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Choose how the story goes.
Blaze:
A beautiful alien queen.
Spectacular Sameth:
--- Quote from: Blaze on May 30, 2007, 01:51:34 AM ---A beautiful alien queen.
--- End quote ---
I blinked. I didn't understand why she was wearing the mask, so I asked.
"So there's no blood splatter on my face," she replied.
Wow, I thought. How anti-climactic.
"I know what you're thinking," she said, smiling, "'Why did you bring me here?'"
"Actually--" I began.
"I brought you here because my race is in danger. We need a human to go in and get a crystal from a cave. We'd go get it, but a wizard put a spell on the cave to keep us out."
Great, I thought, Why do I get all the lunatics?
I looked around, frowning at all the multicolored blood that stained the floor and the work bench. I asked, "What's with this science lab if you brought me here to get a crystal?"
"Oh, we just like killing things," she replied.
And these guys are worth saving?
"Will you go and get it for us?" the queen asked.
I felt the metal object in my skin throb as she spoke those words.
(Let's have something more creative than "yes" or "no" as an answer, please.)
ballplayer72:
maybe, if you tell me the story of why the wizard won't let you in the cave, why you just tried to off me, what you need the crystal for, specifically, and WTF are you going to do with the F**KING SAW BLADE PROTRUDING FROM MY MIDSECTION!!!!!!!!!?????????!?!?
Spectacular Sameth:
--- Quote from: ballplayer72 on May 30, 2007, 05:35:55 AM ---maybe, if you tell me the story of why the wizard won't let you in the cave, why you just tried to off me, what you need the crystal for, specifically, and WTF are you going to do with the F**KING SAW BLADE PROTRUDING FROM MY MIDSECTION!!!!!!!!!?????????!?!?
--- End quote ---
I turned to her, took a deep breath and screamed, "Maybe, if you tell me the story of why the wizard won't let you in the cave...or...or...why you just tried to off me or what you need the crystal for, specifically. And WTF are you going to do with the F**KING SAW BLADE PROTRUDING FROM MY MIDSECTION!!!!"
As I was trying to calm myself down, she lowered her head into her hands...or hand-like things. I turned to walk away and I heard her let out a sob. It dawned on me. I had made her cry.
I felt like such a bastard.
Blaze:
Even with alien women I was inept. Maybe I will accept and go into the cave. ANything would be better than becoming one of those things on the table whose blood dripped from the mask.
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