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seradhe:
a kind of "prelude of things to come" writing I did (on the back of a deposit envelope at work no less  ::) ) felt like sharing it.

Mankind is Naive.

Sure, they're advanced, their culture civilized to a degree. but it's all based old, archaic ideals. Generations of teachers, leaders, philosophers, inventors, doctors... all living an illusion.

They think they know evil, can give it a label. since their ancestors first huddled around fires, they strained to peer into the darkness and give a name to what hid there. even with candles, lamps, lightbulps, and flashlights. People gazed just beyond the lights reach. Their minds gave it names. "Cthulhu, Lilith, Kubera, the devil". They prided themselves on making names for these things, and calling them evil, feeling superior. Even though "evil" has been around long before any smaller race had given it a name.

Mankind lives on, blind behind their names and labels. These create assumptions, and errors.

They would see a book, bound in flesh and written in blood, and label it evil. Yet no one would think twice of the light blue spiral notebook with the odd stain on the corner...



May actually make a story off of this later on, I like it

blgarver:
Oooo, I like.

I'd keep reading if this was the opening to something.

Nice work! ;D

BLG

fivestyle:
One question though, It is supposed to be a humorus story correct?

seradhe:

--- Quote from: fivestyle on November 08, 2007, 03:47:30 PM ---One question though, It is supposed to be a humorus story correct?

--- End quote ---

well, I am sort of writing it like the narrator is watching events with a sort of mild amusement.

.. or do you mean humorous like haha funny?

fivestyle:
I got sort of the vibe of a Weaonesque kind of story. Comedy mixed into a little horror/drama. A little lighthearted.

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