want to be workign on again yay.  (tweaking opening of volume 1, reread what I had of volume 3, wrote 250 words new, realised it was 0215, stopped, swore, and went to sleep.)
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 28, 2013, 12:21:55 AM
And now I am working on the thing I want to be workign on again yay.  (tweaking opening of volume 1, reread what I had of volume 3, wrote 250 words new, realised it was 0215, stopped, swore, and went to sleep.)

(Laugh)  I've done that before.




The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 28, 2013, 01:43:24 PM
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Post by: The Deposed King on December 31, 2013, 09:37:36 AM
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The Deposed King
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Post by: meg_evonne on December 31, 2013, 04:36:59 PM
revision, revision, revision.... and more revisions...
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 03, 2014, 12:06:08 AM
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 03, 2014, 06:22:06 AM
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Post by: meg_evonne on January 04, 2014, 12:11:01 PM
2 hr revision work lost when I accidentally closed it without saving. Last night I redid most of it. So this morning, I'm where I was yesterday. Good news? It'll be back in editor's hands by Sunday night. Then I can release release the muse again.
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on January 05, 2014, 03:18:37 AM
Ten more chapters of #1 revised, the new intro tweaked again, and a little more poking at the start of #3. At this rate I will be done with #1 in one more night's work yay.
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 05, 2014, 05:06:36 AM
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The Deposed King
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Post by: trboturtle on January 05, 2014, 05:10:07 PM
Battlecorps.com just e-published my twentieth short story for Battletech, "Operation Red Lion". A good way to start out the New Year...... ;D

Craig
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 05, 2014, 05:34:04 PM
Battlecorps.com just e-published my twentieth short story for Battletech, "Operation Red Lion". A good way to start out the New Year...... ;D

Craig

Hey that's great Craig Turboturtle.  Sounds like you're getting locked in as a battle-tech stable house author.

Keep up the hard work.



The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 06, 2014, 05:46:51 AM
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The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 07, 2014, 07:38:57 AM
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The End: and that's a wrap for first draft of Admiral's Lady: Ashes for Ashes, Blood for Blood.  Which came in at 73,510 words.


The Deposed King
Title: Re: The I'm Writing Thread.... Celebrate your pages written etc Part II.
Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on January 11, 2014, 04:35:52 AM
Through pass on eight more chapters, and at this point I am making an executive decision to do the remaining four tomorrow rather than stay up any later and risk messing things up because I am falling asleep from a particularly exhausting week.
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Post by: meg_evonne on January 12, 2014, 12:50:51 AM
And I stayed up. Do I get a gold star? No, because I didn't get back to writing until 8AM, when I usually start at 6.

Completed all but one of my final revision checks. Then I send it back. Or maybe one more hard copy and one more read through, but it won't have to be read out loud this time.

Bottom line? The pages with fixes the editor requested bloated manuscript to 78000, but tightened back down to 73,993. I sent it with 71101. Most YA's are shorter, but this amount is well within the imprints guidelines.

What did I learn with this? Michael A Stackpole in a workshop told us that editors may point out symptoms and not realize it. The writer has to find the disease and cure it. Not surprisingly, he's 100% right.
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 15, 2014, 08:27:14 AM
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on January 16, 2014, 04:56:12 AM
and volume 1 revisions are done, it is now a svelte 95,620 words, and we are on to #2 almost certainly Friday.
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 16, 2014, 12:06:46 PM
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 17, 2014, 09:39:56 AM
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The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on January 18, 2014, 05:07:05 AM
Through pass on 16 chapters of book 2 tonight, which was surprisingly much progress. At this rate I will be one more night before I move on to #3 again.
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 18, 2014, 12:35:32 PM
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The Deposed King
Title: Re: The I'm Writing Thread.... Celebrate your pages written etc Part II.
Post by: Ulfgeir on January 19, 2014, 01:33:00 AM
So far my new year's promise to write every day seems to be holding, even if I don't write much every day. My steampunk-story (which sadly just lay waiting for a few years due to writer's block), is now up to slightly over 14 000 words. Yay me.  Hopefully,I will be finished with this wretched chapter as well as the next one before the end of January.

edit: it takes extra time since I write it in English (which isn't my native language), and I simpy want it to be perfect, so lots of editing while I write. Yes, I know that is a deadly sin. =^_^=

/Ulfgeir
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 19, 2014, 02:58:46 AM
So far my new year's promise to write every day seems to be holding, even if I don't write much every day. My steampunk-story (which sadly just lay waiting for a few years due to writer's block), is now up to slightly over 14 000 words. Yay me.  Hopefully,I will be finished with this wretched chapter as well as the next one before the end of January.

edit: it takes extra time since I write it in English (which isn't my native language), and I simpy want it to be perfect, so lots of editing while I write. Yes, I know that is a deadly sin. =^_^=

/Ulfgeir

Yep  ;D  Editing while writing leads to, in my experience, low word production, frustration with your story and worst of all writers block.  Because either it sucks or you think you've finally got something cool and you don't want to risk messing it up.

But so long as its working for you don't stop!




The Deposed King
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Post by: Paynesgrey on January 19, 2014, 03:26:38 AM
He's preaching stone gospel there.  You'll keep fixing and fixing and never move forward.  Caught myself doing this.  First draft is nothing more than putting the ideas on paper.  Second draft is where you start on de-cludging the cludgicals and polishing the wordcraft, adjusting the beginning of the story to be consistent with things you did later, etc.  But you've got to get the complete idea down first, in my (limited) experience. 
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on January 20, 2014, 01:23:05 AM
He's preaching stone gospel there.  You'll keep fixing and fixing and never move forward.  Caught myself doing this.  First draft is nothing more than putting the ideas on paper.  Second draft is where you start on de-cludging the cludgicals and polishing the wordcraft, adjusting the beginning of the story to be consistent with things you did later, etc.  But you've got to get the complete idea down first, in my (limited) experience.

Like most bits of writing advice, true for some people and not others.  I can't make forward motion on a story when I know it's wrong in some ways,  but there's a definite balance between fixing the things that need fixing to fit together, and not getting stuck such that you get no forward motion at all.
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Post by: Paynesgrey on January 20, 2014, 05:06:24 AM
Yup.  Mileage may very.  If something that's story-crucial is completely borked, I can't go on until I fix that either... but the clunky sentences and wonky paragraphs I force myself to wait for.  Kept doing the Eternal Rewrite Loop on the first 30K.
 
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 20, 2014, 06:11:52 AM
Yup.  Mileage may very.  If something that's story-crucial is completely borked, I can't go on until I fix that either... but the clunky sentences and wonky paragraphs I force myself to wait for.  Kept doing the Eternal Rewrite Loop on the first 30K.
 

Dialogue and Content that just aren't doing what you want it to, I might stare at for a while until I get it right.  Maybe once a week go back to something a day or two before and make sure the converstation says what I want or that I emphasized they got up and the a-crack of dawn so that people aren't scratching their heads when two chapters later other people are just waking up.

But if I do that every time, every day I'd never get anything.  You've got to give yourself permission to come back later and puff it up.  Otherwise that's all I'm doing and forward motion stalls.




The Deposed King
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Post by: Wordmaker on January 20, 2014, 01:38:52 PM
Busy work period and the birth of a new baby (bringing us to 3 baby girls) has kept me from my work, but I finally got the first chapter of my new urban fantasy book, Candlelight, written. 1,869 words.
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Post by: Paynesgrey on January 20, 2014, 03:27:56 PM
The next novella, "Valorous Daughter" is almost ready to go up.  Waiting to get a read back from one of my Red Pen Doom Monkeys, and for the ocver art.  In the meantime, I finished the first draft of "A Kiss for Damocles" this week.  Came in at 113K, although I expect that to shrink on next run through.  One thing that's going to be a pain is solidifying the narrator's dialect.  It developed and became more individual/distinct as the work progressed, so I'm spending a good bit of time replacing more formal words or phrases with ones that would be more natural for her.

The double negatives still hurt my thinking parts though.  It's like having to fold a map wrong, every time...
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Post by: LizW65 on January 20, 2014, 05:07:06 PM
As per a half-assed New Year's resolution, I've been making the effort to write at least 1000 words a day on one or the other of my two first-drafts-in-progress,and it seems to be working; 1K/day is proving to be a good balance between (A) pushing myself and getting stressed, and (B) writing nothing and feeling guilty about it. At this pace I should have both drafts done by mid-February, and can start on the revision process.
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 21, 2014, 09:43:51 AM
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 22, 2014, 12:23:19 PM
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Post by: Ulfgeir on January 22, 2014, 10:39:29 PM
Finally got the wretched chapter written in such a way that I am reasonably happy with it. Now over 15 000 words, and 22 and a half page written. Some of the previous stuff also got some minor tweaks, which gave some more colour.

Next step is to take a look at my synopsis, and update it so I don't have any handwritten notes on it.

/Ulfgeir
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 23, 2014, 12:53:04 AM
Finally got the wretched chapter written in such a way that I am reasonably happy with it. Now over 15 000 words, and 22 and a half page written. Some of the previous stuff also got some minor tweaks, which gave some more colour.

Next step is to take a look at my synopsis, and update it so I don't have any handwritten notes on it.

/Ulfgeir


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When I was working on the first book I ever started to write I kept the highlights of what I wanted done noted down at the very bottom of the Wordprocessor screen under a name like Chapter Plot Goals and either nuke them, cut and past them to my Book Info file or transferred them up to the next chapter if they didn't manage to fit into the chapter I was working on.


The Deposed King
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Post by: LizW65 on January 23, 2014, 12:58:25 PM
Passed 100K last night on the Big Damn Sequel.
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 23, 2014, 02:26:34 PM
Passed 100K last night on the Big Damn Sequel.

Way to go Liz.  Keep after it and you'll be there before you know it!




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Post by: The Deposed King on January 24, 2014, 09:52:45 AM
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 25, 2014, 07:45:21 AM
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The Deposed King
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Post by: the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh on January 25, 2014, 04:03:43 PM
Finished the through pass on #2 and have looked through a couple more chapters of the existing text of #3; i am I hope one night away from full steam ahead on new chapters of #3.
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 27, 2014, 05:58:53 AM
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 28, 2014, 02:05:12 AM
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The Deposed King
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Post by: trboturtle on January 28, 2014, 03:21:19 AM
http://trboturtleswritings.blogspot.com/2014/01/my-original-writing-update.html (http://trboturtleswritings.blogspot.com/2014/01/my-original-writing-update.html)

An update on my writing, via my blog.... ;D

Craig
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Post by: Wordmaker on January 28, 2014, 02:02:24 PM
Candlelight is up to 4,002 words.
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 29, 2014, 07:19:28 AM
Candlelight is up to 4,002 words.

Way to go Wordmaker, its good to see you pounding away on a new project.

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The Deposed King
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Post by: The Deposed King on January 30, 2014, 06:27:53 AM
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