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Induction into a hidden society
cenwolfgirl:
ah i am curently trying first person it sorta is okay most of the time
Lord Rae:
Thanks for the discussion. Totally got me over the hurtle and I'm pushing along again. :)
Madd:
I had a similar issue. My solution was to take the "need-to-know" approach, and slowly let the character in to see the pieces pertaining to him and his problem (or her and her problem, depending on which story I'm working on.)
cenwolfgirl:
--- Quote from: Lord Rae on May 09, 2012, 03:45:44 AM ---Thanks for the discussion. Totally got me over the hurtle and I'm pushing along again. :)
--- End quote ---
that is good
I like that feeling
speaking of i am going to go write now as i don't have to do anything ells till after tea ;D
Quantus:
I am a fan of developmental Milestones. You structure the secret society in levels, and each level has a trial/test/moral that must be learned and overcome before the next level can be attempted. It would provide Ranks, a reason to dole out information in several smaller pieces, and draws the reader in more because they are, in theory, working toward a realization along with your character, rather than just having information thrown at them.
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