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Wizwad:
I enjoyed it too.  As some of the others said, there are a few too many diversions, but I enjoyed the copious quantities of alcohol, and playing with the language!

I think it sort of falters in the last third, loses its momentun a little, so that might be an area to review, but the punchline seems very Ray Bradbury to me. :D

Shecky:
Hey, I enjoy diversions, especially if the writing's intended to be comedic and not just another genre that happens to have comedic aspects to it - much as with Good Omens, the asides/diversions are often what makes it amusing.

The Corvidian:

--- Quote from: neurovore on September 19, 2008, 12:58:15 AM ---Mea tulpa, mea tulpa, mea maxima tulpa ?

--- End quote ---

Tulpa, a Tibetan word for a thought-form, an artifical spirit.

the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh:

--- Quote from: The Corvidian on September 19, 2008, 08:03:11 PM ---Tulpa, a Tibetan word for a thought-form, an artifical spirit.

--- End quote ---

I know. It was a pun, or play on words, with the intent of humorous effect.

Wizwad:
I laughed, even without understanding what a Tulpa was. :D

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