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Darkshore:
Well it takes place in Cincinnati. I've linked a crime-scene to the casino and my mc is heading there to see how far the corruption goes, but it ends up being a trap. Pivotal moment in the novel. Lot's of damage, lot's of death, and a good friend is taken. I don't necessarily need the "getting past security scene" if it's not relevant.

Quantus:
You can always say they have added security in place for some special event.  Some big concert or convention maybe?

Darkshore:
Thanks. That works, it gives more reason for the mc to believe the casino heads were in on what was going down as well, with an excuse for added security.

Lord Rae:
Or you could have the MC worry about the security but when he gets there there's nothing. A false conflict kind of thing. But the most you'll get stopped for going into a casino is if someone wants to check your id.

Darkshore:
Thanks for the insight, I'll have to make some changes. I figured there would at least be some kind of metal-detectors though. /shrug

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