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R. S. Leergaard:
Downloaded. I'll take a look at it later today.

LizW65:
I just checked and my rating showed up but I still can't get my commentary to load, so here it is, if anyone else can get the button to work:
"Starship Enlisted is an engaging spoof of space opera in general and Star Trek in particular, focusing on the "lower decks" personnel who do all the real work and get none of the credit.  It plays with many familiar sci-fi tropes in an entertaining way, with good humor and a clear love of the genre.  I look forward to future episodes."

Lanodantheon:
Thanks for that Liz.  :)

Lanodantheon:
Uploaded a new draft this morning. Did a dialogue pass, adding character voices to all my characters.


As I mentioned in another thread, I also added a scene in the kitchen to literally show how the sausage gets made aboard a Starship. 


Also mentioned in another thread, the Project is currently near the bottom of Page 2 of 21 and is up from it's position last week.


My next step will be to make a "Cover Image" for it. Although I'd kill to find someone to draw a Legend of Korra grade illustration of the Ship and the crew, I'll have to make do with a graphic of some kind.

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