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The first line
seradhe:
OK, something that has been bugging me since my creative writing class way back my first year of college. Figured I'd ask it here.
How much weight do you think the first line of a book carries?
Jims books have never failed to have a seriously awesome first line/paragraph that locks me into the book until it's done. and my Teacher in Creative Writing was practically a nazi regarding the first line (in fact the only reason I passed the class was she liked my first lines)
in the spirit of the topic, I subject a few the the first sentences from my stories....
"It is a little known fact that dragons like to snuggle."
"What the h#!! is it with Vampires and S&M clubs?!"
"At what point does the human mind break?"
"One would think magic coming back into the world would be a great thing."
"I would not think that, waking up this morning, that today would be the last day of my life on earth."
thoughts/suggestions? maybe toss a few of your first lines out?
Dresden:
I agree with your teacher. Because after the first line / paragraph I can always tell if I'm going to like the book or not.
Your first lines:-
--- Quote from: seradhe on October 17, 2007, 04:47:17 PM ---"What the h#!! is it with Vampires and S&M clubs?!"
"At what point does the human mind break?"
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I really like these first lines.
Shecky:
I've always wanted a first line that was a hilarious play on bad literary clichés.
the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh:
Some people like hook beginnings. And there are some great hook beginnings out there - my personal favourite is Iain Banks' The Crow Road, which opens with "It was the day my grandmother exploded."
On the other hand, a hook beginning needs to be followed up pretty solidly to justify it. And there are a lot of great hook lines that have books following them ranging from so-so to mediocre. [ "You are reading this book for the wrong reasons" would be a great opening line if the book following it was actually any good at all, for example. ]
Myself, I like nets more than hooks. I pretty much never put down a book unfinished, and I read fast, and I'd far rather have a first chapter or two give me lots of little things to like than gamble on one big hook and have it fail to work for the people to whom it clearly says "this is not my thing".
the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh:
--- Quote from: Dresden on October 17, 2007, 05:04:05 PM ---I agree with your teacher. Because after the first line / paragraph I can always tell if I'm going to like the book or not.
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Well, if you're putting them down after the first para if you don't like the first para, that kind of biases the sampling method, no ?
Some stories want quiet starts that draw you in gradually. It's not a flaw, whereas forcing a slam-bang hook on a story that does not want it is.
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