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Amelia Crane:
I finally got around to reading the story. It's a good read.
Penny seemed to have a plenty large role, even from the start. She was suitably naive. And heck, she even survived.
Katya was every bit as dangerous as she was intended to be. When she is in a fight nobody actually ever sees her. She even gets a little conversation time in the story. There was one way that Katya in your story differs greatly from the Katya I wrote, and that is she allowed a Lawbreaker to live. My Katya would not do that without some very serious mind control going on since her high concept was Greycloaked Assassin of Warlocks. That said, your Katya fit the story and provided the quite significant level of opposition your protagonist needed. So overall, I'd have to say she was well used.
Griffyn612:
--- Quote from: Amelia Crane on March 04, 2016, 02:15:58 AM ---I finally got around to reading the story. It's a good read.
Penny seemed to have a plenty large role, even from the start. She was suitably naive. And heck, she even survived.
Katya was every bit as dangerous as she was intended to be. When she is in a fight nobody actually ever sees her. She even gets a little conversation time in the story. There was one way that Katya in your story differs greatly from the Katya I wrote, and that is she allowed a Lawbreaker to live. My Katya would not do that without some very serious mind control going on since her high concept was Greycloaked Assassin of Warlocks. That said, your Katya fit the story and provided the quite significant level of opposition your protagonist needed. So overall, I'd have to say she was well used.
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Thanks. In regards to Penny...
(click to show/hide)I'm hoping to eventually bring her back with a bit of a split personality. It'd be the way her mind coped with what happened to her, and she'd have her gentle human side, and a side that was Seelie Fae twisted by dark magic.
As for Katya...
(click to show/hide)I'm planning to eventually bring Salvago back. Katya will be there as well, and Woody will find out his assumptions about her were wrong. I don't want to spoil anything, but it's not as cut and dry as it seemed.
I mean, a master sniper assassin not killing any of her targets? She'd practically have to be trying to miss that much. ;)
Cadd:
Since I want to appreciate the full story, I started from the beginning.
Four days and four books later, I can confidently say that I'm hooked!
I'll report back in when I'm through Hell Bent, just wanted to let you know I really like your stories! ;)
Griffyn612:
--- Quote from: Cadd on March 04, 2016, 03:34:49 AM ---Since I want to appreciate the full story, I started from the beginning.
Four days and four books later, I can confidently say that I'm hooked!
I'll report back in when I'm through Hell Bent, just wanted to let you know I really like your stories! ;)
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Thanks, good to hear! And I hope I did Martin justice. I had to tweak a few things, but tried to stay true to the description.
Amelia Crane:
--- Quote from: Griffyn612 on March 04, 2016, 02:55:54 AM ---As for Katya...
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I look forward to reading your future stories. ;D
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