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So...Help.
Shecky:
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Would these be redneckisms? ;D
The Corvidian:
So, the poor man is beset by Tulpas. ;D
More, and expand it.
InfernoMDM:
As my country friend would say in his country southernly old ass acent, "It's country God Damn't!" With a little feel of desperation, or exacerbation. Anyways like I said good story, just something felt a bit stilted
the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh:
--- Quote from: The Corvidian on September 18, 2008, 03:17:49 AM ---So, the poor man is beset by Tulpas. ;D
More, and expand it.
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Mea tulpa, mea tulpa, mea maxima tulpa ?
pyroriffic:
Thank you all very much for feedback so far: it's nigh on impossible to get a feel for how things go when you don't get anybody commenting.
As for the story itself, it's the sort of story that was written in a one-off session in front of the computer and was, in that regard, totally freeform. In some respects it's stream of consciousness fiction.
Really appreciate the comments...
Thanks!
:)
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