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Show the Best of your Worst Writing
Antimatter Girl:
--- Quote from: Josh on August 22, 2007, 01:04:35 PM ---I'm going to post a worst-written line that I heard read at a conference...I don't remember who originally wrote it, otherwise I'd give credit...
"His muscles bulged and twitched like a hoard of hamsters all humping one another beneath a tightly stretched canvas."
And there you have it.
--- End quote ---
Now, see, I don't see that as bad writing. I see that as well-crafted cheese, extremely vivid and horrendously ludicrous all at the same time. It took a sick and twisted imagination to come up with that metaphor ^.^
The Eye of Argon, however, from what little I could manage to read, is bad. It isn't funny, or clever, just tedious.
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