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Arting Harder at the Pen Monkey Toiling Pit (Celebrate Them Pages Pt III)
Snowleopard:
--- Quote from: Paynesgrey on January 31, 2014, 01:51:07 AM ---No choice though... A lot of unnecessary and redundant exposition in that first chapter... gotta dig the polish out of the turd.
--- End quote ---
Didn't the Mythbusters actually polish up a fecal matter ball? ??? ???
(And NO - that was not a comment on PGs writing - his stuff will/would shine no matter
how much drek was on top of it!)
the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh:
Finished through pass on what I have of TIWTBWO #3, 870 words of additional frame, and 2600 words of new chapter 13. Gosh, I like writing new stuff for a change.
The Deposed King:
67k - Falon II
68k - Falon II
The Deposed King
the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh:
TIWTBWO #3:
Chapter 14: 2735 words. Stopping because a) work tomorrow and b) want to make up my mind whether I am splitting here (in which case next chapter will be short) or not, as that's not covered what I wanted to cover in this chapter at all.
Total; 59,131 words.
The Deposed King:
69k - Falon II
70k - Falon II
The Deposed King
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