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Some possibly useful food for thought...

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Paynesgrey:
That, madam, depends entirely on the real live humans you've available for interaction.

My area?  The dialogue is limited to "Let's go Stillers let's go!"  "and Dude, youns wanna git some beer?"  I think I gravitated to the Whedonverse simply because the way they talked was more interesting... and closer to how I always talked.


Then again, the sarcastic things my brain generates could count as dialogue...

The Deposed King:
A little bit ruder than I'd like.  And a little rotated from where I'm coming from.  But there are some nuggets and jewels in there.

I think you're better off following that advice than neurotically holed up in a cave.


The Deposed King

Dresdenus Prime:
Payne, you live around Pittsburgh? I'm 35 minutes north of the city.

Shecky:

--- Quote from: The Deposed King on July 22, 2012, 09:14:28 AM ---A little bit ruder than I'd like.  And a little rotated from where I'm coming from.  But there are some nuggets and jewels in there.

I think you're better off following that advice than neurotically holed up in a cave.


The Deposed King

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That's Chuck's schtick, the faux rudeness and the crudeness. Those are tools he uses to punch through and get some people's attention. Doesn't work for everyone, but it works for some, which is a good thing in the end.

Paynesgrey:

--- Quote from: Dresdenus Prime on July 23, 2012, 02:16:09 AM ---Payne, you live around Pittsburgh? I'm 35 minutes north of the city.

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About 45 SE of pittsburgh myself, over in Westmoreland County.  We'll have to grab a  beer or coffee sometime.

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