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the use of proper gramer to tell a story

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Griffyn612:
Were the sentences quoted as spoken text, followed by a non-quoted italicized word as thought?  Or was it just a paragraph of text followed by a thought?

i.e.
   "So you'll consider it?" he asked.
   "Of course." I replied. Never.

i.e.
   I eyed him as he did his little dance.  And despite the result being
exactly what I'd hoped, the celebration was inappropriate. Tasteless.

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