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Author Craft / Re: "Read. Your. Shit. Out. Loud." Quothe the Wendigo.
« on: February 27, 2013, 07:44:16 PM »
A handy tool...  I save my drafts in .rtf, then load them to my phone via dropbox.

I recently found a text-to-speech reader called Ivona.  Lets you download various readers with various voices and accents, so you can have your phone read to you without it sounding like a Stephen Hawking bedtime story.  Hearing your work read to you is also a great way to spot typos, poor word choices, double-words, clunky dialogue, etc. 

So it's a free and easy way to have your stuff read to you while at work, or without dragooning a friend or family member to read to you...


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Author Craft / Re: Making Life Hard for your Characters
« on: February 25, 2013, 03:33:56 AM »
Oh, I totally agree with you on the general principle; I just couldn't resist the counterexample given the specific example you quoted.

Peter Watts is something very special; if you've not read it, I strongly recommend his novel "Blindsight", which is legitmately available from his website here: http://www.rifters.com/real/Blindsight.htm

It's one of the most intelligent books I have ever read, and also one of the most downbeat.

It's actually a good reminder that the "main character" isn't necessarily the protagonist as far as the audience is concerned.  I'll have to take a look at some of his other work... although I get enough downbeat from the news these days.

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Author Craft / Re: Making Life Hard for your Characters
« on: February 24, 2013, 01:11:52 AM »
Depends on who you count as the protagonist.  Have you seen Peter Watts' riff on that from the alien POV ?

http://clarkesworldmagazine.com/watts_01_10/

Hence the "generally."   ;)

A very good short though.  Thanks for sharing that link.

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2.8K tonight.  First draft of Breath of Scheherazade is now done, weighing in at 25.5K. 

Now for a brandy.  I've earned the sumbitch.

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Author Craft / Re: Making Life Hard for your Characters
« on: February 23, 2013, 02:10:02 AM »
I've created characters who's job is to die to make a certain part of the story happen.  So to give their death an impact on the other characters that's believable... I gotta make them characters that the reader will (hopefully) hate to lose.  I find myself not only putting as much work into their development as I do the "main" characters, but also eventually hitting a point where I try to find ways to spare them, or create new characters to take their place... And then my inner 6 year old, the one who never outgrew pulling the wings off of flies, pulls a knife and shivs my inner care-bear... because that means the character's exactly who I need to kill to drive the remaining one's development.

That's the big difference between the typical Red Shirt and, say, one of Joss Whedon's victims, er, characters.  He makes them engaging, so that the reader feels exactly why the remaining characters in the story are impacted so greatly. 

But we can't just brutalize our imaginary friends forever, because people generally want to see the protagonist score some "wins."  (At least in story's where it's possible.  That's not always the case, John Carpenter's "The Thing" for example...)  I originally loved Elric, because he was soooo unique, and appealed to my egotistical, angst ridden teen self... but eventually I got fed up with "He dies, she dies, everybody dies..."  That pony can only be ridden so far.

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Hope you feel better soon.  Hunkering down and trying to avoid the stomach bug rampaging thorugh my area atm.

Got about 7K done this week

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Author Craft / Re: "Read. Your. Shit. Out. Loud." Quothe the Wendigo.
« on: February 14, 2013, 10:51:26 PM »
You don't even need a listener.  I pace back and forth from my office to my living room and read to myself.  You're mouth will trip over things like double words and clunky dialogue on it's own.  Converting text to thought to speech lets you sidestep your brain's tendency to interpret what is actually written into what you think should be written.

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mmmmmm..... pandas.....

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That's the trick with many "Strategic Lawsuits."  You intimidate someone into capitulation.  Sometimes the target simply cannot afford to fight back, or in the case of amazon, simply doesn't care to bother fighting back.  If they went to court with Amazon, Amazon would eat their lunch and feed GW the bag. 

But GW's betting that the author doesn't have the means to fight back, and Amazon will not think it's worth the hassle to defend one self-published ebook out of the thousands.

Similar lawsuits have been used to silence critics of both corporate and government policy.  In your blog, you criticize my position on panda shiving, and I sue you for slanderous libelizational defamatory inflectation.  You'd beat me in court... but you'd need to be able to afford the lawyers to fight me for a few years...

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Author Craft / Re: Facebook to promote one's work?
« on: February 08, 2013, 03:52:33 PM »
If you've got a regular Facebook presence, I'd suggest keeping it segregated and firewalled from your Author site, so some thing an acquantence posts regarding some issue you don't care to address as an author does not become associated with your work.  (I've got a friend who likes to post the most apalling things when he has access to my keyboard, then his wife likes the hell out of them.  Not stuff I'd want associated with my professional work.)

And the other reason is that I don't care to politicize my work.

I'm following Jim's lead:  I'm writing for people who find my characters engaging and who enjoy my worldbuidling & storytelling.  I've no intention of addressing the typical socio-political issues or current events for a couple of reasons. 

The first is pure pragmatism.  As Jim says, when you take a political stand, you're going to alienate half your potential audience. 

The second is artistic and ego related.  I want my work to stand on it's own feet as pure storytelling.  Is someone takes something positive from it, the I'd be thrilled, but I'm not interested in trying to peddle spiritual enlearnment, social awarenessissity, or Worldview Validation even if those might win me some sales or friendly reviews from people who feel I'm supporting their Cause or bashing the other bloke's.

And finally, my politics are across the board.  In terms of categories, I'm neither fish nor fowl nor good red meat.  I pick my positions and ideas based on the issue at hand and how it weighs against my values and viewpoints.  Which means I've got quotes supporting as well as bashing various things on the Left, Right, Center, Tranverse Axial Counter Alignmentary Stuff.  When I do share an stance with a political faction on an issue, it's likety-not for the same reasons they do, and I'll probably have a solution which they'd find perfectly apalling.

I offend all factions with joy and enthusiasm, particularly when their being self-righteous hypocrits.

That, and I just really have trouble passing up a straight line.

So basically, in terms of social and political factions and values, I'm regurlarly pissing on everyone's shoes.  And when I spot a faction slathering on the old double standards, adopting the same intellectual methodology that makes them howl "SCANDALAMITY!" when the other side does it... I don't just piss on their shoes, I give them the shake too, take a picture of them standing in pee-shoes, then share it so. 

Needless t say, my facebook page is all over the map.  Based on my likes, shares, and satirical comments, a causual user would define me as a gay straight heteronormative christian fascist atheistic devil worshipping liberal mysoginistic democratic feminist tea party socialist lap dog of imperialism who peels baby pandas for big oil while Occupying some shit for Anonymous pot farmers. 

So I compartmentalize my writing.  Anyone who reads a social issue into it will do so only because their own baggage led them to it.

(Neuro, I'm talking more the common-usage, Left Vs Right, current events social issues, as opposed to the more finely scaled ones such as free-will, individuality, etc ;)  )

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I hoist a glass in your honor!  I've enjoyed the first two books greatly, and I'm looking forward to this one.  Here's to your continued success as an Official Word Herder!


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http://whatever.scalzi.com/2013/02/06/space-marines-and-the-battle-of-tradem-ark/

Games Workshop recently got a self-published E-book, titled "Spots The Space Marine" pulled from Amazon by threatening to sue on the ground that they own the trademark to the term "Space Marine." 

A brief history of Space Marines before Games Workshop invented them:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Space_marine

And already, the humor begins...



Anyway, I'm posting this because we've a goodly number of folks who have or are planning on e-publishing and self-publishing, and this could be an issue if Amazon were to start pulling anything with "space marines."  Granted, anything that doesn't use it in the title would probably stay off the radar, but if somebody were to hit it big with a self-published kindle book, GW might serve up one of these notices and get your work pulled. 

John Scalzi has commented that as president of SFWA, this issue "is on his radar," but hasn't gone into any further detail. 

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Author Craft / Re: Sweet Rejection...
« on: February 07, 2013, 12:34:12 PM »
I've been in the same boat for a while now. So far I've amassed three personal rejections from professional markets. At least my stories were good enough to merit reading completely and giving me compliments, but they still just aren't quite there yet.


Unless they actually told you that xyz was a problem, quality might not be an issue.  It could be you're simply not hitting exactly what they prefer in style, tone, or theme.  And those things can change issue to issue in some cases.  Or you could have the bad luck of some pure, highest quality competition hitting at the same time.

Not to say there isn't always room for polish and improvement, but don't automatically consider it a pure quality issue. 

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Author Craft / Re: Sweet Rejection...
« on: February 07, 2013, 02:07:18 AM »
Something to consider--your piece might've simply been too long for the space they had available.  I've seen the suggestion that to get published in a magazine--write shorter.  Because if they have only so much space, and the editor has to choose between a longer piece by a well-known author or by an unknown, they're going to go for the well-known author.

Oh, I'm a fiend with word counts.   Many will auto-reject after just glancing at the word count, after all.

The first one had a 3.5K limit, and I was meticulous in staying under.  After I got it back (with a very encouraging, personal rejection) I put another five or six hundred words that it really needed and sent it to Clarkesworld, where it fell into the "preferred" zone.  (I've got heaps of 10K that I'm saving for e-zines specifically looking for novella length stuff.)  So in this case, I'm pretty sure it wasn't word count.  Either a small poisong pill, like a clunkety spot that soured an otherwise printable story, or it simply didn't quite intersect with what they were looking for. 

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Author Craft / Re: Sweet Rejection...
« on: February 06, 2013, 11:44:24 PM »
Do I smell the free-will argument insinuating its invidious way even here ?

The thing I most wish I had thought of, myself, in re submitting things to editors, is the person who sent their manuscript a birthday card when it had been in slushpile a year; I heard about it from the editor in question who was tickled into looking at the thing shortly thereafter.

..also, I wish I could write short fiction.  Or rather, I wish I could write halfway decent short fiction in any less time than it takes to complete a first draft of a novel.  I greatly respect people who can write a thousand-word story in the same sort of timescale it takes to write a thousand-word chapter, but that's not a skill I have.

Pure, utter rationalization I'm afraid.   ;D

The birthday card is brilliant.  I'll put that on the list of things I wish I'd thought of, and hope to never need to do.  I'm actually doing submissions based on turn-around time rather than rates because the single thing I need most is feedback.

Short fiction is a pain.  I have trouble telling anything meaningful in less than four or 5,000 words.  I get that it's intended to be conceptual, crisp, etc... but my love is in worldbuilding, and character-driven material.  Something which, at least for me, takes a bit more space than the typical 3 or 4K limit allows. 

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