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Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
The Deposed King:
--- Quote from: Paynesgrey on January 31, 2014, 12:23:37 AM ---Had an attack of Dread Whimsy. It's all the editing. Makes my thinking parts gooey.
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You have to be careful Paynesgrey because you know what they say about editing don't you?!
Editing Rots your Brain!!! Beware the creativity killer~
The Deposed King
Paynesgrey:
No choice though... A lot of unnecessary and redundant exposition in that first chapter... gotta dig the polish out of the turd.
The Deposed King:
--- Quote from: Paynesgrey on January 31, 2014, 01:51:07 AM ---No choice though... A lot of unnecessary and redundant exposition in that first chapter... gotta dig the polish out of the turd.
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Gonna put a nice stain brown sheen on it huh?
The Deposed King
Paynesgrey:
It will gleam the purest gold, like Mark Twain's tears.
The part of the draft is stuff I wrote over 100,000 words ago... I'm spotting a good many flaws and problems I didn't realize were flaws and problems at the time. Tense, telling, and some chunks of exposition that can be cut entirely. It's coming together though. Kind of like returning to a model kit you gave up on as a kid. Suddenly how to do it right makes sense. :)
The Deposed King:
56k - Falon II
The Deposed King
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