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Angel book chapter 1 (haven't decided on a title)

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SunPhoenix:
First off the name of Sun Phoenix was something I chose that was powerful and empowering. I also like that it is unique since I've seen so many names around in video games and whatnot.

Thanks for the reply you have some really nice insight for someone who actively does this. I've pretty much have an outline for the whole story that answers those 5 questions. I don't know if it really has a POV for what it's called but in the Dune books they shifted from person to person giving kind of a first person view but not quite. What I am actually working on is filling in the middle and around where my main ideas are. I may decide to post the 2nd one after all, which gives a bit more groundwork and that this first chapter is just a start. I'm working on the 3rd chapter right now. I wasn't really wanting to say much but you have gleaned quite a bit off of this chapter. It's good that it follows the character outline that I made. I may think of making a flashback to go between chapter 1 and 2.

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