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Shall I Compare Thee To A Mooseburger aka The Bad Poetry Thread

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Blaze:
OMG --  I have to declare MSL the winner of this round!  I posted something too depressing.  *GONG*

Who shall choose the next theme?

One Duck:
Can I choose?

Lisa™:

--- Quote from: Blaze on January 13, 2009, 10:47:16 PM ---Bad Love
*guitar rip*
It hurts.  It hurts so
Bad Love
*guitar rip*
Like a slug.  From a chainmail glove.
Bad Love
*guitar rip*
It can make you bleed.  Just from the need.
Bad. Love.
*guitar rip*

I had a bad love,
I mean I loved  him, bad...
But he didn't notice.
Man it made me sad.

It was torture.  Torture and more.
To be ignored, by the man you adore.

Bad Love
*guitar rip*
It hurts.  It hurts so
Bad Love
*guitar rip*
Like a slug.  From a chainmail glove.
Bad Love
*guitar rip*
It can make you bleed.  Just from the need.
Bad. Love.
*guitar rip*

He was a senior guy.
I was a freshman.
He made me want to die.
He had red hair

Like the sun did rise.
He was gorgeous, he nearly hurt my eyes.

Bad Love
*guitar rip*
It hurts.  It hurts so
Bad Love
*guitar rip*
Like a slug.  From a chainmail glove.
Bad Love
*guitar rip*
It can make you bleed.  Just from the need.
Bad. Love.
*guitar rip*

Everyday, up the sun came .
Everyday the sun did rise.
Then bus came, just the same.
I was the first pick up, surprise

I had to wait for the sixth stop
Where my heart did drop.

Bad Love
*guitar rip*
It hurts.  It hurts so
Bad Love
*guitar rip*
Like a slug.  From a chainmail glove.
Bad Love
*guitar rip*
It can make you bleed.  Just from the need.
Bad. Love.
*guitar rip*

He had a brother.
They shared a seat
With each other
I looked at my feet.

Every day, just the same.
Ever knowing, he didn't know my name.

Bad Love
*guitar rip*
It hurts.  It hurts so
Bad Love
*guitar rip*
Like a slug.  From a chainmail glove.
Bad Love
*guitar rip*
It can make you bleed.  Just from the need.
Bad. Love.
*guitar rip*

I've  been married.
Since 1982.
Happily married.
So what can I do?

But explain bad love, and how
That bad love, even hurts right now.

Bad Love
*guitar rip*
It hurts.  It hurts so
Bad Love
*guitar rip*
Like a slug.  From a chainmail glove.
Bad Love
*guitar rip*
It can make you bleed.  Just from the need.
Bad. Love.
*guitar rip*

A year of sorrow, rejection, pain
A year of feeling, like I'd go insane.
A year of trying, to speak and fail,
A year of being wan and pale....

I but  have to say here, there was irony,
Cause the guy I married, felt that way about me....

Bad Love
*guitar rip*
It hurts.  It hurts so
Bad Love
*guitar rip*
Like a slug.  From a chainmail glove.
Bad Love
*guitar rip*
It can make you bleed.  Just from the need.
Bad. Love.
*guitar rip*

--- End quote ---

*Laughs 'til she cries*

Ms Duck:
 i was trying to think of a response but that last poem wassssss toooooooo deeeeeeeeeep.

Oo
-

Blaze:
Yeah, That is why I gonged myself.  Like being asked to bring dessert to a party and bringing something made of whole grain.   :P

I have no problem with OE naming a theme, Hows abouts you MSL?

Lisa -- Thanks! My homage to Adventures in Baby Sitting!

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