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beta readers
pcpoet:
I was just curies if anyone has a suggestion on how to handle beta readers. I am writing a urban fantasy novel aimed at 8-12 year olds. . I was out today walking my dog and the kids in my neighborhood love to play with my dog. they have gotten to know me because I take my dog for a walk about every hour and a half to give myself a break from writing. the kids in the neighborhood know that I am trying to write a book. today they found out it was a children's book and they were curies about it and asked when it was going to be in the stores. I had to explain to them that I am new at writing and that it might never get into the stores because I am not done writing it and don't have a publisher. I told them that only one of my chapters is ready for beta reading. I then explained that it meant that if they read it they could tell me what they like and don't like in the book and that if they really did not like something I want to know along with what they really like. I went home and then went through my first chapter trying to clean it up. when I was done I went over to my neighbors house and gave it to there mom to give to her kids to read. my question to anyone here is how do you handle kids as beta readers.
slrogers:
It might be a lot easier to use adults as beta readers, even though your target audience is 8-12. At that age it's the adults that are still likely buying the books for their kids, so they're going to have more pull when it comes to marketing as well. Adults would also be more likely to give you feedback in a way that is much more easily ingested. Perhaps even parents with kids that age might be good. Teachers for kids in that age group might be the most helpful, if you can find some that have the time to help you out.
pcpoet:
I plan on using mostly adults as beta readers but when a chapter is at a point that really cant see making to many changes to it with out a complete rewrite I want to use kids because I am hopping that they will see a direction to take my work that I am not seeing or point out something that as an adult I don't understand as having meaning to them.
slrogers:
So I know of authors that have worked with teachers to use their class for this. The teachers are looking to help students with critical reading skills and thus even help the students to better analyze what they like verses what the didn't like, where they story was more difficult, and so forth. This is usually done, I believe, with the whole book as opposed to just individual chapters. But if you can find a teacher of the age group you're targeting that is willing to work with you, you're golden. They'll probably have ideas as to how it might work best for their class room.
pcpoet:
I was out walking my dog today saw the little girl who read the first chapter of the book I am writing. it was great the only thing I could get out of her was that she liked it and she liked the names of the two characters of my story. it is hard to get opinions from the under the age of ten crowd. I love it... my goal is to someday have a kid I don't know to ask me to autograph a book I have written.
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